My unforgettable childhood 80字作文

这是一次令人难忘的美好的经历.
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An Unforgettable Thin步步高英语培训学校 张毅豪It was a dark night. I was on the way to the shop of my grandpa’s village. I was so afraid because it was very dark without the moon, and I couldn’t see anything without the help of my mobile phone. Suddenly, I heard a sound behind me. And I became more and more afraid, I walked faster and faster. At the moment, I was tripped up by something. With the light of my phone, I saw a very big dog sitting by a tree. It stared at me directly. I stepped back slowly and ran quickly. Unfortunately, the dog was just behind me and barked at me. It seemed that he wanted to bite me. I ran as fast as I could. A man came out suddenly. He picked up a stone and quickly threw it to that dog. Finally, the dog ran away with a bark. I was shocked by this. The man had left when I came back. I even didn’t say ‘thank you’ to him. It happened few years ago, but I will never forget that man who saved me.

1.On January 1st 2011 --> On 1st January 2011 (标准格式是 日期/月份/年 ）
2.I got up at 7:00 am --> I wake up at 7am
3.As soon as I started brushing my teeth,the telephone rang--> the telephone rang when I was brushing my teeth.
4.if I would watch a movie--> if I can watch a movie
5.And I said "Yes"--> and I agreed
6.So after playing computer games I slept for 2 hours.I felt better.--> I slept for 2h after I played the computer games and I felt better.
7.We decided on Let The Bullets Fly--> We decided on （电影书名等要加号)
8.next mouth --> next month （拼错了）
句子的开头最好不要用and,这关系到作文的好坏和读起来的感觉.对于评分是有一定的影响（读起来顺畅自然会有较高的分数对吧?^^）

An Unforgettable trip
I still remember my 10 days trip to Calcutta,which is the largest and most fascinating city in India,with my school staff and students when I was ten years old.Moreover,it was 24 hours journey from my city Hyderabad to the city Calcutta.I can never forget this trip because whenever I get free time,the first thing I think is about the friends that I made,the places which I saw,and the way that I lived on this trip.
x05Though I was the youngest among all the students,I made friends with everyone.However,two seniors,who helped me from the first day,became special friends to me.
They guided me,helped me carry my luggage,and treated me like their younger sister.Even now,they are my best friends as our friendship became stronger year-by-year.
Calcutta is one of the historic city in India.I had visited many monuments,museums,temples,Mother Theresas orphanage,and palaces in the city.I felt the most interesting of all was a palace called The Marble palace.Though it looked like an old damaged building,it was very interesting inside.Once upon a time a rich and powerful king lived there.Everything in the palace,such as throne,paintings,ninety different varieties of marble,furniture,clothes,weapons,and jewelry,showed how gracefully he lived and ruled his empire.However,the whole city is rich with its history and art.
Even though I was young,I did my work as elders do.In fact,it was totally new experience.I lived a life where I brought water in huge buckets for a bath and washed my clothes with hands,everyday.Since I had many things to see in the city,I didn’t have much time to relax.I had a good experience during this trip.

There are many unforgettable people in my life,if I have to chose one,the person would have to be my mother.As you know,mothers give us life,every mother is a kind angle.My mother always tell me,I should nevey give up,and I should try my best to do everything.She is so special that no one can replace,I will never forget her words绝对原创,

an unforgettable expeience
My English teacher is helpful and very strict.She is short with big and piercing eyes.Once I wanted to read a story book in English class.I put my book on my knee.But Quckly she found out what I did and my story book was taken away by her.But she didn't scold me.After class,she asked me to her office.She was kind to me and told me not to do that again.Her kindness gave me a deep impresion.

