帮我取个出彩的作文题目（我的作文题目,和已经写的作文如下）

正义是心的善良。所以是不是出彩并不是让众人知道，而是自己清楚是不是无愧于心，善待身边的人和事

中外作者,瑕瑜寸长
中外文学,环比作者

有梦就能出彩
---《开学第一课》观后感
今年《开学第一课》的主题是宣传梦想，号召我们每一个同学心中要有梦想，有了梦想才更能激起我们为梦想而奋斗的决心，才能活出更精彩的人生。
记得我看过一片报道：在一个贫困的山区，有一个妈妈带着四个儿子，家里很平穷，常常是吃了上顿没下顿，这位妈妈，为了儿子能多吃点，自己经常不吃，等儿子们走了，她会将他们没吃干净的腕拿起来舔，他的儿子们知道这件事后，心里很难受，在他们幼小的心灵里产生了美丽的梦想，他们立志要走出大山、走出贫困，他们要让自己的妈妈过上幸福的生活。于是他们勤奋刻苦，终于兄弟四人分别考上了清华、北大。这个故事很感人，在那么贫困落后的山区，别说什么好的学校了，连饭都吃不上，而这几个孩子怎么能都考上这么好的大学呢，难道是因为他们聪明吗？不，那是因为在他们的心中有着美丽的梦想，有着那份强烈的愿望。
我们每个人都要有远大的理想，比起他们兄弟四人，我们今天，不愁吃不愁穿，生活条件、学习条件都这么好，我们没有理由不好好学习，我相信，只要我们心中有梦并为之而努力就一定能出彩。
六（8）班
钱隆

要用心去写,用心去感受,用词要恰当,在写的时候要读一读,看看有哪些地方不好,然后去修改.最重要的一点就是事情要真实,不要纯属捏造,否则会让人觉得太假.

编织我永远的青春。记忆的斜帘挂满你的名字，醉里挑灯，春梦深海。 　 想你的时候，倚门凭栏，凝结了兰色的缱绻，恬静的心海伫立千年的湖泊。承接未来的驿站，袅烟翠柳，暗香浮动。 　 想你的时候，一座孤山，一抹残云，一份无以存放的落寞，长满苍苔的小径。渐响的骊歌，踏向梦的脸庞，模糊的视线里飘飘翻飞。 　 想你的时候，一双手，一滴泪，一蓑烟雨。思念在浓云薄雾的深夜，悄悄爬上桅杆。海水托着那些远去的帆影，于波光朦朦中渐行渐远。 　 想你的时候，彷徨挑衅敏感的神经，踯躅斩断相思的脉络。飞奔中的绵绵情意跌下深壑，沉积于萧飒的莽原，长成苔藓的丛石。 　 想你的时候，荒芜的根须，拖着长长的影子，耕植于枝头。落日的碎裂，遗失在喧哗的尘嚣，于孤寂忧愤中艰难爬行。 　 想你的时候，用脆弱磨一把刀，刺破我心底的隐忍，暗红色的血液泼溅痉挛的心隅，疯狂癫跑，痴望着的彼岸，却无法泅渡。 　 想你的时候，绞断项颈，挥舞头颅，抛洒出一条优雅的曲线，成全你旖旎的梦幻。喊一声苍天负我，落英纷纷！作一次泣血的杜宇，直至断肠，直至断肠！

议论文,一篇文章,举很多例子,慷慨激昂的,很有气势,也容易得高分 .励志类的吃香.积极健康向上,可了劲的夸

需要看很多很多书 有细腻的情感 才能有这许多积淀

1.抓紧时间做某事
look snappy to do sth
lose no time in doing
make it snappy to do
snap it off
2.在.的映衬下（指风景）
...with.
白色的山峰在蓝天的映衬下煞是好看.
The white peak contrasts finely with the blue sky.
3.坐了大约三小时的车,我们来到了...
It tooks us about 3 hours to get/arrive ...
We arrive ...after 3 hours by bus.

60分的话,给42分
出彩的童心,童心方面说了很多,没有体现出彩,我觉得这个彩才是关键

可以写拉着“孔子”的手,写成你冲孔子中的收获,类似的,可以拉着“庄子”、拉着“鲁迅”、拉着“李白”等文人墨客的手,感受他们的文学思想之美和启发(前提是要懂或者有一定积累）
可拉着父亲或母亲或亲人的手,从干裂的褶皱中寻找艰辛和爱……

自我介绍
大家好,我叫...,来自钦州,我很高兴能在这里与大家认识,我是纺织工业学校的一名学生,我的专业是针织,我很荣幸能参加集训营,我参加集训营是因为我喜欢英语,我希望在集训营里学到的用在我以后的工作中,并开始我的职业生涯.因为我坚信将在很多领域都需要英语.
我的英语很差这就是我为什么在这里和大家一起学习,我知道我拿下英语将是一个巨大的挑战,但我坚信,“宝剑锋从磨出,梅花香自苦寒来”,坚持就是胜利,希望就在今后的学习中请大家多多指教,
Self-introduction
Hello everyone!My is.,from Qinzhou.I’m so glad to meet you,and I’m currently a student at Guangxi Textile Industrial School.my major is knitting.It’s my pleasure to join the CHAMPION training camp,because I love English and I hope I can learn something in the training for my future work.As we all know English is very useful in every field.
My English is limited that’s why I’m here.I know it’s a huge challenge for me to conquer English,but I believe that “No pains,no gains,success belongs to the persevering”,I hope I can learn more from you,Thank you!

