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批改托福作文
Preserving the past is a waste of time.
The past decades have witnessed an ever-widening gap between the tradition and modernization,owing to the rapid acceleration of technology and development of the society.It is on one hand claimed that preserving the past is a waste of time .Some people ,on the other hand ,put forward the notion that preserving the past is extraordinarily vital to the whole human society and progress of the technology.
To begin with ,preserving the past is important for the whole community since the old historic relics are parts of the cultural heritage that gives the identity of the past and old life.Old homes and living quarters are also parts of the history ,and once destroyed ,and buried under thousands of tons to concrete and steel ,they will lose forever.For example ,The Great Wall is a prominent historic relics that indicates the hard-working of the our ancestors and also shows the brilliant and intellectual brain of the technology in the path of our China’s development.As a result ,we need to protect them well and preserve them by using a great amount of money and a huge number of labours.Because the Great Wall is a part of our cultural heritage which drawn a paramount attention from all around the world.
Further more,relics and pasts are valuable for the scientific researches.As there are so much information which is offered by the history ,like many rare documents in the past and some codes which record the past vital information .In addition ,we can see many statistics from the old buildings.We need to learn about the past life and culture through the extraordinary pasts buildings .Taking an example of the pyramid,we can observe the marvel scenes and works which surprise all the people over the world.They see the pyramid and the scientists do researches to find the scientific equations and logic reasons from the building.
Finally,we should let more generations see the old buildings.How can they live in this changeable world without knowing what is happened in the past and how can they adapt to this colouful world without knowing how brilliant of our ancestors?Then ,we can see the point.We need to preserve the pasts and build the museums in order to let our generations learn from the pasts and have a brighter future .
In a word ,I give my heartfelt aggrement to the assertion that preserving the pasts is an absolutely meaningful job which means every one in our community should admit the significance of this issue .

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If you are an employer,which kind of worker would you prefer to hire:an inexperienced worker at a lower salary of an experienced worker at a higher salary?
When asked about hiring experienced workers with high salary or non-experienced employees with low salary,the majority people claim that they will choose experienced workers,but other people think the non-experienced employees is better choice.As far as I concerned,I think people can acquire more beneficial points than weak points if we choose experienced employees because we can save money and time.
Why should we employ experienced workers?For one thing,among the most important reasons,one should emphasized first.Experienced workers can reduce the cost of the company.There is no more sufficient evidence in favor of choosing veterans.An observation shows that 90% companies such as IBM,Microsoft,used to hire workers who have working experience.With experienced workers,company can spend less money on training program.What's more,the veterans can be the model of new comers.To the already familiar facts a great deal of further evidence may be added.At the same time,we can easily understand the reasons why company wants experienced workers.
For another,veterans can reduce the time that workers spend on their job.Ultimately,employees can be more productivity in a given period.We may cite a single example which is very persuasive.My friend Tom is a manager of a medium size company.They only hire the experienced,which leads them to a relatively higher productivity.There are still numerous similar examples existing around the modern world.Consequently,are there any reasons why we do not tend to choose the experienced?
Not only experienced workers can give us pronounced merits,but also non-experienced employees may bring people some positive aspects.One of the advantages of non-experienced workers is that we can control the cost of remuneration program.Meanwhile,in another way,they can bring us new thoughts.Even though we do get a couple of advantageous points from rookies,I maintain that experienced definitely provides people with more notable,more significant and more proper profits.
From what has been discussed above,we could safely draw the conclusion that choosing experienced workers is superior than hiring non-experienced employees for veterans can earns more profits for company.The benefits from rookies cannot compete with the dominant aspects from the experienced.With the great help of experienced people,company can be more competitive.
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In my opinion,I think a real frieng is valuable and important.I must thankful them.Today I"ll give you one person of my feirnds in my life.Her name is X.When I was in my high school we met.At the first time,I did't like her because to her way of spaek and talking so much.Then after one thing changed my mind.It was during to my mobliephone was missing.That I couldn't know what to do.Because we were roommates.She was very helpful.She thought every ways for help me.Although the result was bad,in my heatt,she becamed my good friends.Then I knowed she was a easy-going girl.She was a 18 year-old girl who was slim and tall at that year.At the same time,she studied very hard.I found she had many goodness.After a series of many things ,we becamed the most intimate friend .We told each other every thing included our own secrets.I also remembered the thing when we were at school.We usually borrowed the books from school library.But the one time ,she was missed one book from the library.I felt that was a terrible thing,but she was very honest.She told the library worker about the thing and gave the money as the book's compensation.I thought the money was more vaule than the book's price.She was very optimistic.She felt it worth,meanwhile she thought it could make her comfortable.At the last,I also tuought so.I am very happy that I meet a girl who was so good.We can keep the friendship forever.这是一个英语口语描述一个自己的朋友.希望有好心的朋友帮我修改下这里面的问题.

