高考英语作文帮我看下多少分（满分25分）顺便带下解析

平时老师给的作文分都比较低.拿到考卷后在开考之前你开始先看看作文题目,然后理下思路.在写作文时,尽量不要用到重复的并且很普通的句型,可以用些特殊句型,比如定语从句、倒装句、强调句等等,还有高级词汇的运用.当然不能有很明显的语法错误和拼写错误.最重要的是书写,单词最好不要连写.这样老师给的印象分就高了!如果你能做到这些,我想拿高分应该是不难的.我当年这样做高考英语作文23分.祝你成功!

并不是只要有字就给分的这是09年高考作文评分标准,可以参考一下 (六)书面表达　　1.仔细审题,看清题目要求与注意事项.　　2.确定文章类型,如是记叙文,一般用过去时；如是说明文,主要用现在时.　　3.看全内容要点,主要内容缺一不可.　　4.尽量写草稿,实在没时间也要写一个简略提纲.　　5.用你见过的句型来写,不生造中文式的英文.　　6.写好首句尾句,注意关联词语的使用.　　7.可适当使用复杂结构和新颖词汇,但应以准确传达意思为第一原则.　　8.重视书写规范,卷面整洁.　　二、书面表达各档次的划分及给分范围第五档21～25分完全完成了试题规定的任务.
—覆盖所有内容要点.
—应用了较多的语法结构和词汇.
—语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误,但是为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力.
—有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文结构紧凑.
完全达到了预期的写作目的.　　续表第四档16～20分完全完成了试题规定的任务.
—虽然漏掉一两个次重点,但覆盖所有主要内容.
—应用的主要语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求.
—语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确,些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致.
—应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文结构紧凑.
达到了预期的写作目的.第三档11～15分基本完成了试题规定的任务.
—虽漏掉一些内容,但覆盖所有主要内容.
—应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求.
—有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误,但不影响理解.
—应用简单的语句间连接成分,使全文内容连贯.
整体而言,基本达到了预期的写作目的.第二档6～10分未恰当完成试题规定的任务.
—漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容,写了一些无关内容.
—语法结构单调,词汇项目有限.
—有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解.
—较少使用语句间的连接成分,内容缺少连贯性.
信息未能清楚地传达给读者.第一档1～5分未能完成试题规定的任务.
—明显遗漏主要内容,写了一些无关内容,原因可能是未能理解试题要求.
—语法结构单调,词汇项目有限.
—较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误,影响了对写作内容的理解.
—缺乏语法之间的连接成分,内容不连贯.
信息未能清楚地传达给读者.0分未能传达给读者任何信息,内容太少,无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清.

亲爱的先生/女士 我写信是想得知关于伦敦之旅的更多信息。作为一名牛津的学生，我想知道您是否有什么特价提供给学生。对于您说的费用，它包括所有列出的景点的费用吗？午餐怎么算？包含在内吗？还是我需要自带呢？这次旅程共有多少天（因为）我还需要准备接下来考试呢？我想知道回来的时间？另外，有让我们购物的时间吗？我真的很想看看伦敦的大商店！

　　One Possible Version
　　Three years ago I failed an important exam in my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best of it. I worked hard and got along well with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.
　　My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determines who you are.
　　三年前一次重要的考试我的失败了,（只能）成为一个普通的学校一名学生.寒酸的校园和破旧的教学设备令我失望,我发现老师很体贴并且有耐心.此外我喜欢班上友好的氛围.我决定充分利用它.我努力学习并且和老师同学相处得很好.每当我遇到困难他们总会帮助我.很快,我成为了班里的尖子生,这大大的增强了我的自信和激情.
　　我的经历告诉我并不是给了你什么你你就能充分利用它,决定权在于你自己.

what i think about this thing is that...
i hold the same/different opinion from other people towards it because..
i believe that..
i think it is.that...

多用复试句子,复合句子,这些你可以多看看例文,或者平时多找些好的段落,作文模板什么的背一些.