英语一般,个人意见,请参考
one of my unforgettable memory of my school in （One,memories）
xinjiang is that of lunches we bought form our homes.（Xinjiang ,brought,from）
i hold my lunch—box in my hand when i was going to （I）
school.the smell from it was very good .since the lunch （The,Since）
bell finally rang ,my friend aigulie was used （Aigulie,was去掉,）
to share her nang with me.nang is a specially kind of （Nang）
cake in xingjiang.i like them very much.now aigulie and （Xinjiang,I ,them-it ,Now,Aigulie）
i study at different colleges or we can only see each other （I,or-and,）
during the summer vacation .I think over her a lot and i miss （think over-miss,I）
the food and the good time we had together （had-had have）

有逗号 且后面句子有主语和谓语 所以应该是非限制性定语从句,引导词在句中做宾语 用which 没选项 只能选b 理解成one 做moment 同位语 后面的句子做one 的定语...这种题好恶心 我一直搞不明白 如果我选错了请你告诉我 相互学习哈 谢了……

A:Hi,Tom.Could you please talk about an unforgettable experience?（Tom,请你谈谈一次难忘的经历好吗） B:Yes,sure.Last summer I went to the Summer Palace in Beijing.That's wonderful.（当然可以.去年夏天我去了北京的颐和园,那实在棒极了） A:What did you see?（你看到什么了） B:Beautiful scenery and fantastic constructures.Also I rowed in Kunming Lake.（美丽的风景和宏伟的建筑.我还在昆明湖里划船了呢.） A:There must be a lot of people there ,weren't there?（那儿肯定有很多人吧） B:Yes.I also saw many foreigners.（是的,我还看见许多外国人） A:Great.I hope I can go there.Thank you for your talking （好极了,我希望我能去那儿.谢谢你告诉我这么多.） B:You are welcome.

An Unforgettable Day
That was not long ago.I went to Zhuhai in Guangdong Province.
There was a beach walk with a name "Lovers' Street",so attractive to me that I walked down the steps and waded in the water.But,a big wave came,and I was washed into the ocean.Luckily,I knew how to swim,so I swam back to the shore.But,as soon as I got up the beach,some police stopped me,accusing me of trying to escape to Macao.That was funny.I told them I was American.I could go to Macao or Hongkong any time.But,they did not believe me.Finally,I had to take them to my hotel and showed them my passport.They left without a word.That was weird and unforgettable

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An Unforgettable Thing In Childhood
One day of last month, there is power failure of our school, so my roommates
and I couldn’t study in the classroom. We were so happy that went back to the
dormitory and had a long chat. When we talked about the experiences which
happened in childhood, all of us were excited, because everyone had a lot of
pleasant memories of childhood. When it was my turn to tell a story, I told
them a thing Which made me fear in my childhood.
When I was six years old, one day, I went out to play with my friend. We
arrived at a small garden near our home, and then played beside a fountain. We
were so mischievous that climbed
up the low railings around the fountain. While we were talking about some funny
things, I climbed over the railings. But when I try to stand on the inside edge
of the fountain, I didn’t step steadily. Suddenly I fell into the pool, and I
couldn’t swim. At the instant I couldn’t think of anything. After I drunk one
mouthful of water, I held my breath at once. It’s fortunately that I floated
on water immediately, so I gasped the edge tightly. Then my friend tried her
best to drag me out of the water. We were panicked at what just happed.
I hadn’t remembered more of the details of this experiences today, but I
can’t forget this thing forever, because I was so frightened at the moment.
It’s luck there was fight but not danger finally.
Having listened to my story, all my roommates said that it’s hardly believe
that I was a mischievous girl in childhood.

An unforgettable story
Yesterday when I was walking on the road,a bus hit a man.The man was knocked down.There was plenty of blood on the road.The man was seriously hurt.But the driver ran away.The crowd stared at the man,but no one knew what had happened.Of course,no one dialed 120.I took out my mobile phone and dialed 120.Soon an ambulance came.It took the man to the nearest hospital.Finally,the man died.Everyone felt very sad.This is an unforgettable experience.It tells me when we are crossing the road,we should be careful.We must obey the traffic rules.Why is it so unforgettable?Because the man’s life was over.Everyone has only one life.This accident is so terrible that I can’t forget it.

During the past year at high school, I have had many unforgettable experiences. One of them was a group singing competition. In order to get success, all of us devoted ourselves to preparing the competition.