　读了这个故事,我并不为这个登山运动员而感到惋惜.应该感到高兴,感到骄傲.
我非常同意故事的最后一句话：不,我最清楚,6400米的海拔.是我登上山崖的最高点,我一点都不感到遗憾.对呀,这就是人生重要的哲理,人的生命在于什么,不就是在于不给生命的最后一次不留下瑕疵.人生就是一直走,千万不要回头,去找到人生最高点就像这样,就像这样努力达到自己人生最高点才没有瑕疵.虽然还没到达登山生涯的最高点6400米的海拔,可他努力了,他是用最后一点希望去创造人生最高点所以一点都不遗憾.
我佩服这位登山运动员,我佩服他那回答的干脆,我相信他自己也很喜欢自己回答和做法.如果是我,我也会做出同样举动,如果是我在生命的最后时候,我可能会在我结束生命,做一件轰动世界的事.
一份努力就是微不足道,渗入泥土,便会消失不见,可把所有努力汇聚成河却不是川流不息.如同我们,在许多的困难面前,一不努力总是凸显着淡薄,而无法作为,可当我们用心努力的去做某一件事,就可以创造无数奇迹、无数的人生最高点.

No one should be responsible for this accident(mistake)看是什么错误决定用那个词

http://wenku.baidu.com/view/076a380002020740be1e9b4c.html
你可以参考一下!~~

1. 第一排中,“causal relationship"表达有误,应更正为"causal relations"
2. 第二排中,which应紧跟前面的名词.建议修改为：
"..., and the comparison which fails to take other related factors into consideration was somehow inapppropriate".
3.这是一个句子.将所有的东西放在一个句子里,并不是作文水平的体现,反倒显得句子意思表达不清粗,前后内容没有逻辑联系,冗长.建议断句.
这很明显是一个argument,所以你首先提出你的Claim：
The author established a causal relations between A and B without a fully analysis.
然后用原因,去支持你的claim
而且后面的内容,翻来覆去看,表达的其实是同一个意思：分析不全面,故大可精炼,然后用更多的文笔去找更多的内容支持你的观点,比如是否还存在作者在某个例子中实验对象（泛指）不全面等问题,而不是费过多的笔墨在一个点子上绕.
Hope it helps!
Best,
Amanda

1．Obviously television has both advantages and disadvantages． 2．Living in a city has both advantages and disadvantages． 3．Compared with cars，bikes have their advantages and disadvantages． 举一反三： 1．Although computers bring people a lot of convenience，they have many disadvantages． 2．．．．has many advantages．For example，．．．However，just as every coin has two sides，．．．has its disadvantages．（本例将利弊分开讲，转折过渡自然。just as every coin has two sides也很值得背诵。） II．．．．play（s）an important role ／part in．．．……在……中扮演重要角色／起重要作用。例如： 1．Computers play an important role in science and technology． 2．Computers play a more and more important role in our life． Computers play an increasingly important role in our studies． 3．Education plays an important part in developing our mind． 4．Addiction to alcohol and drugs play a role in homelessness． 举一反三： 1．Advertisement plays an informative role in our daily life． 2．In the past，letters played a decisive role in long-distance communication．But now ，telephone，email，fax have taken their place． III．With the development of．．．，随着……的发展，例如： 1．With the development of our economy，m any Chinese families can afford a car． 2．With the development of our economy and society，pollution is more and more serious． 3．With the rapid development of science and technology，people can get a college degree by taking online-courses at home． 4．With the current social and technological developments，employees with more knowledge and higher academic degrees are needed． 满意请右上角采纳~~

第一个是
I am a passionate about people. In my opinion, one has the ability to work but no enthusiasm, that his work will never be. But a passionate people to work, even if his ability is slightly lacking, but seriously, energetic, aggressive, that his work attitude and performance will not disappoint.
这样子翻译是对的吗

采纳我吧

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

你想用一些华丽的辞藻对吧?
困难：embarrassment handicap inconvenience
美丽：comeliness goodliness loveliness
…………有很多用法,不同的词语,在不同的语境下使用

