关城曙色催寒近,御苑砧声向晚多.出自哪里?

1．这首诗描绘了深秋送别的画面.抒发了悲秋伤别和对友人珍惜时光及时建功立业的劝勉之情.
2．这两个意象中,“渡”和“催”都使用了拟人手法,形象生动地营造了深秋已至、寒气逼人的气氛,为悲秋和离愁的心境作了极好的渲染和烘托.（意对即可）

Juyong Pass is in the middle part of the Great Wall Defense System,hence it is also named as Middle Pass.During the middle period of Ming Dynasty,the emperor ordered General XuDa to build this pass.With the character of "Thousands of people wouldn't be able to go through this pass if one man was presented here",which means it owns a unparalleled status on both politics and military use,three emperors of the Yuan,Ming and Qing Dynasty have entered the middle part of China through this pass.
In the middle of this pass,there exists a marble construction called the Cloud Terrace with exquisite carvings on it.This Cloud Terrace was firstly built in 1345.There once exsited three pagodas named Crossing Street Pagodas.Unfortunately,these three pagodas were destroyed during an earthquake.Later in the year 1439,Tai'an Temple was built,but it was destroyed by the fire in 1702,so the only remaining structure is the Cloud Terrace below.Inside the turnup shade door there are carvings on the walls,on which are figures of Buddha and the four Gods,as well as the scriptures.
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花重：花因沾着雨水,显得饱满沉重的样子
读chóng的话平仄不符,五律的最后一句应该是平仄仄平平

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