Last summer,I went to Beidaihe for my holiday with my family.We took a train because the way is not far.We lived in a big hotel where could see the sea .We stayed there for three days.
The first day,we went for a walk along the seaside,and then we went swimming and took a lot of interesting photos there.The second day,we went to a famous market and bought many keepsakes.I was going to bring these keepsakes for my friends.The last day,we had a good picnic on the seaside with the natives.They acted all kinds of programmes and made us feel happy.
It’s a very good journey,and we all enjoyed ourselves on those days.If I have another holiday,I will go there again.
An Unforgettable Experience
I like traveling very much.My trip to XiAn is really unforgettable.Before I went there,I always wanted to see Bin Ma Yong,so I chose to go there.I went to there by train with my parents and I had breakfast in the hotel.Then we went there by bus.When I got off the bus,I was very excited.I saw a lot of false man whose hand with all kinds of things.I took many pictures.Finally we went back the hotel in the afternoon.Though I was very tired,I felt very happy.I dwill never forget it for ever.

[1] How time flies!Two months’ summer vacation is over now.But I consider it an unforgettable summer holiday.In order to get some additional experience as well as to earn some money to pay for my tuition,I found a temporary job in a restaurant,which was for away form my home.There I worked as a waitress.When customers entered the restaurant,I would guide them to the table they had reserved or just a vacant one,served them tea and took their order,then passed the order to the kitchen.And after the dishes were done,I would serve them immediately.Once the diners left,I must go to clean the table for next diners.There I learned that a good waitress or waiter must keep an eye on the whole restaurant all the time.After working for a long day,I was so tired that I wanted to do nothing but sleep.It was the first time that I realized how hard it was to make a living.I recalled the days that I spent at home and school.It was a comfortable life.Later for some reason,I quitted the job and went home.At home,I came to know how hard my parents had been working.I helped my mother do some housework; I also helped her in the fields.Though it was very hot,I had no complaint.I spent most of my time working with my mother,because I thought when I went back to college,I would have fewer chance to be with her and help her.In a word,I spent most of my summer vacation working.Though I felt tired sometimes,I consider it an unforgettable summer vacation since I’ve learned much about life and society.[2] Last summer I spent a two-week vacation at my aunt's place.My aunt lived alone in a mountain village,with a small river winding its course everyday.One morning I went fishing in the river,where two women washed clothes.I fimnd a most favorable point.Casting out my line I waited anxiously for a bite.Suddenly there came a cry:"Help!Help!" I looked in the direction of the call and saw a boy falling into the river.Throwing the fishing pole,I dashed over like an arrow,jumped into the river and swam very quickly towards the boy.Then together with his mother I carried the boy on my back to a nearby hospital.That boy was saved.The mother gave me a thousand thanks.Back to my fishing place,I fimnd my fishing pole floating on the water.I managed to get it.But to my great surprise,there was a big fish on the hook.[3] My unforgettable summer holiday Beijing will Hold 2008 Olympic Games!What an excited thing!And during the Olympic Games,we don't go to school,because we are in summer holiday!Now,the Olympic flame is ,soon it will arrive in Beijing.All chinese are very happy.We say "Welcome to Beijing"to the foreigners Our school will go to National Indoor Stadium to watch a race.I'm very excited about it.And I hope China will win.What a wonderful summer holiday!I won't forget it forever![4] An Unforgettable Holiday I am 'always busy with my lessons.What I have to do everyday is nothing but study.Luckily,last summer my family went to my uncle's farm.We enjoyed a really interesting holiday.During the holiday,I didn't have to get up early,nor did I need to finish many exercises.I rode the horse in the fields.I milked the cows on the farm.To my great joy,my uncle invited me to go fishing.Life on the farm is quite different from that at school.I want to go back to spend my summer holiday again.