你确定where能引导主语从句?最好用the place吧.而且cities的复数错了啊.第二段开头是has,第二行应该是easily；最后一段也应该是has,动名词后接单数形式啊!如果高考想写一篇高分作文,最好多用一些诸如定语从句、强调句等高级句式以及高级词汇,尤其是开头结尾一定要写好,而且句子的长短要搭配得当

what we want is to build up our level of English study,we can also improve our ways of learning.
the column “English Writing”is a organization which can help our students sdudy English in a better way,we have many teachers who can help you online in order to answer your questions whenever you need,it is very good for you to make much progress in studying English.
now,we hope that you can give your posts to us ,what we need are those posts which are close to our daily life ,what's more we will choose some excelent posts to publish on the column “English Writing”,we not noly give you some remuneration but alos some our teachers' opinions of your posts,that will help you improve your writing level.
welcome to give your posts to us ,let's make progress together.

only .could we...
furthermore
in addition
last but not the least

Nowadays, it has been a growing tendency for children to be driven to and picked up from school. A recent survey indicates that the school-run is a controversy. Parents drive their children to school to protect them from danger. Time pressures and fears about street violence and traffic make the school-run seem unavoidable for many parents.
From a more practical point of view, school-runs cause traffic jam at the school drop-off/pick-up area and in the neighbourhood. This situation is more problematic during rush hours. With the ever-increasing traffic volume, the resulting air pollution and traffic damage the health of children who walk to school as well as the school environment.
For those who argue against school-run consider that it is an excessive burden and time consuming adding onto the parents. On the other hand, some parents argue that they can achieve the same degree of quality time with their children by driving them to school. As a matter of fact, while parents need to concentrate on their own driving skills, the concept of quality time spent in a car on the way to school practically does not exist.
As for the children, school-runs deprive them of the chance of being independent. Sometimes, teenager students may even find it embarrassing to be dropped off and picked up by their own parents, like toddlers. Besides, being driven to school means starving the children of exercise and may be jeopardizing their health in their later life. It says that adult levels of fitness and physical exercise tend to be established in childhood.
The School Run - Blessing or Blight? In my opinion, I would prefer going to school by myself. I can take good care of myself. I do not want to be a burden to anyone, particularly my parents.

16分

选择智慧（wisdom）

Looking back, we see wise men exist in every dynasty and era in mankind's history. It is the wisdom of these men that moulded and changed the trajectory of the history. Their wisdom become the topics of our daily conversations, the focus of our history books and even anecdotes that are widespread across the globe.

It Chairman Mao had no wisdom, we wouldn't have had the new China and the happy life we are living now.If Edison had no wisdom, we would probably be still living in the dark during nights. If Albert Einstein had no wisdom, we wouldn't have got our knowledge about the universe, about space and time.

As ordinary people, we don't need to become wise men like the ones I have just mentioned above. Yet we still need to learn and try to gain wisdom in everyday life. Wisdom is necessary for our studies, work and even entertainment. With wisdom, we may not become a great person, but at least we can be decent.

(原创作文,敬请采纳)

Dear Sir/Madame, I’m writing for more information about theday tour to London. As a student at Oxford University, I’d like to know if you have any special price for students. As for the
money you charge, does it cover the entrance fees for visiting the places listed? What about lunch? Is itincluded? Or do I need to bring along my own food? How long will the tour lastSince I need to prepare my lessons for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Besides, is there any time for shopping?
I really want to have a look at the big stores in London.

As we all know that friendship is important to us. True friends would always help us when we need them. For instance, last week, I went to a library to find some stories to read. The stories were so interesting that I was totally immersed in them. I forgot to bring my backpack, which contained all the homework that I should finish that evening, with me when I left. It was too late when I noticed it for the library was closed at that time. Almost crying, I worried about it so much but do not konw what I could do. Luckly, a couple of my classmates, also my freinds, did me a favor. They found one of the staff of that library and persuaded him to open the door helping me to bring my pack back. I wa s so grateful to them for helping me bring back my pack.
From this small case I seemed to realise the meaning of friendship and how important it is for us.

