SAT写作语法.As a distinct body of writing,Mexican American liter

完全可以,都是副词做状语修饰喜欢的程度,完全可以,大胆用.

One of life's most justice,the selfless is time,in the life most ordinary while the most valuable or time.Shakespeare said:"give up of time,time will give up his".The painter leonardo Da Vinci said:"hard work a day,night sleeping; diligence,happy life buried".Time is the most easy to grasp,it is the most easy to slip away.
Is the last day of holiday,it is just my homework done.I'm lazy packed bags,suddenly collapsed on the bed,physical strength seemed to have evacuated.Heavy head a-word,just caught a glimpse of my worn,clockwise already point to 11.Look at the second hand once the beat,cause me deeply thinking:annual vacation homework is not much,but I always came the day before school to finish,why?Off for 3 days,what have I done?
I have tried to think about three days of process.The first day,the morning grind to nine to take,just wrote a mathematical PianZi,afternoon classmates and playing for an afternoon.Although happy,but seem to be able to squeeze out more time.The next day,because life is not a law,although after a lot of heart struggle,but ultimately I was ill so because the heart comfort and yield,still did not write how much homework.On the third day,also is the last day.Fortunately,the fever.I started my dissertation day,until now.Although nervous,but still some waste.
Have to say,I do not a will grasp the time,have too much time in my hand away.To think,I suddenly discovered that time is so important,so precious.I also understand that time is equal to everyone.Cherish your time,that is the most valuable wealth.
What is time?Time is grandpa's grandmother head of gray hair,time is mom and dad the crease on the face,time is the table of dust,time is that the sky flies to shooting stars.
Time is the wealth of the human,because of no wealth is time and the result of the combined action.Madame Curie said:"I only feel sorry for one thing,the day is too short,too.A person to see not out from what did come out,can only see what to do." I think if to Madame Curie more time,she will create one of the more splendid future.
To a person,when time lost,life also had come to an end.Are you trying to tear it as a calendar day by day,and in the end,leaving only a bore the rust calendar clip,or go to realize the value of life?Why some people the value of life,some people the value of life small?Carefully take a look,in their lifetime,the time of how much the proportion.
Believe me,the time is equal to everyone.When you learn to cherish the time,grasp the time,your life will have no general value.

In our technologically advanced society,new medicine and medical advancements are cropping up in the medical field every day.Breakthroughs are more than common,but ironically,the price of health care has not decreased,but is still mounting through the years.Pharmaceutical companies are still trying to squeeze the maximum profits out of the public.Because of the mounting medical cost,many people cannot afford it and are forced to put their health at risk.Many patients are afflicted with chronic disease that create a lifelong dependency on drugs,and their families are plagued by higher and higher bills from medical cost.This is not the way health care is supposed to work,by alleviating pain from the patient,the cost is putting stress on the family and is creating more problems to be fixed.To ultimately solve this flaw in health care,the cost has to be lowered to an affordable level.

想要短的素材,名句最好了.
★读书百遍,而义自见.（晋 陈寿 《三国志.魏书》）
★业精与勤,荒于嬉.（唐 韩愈 《进学解》）
★读书勤乃有,不勤腹中虚.（唐 韩愈 《符读书城南》）
★锲而不舍,金石可镂.（战国 荀况 《荀子.劝学》）
★天下事以难而废者十之一,以惰而废者十之九.（南北朝 颜之推 《颜氏家训》）
话题：“成功来自勤奋”“学习成就天才”
★故天将降大任于斯人也,必先苦其心志,劳其筋骨,饿其体肤,空乏其身,行拂乱其所为,所以动心忍性,增益其所不能.－－孟子
★患难困苦,是磨炼人格之最高学校.－－梁启超
★不幸,是天才的进身之阶,信徒的洗礼之水,能人的无价之宝,弱者的无底深渊.－－巴尔扎克
★卓越的人一大优点是：在不利与艰难的遭遇里百折不挠.－－贝多芬
★很清楚,前途并不属于那些犹豫不决的人,而是属于那些一旦决定之后,就不屈不挠不达目的誓不罢休的人.－－罗曼 罗兰
话题：“真正的残废”“毅力”
★豪华尽出成功后,逸乐安知与祸双 ——王安石
★安而不忘危,存而不忘亡,治而不忘乱 ——《易经》
★人无远虑,必有近忧.——《论语》
★忧劳可以兴国,逸豫可以亡身 ——欧阳修
★居安思危,戒奢以俭 ——魏征《谏太宗十思疏》
话题：“忧患意识”“知己知彼”
★用人者,取人之长,辟人之短；教人者,成人之长,去人之短也（清•魏源）
★责其所难,则其易者不劳而正；补其所短,则其长者不功而遂----（资治通鉴）
★不以小恶掩大善,不以众短弃一长（宋•朱熹）
★小善不足以掩众恶,小疵不足以妨大美
★取人之长,补己之短
话题：“优点与弱点”“最大的敌人是自己”
★不满足是向上的车轮.——鲁迅
★一个骄傲的人,结果总是在骄傲里毁灭了自己.——莎士比亚
★凡过于把幸运之事归功于自己的聪明和智谋的人多半是结局很不幸的.——培根
★谦虚是不可缺少的品德.——孟德斯鸠
话题：‘‘知与不知”‘‘谦虚”
★生命不可能从谎言中开出灿烂的鲜花——海涅
★惟诚可以破天下之伪,惟实可以破天下之虚——蔡锷
★言不信者,行不果——墨子
★人背信则名不达——刘向
★虚伪的真诚,比魔鬼更可怕——泰戈尔
话题：“诚信与人生”“互助”“诚信的价值”