青春绽放真善美 偶尔翻翻以前的东西，总会涌上思绪万千，而且还会留在脑海中不断翻腾，经久不散。同样的，我无意中翻出了小时候的画册，又有许多浮现在眼前。小时候每个人都是这般天真烂漫吧！幼稚当然成为孩子们的天性。连孩子们的画也不例外。一般看去，油然而生的是一种稚气，是一种成年人乃至青少年没法拥有的一种气质。每一笔，无言中都勾画出童年时，我们心中的那一幅蓝图——多么的美好啊！每一幅幼稚的图画，正是我们一颗颗纯洁，天真无邪的心啊！ 想到这里，不由得有从那美好的童年回到了现实。如今的我们已褪去童稚时的天真，往日心中的那幅蓝图已随着岁月的消逝而烟消云散，取而代之的是父母诸多的束缚以及我们言听计从的心理！21世纪的我们本应该拥有远大的理想和抱负，应该拥有自己的爱好和兴趣，应该向着一个属于自己的方向而努力奋斗！但现实却恰恰相反：我们没有思想，没有主见，没有反抗，只有听从。从而令我们逐渐形成“父母老师说的话就是对的”，“他们无论做什么都只是为了我们”这种畸形的心理。我们难道就不能有自己做主的权利吗？ 人生就是一张白纸，未来就靠我们的双手去绘画出来。因此我们就应该用五彩缤纷的画笔，去创造一个属于自己的人生。我的青春，应该由我来做主。 偶尔翻翻以前的东西，总会涌上思绪万千，而且还会留在脑海中不断翻腾，经久不散。同样的，我无意中翻出了小时候的画册，又有许多浮现在眼前。小时候每个人都是这般天真烂漫吧！幼稚当然成为孩子们的天性。连孩子们的画也不例外。一般看去，油然而生的是一种稚气，是一种成年人乃至青少年没法拥有的一种气质。每一笔，无言中都勾画出童年时，我们心中的那一幅蓝图——多么的美好啊！每一幅幼稚的图画，正是我们一颗颗纯洁，天真无邪的心啊！ 想到这里，不由得有从那美好的童年回到了现实。如今的我们已褪去童稚时的天真，往日心中的那幅蓝图已随着岁月的消逝而烟消云散，取而代之的是父母诸多的束缚以及我们言听计从的心理！21世纪的我们本应该拥有远大的理想和抱负，应该拥有自己的爱好和兴趣，应该向着一个属于自己的方向而努力奋斗！但现实却恰恰相反：我们没有思想，没有主见，没有反抗，只有听从。从而令我们逐渐形成“父母老师说的话就是对的”，“他们无论做什么都只是为了我们”这种畸形的心理。我们难道就不能有自己做主的权利吗？ 人生就是一张白纸，未来就靠我们的双手去绘画出来。因此我们就应该用五彩缤纷的画笔，去创造一个属于自己的人生。我的青春，应该由我来做主。 青春，流露着浓浓的诗情画意；青春，散发出淡淡的幽香含情。青春时代充满着年少轻狂，充满着无限生机，充满着美丽自信。青春的步伐不会因困难而停止，青春的旋律不会因风雨而阻挠。青春是阳光，是自信的标志；青春是月光，是优雅的代表；青春是星光，是引领时尚的先锋。让我们扬起青春的衣角，架起起航的风帆，让生命在这里飞扬，让青春在这里启航。 让青春绽放真善美吧！

我所不断追求的是：不断增加自己的价值.
在你生命中确有一个你所喜欢的目标,然后就朝着目标勇往直前.当你把你的一切都投入到你所喜欢的事业时,你会发现,你所渴望的机会一个接一个全部掌握了.就如同珊瑚静止在水中,它所需要的原生物却不断地送上门来.

按照正常表达 在所长时间以内用in+时间 日前边用on 年月用in 几十年可以用 several decades 来表达 近几年用 recent years 其他就不用了 用多了反而像是在卖弄

既然是要出彩. 我本想推荐你以一个 合适的joke开头.但是你又说 “开头第一句问好”.问好的话.只能是 老师同学们好了. 你总不能以yo whats up 做开头吧.另外.选择玩笑话的时候一定要谨慎.通常亚洲人无法理解 欧美式的幽默.

有梦就有动力
只要精心地设计
你看蝴蝶的娃娃
纵然丑陋梦想出奇
有梦就要坚持
只要精心的设计
你看蝴蝶的娃娃
成蛹经历了多少的努力
有梦就能出彩
只要精心地设计
你看蝴蝶的娃娃
化蝶翩翩飞舞美丽的天地

他是来自我班的XXX同学,在班中担任XXX的职务,他以前的成绩XXX,但经过XXX的努力,他的名次在年级中提高了XX多名,这学期他会更加努力,更上一层楼,他平时爱好XX,性格XX,热心助人,这次成为一名光荣的升旗手他很自豪.,我坚信,他以后会迈着坚定的步伐,走向成功的彼岸,他以后会踏着光明大道,走向理想的终点.

1、审题.审题就是分析文章的题目,弄清题目的意思.
2、确定中心.记叙文总要表达一个思想,说明一个道理或表现某一方面的思想感情,这就是文章的中心.
3、选择材料.作文的内容就是材料.写作文要紧扣中心选择材料,与中心关系不大的或无关的,要少选或不选.
4、安排结构.所谓安排文章的结构,指的是文章的材料的组织安排.
5、列提纲.提纲,是结文章的总体设计,具体包括：(1)文章的题目；(2)中心思想；(3)写作的顺序；(4)详写,略写的提示.提纲不能太详细,也不能太简单.
6、文章的开头和结尾要相呼应.
7、要适当运用修辞手法,使文章精彩.
8、详略安排要得当.

同学亲,个人建议这种参赛文章还是参与竞选者自行起草、自行翻译的好,那样才能真正彰显自个儿才干.如果只是中文稿件部分由自己起草,英文翻译有草稿,需要找朋友或同好为你修改或提升润润色,是可以代为出出主意的.捉刀...