我的第一项工作任务
“难以忘怀,”新闻记者说
周阳永远不会忘记他在一家畅销英文报纸的第一项工作任务.他同新上司胡欣的讨论对他的记者生涯必将产生强烈的影响.
胡：欢迎你,非常高兴你来参加我们的工作,你来这里首先就是当助理记者.有什么问题吗?
周：我可以马上去采访吗?
胡：（笑）真是勇气可嘉!不过恐怕这不太合乎常规,还是等到你比较有经验以后吧.我们先要派你给有经验的记者作助理.以后,你才能独自去进行新闻采访并提交自己的新闻稿.
周：太好了!我需要随身带些什么?我已经带了笔记本和照相机.
胡：不需要照相机!你们将带上一名专业摄影师去拍照.你将发现你的同事们会热情地帮助你.如果你对摄影感兴趣,以后你可以集中精力去钻研.
周：谢谢你.对摄影我不仅只是感兴趣,在大学里我还专修过业余摄影课来更新我的技术.
胡：那很好啊.
周：我出去采访时还需要记住些什么事呢?
胡：你需要有好奇心.你只有提出了许多不同的问题之后才有可能获得你需要知道的信息.我们说,一个好的记者必须有一个对新闻非常敏感的“嗅觉“.那就是说,在人们没有说出全部真相时,你必须能够判断出,并努力发现真理.记者必须通过调查研究,来使自己了解到被遗漏的那部分情况.
周：我应该注意些什么呢?
胡：下面是我的行为准则：不要延误任务规定的期限,不可对人粗鲁,不可自己说得太多,务必认真倾听被采访人回答问题.
周：为什么听人家讲话这样重要呢?
胡：你得听清楚事实的细节.同时,你还要根据被采访人所说的话准备提出下一个问题.
周：在我记笔记的同时,怎么能仔细倾听对方的答话呢?
胡：这就是我们职业的诀窍了.如果被采访人允许,你可以使用录音机,录下全部事实.如果有人提出质疑,这也有用,你就有证据来支持自己的报道了.
周：我明白了!你有没有过这样的情况：别人控告你的记者,说他的报道失实?
胡：有的.不过这是很久以前的事了.事情是这样的：一位足球运动员被指挥受贿,故意不进球,好让对方球队赢球.我们去采访了他.他否认收了钱,但我们对此表示怀疑.于是,我们安排这名球员和被认为行贿的人一起接受采访,而当我们看到他们在一起时,我们就从足球运动员的体态语上猜到他没有说真话.我们写了一篇文章,暗示足球队员有罪.这事有些为难,因为如果我们错了,他就可以向我们索要赔偿.他竭力阻止我们发表这篇文章,但后来证实我们是正确的.
周：哇!那才是真正的独家新闻哩!我期盼着即将到来的首次任务.说不定我也会搞到独家新闻呢!
胡：也许你会的,谁知道呢.
抢发独家新闻
周阳刚刚采访了一位著名影星回到办公室,编辑就说：“快点把那篇报道准备好,我们这一版就要用,这样我们就抢在其他报纸的前面了,这就是抢先的独家新闻.“国际新闻编辑部有人提出问题：“他真的干了那种事吗?”周阳回答说：“是的,恐怕是这样的.”接着他便着手准备报道了.
他的第一件事就是写报道稿,他必须认认真真地写.尽管他认为那个人一直在说谎话,但周阳懂得,他决不能直接指责那个人.他必须做到准确无误,还要简明扼要.他知道该如何做.经过几个月的培训,他已经学会了写文章,全然没有废话.他在电脑前坐下就开始工作了.
第一个看到这篇文章的人的他们部里的一位编审.他核查了文中的证据,阅读了整篇报道,然后递给技术编辑.她就开始了编辑工作,设计了主标题和副标题.她说：“在版面上这会很好看.这个人的照片该放在哪儿好呢?”因为这篇文章要用英文来写,所有周阳拿了一份稿子给一位母语为英语的外国雇员,请她对语言风格进行润饰.这位雇员对周阳的报道也很满意.她评价说：“你确实能写很好的头版新闻了.”周阳高兴地笑了.最后主
编审读了这篇稿子,并且批准发表了.他对周阳说：“文章写得很好,不过你还得拿出证据来表明事实确凿.”周阳激动地说：“我马上拿来.”
新闻文字编辑取走这篇报道,开始对所有的报道和图片进行编排,直至把各版面全部编定.此后,所有的报道材料就要被制成胶片.这是印制过程的第一道工序.由于这篇报道要用好几种颜色,因此需要四张胶片.每一种主色要用一张底片,四张底片结合起来就制成一张报纸的彩页.经过最后一次校对后,这个版面就可以准备印制了.周阳兴奋地等待着第一批报纸的印出.“要等到今天晚上.”他的朋友轻声地告诉他说.“我期望电视新闻会对这件事作一点报道.真是独家新闻了!”