通常用前者

母亲是伟大的,母亲是无私的,母亲是可敬的.而我觉得,我的母亲就好像是一颗糖,一颗有着酸甜苦辣的糖.
甜.
每当我见到妈妈,她的脸上总挂有灿烂的微笑,总是对我问寒问暖,天冷时,妈妈会提醒我多穿衣服,下雨时,妈妈会给我打伞,生病时,妈妈会着急的带我四处看病.有妈妈的关心,我就好像是吃了一颗像蜜一样甜的糖.
酸.
我的脾气不好,常常跟妈妈吵嘴.妈妈每次都跟我讲道理,每次都以理服人.当我闹完了,妈妈又笑着让我去做事...每当这里,我的心就好酸,好像吃了一颗酸酸的糖,咽不下去,还在嘴里打转儿.
苦.
妈妈也真够苦的.每天早上,妈妈随着朝阳一起醒来,就给我做早饭,然后送我上学,她连早饭都顾不上吃就匆匆上班去了,下班后,妈妈又要收拾家务,又要给我辅导作业,整天马不停蹄的,也从未听见妈妈叫一声苦.这时,我就好像吃了一颗很苦很苦的糖.
辣.
有时,在我屡教不改的情况下,妈妈会打我,我会痛的流泪.可是,打在儿身,痛在娘心啊!妈妈心里一定不好受.此时的我,有好像吃了一颗辣辣的糖,会辣的流泪.
母亲真是一颗永远不化的“糖”.
母亲是伟大的,母亲是无私的,母亲是可敬的.而我觉得,我的母亲就好像是一颗糖,一颗有着酸甜苦辣的糖.
甜.
每当我见到妈妈,她的脸上总挂有灿烂的微笑,总是对我问寒问暖,天冷时,妈妈会提醒我多穿衣服,下雨时,妈妈会给我打伞,生病时,妈妈会着急的带我四处看病.有妈妈的关心,我就好像是吃了一颗像蜜一样甜的糖.
酸.
我的脾气不好,常常跟妈妈吵嘴.妈妈每次都跟我讲道理,每次都以理服人.当我闹完了,妈妈又笑着让我去做事...每当这里,我的心就好酸,好像吃了一颗酸酸的糖,咽不下去,还在嘴里打转儿.
苦.
妈妈也真够苦的.每天早上,妈妈随着朝阳一起醒来,就给我做早饭,然后送我上学,她连早饭都顾不上吃就匆匆上班去了,下班后,妈妈又要收拾家务,又要给我辅导作业,整天马不停蹄的,也从未听见妈妈叫一声苦.这时,我就好像吃了一颗很苦很苦的糖.
辣.
有时,在我屡教不改的情况下,妈妈会打我,我会痛的流泪.可是,打在儿身,痛在娘心啊!妈妈心里一定不好受.此时的我,有好像吃了一颗辣辣的糖,会辣的流泪.
母亲真是一颗永远不化的“糖”.

写作靠自己,多看些课外书,可以仿写,借鉴,和背诵,但不可以抄.

语言的连贯性、 所学句型的应用 ；词汇,语法.

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As you can see,Guangdong locates in the southeast of China, the south China sea in the south, with 3368 kilometers of coastline and numerous islands. As is known to all,Guangdong has a long history, hereinafter referred to as "yue". Guangdong known as "kingdom of fruit", banana, sugarcane, lychee, pineapple is well-knowed there. At the same time,it is the province of south China industry developed, waterway transport facilities, rich of shipping. Besides,there are Special economic zone of shenzhen, zhuhai, shantou, etc. What's more,it has the laudatory title of "eating in guangdong".

才华是刀刃,辛苦是磨刀石,再锋利的刀刃,苦日久不磨,也会生锈.
· 熟才能生巧.写过一遍,尽管不象样子,也会带来不少好处.不断地写作才会逐渐摸到文艺创作的底.字纸篓子是我的密友,常往它里面仍弃废稿,一定会有成功的那一天.
· 哲人的智慧,加上孩子的天真,或者就能成个好作家了.
· 骄傲自满是我们的一座可怕的陷阱；而且,这个陷阱是我们自己亲手挖掘的.
· 没有民族风格的作品,是没有根的花,它不但在本乡本土活不下去,而且无论在哪里也活不下去
· 哲人的智慧,加上孩子的天真,或者就能成个好作家了
· 北京的春风能把春天吹跑
· 一个作家实在就是个全能的演员,能用一枝笔写出王二、张三与李四的语言,而且都写得恰如其人参考资料：够不!