例如“有约不来过夜半”中的“约”字

同学风华正茂,英雄不论何处
往昔多少事,今日笑谈中
念往昔多少岁月,望前程大鹏万里

苍蝇-----小型气体分析仪.2.萤火虫-----人工冷光； 3.电鱼------伏特电池； 4.水母------水母耳风暴预测仪,5.蛙眼------电子蛙眼 6.蝙蝠超声定位器的原理------探路仪”.7.蓝藻-----光解水的装置,8.人体骨胳肌肉系统和生物电控制的研究,——步行机.9.动物的爪子------现代起重机的挂钩 10.动物的鳞甲------屋顶瓦楞 11.鱼的鳍------桨 12.螳螂臂,或锯齿草------锯子 13.苍耳属植物-------尼龙搭扣.14.龙虾-------气味探测仪.15.壁虎脚趾------粘性录音带

作文算90吧,8+21+5+1.5*2+4+8*2+10/2+3*2=69
80+69*7=563,估算,估算而已
灰常不错的成绩,这样看来作文应该很可能会不止90吧,呵呵,佩服一个~~

The product of Apple is of good quality,nice in outfit with unique design,conspicuous,shiny looking,easy to distinguish from porducts of other companies,represents taste and standard.On the other hand,the spirit of the founder (as well as the CEO)of Apple,Steve Jobs is admirable.It is proper to say that choosing Apple is choosing a lifestyle.

General Introduction
I am a third year master major in automation at Shanghai Jiao Tong University P. R. China. With tremendous interest in Industrial Engineering I am writing to apply for acceptance into your Ph.D. graduate program.
Education background
In 1995 I entered the Nanjing University of Science &Technology (NUST) -- widely considered one of the China’s best engineering schools. During the following undergraduate study my academic records kept distinguished among the whole department. I was granted First Class Prize every semester and my overall GPA(89.5/100) ranked No.1 among 113 students. In 1999 I got the privilege to enter the graduate program waived of the admission test. I selected the Shanghai Jiao Tong University to continue my study for its best reputation on Combinatorial Optimization and Network Scheduling where my research interest lies.
At the period of my graduate study my overall GPA(3.77/4.0) ranked top 5% in the department. In the second semester I became teacher assistant that is given to talented and matured students only. This year I won the Acer Scholarship as the one and only candidate in my department which is the ultimate accolade for distinguished students endowed by my university. Presently I am preparing my graduation thesis and trying for the honor of Excellent Graduation Thesis.
Research experience and academic activity
When a sophomore I joined the Association of AI Enthusiast and began to narrow down my interest for my future research. In 1997 I participated in simulation tool development for the scheduling system in Prof. Wang’s lab. With the tool of OpenGL and Matlab I designed a simulation program for transportation scheduling system. It is now widely used by different research groups in NUST. In 1998 I assumed and fulfilled a sewage analysis &dispose project for Nanjing sewage treatment plant. This was my first practice to convert a laboratory idea to a commercial product.
In 1999 I joined the distinguished Professor Yu-Geng Xis research group aiming at Network flow problem solving and Heuristic algorithm research. Soon I was engaged in the FuDan Gene Database Design. My duty was to pick up the useful information among different kinds of gene matching format. Through the comparison and analysis for many heuristic algorithms I introduced an improved evolutionary algorithm -- Multi-population Genetic Algorithm. By dividing a whole population into several sub-populations this improved algorithm can effectively prevent GA from local convergence and promote various evolutionary orientations. It proved more efficiently than SGA in experiments too. In the second semester I joined the workshop-scheduling research in Shanghai Heavy Duty Tyre plant. The scheduling was designed for the rubber-making process that covered not only discrete but also continuous circumstances. To make a balance point between optimization quality and time cost I proposed a Dynamic layered Scheduling method based on hybrid Petri Nets. The practical application showed that the average makespan was shortened by a large scale. I also publicized two papers in core journals with this idea. Recently I am doing research in the Composite Predict of the Electrical Power system assisted with the technology of Data Mining for Bao Steel. I try to combine the Decision Tree with Receding Optimization to provide a new solution for the Composite Predictive Problem. This project is now under construction.
Besides In July 2000 I got the opportunity to give a lecture in English in Asia Control Conference (ASCC) which is one of the top-level conferences among the world in the area of control and automation. In my senior year I met Prof. Xiao-Song Lin a visiting professor of mathematics from University of California-Riverside I learned graph theory from him for my network research. These experiences all rapidly expanded my knowledge of English and the understanding of western culture.
I hope to study in depth
In retrospect I find myself standing on a solid basis in both theory and experience which has prepared me for the Ph.D. program. My future research interests include: Network Scheduling Problem Heuristic Algorithm research (especially in GA and Neural network) Supply chain network research Hybrid system performance analysis with Petri nets and Data Mining.
Please give my application materials a serious consideration. Thank you very much.
1、 good morning my name is xx it is really a great honor to have this opportunity for a interview i would like to answer whatever you may raise and i hope i can make a good performance today eventually enroll in this primary school.
2、 now i will introduce myself brieflyi am xx years oldborn in xx province and i am curruently a xxxx.my major is xxx..in the past 4 yearsi spend most of my time on studyi have passed CET4/6 with a ease. and i have acquired basic knowledge of packaging and publishing both in theory and in practice. besides i have attend
3.i will have Patience on all of the children and my hard work will be improved if you enroll me.

