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我是一个和你同龄的国外留学生,说实话你的思路是好的,但是结构太中式英语,也就是说有很多语病,建议多读一些外文的书籍,整张知识量.
所有括号中的东西是建议看完可以怒删.
一点建议,把你的原文放到word或者wps中看看拼写检查,你就知道你的错误有多多了.
用了不少时间,望采纳.
Shopping has many advantages. First ,you can buy goods that（不是what) you are interested in without going outdoors. Second, shopping online not only saves time ,but also avoids (crowing in the crowd你难道不觉得纠结吗?）struggling in the crowd and easily get tired (作为人,应用感到疲倦的tired而且是get tired）during shopping. Third ,the price of goods are（动词啊,汗流不已）online usually much lower than the store.(So you can save money和上句纯属重复）. (创新一下, 不要光用第一第二第三)Last but not least, (you can choose a lot of goods ,and you can choose all kinds of goods 不是我在讽刺你,我实在快笑趴下了)Online shopping provide a variety of choices, we are able to find the useful stuff and get rid of the crap. However ,shopping online also has some disadvantages such as (you just can see the picture of goods ,but you can't see itselves)(themselves啊) just seeing the pictures does not means the reality. Some people are worried about the quality of goods .You may buy lots of goods (that you don't need online无语的句子) without going online,it causes(caused?现象不需要用过去时） wasting.(In a word,I love shopping on line!这似乎也太简单了,你说网上购物不好为什么不用中和句?)So, the conclusion to draw, although online shopping has many disadvantages that need to be improved, I still find it pretty useful in life.

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on line 上网 上线
on the line 电话头 电话里.

shopping on line has many advantages .first ,you can buy goods what you are interested inwithout going outdoors .second,shopping on line not only can save time ,but also can aviod crowding in the crow...

不过你翻译的很简洁 ,也是对的,很口语化,

online是名词,（计算机）在线、联机的意思.而on line 是在线的、联机的

on line是比较地道的表现,大家口头上都这么说,不过on line可以说是在网上,也可以说是在线上(比如电话,电视等等),还可以说是准备完毕(比如power on line,电力开启)
而on the internet则意义比较准确,特指在网上的意思了

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on-line 与 everyday为一个词,相当于形容词
online activities, everyday activities 网上活动,日常活动
on line和every day则是词组
every day 每天,on line上线,上网
I go on line (online也可以) every day after work. 每天下班后我都会上网

Online shopping logistics
In recent years,people are creasy aboutshopping online.They like it because the price online is much cheaper andthere are many more options than in the store,they do not need to go too farand also they can easily check out by clicking the mouse for few times insteadof standing in line for a long time.The most important issue is the logisticswill deliver the item to the shopper’s hand directly,which save people lot oftime and trouble.
Along with the popular of online shopping,the logistics is hotter and hotter.Right now there are hundreds of logisticcompanies in China.
They offer many logistic services:
They make delivery.
This is the main service,the logistic agent receives thetarget package from the online seller and after few procedures,and the packagewill be delivered to the buyer.Most logistic companies can deliver nationwide.
They pick up personal package.
If people want to return the item to the seller,they donot need to go to the logistic store,they can simply make a phone call,and alogistic agent will come to their house and pick up the package and deliver tothe destination.
They offer freight collectservice.
This means when there is an agreement between the buyer andthe seller of this service.They provide the delivery service first,andcollect the freight fee when they make the delivery.
Online tracking service.
As long as you have the tracking number from a specifiedlogistic company,you can track the package at any time online.It’s quite convenience,and most logistic companies offer this service.
Other services:
The logistic companies also provide other services likekeep valuable goods,store customer’s items,one day delivery,internationaldelivery etc…
The services logistic companies providemake the world more convenience,and also they get closer between company tocompany,companies to consumers,as well as person to person.It is adeveloping industry; I believe it will be much better in the future.

