托福综合写作评分,Rembrandt的画的那篇,TPO3的

帮忙改一下小弟这篇托福综合写作作文~
The author believes that the ''swamp gas'' hypothesis far out weighs the " outer object"explanation.However ,the lecture has a totally different idea on the topic made in the reading.
The first point the lecturer uses to cast doubt on the reading is that the absence of fragment on earth cannot support the idea that the explosion was not caused by an outer space object.The author is convinced that if the accident was caused by an asteroid,there must be a huge crater on the surface of the ground,yet no traces are found in the area.However,the speaker points out that after 90 years' of natural changes,the traces can be eliminated completedly.
In the second place,the reading made the point that the absence of huge craters has weakened the theory to some extend.To the contrary,the speaker states that the asteroid could explode before it reached the ground,so it is quite reasonable to find nothing after the explosion.
Lastly.the lecturer enhanced her standpoint by adding the fact that the whole process can involve a large area instead just one spot,which is not anticipated the the author.
In conclusion,the passagge completely refuses the reading.

托福综合写作评分!马上要考了!TPO12的题目
TPO12综合写作,简奥斯汀画像那个,12.18就要考了呀!
In the listening material,the speaker is not in agreement with the reading material’s opinion of the portrait.He indicates that the statement in the reading passage is somewhat inaccurate and irrational when compared with what happened for real.
The first difference between the reading material and the listening material concerns the impact on the claim of Jane Austen's family.The reading passage holds an opinion that the Austen family recognized this portrait as Jane's.On the contrary,the lecturer demonstrates that when the portrait was used in the edition of Jane's letters,Jane has dead for almost 70 years.Her families at that time cannot say it for sure because they have never seen her on their own eyes.
In addition,as the reading passage states that the face of the girl in this painting is similar to Jane Austen's,whereas the speaker contends an opposite stand.He points out that the face probably belongs to one of Jane's female cousins or their children because Jane has a large family in which many of her relatives resemble her.What's more,there is a strong evidence that this portrait is likely to belong to one of her distant relative called Mary.
finally,the speaker casts doubt on the views make in the reading passage by illustrating that it is very groundless to say that the painting was drew when Jane was a teenager just because of the same style of Ozias Humphrey's works.The canvas of the painting was sold by a man called Willian and there is an evidence which can prove that he sold the canvas when Jane is already 27 years old.
拜托有经验的给点切实可行的建议，哪些地方有错误，需要修改的，哪些地方可以提高，大概能打多少分，我就要考了现在很着急~一楼不晓得在说什么呢

请问这句英文是什么意思(托福综合写作听力里的句子)
阅读观点是网上百科全书容易被人改写,造成与原文事实不符.但听力给出解决方案：One
strategy they started using is to put the crucial facts in the articles that
nobody disputes in a read-only format
no one can make changes to.请问这句英文表达什么意思,看不大懂这个策略

托福 综合写作
那个托福综合写作时 前面的阅读文章是直接在屏幕左边 还是需要点个按钮回去看下但写作文时不显示得一次次点回去看?

大家帮忙给我的托福综合写作打下分,如果能有点评更好
阅读讲了neanderthals 能说话,而lecture 反对了这一点
The reading section argues thatNeanderthals,a type of prehistory human,had the ability to convey their ideasthrough speaking,but the lecture totally opposes the reading and insists theNeanderthals cannot speak.
First of all,the lecture disagrees with the opinionraised in the reading section that the Neanderthals can speak because they hada large cranial capacity.The professor says it’s the complexity but not thecapacity that may enable the Neanderthals to speak.
Secondly,although the lecture acknowledges a specifictype of bone do exists in a Neanderthals’ body,as well as the reading passage.However,the lecture does not hold the same point with the reading that thisbone can permit the Neanderthals to speak,since some monkeys also have theexact same bone yet they obviously cannot talk.
Furthermore,the passage mentions that Neanderthalsbare various muscles in their stomach region which enabled Neanderthals tospeak.The lecture counters this idea by pointing out the Neanderthals lived ina much harsher environment than we do now,so these muscles can be used tofacilitate them to trek or climb a mountain.
In general,the lecture refutes the three mean reasonssuggests in the reading section,and disagrees with the gist of the reading,and draws the conclusion that the Neanderthals actually cannot speak.

托福综合写作听力与阅读是按顺序对应的吗
不是说听力和阅读的观点是完全对应的吗（当然指真题）,那不就该是观点出现的顺序也应该一样……如果这样的话,OG里那个满分例文（讨论团队合作好还是不好的问题）里第一段出现的“opportunities to shine”在阅读文章里后半段才出现,是怎么回事呢?有点糊涂……这样的话怎么判断什么例子反驳阅读中的什么观点呢?

关于托福综合写作
第一次参加托福,结果作文方面发生了不幸的事,导致异常低分.因此在此想请教几个问题
1.托福综合写作观点的提炼.第一次考对综合写作的认识不足,在观点方面直接把阅读文章和听力文章的观点直接抄了下去..汗..现在对这方面有大疑问,在提炼观点的时候需要改写,改写的话是在内容上的改写还是句式形式上的改写呢?是找代替词还是变换句式还是改内容的说法?希望热心人能解答我这个最大的问题,最好能举些例子让我明白(急切)
2.很多人都说要用模板,但是模板里面都只是写观点而已,而听力和阅读文章里面的detail需要写出来吗?是稍微带过还是完全不写,或者是只写一个观点的?希望能得到答复
3.现在对于综合写作还是懵懵懂懂的,希望有热心人能系统的讲解一下综合写作的各个需要注意的地方..我都快急疯了..

托福综合写作求狠批!TPO21,22
先写两句废话哈..话说自己这是头一次打算认真准备作文,之前两次都是现场发挥,一次22,一次21.
第二次托福98,好像上一百啊...9.29三战,..

托福综合写作写多少词比较好?
托福综合写作的字数是按照OG上的要求150-225好还是写多点好.我现在每次写综合作文都大约会写到290词,这样好不好?

关于托福综合写作的模板
这是我写的模板,高手们帮忙看看有什么需要改进的地方
The author of the passage states that
The professor,however,asserts that
First,in contrast to the reading,which claims that
the lecturer believes that
He thinks that
Second,the writer declares that
Meanwhile,the professor casts doubt on the point by saying that
According to him,
Third,the reading material mentions that
The lecturer,on the other hand,feels that
He points out that

托福综合写作中the lecturer says还是said,模板的时态完全混乱..
不同的模板说法不同,有时候同一个模板里还不一样..哪个是对的啊?

托福综合写作问题
12月18日第一次刚考完103分,写作不高22拉分了,看了成绩分析好像是综合写作不太好（Fair）.想总体问一问写托福作文怎么练呢,尤其是综合写作啊.谢谢.