白雪公主》英语话剧剧本
SW-白雪公主 Q-皇后 M-魔镜 H-猎人P-白马王子 D-小矮人 音乐起,旁白
A long time ago, In a beautiful kingdom, there lived a young king and queen, the people loved them so much; the queen died while giving birth to a girl, her name was Snow White, She was a beautiful princess. Year passed, the king got married again, The people didn’t love the new queen, because she was cruel. One day, In the king’s palace: ----白雪出场
S.w: My name is Snow white , I am a beautiful princess, I miss my mother so much, Where is my mother ? Where is my mother ?
音乐起,皇后、魔镜出场
Q: I am a queen , I’m very beautiful , Where is Mirror ? Mirror , Mirror on the wall , who’s the most beautiful ?
M: Snow white is much more beautiful than you !
Q: Hunter, go kill Snow white .
猎 人 出 场
H: Yes, my queen
音乐起,猎人追赶白雪,公主惊慌出逃
S.w: Help me ,help me, please, please !
白雪顺利脱逃后
S.w: I am tried and hungry, oh, there is a little house , I will eat a little and lie down.
音乐起,7个小矮人出场,
D: 1Look, somebody ate my food----
2Somebody drank my water----
3Someone is sleeping now----
4What a beautiful girl!----
小矮人睡觉----音乐起公主先醒了----小矮人醒了----对话
5How do you do?
S.w: How do you do? My name is Snow white … Nice to meet you!
D:（齐说）Nice to meet you ,too----
6 welcome to our house!----
7Would you like to live here?
S.W: My pleasure, thank you very much!
D: Let’s go out for our work, bye-bye, Snow white.
皇后、魔镜出场
Q: Mirror, mirror on the wall , who’s the most beautiful?
M: Snow white is much more beautiful than you!
Q: What ? Snow white is not dead ? Hahaha, I got a good idea!
音乐起,皇后扮演老太太出场,对话
Q: Apple ,apple, beautiful apple,
S.w: Hello, Good morning grandma!
Q: pretty girl ,would you like a bite?
S.w: Oh, yes ,thank you grandma!
白雪公主咬一口后倒地
Q: The girl is dead! Hahaha…
小矮人出场、围着公主哭
Snow white wake up, wake up…
音乐起,小矮人引着王子出场
P: A beautiful girl! She shall be my queen!
王子唤醒公主,公主醒了
P：Wake up ! Wake up , my queen !
S.w: Thank you for your help !
P: My pleasure !
音乐起,小矮人、公主、王子跳起欢快的舞

语文的作文怎么样写才能出彩?
答：首先你要在文中适当的地方加入心理描写、神态描写、动作描写、环境描写……这会使你的文章更生动形象,特别要注重神态和环境描写,这两处可以很形象的来反衬中心思想.多用排比句、反问句、拟人句、比喻句……那会使你的文字更有味、更优美,而不会感到枯燥.当老师看过之后,也就会不由而然的就给了你高分.
我的文采一般怎么办?
答：每天都要坚持看作文书,看的同时画出好词佳句,睡觉前看最好,你能更准的记住.在与朋友出去玩的时候,记住别拘束,努力地吐露自己心中的真情实感,久而久之,你就会形成课外口语练笔的习惯,你的作文也将会突飞猛进的.
我是个六年级的小学生,现在作文还不错,原来作文也一般,都是这样磨练的.楼主,别怕辛苦,宝剑锋从磨砺出,梅花香自苦寒来.祝你作文早日提高!

Christmas ( Christmas ),this name is short for "Christ's mass".Mass is a kind of church.Christmas is a religious festival.Because regard it as to celebrate the birth of Jesus,so also known as christmas.On this day,all the world's Christian churches have held a special ceremony.Every year in December 25th,is a Christian celebration celebrate the birth of Jesus Christ,at Christmas,most of the Catholic Church will be first in the December 24th Christmas Eve,in December 25th the early morning at midnight mass,and some Christian churches will be held good news report,then in December 25th to celebrate Christmas; while another major branch of the Christian -- Orthodox Christmas celebration on January 7th every yea

不用说太难的词,不要太快,多和观众作眼神交流（如果害怕他们的眼睛就看他们的的额头!）,多用身势语能有效减少紧张感.

四、《滕王阁序》写景四大特点 　　《滕王阁序》的写景颇有特色,作者精心构画,苦苦经营,运用灵活多变的手法描写山水,体现了一定的美学特征.　　1.色彩变化 　　文章不惜笔墨,浓墨重彩,极写景物的色彩变化.如“紫电青霜”中的“紫电”,“飞阁流丹”中的“流丹”,“层峦耸翠”中的“耸翠”,“青雀黄龙之轴”中的“青雀”“黄龙”无不色彩缤纷,摇曳生辉.尤其“潦水尽而寒潭清,烟光凝而暮山紫”一句,不囿于静止画面色彩,着力表现水光山色之变化,上句朴素淡雅,下句设色凝重,被前人誉为“写尽九月之景”之句.　　2.远近变化 　　作者采用恰当的方法,犹如电影的拍摄技术,由近及远,构成一幅富有层次感和纵深感的全景图.“鹤汀凫渚”四句写阁四周景物,是近景；“山原旷其盈视”二句写山峦、平原和河流、湖泽,是中景；“云销雨霁”以下则是水田浩淼的远景.这种写法,是《滕王阁序》写景的最突出特点,体现了作者立体化的审美观,把读者带进了如诗如画的江南胜境,读者和景物融为一体,人在景中,景中有人.　　3.上下浑成 　　“层峦耸翠”四句,借视角变化,使上下相映成趣,天上地下,城里城外,相与为一,不可分离,体现了作者整齐划一的审美观.而“落霞与孤鹜齐飞,秋水共长天一色”更是写景名句,水天相接,浑然天成,构成一幅色彩明丽的美妙图画.　　4.虚实相衬 　　“渔舟唱晚”四句,即凭借听觉联想,用虚实手法传达远方的景观,使读者开阔眼界,视通万里.实写虚写,相互谐调,相互映衬,极尽铺叙写景之能事.　　总之,《滕王阁序》一文的写景颇具匠心,字字珠玑,句句生辉,章章华彩,一气呵成,使人读完后犹如身临江南水乡,难怪韩愈情不自禁地称赞说：“江南多临观之类,而滕王阁独为第一.”