严重语法错误会扣1—2分

语文是一般只要不跑题的作文 而且字数在900到1000之间 都是45分以上的作文 一般的是48分 好的在材料 字体 文笔上会往上加的
英语是16为一般作文 就是要求的东西都写全拉 而且都是句型 语法没有什么错误的地方 其余的就是自由发挥拉 要求有几个什么老师说的[二级词汇]啊 好象通俗说就是很长的很难记的单词啊 几个很有水平的词组啊之类的 然后就是分段要很容易看懂
老师说其实高考字体不是非得写的很漂亮 但是只要是整洁 干净 能看清楚就大致上可以拉啊
个人见解 说错拉 不怪我啊。。。

Brother and sister 可以改 siblings (兄弟姐妹）.
In my eyes 则能改成 from my perspective. (大概就是 ‘从我的角度来说.’）
I will have more love 是绝对语病!写英文不能用华语直直翻译哦!
We can help each other don't always let parents to give we help 则改成 we can help each other and don't always depend (依赖）our parents to help us.
Must have 可以改成will have.
must have more happy ,love and some interesting thing改成 will be more fun (更多乐趣） ,(love 可以省略哦!）and more interesting.
that is so beauty(这是正确的形容词么?） and so cool写作This will be awsome! （这将会非常的棒!）就行了.
if my family is only three people是错误的if there are only three people in my family (这才是正确的构造!）
that could loss some pleasure to me（又犯了直接从中文翻译成英文的错误喽!）I will feel bored. (我会觉得闷.）会不会比较恰当呢?
.
because there is not a age like me people（又直接翻译了哦!）because there is no one who are same age with me. (没有与我年龄相仿的人）
,a age like me people can have more common language compete parents.so i hope i have a sister or brother.（错误错误啦!QAQ!）If there are someone who are same age with me to communicate with. (可以交流）最后一句呢P4和哦sister改成siblings就行了.
啊啊~我们老师是犯五个错误就不及格的!所以我也不知到怎么评呢...不过如果你肯加油一定会进步的!

as far as I see

一、英语文章标题大小写规则 题目的第一个单词要大写； 2.冠词都不需要大写； 3.字母多于三个(不含三个)的介词、连词首字母要大写； 4.名词、动词、形容词、副词、代词、感叹词首字母； 5.大写所有英语中要求大写的单词.如月份、人名、地名等等.这几条原则的优先性是递减的,也就是说,如果几条原则之间出现了矛盾的情况,应优先实用前面的原则.如：如果题目的第一个单词是冠词或不多于二个字母的介词时也应该大写.
二、英文字母大写规则 1．句子开头的第一个字母要大写.“I（我）”在句中任何位置都要大写.例如：What's her name?Mary and I are teachers． 2．地名、国名和人名等专有名词第一个字母要大写.例如：Russia（俄罗斯）,Youyang（酉阳）,Chengdu（成都）,Jack（杰克）. 3．一些亲属关系（如mother,sister,mum,dad等）用作称呼语时第一个字母要大写.例如：Thank you,Granny．谢谢你,姥姥. 4．人名前的称呼或头衔第一个字母应大写.例如：Mr Smith,Dr Wang,Miss Mary. 5．表示语种、民族的名词或形容词第一个字母要大写.例如：Russian俄语、俄罗斯人（的,Chinese汉语、中国人（的）. 6．直接引语中,句首字母要大写.例如：“Then,”I said,“You havebeen making a mistake,and the letter is not in the apartment．”“那么,”我说,“你准弄错了.这封信并不在那栋房子里.” 7．星期、月份名称的第一个字母要大写,但季节第一个字母不大写.例如：Sunday星期天,August八月,winter冬天,spring春天. 8．一些大型节日名称的第一个实词的第一字母都要大写.如：Children's Day儿童节,National Day国庆节, Teachers' Day教师节. 9．由普通名词构成的专有名词词组,除其中的冠词、较短的介词和连词外,每个词的第一字母都要大写.例如：the Great Wall长城,the United States美国. 10．大型会议、文件、条约名称的每个实词（虚词：副词、介词、连词、助词、叹词和拟声词则不用大写）的第一个字母都要大写.书名、报刊名应大写首字母,文章标题中的每一个实词的第一个字母要大写.如：China Daily《中国日报》,New York Times《纽约时报》,Their Class《他们的班级》（文章标题）,the Warsaw Treaty《华沙条约》, 实例：English Coaching Paper《英语辅导报》. 11．诗歌的每一行的第一个单词的第一个字母要大写. 12. 表示称呼语或职务的词首字母要大写. 实例：Mr Green格林先生, Dr Li李博士 13. 大多数的缩略词要大写. 实例：CCTV(中国中央电视台), ID(身份证), CD(光盘) 14. "I"和"OK"在句中的任何位置都应大写. 实例：Tom and I are students. 汤姆和我是学生.That's OK.不用谢.