每个城市都让我难以忘怀.这让我很难（选择）……罗马,不管怎么说都是罗马.我会珍惜在这儿的记忆,永远永远.
原文中的拼写错误：cherish,visit

可以写你去三亚玩。参考：swam in the sea,lie on the beach enjoy the sun and the sea,play the beach volleyball…组合组合就好了～

My most Unforgettable Deskmate Every student maybe has many deskmates.Some make you bored; some make you happy; some leave you a deep impression.I have a very unforgettable deskmate in the junior high school.He is always optimistic no matter what happens.He is aggressive and honest.The most important is that he is studious.Let me tell you a short story about him.Once I got up early because I planned to go to school earlier so that I could read more books.But to my surprise he had been there when I came to our classroom.I asked,” Why do you get here so early?” He answered,“I must study hard,or I will fall behind.” Judging by what he said,you can imagine how hard-working he is.He indeed studied harder than us.He not only leaves a deep impression on me but also encourages me to study hard.

初恋在人的一生中是难忘的
unforgettable
adj.
忘不了的,令人难忘的
unforgettable
un.for.get.ta.ble
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D.J.[7Jnf*6get*b*l]
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adj.（形容词）
Earning a permanent place in the memory; memorable:
不会被遗忘的,永远记得的：在记忆中获得永久位置的；难忘的：
an unforgettable experience.
一个不会被遗忘的经验
un”forget”tabil“ity 或
un”forget“tableness
n.（名词）
un”forget“tably
adv.（副词）
unforgettable
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adj
(espapprov 尤作褒义) that cannot be easily forgotten; memorable难忘的; 永远记得的:
* an unforgettable experience,moment,scene 难忘的经历、 瞬间、 场面.

During my summer vacation I,my father took me to go skating,we went to a rink,saw the people there some slid like flying,and the slippery rise as in Latin dance as...
See here,and I can't wait to slide,my dad in the hands of a skating,hurriedly put on shoes rob come over,I just step he fell over,I climb from the ground up,continue to slide,have never thought and fell down,and I sat on the ground not to get up,my father asked:"what's the matter with you?" I said:"I'm always wrestling,very vexed,I don't study,won't always had it." Dad said:"a watched pot is can't eat hot bean curd.You want to learn skating,first you have to hold the block stem walk,walked,and finally to slippery." I listen to the words of my father,according to his ways to do that,"indeed,I can skate a little fairy." I loudly said.Dad heard this,he went to I nodded his head.Before you know it,go back to my time,on the way back to the office to think:no matter what we do want to have the perseverance,without the perseverance is nothing,just like I like skating.

I will never forget what happened to me in a hot summer afternoon,when my father and I went to swim together.While my father was changing his clothes,I was roaming along the bank of the pool.Suddenly I heard a voice,“Look out!” and then there came a big noise and beautiful splashes.Just when I was admiring the swimmer’s skills,I slipped into the pool!I was so afraid that I shouted at once!But the water kept coming towards me and I drank a lot .I was overturned so I had to struggle very hard to keep my head above the water.
A minute was like a hundred years.To my surprise,I was able to keep the style!Just then,my father saw me.He shouted,“Calm down,just wave your arms and legs like this.Right!” And I got it!I learnt to swim!it's dramatic,isn't it?You can’t imagine how happy I was that day.
From this unforgettable experience I learned that one’s power is unlimited.Sometimes you could show that power in an emergency.If you have a strong will,you will discover the power within yourself and achieve your goals.

肯定是有的
感叹句其实就是把一个有形容词或副词的句子变形
以突出感叹的语气和情感
过去时的句子中有很多有形容词或副词的吧?