亲情哲思

在最无助的人生路上,亲情是最持久的动力,给予我们无私的帮助和依靠；在最寂寞的情感路上,亲情是最真诚的陪伴,让我们感受到无比的温馨和安慰；在最无奈的十字路口,亲情是最清晰的路标,指引我们成功到达目标.
简简单单,亲情只是一个由几根树枝搭起的小巢.但我更小,可以一下子轻快地钻进去,里面有一碗水,凉凉的,甜甜的,滋润我干渴的灵魂；里面有一袋鼓鼓的,香香的,填饱我无止尽的欲望；里面有一张床,软软的,暖暖的,抚慰我莫名的忧伤；里面还有一盆花,一幅画,一首诗,缀着些叮咛,嵌着些嘱托……
亲情,是一把斜背着的吉它,越到情深处,越能拨动你的心弦；亲情,是一挂藤萝,不管你身在何方,它总是紧紧牵着你的手；亲情,是一串挂在颈间的钥匙,打开的是一扇扇忧郁的门窗.亲情,就在眉眼顾盼间,浅浅的微笑里,就在我那一首抒情的小曲中.
长大.
亲情是雨,带走烦燥,留下轻凉；亲情是风,吹走忧愁,留下愉快；亲情是太阳,带走黑暗,留下光明.亲情是最伟大的,不管你快乐,沮丧,痛苦,彷徨,它永远轻轻地走在你的路上,悄悄地伴着你的一生.
没有“白头生死鸳鸯浦”的轰轰烈烈,却也使“夕阳无语为之动”；没有“在天愿作比翼鸟,在地愿为连理枝”的海誓山盟,却也是“天长地久有时尽,血脉相连无绝期”的亘古永恒；没有“身似门前双柳树,枝枝叶叶不相离”的长相守,却有“但愿人长久,千里共婵娟”的默默祝愿……飘落的雪花带不走凝固的记忆,穿越时空的凝重进入不会老去的岁月,蓓蕾般地默默等待,夕阳般地恋恋不舍,在心的远景里,在灵魂深处折射出两个字.
亲情是树,每个人都是它的一条根,让它吸收营养永葆青春；亲情是河,每个人都是它的一条支流,让它永不干涸澎湃向前；亲情是火,每个人都是它的一根木柴,让它永不熄灭温暖四方.
亲情如水,使纷繁经过过滤变得纯净；亲情似火,使平淡通过煅烧日显棱角；亲情是诗,使乏味经过修饰达到一种意境.亲情,生命永恒的动力.

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记忆中的亲情
记一把蓝色的雨伞我的视野,这么久以来都不得不为一把蓝色的雨伞所牵绊……那蓝色,明彻如空中.小时分的那些下雨天,妈妈总撑着一把蓝色的雨伞来黉舍接我,我的头顶是一片蓝色,肩膀也笼盖于一片蓝色之中,触目所及都是一片蓝色的无雨的空中.当时的一个下雨天,矮小的我昂首和妈妈措辞,却觉察妈妈的那一半空中是一片阴沉的灰色,风异化着雨滴,落入妈妈灰色的空中,妈妈的肩膀湿了,额前的头发也湿了,而我,照旧置身于一片蓝色的无雨的空中.“妈妈,雨伞歪了,”我提醒道,“没有,雨伞没有歪啊.”妈妈悄然回覆,我的视野落在倾斜的伞柄上,“是真的,雨伞歪了.”妈妈刚强地说道,“没有,真的没有……”当时我长大了,不再要妈妈不才雨天接我,那把蓝色的伞在柜子中一年一年地褪色,我曾一度以为我淡忘了它.大如果巧合,又是一个雨天,又是那把蓝色的伞,伞下是妈妈和我,快和妈妈一样高的我撑着伞.我的视野那么不自觉地落在了伞柄上,那一幕与小时分的情形混在了一路,妈妈笼盖于一片蓝色的无雨的空中.而我的肩膀湿了,头发也湿了.“雨伞歪了,”妈妈提醒我,“没有,没有歪啊.”“是真的,雨伞歪了,”妈妈频频道.“妈,真的它没有歪,没有.”伞下是好久的缄默,回头却看见敞亮的水珠划过妈妈的脸颊.那把褪了色的伞,又重现以前明彻如空中的蓝色.事实大白,这么久以来,妈妈都为我撑起一片无雨的空中,此刻,我多想也给妈妈一片欢愉的天,即使孟郊说过谁言寸草心,报得三春晖.于是我的视野便牵绊于那把蓝色的伞,天天深夜在灯下夜战的人是我,每个周末穿越于补课地址的人是我……这一切,都因为那把倾斜的蓝色的伞.那蓝色,明彻如空中,让我的视野不敢移开,永久都不敢移开.

I live my school life because it's colourful.Everyday we have lots of things can do at school.We have many different classes.On the class we can learn lots of new things.After the class school arrange lots of activities for us.I like play football and also like the movie club very much.Also,our school have English corner where you can practice English with others.It's great to have such a great school life.

1.as an old saying goes,....正如一句古老的谚语所说 2....be nothing but... ....不过就是... 3.from where i stand.... 从我的立场来说 4.give oneself a chance to.....给某人一个机会去... 5.i feel sure that...我坚信... 6....is the best way to make sure that....确保...的最好办法是... 7.we must do our absolute best to....我们必须竭尽全力做... 8.there is no denying the fect that...无可否认.... 9.nothing is more+adj.+than to+v.没有比...更重要的了 10.主语+cannot emphasize the importance of....too much 再怎么强调..的重要性也不为过 11....pose a great threat to... ...对..造成了一大威胁（eg.Pollution poses a great threat to our existance.) 12.stole the spotlight from...从...获得大众的瞩目 13....touch sb. on the raw ....触到某人的痛处 14.it is not uncommon that... 这是常有的事儿。。 15it is almost impossible to do.. 。。。是很困难的

写作手法属于艺术表现手法（即：艺术手法和表现手法,也含表达手法（技巧））,常见的有：夸张,对比,比喻,拟人,悬念,照应,联想,想象,抑扬结合、点面结合、动静结合、叙议结合、情景交融、衬托对比、伏笔照应、托物言志、白描细描、铺垫悬念、正面侧面比喻象征、借古讽今、卒章显志、承上启下、开门见山,烘托、渲染、动静相衬、写作手法属于艺术表现手法(即:艺术手法和表现手法,也含表达手法(技巧)),常见的有:夸张,对比,比喻,拟人,联想,想象,抑扬结合、点面结合、动静结合、叙议结合、情景交融、衬托对比、前后照应、托物言志,借景抒情,铺垫悬念,正面侧面,比喻象征,借古讽今,承上启下,开门见山,烘托渲染,动静相衬等.虚实相生,实写与虚写,托物寓意、咏物抒情等.表达方式就是常见的叙述、描写、抒情、议论和说明.（其实也属于艺术表现手法）.修辞手法就是常见的比喻、对比、比拟、对偶、借代、夸张、互文、双关、反问、设问、反复、反语、引用等.

