某报以“写给成年人看的童话”为话题举办征文活动.获得第一名的是《一支燃着的烟》,全文仅仅34个字:“一支冒着袅袅青烟的香

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某报以“写给成年人看的童话”为话题举办征文活动.获得第一名的是《一支燃着的烟》,全文仅仅34个字:“一支冒着袅袅青烟的香烟,指着自己说:‘我是最好的直观教具,说明抽烟会缩短生命。’”
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4.文章为什么把观众的表情写得具体详尽,而对剧情的描写却十分简略?
写观众既能体现人们对艺术的热情,又能表明梅兰芳的艺术水平,而剧情与文章中心关系不大,所以才如此处理.

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