An unforgettable trip!
Yesterday, I went for BBQ with some friends of mine to 洋沙山 which was located in Beilun. That’s a wonderful trip which I would never forget.
At about 12:40 pm, we six persons set out from Ningbo driving a car by an only man. The driving time was tough firstly, because no one had been there and knew the way. The organizer, my former colleague due had to call some people to ask during the way, so did the driver. After more than two hours' jounce, we saw a nice scene in front, stretching to the horizon of the sea; people who froliced on the beach; being fenced on the way to barbecue area, ostriches drank water on leisure…...
Then it’s time to BBQ. We paved tinfoil on the stove, then oiled and put the rice with bamboo wrapped and some bunches of beeves on the tinfoil. But a few minutes later, those bunches of beeves were scorched and the tinfoil was burnt carefullessly. The experiment was failure. We had to try again and used tinfoil bowl. It seemed more successful than the last time, although the week was food cooked slowly. It’s right suitable for us to have time to play on the beach in turn, one part went, the others stayed to cook.
The seawater waved from time to time, the seawind blowed lightly, the sun in orange color was falling down slowly. We couldn’t help walking along the beach unshodly and took per photo as memorization.
When we came back to BBQ, the others had prepared for us. After finishing eating semi-cooked food, we began to leave. It was about six p.m.
An unimaginable thing occurred. Being forgotten turning off the light by the driver, the car was powered off. Oh, my god! What should we do?! Five girls had to push the car, but it seemed that the driver could not start up. When a car was passed by, we stopped it. Two men got off from that car. They first told us to connect wires between storage battery in both car to exchange the power, yet we didn’t have the proper ones. Then the two warm-hearted men helped us to try to push the car as well, But they failed too. So they had no other way and left. It was about half past six p.m and was dark, there were not any stars twinkled in the sky.The road was quiet. No one can help us at that time. “help! help! I want to go back home.”I prayed for the god! The driver then had to call his father to help us from Ningbo starting. During waiting time, we had tried to push the car again, while disappointed thoroughly. Around one hour later, the man’s father arrived, taking enough thick wire. With the way mentioned above, we were saved.
The driver then sent us home safly one by one. When I reached home, it was about 9:20 p.m.
It’s really a wonderful and an unforgettable trip which was the reason why I spent long time writing it to speak out my unusual experience. Hope you can enjoy with my feeling.

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An Unforgettable Day
Today is my an Unforgettable Day ,we have a farewell party .Because
we are going to high school soon.We talk about our school life and friendship and we imagined our future.We dance ang sing.At last we
exchang gifts and addresses.I am very happy today.Today is my an Unforgettable Day.
(今天是令我难忘的一天,我们有一个毕业典礼.因为我们快进入中学了.我们谈论我们的学校生活和友谊,并且我们畅想未来.我们又唱又跳.最后我们交换礼物和地址.今天我非常高兴.今天是我难忘的一天.)

Of course, everyone experiences different things which make them unforgettable.
So do I. Next let`s share one that affects me a lot and is really unforgettable.July 2 is my grand father's birthday. On that day, all of my families will get
together to celebrate his birthday. This year was the same. My uncles and aunt
came back from other cities. It was so alive that my grand parents were very
happy. This year, I made a surprise for my grand father. I cooked a dish for
him. As I never cooked before, he was so surprised as well as exciting. My grand
father said that it was the best birthday gift he received. I was glad to make
grand father happy. Actually, I had practiced for several days before that day.Since then, I always challenge myself to do the things I haven`t done before.
And I feel I step to grow up little by little.

An unforgettable experience
Yesterday when I was walking on the road,a bus hit a man.The man was knocked down.There was plenty of blood on the road.The man was seriously hurt.But the driver ran away.The crowd stared at the man,but no one knew what had happened.Of course,no one dialed 120.I took out my mobile phone and dialed 120.Soon an ambulance came.It took the man to the nearest hospital.Finally,the man died.Everyone felt very sad.This is an unforgettable experience.It tells me when we are crossing the road,we should be careful.We must obey the traffic rules.Why is it so unforgettable?Because the man’s life was over.Everyone has only one life.This accident is so terrible that I can’t forget it.
这个也可以：
I had a very unforgettable experience when I was 11 years old.I had some training with my classmates.We went to Fengxian and we needed to live in a small dormitory for two days.We did everything ourselves.Our parents couldn’t help us,because they didn’t stay with us.We got up very early in the morning.We had to clean ourselves quickly.And then we stood in a line.We leant a lot of things there,such as cooking,washing and even making beds.Every day,we had to practice more than five hours.Now I think it was very hard for everyone but it was very good for us.Because we are looked after by our parents,but in fact should learn how to look after ourselves.What an unforgettable experience it is!