五彩的羽毛 能说会道的嘴巴 炯炯有神的眼睛 乌黑的头发 绿油油的树叶 可爱的小鸟 美丽的梅花 隐形的翅膀

1.你可以先到网络上查找这方面的资料,如名言、事例,摘取其中可以适用的地方.(切误通篇摘抄,且须改换一下表达方式)
2.既然是演讲稿,那么开头最好要运用修辞手法(如比喻排比等),引出这次演讲的目的.
结尾也须运用修辞,进行总结并升华主题,辞藻要相对华丽一些.
3.弘扬和培育民族精神本身就是一个需要一定气势的主题,故语言上要大气.
4.不可罗嗦,即重复地讲同一个内容.
对于初学者来说,
还是建议先多看看这方面的文章,
使自己对文章的主题有更深一步的了解,
这样才能写出感情,不至于仅停留在表面.
要去发掘其中的精神和内涵...
不好意思..
只有这几点了...
剩下的只有靠你自己努力了...
加油哦!...

您好,建议您采用方洲新概念四步作文法,很快,很系统.您可以买一本去系统学习,坚持几个月学会审题、立意、选择素材,拟定中心、快速成文.祝您成功.

看!他又在——（打不出下划线,sorry..横线上可以写他懒的样子,比如：睡觉）
【望采纳~~】

We have only one earth. But now,the environment becomes worse and worse. As you know,there's no enough clean water for people. So many of them lose their lives because of water. In a lot of countries, people have to cut trees for living. So there's nothing to keep water from running away. Also we have polluted the land, the river and the air. So we have to face more and more floods and droughts .It's time that we must do something useful to protect our environment. We can plant trees and take good care of them. We can save the water and ask our parents to do so. We can't throw any litter onto the ground and we should collect them for recycling. If we take good care of our earth today,it will be more beautiful tomorrow

开头
1.Recently, the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,…问题已引起人们的关注.
2.Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
3.Nowadays, (overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
如今,(人口过剩)已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
4.It is commonly believed that… / It is a common belief that…
人们一般认为…
5.Many people insist that…
很多人坚持认为…
6.With the development of science and technology, more and more people believe that…
随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为…
7.A lot of people seem to think that…
很多人似乎认为…
引出不同观点:
People’s views on… vary from person to person. Some hold that… . However, others believe that…. 人们对…的观点因人而异.有些人认为….. 然而其他人却认为．．．
People may have different opinions on… 人们对…可能会有不同的见解.
Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person. 人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
There are different opinions among people as to… 关于…. 人们的观点大不相同.
Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure). 对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
结尾
Taking all these factors into consideration, we naturally come to the conclusion that…
把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论…
Taking into account all these factors, we may reasonably come to the conclusion that…
考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论…
Hence/Therefore, we’d better come to the conclusion that…
因此,我们最好得出这样的结论…
There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
All in all, we cannot live without… But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
提出建议:
It is high time that we put an end to the (trend). 该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
该是采纳…的建议,并对…的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
毫无疑问,对…问题应予以足够的重视.
Obviously,…. If we want to do something… , it is essential that…
显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
Only in this way can we… 只有这样,我们才能…
It must be realized that… 我们必须意识到…
预示后果:
Obviously, if we don’t control the problem, the chances are that… will lead us in danger.
很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
No doubt, unless we take effective measures, it is very likely that…
毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会…
It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
论证
From my point of view, it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.
在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
I cannot entirely agree with the idea that… 我无法完全同意这一观点….
Personally, I am standing on the side of … 就个人而言,我站在…的一边.
I sincerely believe that… 我真诚地相信…
In my opinion, it is more advisable to do … than to do….
在我个人看来,做…比做…更明智.
Finally, to speak frankly, there is also a more practical reason why…
给出原因:
This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons. First, … Second, … Third, …
这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先, … 第二, … 第三, …
hy did… ? For one thing… For another…. Perhaps the primary reason is…
为什么会…? 一个原因是… 令一个原因是… 或许其主要原因是….
I quite agree with the statement that… the reasons are chiefly as follows.
我十分赞同这一论述,即…,其主要原因如下:
列出解决办法:
Here are some suggestions for handling… 这是如何处理某事的一些建议.
The best way to solve the troubles is… 解决这些麻烦的最好办法是…
People have figured out many ways to solve this problem. 人们已找出许多办法来解决这个问题.
批判错误观点和做法:
As far as something is concerned, …. 就某事而言,…
It was obvious that… 很显然,….
It may be true that…, but it doesn’t mean that… 可能…是对的,但这并不意味着…
It is natural to believe that… , but we shouldn’t ignore that…
认为….是很自然的,但我们不应忽视….
There is no evidence to suggest that… 没有证据表明…
如何连接
强调
still, Indeed, apparently, oddly enough, of course, after all, significantly, interestingly, also, above all, surely, certainly, undoubtedly, in any case, anyway, above all, in fact, especially. Obviously, clearly.
比较
like, similarly, likewise, in the same way, in the same manner, equally.
对比
by contrast, on the contrary, while, whereas, on the other hand, unlike, instead, but, conversely, different from, however, nevertheless, otherwise, whereas, unlike, yet, in contrast.
列举for example, for instance, such as, take …for example. Except (for), to illustrate.
时间 later, next, then, finally, at last, eventually, meanwhile, from now on, at the same time, for the time being, in the end, immediately, in the meantime, in the meanwhile, recently, soon, now and then, during, nowadays, since, lately, as soon as, afterwards, temporarily, earlier, now, after a while.
顺序 first, second, third, then, finally, to begin with, first of all, in the first place, last, next, above all, last but not the least, first and most important.
可能 presumably, probably, perhaps.
解释 in other words, in fact, as a matter of fact, that is, namely, in simpler terms.
递进 What is more, in addition, and, besides, also, furthermore, too, moreover, furthermore, as well as, additionally, again.
让步although, after all, in spite of…, despite, even if, even though, though, admittedly, whatever may happen.
转折
however, rather than, instead of, but, yet, on the other hand, unfortunately. whereas
原因 for this reason, due to, thanks to, because, because of, as, since, owing to.
结果 as a result, thus, hence, so, therefore, accordingly, consequently, as consequence.
总结 on the whole, in conclusion, in a word, to sum up, in brief, in summary, to conclude, to summarize, in short.
其他 Mostly, occasionally, currently, naturally, mainly, exactly, evidently, frankly, commonly, for this purpose, to a large extent, for most of us, in many cases, in this case,
图表作文常用句型 As is shown in the graph… 如图所示…
The graph shows that… 图表显示… As can be seen from the table,… 从表格中可以看出…From the chart, we know that… 从这张表中,我们可知…All these data clearly prove the fact that… 所有这些数据明显证明这一事实,即…The increase of …. In the city has reached to 20%. ….在这个城市的增长已达到20%. In 1985, the number remained the same. 1985年,这个数字保持不变. There was a gradual decline in 1989. 1989年,出现了逐渐下降的情况.