你的意思上把上面那些词按括号里的要求连成一个句子么?如果是,可以这样写：
fifty-seven percent of young people graduated in the U.S.obtained a Bachelor of Arts degree in four years.
别外obtain是这句的动词 如果没有要求,就扫原句的时态就行.graduated做定语

Now about whether working for a company or running your own business different people have different opinions .Some people would like to work in a large company because they think they can learn something in the company and in the meanwhile they don't need to spend more time and energy in managing the company.While others think they prefer to run their own business because they think they can train themselves and have a better understanding of how to run a business,which perhaps will be a necessary and valuable lesson for their own business.
In my opinion,we should consider our condition before our decision.Only by taking everything into consideration can we have a bright future.

Dear uncle,
I received the gift and thank you for it.It's the best gift I have received.It looks so cool,I like it very much.
You know,it's a little far from school to home.It often takes me much time to shool and I have to get up early everyday.But now,I ride the bike ,it is convinient and saves me much time.So I want to thank you again faithfully.
Best wishes!

Recreation is an activity of leisure,.Recreational activities are supposed to be good for the health of our body and mind.Most importantly they should be done for enjoyment,amusement,or pleasure and are considered to be "fun".Sometimes people mix recreation with competition.The activities may be the same but the purpose become "winning" .In a winning and losing situation,rivalries often arise over the pursuits and retaliation may occur.The "fun" of recreation has been ruined by the tense of compete and fear for losing.

The most important is,
where
was to go out
Honestly
couldn't be sleeping
Whereas
makes up her mind
together with
find ourselves in mire
Which team is to win

Travel by Train
Last year, I traveled to Beijing by train. It was very fast. I like travel by train, because I like the feeling in the train. Besides, I can enjoy the scenery on the way. However, after the journey last week, I don't want to travel by train anymore, because it is too tired to have fun. It took me sixteen hours on the train. I was very tired and I had to spend a day to have a good rest. And it was boring on the train. Therefore, I think it should not travel by train if it's far.

《枫桥夜泊》描写了一个秋天的夜晚,诗人泊船苏州城外的枫桥.江南水乡秋夜幽美的景色,吸引着这位怀着旅愁的游子,使他领略到一种情味隽永的诗意美,写下了这首意境深远的小诗.表达了诗人旅途中孤寂忧愁的思想感情.

1：首先是兴趣,别把它当成任务,而是一种娱乐和享受.
2：现在还记得高中的语文老师说：“生活的外延就是语文的外延.”所以很多时候的所见所闻、所思所想都可以在很多方面影响你的文风和内涵.
3：注意积累,包括广度和深度两方面.前者要求搜集素材,如反映某类主题的小故事；后者就需要提炼,将思想上升一个层次,作文写得有想法是比较好的.

Dear Mitchell,
Thank you so much for taking care of my puppy Bobo when my family was on vacation.We were so relieved to know Bobo is being taken good care of.Bobo was so happy when we came back.In the past,we sent Bobo to a kennel,and after the vacation,it would be very sad for many hours.Thanks again for your kindness.
hhi007

关于上学方式 The Way to School
I live near my school. So, I walk to school every day by myself. But some of my classmates have to take bus, by bike and so on. I am proud of myself at that time. Every morning, my mother wakes me up and then I wash my face I start my walking trip after having breakfast. I have to walk for ten minutes to school. Every morning the birds will walk in the sky with me. After school, I walk home with the sunset together.
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My English Teacher
　　　My English teacher is a young lady. Her name is Kate. She looks beautiful. Her English is very good. She teaches us many things, and she likes to introduce foreign countries to us. She works very hard, because she likes teaching. I like her spoken English. She has good pronunciation and writing. All of my classmates like her.

My Deskmate
My deskmate is Nancy. She is a lovely girl. We are deskmates and friends. Nancy is a new student of my class. She comes to my class only two weeks. My teacher let her sit near me. At first, I didn't like her, because she was quiet. But, as time goes by, we become familiar to each other. I introduce my teachers and classmates to her. I am so happy, because I can help her something.

我喜欢的食物 My Favorite Food
In our country, there are plenty of delicious foods. They are popular among Chinese people. I like eating very much. There are many food I like, such as chicken, fish, beef, tofu, noodle and so on. Among them, fish and tofu are the food I like most. Fish is delicious as well as rich in nutrition. It's good to our health. There are various cooking methods and I think the simplest way is the best one. Tofu is my favorite as well. It can be cooked with many other dishes. Different tastes combine with each other to make the food more delicious.

Today the quality of our natural environment has become an important issue. The world
population is rising so quickly that the world has become too crowded. We are using up our
natural resources and at the same time polluting our environment with dangerous chemicals. If we continue to do this, life on earth cannot survive.
Concerned people have made some proGREss in environmental protection. Governments of many countries have established laws to protect the air, forests and sea resources and to stop environmental pollution.
Still more measures should be taken to solve environmental problems. People should be further educated to recognize the importance of the problems, to use modern methods of birth control, to conserve(保存） our natural resources and recycle（再循环） our products. We are sure that we can have a better and cleaner place in the future.