My views on shopping online
With the development of society,shopping online is becoming more and more popular around the world.More and more classmates of us have decided to shop onlne.
Compared with tradtional shopping,it's very covenient and much cheaper to shop online.Besides,shops online are open 24 hours a day and you can shop at any time.Shops online have all kinds of goods so you needn't worry about the lack of any goods.
As the famous saying goes,"Each coin has two sides",whether it is good or not depends on people's choices.Some people say we cannot see the goods when we purchase online.Therfore we cannot check the quality of the goods.If we keep shopping online,we will lose the joy of shopping with friends.Since goods are always cheaper online,we sometimes buy many unnecessary items,which is a waste of wealth.
Next time when you shop,consider it carefully before you make the descision.

Online Shopping
Nowadays, online shopping has increasingly become a fashion. Nobody will fail to notice that a growing number of people prefer shopping online such as Taobao because it brings us a lot of convenience. Just click your button, and all that you can do is to wait for your delivery to come.
However, everything can be divided into two, and online shopping has no exception. It also has many problems. First of all, most products have very poor quality. When you buy something online, you can not touch or feel them, so their quality is not so good as it looks. What's worse, it will cause your financial insecurity, because the payment is also done through the Internet. Therefore, your bank account or credit card numbers will be stolen and make you suffer a great loss.
On the whole, through the above analysis, I believe online shopping has a very bright future. Although it has many problems, it is one of the results of modern society. There is a long way to go for us to improve its services.

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考察替代的形式。本题的did代替spent,第二个as是关系代词，代替time作为did(spent)的宾语，构成spend some time （in） doing sth花费时间做某事；故D正确。句意：昨天他花在阅读上的时间和花在网上聊天的时间一样多。

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相对来说GOOGLE的最好.但如果你用付费的翻译软件的话,就另当别论了.

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The terms online and offline (also on-line and off-line) have specific meanings with respect to computer technology and telecommunication.The concepts have however been extended from their computing and telecommunication meanings into the area of human interaction and conversation,such that even offline can be used in contrast to the common usage of online (e.g.,"I bought that shirt offline").
In computer technology and telecommunication,online and offline are defined by Federal Standard 1037C.They are states or conditions of a "device or equipment" or of "a functional unit".To be considered online,one of the following must apply to a device:
Under the direct control of another device
Under the direct control of the system with which it is associated
Available for immediate use on demand by the system without human intervention
Connected to a system,and is in operation
Functional and ready for service
In contrast,a device that is offline meets none of these criteria (e.g.,its main power source is disconnected or turned off,or it is off-power).
One example of a common use of these concepts is a Mail User Agent that can be instructed to be in either online or offline states.One such MUA is Microsoft Outlook.When online it will attempt to connect to mail servers (to check for new mail at regular intervals,for example),and when off-line it will not attempt to make any such connection.The online or offline state of the MUA does not necessarily reflect the connection status between the computer on which it is running and Internet.That is,the computer itself may be online—connected to Internet via a cable modem or other means—while Outlook is kept offline by the user,so that it makes no attempt to send or to receive messages.Similarly,a computer may be configured to employ a dial-up connection on demand (as when an application such as Outlook attempts to make connection to a server),but the user may not wish for Outlook to trigger that call whenever it is configured to check for mail.

没有正确答案吧.这里应该填一个谓语动词,而且主语是单数形式.应该填isn't 或 doesn't go

这么简单的题目你也不会写啊
真是郁闷了 跟你说个提纲吧
第一段先写现状:making friends on line is becoming more and more popular .some people think it is very useful and interesting ,but other is worried about it.In my opinion .
第二段阐述你的观点 举例论证 最好用对比
最后一段重述你个人的观点 要简洁概括
希望你可以写的更好

online 名词或形容词
on line 作表语或者状语
on-line形容词

the advantage of

online是一个单词,联机,在线的意思；
on line是“与计算机连接的,联机的”的意思.
用where来问的话,应该用on line 有这个搭配.