attaches greater importance to getting good grades than to simulating creativity.
value creativity rather than grades.
it's time for our education system to (advocate?不太好吧?)
provides us a fresth point of view.and leads us to think, not just attracts eyes with grand scenes.

That's all I could find.
We are the SHIT heads now, and none of what you stamp or sign or do will take that away. So go!

　　没有波涛的海洋,绝不是真正的海洋；没有波折的生活,也绝不是真正的生活.但是,山高高不过脚底,海宽宽不过航灯.面对布满荆棘的人生,面对挫折与失败,我们应该毫不畏惧,知难而上,因为挫折也是人生中一道亮丽的风景线.
　　人生充满着矛盾：幸福与痛苦,安乐与忧患,成功与失败……我们不希望在人生的旅程中出现磨难,每个人都希望生活之路没有丛生的荆棘,没有坎坷,没有失败与挫折,但能永远拥有幸福,安乐,成功……可是,大家可曾想到：挫折可以锻炼我们的意志,丰富人的才能,使人坚强起来,从而担负起历史所赋予的重大责任.
　　人的一生中,常常会遇到挫折,但挫折又往往使一些人崛起,被世人所景仰.翻开历史的画册我们就会发现：“自古英雄多磨难,从来纨绔少伟男.”压制、侮辱、苦难常常会成为砥砺人生的坚石.屈子被放逐而写《离骚》、司马迁忍辱撰《史记》、孙膑负重完成了《孙膑兵法》……所有这些,使人们不得不承认挫折对他们崛起的重大作用.正是挫折使他们成为“人上人”.亚圣孟子说得好：“天将降大任于斯人也,必先苦其心志,劳其筋骨,饿其体肤,空乏起身,行拂乱其所为,所以动心忍性,增益其所不能.”
　　面对挫折,更重要的是在挫折中磨炼自己.这是因为：苦难对于人生是一块垫脚石,对于能干的人是一笔财富,对于有志者则是前进的动力.正像贝弗里奇说的：“思想上的压力,甚至是肉体上的痛苦,则可能成为精神上的兴奋剂.”接受痛苦,面对的就是事实；寻找超越的办法,面对的就是未来.一个人对挫折的态度只有两种：一种是可以面对挫折,并将挫折因势利导引入到追求有意义的生活轨道上去；另一种是不能面对挫折,而是逃避它,甚至发怒,抱怨,绝望.有人说：“如果世界上有一件事是肯定的,那就是我们每一个人都会遇到挫折和困难.”倘若我们深知这一点,就应该使自己有所准备,训练自己掌握一定的本领用以战胜将要面临的困难.历史学家汤因比曾经说过：“只有面对某种绝望的挑战,或者人类生存受到可怕的威胁时,文明才会升华.”挫折可以砥砺人们的勇气,也能唤醒人们潜在的高度品质.纵观历史,没有一个有所作为的人不是通过艰苦奋斗才达到成功彼岸的.著名作家蒲松龄遇到挫折,没有灰心丧气,而是很乐观的写下一副勉励自己的对联：“有志者,事竟成,破釜沉舟,百二秦关终属楚；苦心人,天不负,卧薪尝胆,三千越甲可吞吴.”
　　正视挫折是强者的气概,只有敢于面对挫折,敢于迎接挑战,我们才能“飞得更高”,才能肩负起我们身上的重任.让我们鼓起勇气,挺起胸膛去撞击成功的大门吧!记住：我们的成功就在前方!