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effect
parents worry movies and games having a lot of violence scenes will take bad effect to their children.
effort
even try his best effort,john still couldn't run as fast as bolt.
council
in u.s,council decide policy for state.
sow
farmers sow seeds into mud,excepting harvest in autumn.
comb
after getting up,we need comb hair to keep manners.
pardon
the queen pardon the prison's guilty.
rub
rub leather and plastic,you will get static.
cure
touching by god can cure diseases in bible.
burst
fbi burst into the building to arrest terrorists.
pile
all animals piled into noah's ark.
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家长怕***电影电玩会教坏小孩
john再努力也没法跑得像博尔特那样快
在美国，议会决定州内大小事务
农民在田里播种，期待秋季的收成
起床后要梳头保持仪表
女王赦免了罪犯
摩擦毛皮和橡胶棒能产生静电
圣经说，上帝一触碰，百病皆消
fbi冲进大楼******
万灵挤入诺亚方舟

批改英语作文
Dear Charles:
I know you are worried about Tommy that hehad stolen the shop more than once.You told your parents this matter,but theyask you not to get involved,so you don’t know how to do.
When receiving your letter,I feel sorry toknow that your friend was shoplifting and I am worry about you,whether youcould solve this problem or not.
Personally speaking,I’m not on your parents side.Idon’t think they could doing nothing in this matter,on the contrary,theyshould talk to Tommy’s parents so as to help Tommy of trouble.
I have some advice for you ,and they maybe help youto deal with this matter.First,I think you can talk with Tommy after schooland ask him why he did this thing.Second,if Tommy doesn’t realize hismistake,then you can tell your teacher this thing.Finally,you can ask yourparents to communicate with Tommy’s parents this matter.I think Tommy willbecome well if we help him together.

英语作文批改
Weaknesses and strengths of McDonald's in China
As you know,McDonald's is a large fast food chain of restaurants that can be found all over the world.Now a large new McDonald's restaurant will built in the main street in our hometown .Would you like to have such a restaurant or not,different people have different opinions.
Some people was terrible to hear the news.Because,thay prefer the local dishes rather than the expensive tasteless food,and McDonald's give children the terrible diet.
Homever,other people hold the opposite view.They think that if a McDonald's restaurant built in the town ,Part of the town will be improved,and it also can offer many jods for our area that needs jods badly.They can see nothing but good if this company comes to built its reataurant in our town,
But in my opinion.McDonald's restaurant built in the town is sure.Because some people will be very happy to work for it,thay can enjoy their work.and other people who don't like fast food,could don't have dinner in .thay can also enjoy their local dishes.
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英语作文批改谢谢
the frist day of school .I was disppointed at my classmates,so from just got to school until the bell has rang for the class they talking all the time.it's repugnant to me even into my classroom.but I kown what should to do ,what should't to do.in order to changed my life and fate I must keep to it,don't stop until my studies finished.then I sat the frist row of the classroom .it's remain me what did together during our summer hoildays.
now we learned at different classes.I holp we can successfully completed our studies .come on brother!it's certain that we shall succeed!tommrrow belong who is a really brave man!I think so.what about you?

英语作文批改 baby
Having a baby can change your life which is positive and also negative.It is positive to get you more responsibility,bring you more happiness and enhance relationship between husband and wife.First of all,when you have a baby you will get more responsibility.Secondly,the baby brings more happiness for you.When the baby first time to speak,calls “father or mother” you feel extremely excited.When the baby first time to walk,you feel extremely happiness.The child grows up day by day ,you can feel the more and more happiness.Thirdly,the baby can enhance relationship between husband and wife.The baby is the parents of the extended life and love crystallization.However,it is negative to change the sleep deprivation,no longer live for yourself and hard working.Firstly,the most important change is the sleep deprivation.Because of the baby’s irregular sleeping schedule parents’ changes.We often hear the cry of the child at night.Maybe the baby feels hunger .You need to wake up to feed baby.So the parents get up for time to time to take care of their children.Secondly,when you have a baby,your life change; you no longer live for yourself.You can no longer decide to see a film,go shopping or go to a party.Because you have a baby,you need to take care of baby.Finnly,I think if you have a baby,you need to work hard to earn more money,because it is a huge cost to being up a baby.Such as,education cost,toys,clothing and others.
Your life will be changed if you have a baby,it has some benefits,and the possible is risk.The benefits are to get you liability to bring family more satisfaction and enhance parent’s relationship.Firstly,if you have baby,you will get more liability.Secondly,the baby brings much satisfaction for you.Thirdly,the baby can enhance parent’s relationship.However,there are some risks,such as changing the sleep deprivation,no longer live for yourself and hard working .Firstly,parents slept a few time.Secondly,you won’t have a lot of activity time.Thirdly,you need to make more money.

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dear mrs wilson
im lihua.,you kid tong's classmate from yucai international schol.i want to present your son.now,his chinese have better than others.he in chinese very hand.because he is english people.so his english is very good.he was english teacher's welcome.other teachers care of him.students also like him.because he was a english people.so many students like to make friends with him.he in our school is a star.in his after the study life.i will give him to often the most help.let him study will.
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