一、 培养和激发学生的写作兴趣
兴趣是最好的老师.要提高小学生的英语写作水平,首先要培养和激发他们的写作兴趣.
1． 为孩子提供展示作品的机会.每个孩子都有表现自己的欲望,在英语作文训练中,如果老师和家长能为孩子们提供一个“show”出其作品的机会,他们的写作兴趣和动力就会大大提高.例如,家长可以每天睡前或其他适当时间与孩子共同分享他们所写的作文并适当给予鼓励；或者老师能够课前给出孩子十分钟宣读优秀作文,利用这样的方式能让表现出色的学生获得某种心理满足,从而激发他们再接再厉,努力写出更加出色的文章.
2． 不要让写作文成为孩子的一个负担.家长或老师在给出孩子写作主题时,可以选择一些学生感兴趣且贴近生活实际的内容,这样孩子们在写作文时就不会感觉无话可说.用最简单的英语语言描述最熟悉的生活,学生们会逐渐感到英语写作其实是一件很简单又很实用的事情,慢慢喜欢上英语写作.
二、 运用写作策略 充分利用英语教材
1 积累知识,扩大词汇量.现在的孩子由于英语课外读物较少,或者是没有进行课外阅读的习惯, 因此要通过其他途径扩大英语词汇量.个人建议要充分利用小学生爱展示、爱表演的特点,首先让学生背诵教材中的小对话或小短文,然后鼓励孩子们在舞台上将背诵的内容表演出来.学生们通过扮演书中的角色和切身表演, 既巩固了所学的词汇和语法,锻炼了语感,又活跃了学习气氛,带动了学习积极性.
2 多读多记,培养语感.家长或老师要打破常规思维模式,将作文训练渗透在日常生活和教学活动中.当家长和老师教授新词汇或词组时,可以鼓励学生用这些词组自行造句.学生通过练习能加深对词语或词组的运用,再写作文时也会自觉不自觉得拿来运用.学生只有说得多了,才能增强语感,进而提高写作能力.
3 进行模仿写作的训练.要注意训练学生的阅读能力,进而提高其写作能力.可以根据教材中的阅读材料让学生进行模仿写作的训练.
总之,小学生英语写作能力的提高必须经过一个持续、有效的训练过程,它需要家长和老师共同有计划地进行组织、训练并正确引导.希望通过大家的共同努力,提高孩子的英语作文写作能力!