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我与春牵手!

如果你失去了今天,你不算失败,因为明天会再来.
如果你失去了金钱,你不算失败,因为人生的价值不在钱袋.
如果你失去了文明,你是彻彻底底的失败,因为你已经失去了做人的真谛.
文明涵盖了人与人、人与社会、人与自然之间的关系.它的主要作用,一是追求个人道德完善,一是维护公众利益、公共秩序.
说到文明礼仪,我想到了一个故事.有一次,列宁同志下楼,在楼梯狭窄的过道上,正碰见一个女工端着一盆水上楼.那女工一看是列宁,就要退回去给让路.列宁阻止她说：“不必这样,你端着东西已走了半截,而我现在空手,请你先过去吧!”他把“请”字说得很响亮,很亲切.然后自己紧靠着墙,让女工上楼了,他才下楼.这不也是良好文明礼仪的体现么?
这里我不想过多地举伟人的例子,因为这很容易令大家产生一种错觉：认为文明礼仪只是伟人、名人才具备,那么我们将无需为自己或多或少的不文明言行而愧疚；或者认为即使践行了文明的要求,也并不因之成为伟人、名人.我们不但要有讲道德的大人物,我们更需要一群有道德的民众.
一个社会的公共文明水平,可以折射出一个社会一个国家的文明程度,一个人如果不遵守社会文明,小的会影响自身形象,大的会影响国家声誉.在清朝的时候,大臣李鸿章出使俄国,在一公开场合,恶习发作,随地吐了一口痰,被外国记者大加渲染、嘲弄,丢尽了中国人的脸.这是一个不遵守社会文明的历史教训.
公共文明是社会意识的一种体现,而公共文明又建立在个人的道德修养水平之上.试想一下,如果有人不注重自身的文明修养,他会有良好的公共文明吗?不会!个人文明礼仪是根、是本.人要有良好的公共文明必须先从自身做起,从身边做起.所以鲁迅先生说：“中国欲存争于天下,其首在立人,人立而后凡事举.”“立人”的意思便是要完善人的思想和文明修养,人的文明修养并不是与生俱来的,而是靠后天不断完善的.要完善个人修养,首先要致力于读书求学,完善自身的认知水平；认知到达一定水平,就有了明辨是非的能力；有了分辨是非善恶的能力,就要端正自身的心态,不违背自己的良知,努力使自己的一言一行都符合道德的标准,自己的修养便得到完善.这就是古人所说的：格物、致知、诚意、正心、修身.完善个人道德修养,便有了推进社会公共文明的基础.
而一个社会的文明氛围对他的民众亦有莫大的影响.为什么这么讲呢?相信有的同学去过欧洲或日本,就很有亲身体会.大的不说,只看看过马路这样的小事.只要亮起红灯,纵使马路上一辆车都没有,外国人绝不会过马路.他们认为这是必须遵守的公共文明.试问,在如此的氛围中,有谁会肆无忌惮的闯红灯呢?这就是社会氛围的力量所在.但再想一想,如果我们不是从自身做起,这社会氛围又从何而来呢?
有记者访问一个获得诺贝尔奖的科学家,“教授,您人生最重要的东西是在哪儿学到的呢?”,“在幼儿园.在那里,我学到了令我终身受益的东西,比如说,有好东西要与朋友分享,谦让,吃饭前要洗手……”我们完善自己的文明修养也一样,并非一定要有什么了不起的举措,而是要从身边吃饭洗手这些小事做起.养成文明的习惯,使文明的观念从意识层次进入无意识层次,使文明贯穿我们的一举一动.
我们从小接受文明礼仪的教育,很多同学都可以滔滔不绝地大谈文明礼仪.可是看见校园中随处丢弃的饭盒,饮料瓶,听着某些同学口中吐出的脏话,怎能不教人痛心疾首呢!难道我们都是“语言的巨人,行动的矮人”么?明代大学者王守仁说“知是行的主意,行是知的功夫；知是行之始,行是知之成；知和行是一个本体、一个功夫.知而不行,只是未知.”我们接受文明礼仪的教育,自己却吝于履行、甚至反其道而行之,这跟从来没有接受社会教育有什么区别!所以我们要实践社会文明,就要从这“知行合一”上下功夫、从自己的坐言起行上下功夫,就要告别不文明的行为.
我们不必埋怨这个社会的文明水平不高；不必怨艾自己的力量太单薄,对社会的影响不大.试想一下,面包里的酵母不是很少吗?可是,单凭这一点酵母,不是就把面包发起来了么.我们每一位同学都应该做这个时代的酵母,让自己的酵素,在这个社会起到应有的作用.
同学们,让我们行动起来,“新世纪新时代,新国家新文明”,不要让文明下,不要让文明只在纸上出现,要让它活跃在我们当中,让文明无所不在,让我们做文明的主人,让“文明与我同行”!
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