Late in April,a photo show was held in our school.

Late in April,a photo show was held in our school.(Lately)
It lasted a week and was a great success!All the photos taken (were taken)
By the students themselves.They were mostly color photo,but (photos)
Some were black-and white ones,presented our school life,the beauty (which presented)
Of nature,festival activities and so on .All the work of art were (the nature)
at show in the reading-room on the second floor .Every day a large (great)
number of students went to enjoy them,but they were surprised to
find the photos were such wonderful that some teachers were also (which were)
present.Those whose photos were chosen the best are given different (were)
prizes.In the short this photo show really made our life more colorful.(In short)
We hope we will have much more activities like this in our school.(would)
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