表达方式有以下五种：
1、记叙（叙述） 2、描写 3、抒情 4、议论5、说明
(1)记叙.记叙是写作中最基本、最常见的一种表达方式,它是作者对人物的经历和事件的发展变化过程以及场景、空间的转换所作的叙说和交代.在写事文章中应用较为广泛.
(2)描写.描写是把描写对象的状貌、情态描绘出来(包括心理描写、语言描写、动作描写、神态描写、外貌描写、环境描写）等,再现给读者的一种表达方式.它是记叙文,特别是文学创作中的主要表达方式之一.在一般的抒情、议论、说明文中,有时也把它作为一种辅助手段.描写的手法运用得好,能逼真传神、生动形象,使读者如见其人、如闻其声、如临其境,从中受到强烈的艺术感染
(3)抒情.抒情就是抒发和表现作者的感情.具体指以形式化的话语组织,象征性地表现个人内心情感的一类文学活动,它与叙事相对,具有主观性、个性化和诗意化等特征.作为一种特殊的文学反映方式,抒情主要反映社会生活的精神方面,并通过在意识中对现实的审美改造,达到心灵的自由.抒情是个性与社会性的辩证统一,也是情感释放与情感构造、审美创造的辩证统一.它是抒情文体中的主要表达方式,在一般的文学作品和记叙文中,也常常把它作为重要的辅助表达手段.
(4)议论.议论就是作者对某个议论对象发表见解,以表明自己的观点和态度.它的作用在于使文章鲜明、深刻,具有较强的哲理性和理论深度.在议论文中,它是主要表达方式；在一般记叙文、说明文或文学作品中,也常被当作辅助表达手段.
(5)说明.说明是用简明扼要的文字,把事物的形状、性质、特征、成因、关系、功用等解说清楚的表达方式.这种被解说的对象,有的是实体的事物,如山川、江河、植物、文具、建筑、器物等；有的是抽象的道理,如思想、意识、修养、观点、概念、原理、技术等.
五种表达方式,作为文章的形式要素,一定要为内容表达服务.一定的内容采用不同的表达来写作,可产生不同的效果,这就是所谓表达功能.
表现手法包括：
托物言志 写景抒情 叙事抒情 直抒胸臆 对比 衬托 卒章显志 象征 衬托 想象 联想 照应 寓情于景 反衬 烘托 托物起兴 美景衬哀情 渲染 虚实结合 点面结合 动静结合 伏笔照应 托物言志 设置悬念 渲染环境 侧面描写 正面描写 直接抒情 间接抒情等
不同的文体不同的表现手法：
抒情散文的表现手法丰富多彩,借景抒情、托物言志、抑扬结合、 象征等手法；
记叙文的写作手法如首尾照应、画龙点睛、巧用修辞、详略得当、叙议结合、正侧相映等；
议论文写作手法如引经据典、巧譬善喻、逆向求异、正反对比、类比推理等
在鉴赏现代文阅读中表现手法：想象、联想、类比、象征、烘托、对比、渲染、修辞、抑扬、用典等.
诗歌的表现手法很多,传统表现手法有：“赋、比、兴”.用现代的观点来说,主要的有三种：比拟、夸张、借代等
至于表达效果,简单一点说就是表达技巧（包括表达方式、表现手法、描写方法、修辞）的作用,不知道你问的是哪方面的?
下面是一个语文知识清单虽然不是特别全面,但是比较条理,可能对你有帮助
一、表达方式：记叙、描写、抒情、说明、议论
二、表现手法：象征、对比、烘托、设置悬念、前后呼应、欲扬先抑、托物言志、借物抒情、联想、想象、衬托等（参考上文）
三、修辞手法：比喻、拟人、夸张、排比、对偶、引用、设问、反问、反复、互文、对比、借代、借喻、反语、婉曲、顶真、回环、通感等
四、记叙文六要素：时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过、结果
五、记叙顺序：顺叙、倒叙、插叙、补序
六、描写角度：正面描写、侧面描写
七、描写人物的方法：语言、动作、神态、心理、外貌
八、描写景物的角度：视觉、听觉、味觉、触觉
九、描写景物的方法：动静结合（以动写静）、概括与具体相结合、由远到近（或由近到远）
十、描写（或抒情）方式：正面（又叫直接）、反面（又叫间接）
十一、叙述方式：概括叙述、细节描写
十二、说明顺序：时间顺序、空间顺序、逻辑顺序
十三、说明方法：举例子、列数字、打比方、作比较、下定义、分类别、作诠释、摹状貌、引用
十四、小说情节四部分：开端、发展、高潮、结局
十五、小说三要素：人物形象、故事情节、具体环境
十六、环境描写分为：自然环境、社会环境
十七、议论文三要素：论点、论据、论证
十八、论据分类为：事实论据、道理论据
十九、论证方法：举例（或事实）论证、道理论证（有时也叫引用论证）、对比（或正反对比）论证、比喻论证
二十、论证方式：立论、驳论（可反驳论点、论据、论证）
二十一、议论文的文章的结构：总分总、总分、分总；分的部分常常有并列式、递进式.
二十二、引号的作用：引用；强调；特定称谓；否定、讽刺、反语
二十三、破折号用法：提示、注释、总结、递进、话题转换、插说.
二十四、其他：
（一）某句话在文中的作用：
1.文首：开篇点题；渲染气氛（记叙文、小说）,埋下伏笔（记叙文、小说）,设置悬念（小说）,为下文作辅垫；总领下文；
2.文中：承上启下；总领下文；总结上文；
3.文末：点明中心（记叙文、小说）；深化主题（记叙文、小说）；照应开头（议论文、记叙文、小说）
（二）修辞手法的作用：（1）它本身的作用；（2）结合句子语境.
1.比喻、拟人：生动形象；
答题格式：生动形象地写出了＋对象＋特性.
2.排比：有气势、加强语气、一气呵成等；
答题格式：强调了＋对象＋特性
3.设问：引起读者注意和思考；
答题格式：引起读者对＋对象＋特性的注意和思考
反问：强调,加强语气等；
4.对比：强调了……突出了……
5.反复：强调了……加强语气
举例子：通过举具体的实例对事物的特征/事理加以说明,从而使说明更具体,更有说服力.
分类别：对事物的特征/事理分门别类加以说明,使说明更有条理性.
作比较：把__________和__________加以比较,突出强调了事物的特征/事理.
作诠释：对事物的特征/事理加以具体的解释说明,使说明更通俗易懂.
打比方：将_______比作______,从而形象生动地说明了事物的特征/事理. 摹状貌：对事物的特征/事理加以形象化的描摹,使说明更具体形象.
下定义：用简明科学的语言对说明的对象/科学事理加以揭示,从而更科学、更本质、更概括地揭示事物的特征/事理.
列数字：用具体的数据对事物的特征/事理加以说明,使说明更准确更有说服力.
列图表：用列图表的方式对事物的特征/事理加以说明,使说明更简明更直观.
引用说明：引用说明有以下几种形式——
A、引用具体的事例；（作用同举例子）
B、引用具体的数据；（作用同列数字）
C、引用名言、格言、谚语；作用是使说明更有说服力.
D、引用神话传说、新闻报道、谜语、轶事趣闻等.作用是增强说明的趣味性.
（引用说明在文章开头,还起到引出说明对象的作用.）
举例论证：——运用典型事例说明论点. 用确凿、充分、有代表性的事例证明论点.
有力地驳倒错误言论或证明中心论点
道理论证：——引用经典或名言、谚语、警句等证明论点 通过讲道理来证明论点.
作者更有力地提出或证明论点
对比论证：——用反向事例或事理对比说明论点.
用正反两方面的道理或事实通过对比来论证.突出文章的论点
比喻论证：——借助形象的比喻来说明论点. 用比喻的方式来证明论点.
它使语言形象生动,它通俗易懂地论证了……[论点]
道理论据：深刻而有力地证明了……
[如果是警句,则说它具有警策作用,增加了文章的说服力]
事实论据：确凿而准确地证明了……
（三）句子含义的
这样的题目,句子中往往有一个词语或短语用了比喻、对比、借代、象征等表现方法.答题时,把它们所指的对象揭示出来,再疏通句子,就可以了.
（四）某句话中某个词换成另一个行吗?为什么?
动词：不行.因为该词准确生动具体地写出了……
形容词：不行.因为该词生动形象地描写了……
副词（如都,大都,非常只有等）：不行.因为该词准确地说明了……的情况（表程度,表限制,表时间,表范围等）,换了后就变成……,与事实不符.
（五）一句话中某两三个词的顺序能否调换?为什么?
不能.因为（1）与人们认识事物的（由浅入深、由表入里、由现象到本质）规律不一致（2）该词与上文是一一对应的关系（3）这些词是递进关系,环环相扣,不能互换.
（六）说明语段的作用
（1）、结构、内容作用：引出下文、承上启下、总结全文/前文.
有时在文章开头,还起着引出说明对象/说明事理的作用.
（2）、结合说明方法谈.
通过……的说明方法,说明了……（事物特征或事理）,使说明……（作用）
（七）段意的归纳
1．记叙文：回答清楚（什么时间、什么地点）什么人做什么事
格式：（时间＋地点）＋人＋事.
2．说明文：回答清楚说明对象是什么,它的特点是什么
格式：说明（介绍）＋说明对象＋说明内容（特点）
3．议论文：回答清楚议论的问题是什么,作者的观点怎样
格式：用什么论证方法证明了（论证了）＋论点