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定语从句的关联词（非限定,就是之前有逗号隔开,修饰关系不是非常紧密的那种定语从句）

Everybody loves holidays because during our holidays we can relax and have fun. We get enough time to travel, play our favorite sports and practice our hobbies. Below I will tell you about my last holiday.
I had always dreamed about going to Hawaii. It was the evening of Janurary 1st, 2011 when my husband called me from his work and told me that we are going to Hawaii for one week in our holidays next month. I couldn’t believe my ears what I just heard. I asked him again if he is not making it up, but he said he already purchased tickets online and made plans. That day we departed Maryland and headed towards our first destination, The Big Island of Hawaii. As soon as we reached there after a long journey, I was stunned by the beautiful scenic views that I only saw in pictures. I was totally lost in the scenic views that I forgot to blink my eyes. We stayed in the 5-star hotel in front of the beach. Next day we hired a helicopter for a trip to see volcano. It was simply amazing. We stayed in The Big Island for 4 days, and then we went to the island of Maui for 4 days. We did so many activities which included Jet Ski, Scuba diving, Parasailing etc. We also watched the sunrise of Kalekala’s summit, it was very romantic. At last one of the best things we did in Hawaii was to drive on the Hana Highway. It was the most amazing and spectacular experience of my life that I was stunned by God’s creation of a heaven-like place on earth. This highway has 600-plus turns, 50 one-lane bridges and breathtaking views that alternate between mountain streams and soaring sea cliffs, the Hana Highway is less a roadway than an event in itself. Our journey ended on 18th of May. On our way back we traveled by plane again. During the trip I thought, ‘Those days were amazing and unforgettable, I wished if I had more days to spend over there’.
My holiday was exciting and full of joy. I enjoyed it immensely. I am looking forward to going there again soon.

实在看不下去了,在提问者"中毒"未深之前.我上来说两句.说"what"这里不能引导同位语从句,是因为"what"表特指,这种解释本身就非常的荒唐,可笑!
(1)这里"what"不是做前面名词的同位语,而是其引导的同位语从句做前面名词的同位语.
(2)我不只一次看到what 相当于"the+名词+定语",或 "what=some that "这样的说法,让我觉得以讹传讹真是害人非浅.引用此话的回复者我想已误解了最初说出这句话人的本意了(只是想通过"名词+定语从句"的转化让初学者更容易理解what引导的名词从句).而不是说同位语从句就不能做表泛指名词的同位语. 只要能构成同位关系,任何名词不论是否泛指都有同位语
(3)此句不能选what的原因是,what在这里引导的同位语从句与前面所修饰的词(an unforgettable moment)无法构成同位关系.即:
An unforgettable moment is what I will always treasure. 不成立
不成立的原因不言而喻,这也是为什么同位语从句的先行词多为 fact, news, idea, thought, question,这些包含内容广泛的先行词.

I had a good time in my winter vacation.l went to Beijing with my parents . There we visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the summer palace and many other places. We took many photos of these places. We also tasted much decious food .Finally we paid a visited to Qinghua University . We had a good time in Beijing . I think I will never forget this vacation.

可以从交际方面、学习方面、体育运动方面切入哦.很容易的~
祝你英语越来越好~望采纳~有不懂的还可以来问我哦~

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先行词前面有 the last 修饰
所以用that

What is the greatest gift you have ever received?A gift does not have to be expensive.After all,the true value of a gift is not necessarily measured in terms of money.Rather,when a gift brings you happiness or fills a real need in your life,it has great value to you personally.

构思
期末好成绩
· 成绩很重要
- 成绩关系以后升学，朋友看法，班级地位
· 事先付出了很多牺牲和努力
EX：本来很喜欢打球，但是为了好成绩取消很重要的球赛
英文
Well, I just can't forget the huge triumph I made in my last final exam.
That exam w...

My Unforgettable ExperienceTom's parents go out at night until 11 o'clock to go home, his 12-year-old one at home, when someone walked outside, he was afraid, I heard a movement outside the room he was more afraid, and later found to be its own small cat, never a man at home alone, he had an unforgettable experience.