一、 培养和激发学生的写作兴趣x0d兴趣是最好的老师.要提高小学生的英语写作水平,首先要培养和激发他们的写作兴趣.x0d1． 为孩子提供展示作品的机会.每个孩子都有表现自己的欲望,在英语作文训练中,如果老师和家长能为孩子们提供一个“show”出其作品的机会,他们的写作兴趣和动力就会大大提高.例如,家长可以每天睡前或其他适当时间与孩子共同分享他们所写的作文并适当给予鼓励；或者老师能够课前给出孩子十分钟宣读优秀作文,利用这样的方式能让表现出色的学生获得某种心理满足,从而激发他们再接再厉,努力写出更加出色的文章.x0d2． 不要让写作文成为孩子的一个负担.家长或老师在给出孩子写作主题时,可以选择一些学生感兴趣且贴近生活实际的内容,这样孩子们在写作文时就不会感觉无话可说.用最简单的英语语言描述最熟悉的生活,学生们会逐渐感到英语写作其实是一件很简单又很实用的事情,慢慢喜欢上英语写作.x0d二、 运用写作策略 充分利用英语教材x0d1 积累知识,扩大词汇量.现在的孩子由于英语课外读物较少,或者是没有进行课外阅读的习惯,因此要通过其他途径扩大英语词汇量.个人建议要充分利用小学生爱展示、爱表演的特点,首先让学生背诵教材中的小对话或小短文,然后鼓励孩子们在舞台上将背诵的内容表演出来.学生们通过扮演书中的角色和切身表演,既巩固了所学的词汇和语法,锻炼了语感,又活跃了学习气氛,带动了学习积极性.x0d2 多读多记,培养语感.家长或老师要打破常规思维模式,将作文训练渗透在日常生活和教学活动中.当家长和老师教授新词汇或词组时,可以鼓励学生用这些词组自行造句.学生通过练习能加深对词语或词组的运用,再写作文时也会自觉不自觉得拿来运用.学生只有说得多了,才能增强语感,进而提高写作能力.x0d3 进行模仿写作的训练.要注意训练学生的阅读能力,进而提高其写作能力.可以根据教材中的阅读材料让学生进行模仿写作的训练.x0d总之,小学生英语写作能力的提高必须经过一个持续、有效的训练过程,它需要家长和老师共同有计划地进行组织、训练并正确引导.希望通过大家的共同努力,提高孩子的英语作文写作能力!

多看一些英文片会提高阅读水平,多读读课文会提高写作水平

多背,多记,多练

等等

My Neighbor
My family has lived in this uptown for a long time. We get along well with our neighbors. Living in the next door is also a family. They have a little boy, who is one year older than me. I like to play with him, so does he. We also study in the same school. So we often help each other to finish homework. Besides, my parents and his parents have a deal to pick up us to school and back home in turn. They all very appreciate each other. Their family is very ardor. They will ask me to eat if they have anything good. Sometimes they will drop by for talking. I am very happy to have them as my neighbors.

As you know, Our company's（ profits have gone up(risen) recently含糊的例子）, it due to long time hard working.(含糊的例子) I really appreciate your efforts （for-to） the development of（ the删掉）company. All of you will have a day off and（ receive a 10% of your salary bonus这句表达不清楚）.1举的例子要很明确的例子,要有数据显示,像“有明显增长等这些很含糊的”不行2.言简意赅,主观性不要太强烈.

多背文章,但不要死记硬背.
背时想一想能在哪篇文章中可以用到,还有就是把同一类文章归到一起,选典型的背,特别注意这些文章的共创同点,一些代表性的句子要熟记,在写这类文章时可以用到.
我觉得这个方法不错,
http://groups.tianya.cn/tribe/showArticle.jsp?groupId=86960&articleId=26402402980688608266960

Question:
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Most advertisements make products seem much better then they really are.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

语法固然是重要的,但是写作文更重要的是句型和漂亮的词汇.
看你作文的老师看的更仔细的是你的开头和结尾,中间部分一般是扫过的.所以你的开头一定要用好句子,比如倒装,句子要长一点为好.
如果你是中考,句子不要写长,只求没有语法错误就好了.
如果是高考,用从句,各种学过的语法漂亮句子词组都往上堆.
第二就是要多看好的英语作文,背几个模版.就差不多了~

去掉我们.
是阅读课外书籍才能增长水平不是我们.

Essays
Writing position
Analysis

文章的写作顺序也叫做写作思路、写作线索,它是指作者行文的物理顺序,如事情发展顺序、几个方面、插叙（即补叙）、倒叙、意识流等.
事情发展顺序：一般是写人、记事的文章,开头先交代人物背景或者事件的起因,然后循着时间先后顺序详细地记叙人物的言行举止、生活轨迹、人生荣辱,或者写清事件的经过,最后表达作者对人物的评价和看法,或者告知事件的结果.这是日常所见的多数文章的特点.
几个方面：一般是说明性的文章,如介绍动植物世界的奥秘、宇宙星辰的渊源、各种人类所发明的科技产品等,它往往分几个不同的方面把要讲的事物的特点交代清楚,而排列这些方面的先后顺序是作者无意中形成的,并无严格的时间感.
插叙（即补叙）：是作者在正常的行文中随机地穿插进来的一些文字,或解释说明,或插入故事,或补充材料,这样一来,作者的思想和观点就能更好地被读者理解.从全文的完整性来说,假使将插叙部分完全删去,并不会影响什么.
倒叙：是人为地改变叙述事情的前后顺序,采取时空颠倒的手法将事件的尾声提放到文章的开始部分,而将事情的起因和经过这些事件的复杂部分推后,造成一种感觉上的新奇感和迷惑感,引发读者的阅读兴趣,从而达到传播思想、引领观念的神奇作用.
意识流：是一种后现代印象派小说的写作手法,它通过纯粹的精神游移点的不断闪现、变化、消失和相互衔接,将大量恍恍惚惚、若有若无、时隐时现、恍如梦境般的不同时空中的事物随意杂乱地聚凑在一起,从中借此来表达作者在空虚贫乏的精神世界里消磨的厌烦或者在广阔的时空天地中神游的闲适和舒畅.

多背文章,但不要死记硬背.
背时想一想能在哪篇文章中可以用到,还有就是把同一类文章归到一起,选典型的背,特别注意这些文章的共创同点,一些代表性的句子要熟记,在写这类文章时可以用到.
我觉得这个方法不错,
http://hi.baidu.com/o%BF%B4%CA%EC%CF%A4%BE%B0%C9%ABo/blog/item/4bb47fea6b687826acafd5f4.html

推荐沪江网学习；别的英文网站、BBS可以逛逛；
看看英语写作相关书籍及例文；
注意词汇量积累、背诵常用短语、经典句型、俗语名句,可以加分的.
另,汉语中的写作方式可以参考,但注意不要写出中式英语.

很经典的一句话：书是人类进步的阶梯.
读书破万卷下笔如有神,与其对于写作兴趣的培养,不如让孩子多读书.
书要符合孩子的兴趣.要选让孩子觉得有意思的书,那样孩子才会读.比如：郑渊洁的
皮皮鲁和鲁西西 舒克贝塔
杨红樱的淘气包马小跳
这些书非常的有意思,也非常适合儿童阅读.
家长/老师要善于引导孩子读.
好的写作都是通过读而出来的,所以,一定要让孩子大量的读书.
读的书多了,对于写作也有兴趣了,那么在练练笔,作文自然就上去了.
【这是针对于小学小学的比较简单,要求不是很高,只要能把自己心中所想的表达出来就可以了】
【中学的就需要运用技法了.】
祝 ：
愉快!

那要看你写什么类型的文章咯,如果是议论文,多背一些很好的说理段落,就是不是单纯说理,而是多角度,多方式说理,比如对比啊辩证啊类比啊之类的,如果你要写抒情散文的话,多找点那些描写景物和心情的段落咯.如果你是要高考议论文的话,推荐你一本书,格言的笔下功夫里面的,有两本,一本是选题吧,还有一本貌似是景物段落的,你看第一本就可以了,我高考就是看这本的,议论方式很新奇

Nessary To Know Something Of Western Culture
With the development in technology and economy,communications between eastern culture and western culture, as a crucial part of the interrelations, are being accelerated in ,at the same time, width and depth progressively. And it is universally known that western culture has great influence on our world. To be a person of talents in 21st century, one should acquire certain knowledge of western culture.
The leading relevent factor to concern about is that, currently ,the development of west is still in the head of that of world. And western culture has its own fascination and advantages. Then, it is especially important for Chinese talents to know something about western culture, since China's development can not be isolated from that of the world,just as DengXiaoping said twenty years ago, and China is also playing an key part in the world recently for tens of years. China is a traditional eastern country, if we are willing to develop ourself faster, we must abtain a knowledge about western culture and extract useful elements from it,and then compete by it and develop with it. If we don't , think of the Qing Dynesty, when we know nothing about the west, and when we are bullied by the west, we know what to do.
But how can we achieve this? Take the western history as an example.We shall read books about it;we shall watch movies about it; we shall search information about it on the internet,and we can even observe and study in western countries. There exist many ways to get a knowledge of the western culture, as long as on have passion and a thirst for knowledge.
To make a conclusion, it makes sense to attain some information about western culture,especially the beneficial aspects.Only after the talents broaden their horizons can they make a bigger contribution to our own society.
(中式思维,中式句型,逻辑性较差,前后矛盾,只是说理,论证无力.索性语流还算顺畅,也看得出尝试选用了一些地道的表达法和词汇,希望你继续努力）
P.S：其实应该大改,就像第一段那样,但就不是你写的啦,另外还希望你充实一些论点,实际上你通篇只有一个观点,车轱辘话说来说去,没啥子趣味.还有些小毛病需要注意,比如单复数,序数法之类.
整篇文章大约大学四级写作及格线附近水平.

Class Activities
Yesterday was Saturday. Our class went for an outing. We met at the school gate at 8:00a.m. We took a bus there. We went to theXiangshanMountain. It took about fifty minutes to get there. We climbed to the top of the mountain. From the top, we could see the whole city. It was so beautiful. We had a short rest on the top. And then, we went downhill. There is a lake in the bottom of the mountain. We had a picnic at the lake. We all took foods and shared with others. We were really happy yesterday.