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这个行不?18岁那句你可以换,中学生那句也可以换换,这个应该有三分钟吧.
I had the most unforgettable experience in my life when I was 18,as senior high
student.It is an experience about helping a blind man to cross the street.
I still remember that day vividly.That night I had studied at school library; it was
around 10 o’clock,and I prepared to go back home.As I passed through the school
gate,I said goodbye to my friends.Suddenly I saw a strange thing in front of me.
There was a male standing beside the cross-walk; the traffic light was green,he could
walk forward,but he didn’t.He was just standing there and made no actions.I was
confused at this sight.Out of curiosity,I decided to walk over to him and to see what
was happening.I felt perplexed until I walked next to him.Standing beside him,I
could see he was wearing sunglasses and holding a white stick; then I knew this man
was blind.
In this cold winter day,pedestrians all wore heavy coats,including him and me.
His was gray and mine was black.I also noticed that there was a sign around his neck.
The sign said “I am virtually deaf and blind; please help me cross the street.Tap me
on the shoulder.” I knew I must help him.So I tapped him on the shoulder,and then
he put his left hand on my right shoulder and I led him across the street.All the way ,we said nothing.I will never forget it .

This summer holiday, I went to Dalian with my family. We got there by air. Dalian is a very beautiful and modern city. On the bus, we could see all kinds of buildings which were great.
In the morning, we got to the hotel where we lived. After breakfast, we began to our travel. First we took the bus to the Sea Park. There are so many different kinds of fishes that I couldn't believe my eyes. We also saw the show of dolphins. Then we had lunch in a restaurant. The seafood which was very famous in China was delicious.
After lunch we went swimming. The sea was blue and beach was golden. We all enjoyed ourselves in the sea. Finally we went back the hotel where we lived. We had a happy day.
In this trip, we also went to some places which were interesting and famous in Dalian, went shopping and so on.
Several days later, we left Dalian. On our way home, we were very happy. This was the reason why we didn't feel tired. In all, we had a good holiday.

An unforgettable experience
I like traveling very much.My trip to XiAn is really unforgettable.Before I went there,I always wanted to see Bin Ma Yong,so I chose to go there.
I went to there by train with my parents and I had breakfast in the hotel.Then we went there by bus.When I got off the bus,I was very excited.I saw a lot of false man whose hand with all kinds of things.
I took many pictures.Finally we went back the hotel in the afternoon.
Though I was very tired,I felt very happy.I will never forget it for ever.

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Read newspapers .every day and I will look at the newspaper. And a lot of understanding from the above information, to enrich themselves. I think that newspapers do not only be able to increase my view, but let us be able to keep abreast of international current affairs, the newspaper also be able to see growth in our reading functions, We are writing to raise the level of

That was a very unforgettable day.On the morning,I got rid of a smooth dog of park ,and the weather was very good.Some stroke Tai Ji's,and some played badminton .some played football ,and people is all doing the different thing.i has been at home until noon ,I bought some vegetable and flesh ,which acted as one bowl face ,it was very delicious.Afternoon ,I was very idle ,because my friend invited me to go out and play basketball ,I was highly pleased.I tired out very much until completing basketball ,I was very joyful but.How colored ,meaningful it is today.
逗号不能隔开两个句子~
你说的~我一个人,不是这么翻译的...

The most unforgettable examination I’ve ever experiencedAs a middle school student,I have passed through many examinations.Among all these examination,one that I took in Grand 5 impressed me most.Tha...

How time flies!My middle school life is coming to an end.I can’t forget the happy time that I’ve spent with my classmates and teachers.At school,I am busy with my studies.I’m interested in English,because my English teacher,Miss Wang,is kind and helpful.
I like playing basketball and reading books.After class,I join some clubs at school.In this way,I’ve got more knowledge and improved my life.I learn how to face difficulties,and I also learn how to get on well with friends.
My school life is meaningful and colorful.In a word,it is unforgettable,isn’t it?
时间过得真快!我的初中生活即将结束.我不能忘记,我花了我的同学和老师的快乐时光.在学校,我在忙我的研究.我对英语很感兴趣,因为我的英语老师,王老师,是亲切和有用的.
我喜欢打篮球和读书.下课后,我加入了一些俱乐部在学校.以这种方式,我得到了更多的知识,提高了我的生活.我学会了如何面对困难,我也学会了如何与朋友.
我的学校生活是有意义和丰富多彩.总之,这是难忘的,不是吗?

When I was in high school, one of my classmates sit right beside me. His name is ChenLiang. He is my unforgettable person in my life.
I remembered my mathematics was just mediocre at that time, bu...