I Love Beijing Beijing, the capital of China, is a very beautiful and important city, which is one of the ancient cities in China. There are many famous wonders and beautiful spots, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace, Beihai Park and so on. Beijing is also the centre of politics, economy and culture of our country. Owing to the open-door policy, great changes have taken place since 1978. Many new houses and tall buildings can be seen everywhere. Peole's living condition is getting better and better. Beijing has been successfully in her bidding for the 2008 Olympic Games. I'm sure greater changes will take place in Beijing in the next few years. I love Beijing.

根据考纲,英语高考中的书面表达要求考生根据情景,写一篇120-150字的短文.短文不但要有内容描述,还要有观点和感想.其目的主要是考查考生是否能够用所学的英语知识,用合乎英语习惯的表达方式传递信息,进行思想交流.考查形式是图表、文字和图画任选其一.因此,考生要具有连词、组句和谋篇布局的能力,对图表类比、分析的能力和对图画的观察、信息转换的能力.
根据考试说明和评分要求,考生应该做到：
一、切中题意.切题与表达是不可分割的统一体,内容不切题,再好的表达也无济于事.其中,审题是做到切题的第一步.所谓审题就是要看清题意,确定文章的中心思想、主题,并围绕中心思想组织材料.
二、情节信息完整.这里的情节信息,就是书面表达所提供的内容要点,这是短文的核心部分.在提示说明中,有时把情节信息,一、二、三、四逐个列出,当然一目了然,但有时不一定交代得很具体,只给了大致轮廊,这就要求我们自己思考确定,逐条列出,写作时不致漏掉要点.特别是写由几幅图画组成的短文更需要动脑筋,通过现象抓本质,确定每幅画的信息点.
三、语言基本无误.所谓语言无误,包含两层意思,一是用词准确,能充分表达原意.二是语法规范,符合英语习惯.写出来的句子,读起来语感正常,不牵强附会,不生搬硬套,通篇读完,有英语味道.纵使达不到nativespeakers的写作水平,但起码得让人家觉得acceptable.我们写作中最大的毛病是Chinglish(汉语式英语),既糟蹋了英语,又曲解了汉语.下面的句子,貌似正确,其实都是病句：
1.Don’t persuade him.He won’t listen to you.
2.Why did you against me at the meeting?
3.He promised his daughter to go with him.
4.Is the house belonged to you?
5.My father was only ten when the war was broken out

高中英语作文要想得高分,最好复合句和简单句同时运用,那么120词的作文就一般5~7句左右.
当然这不是确定数字,视乎你的句子长短而定.

高考改卷一般都是高校的老师或者研究生,他们看的东西应该会和高中老师不同,这种问题虽说不能完全避免,但是会好一些的

是会扣分,但也不至于扣很多分——你想想,不过就是一个词啊!
我们通常阅卷,一般就是最多扣1——3分,而且酌情处理：
全文整体写得好,扣得稍多一些.
因此,只有个别失误的话,就不需要多担心.
祝你开心如意!

要想英语作文上五档,首先要熟练的掌握一些难度句,如倒装句、从句的使用,并且在使用中不能出现错误,否则会留下更加不好的印象,给老师不懂装懂的感觉.
其次是上下文衔接要恰当,使文章有条有理,不显得生搬硬凑.
最后要记熟作文模板上的一些常用的可以套用的格式句,这样会显得高顿大气上档次!给老师留下好印象
以上是我的一些观点,希望可以帮到你.
祝高考成功!

高考英语话题作文：有关“信心与希望”
　　例：1、生活中困难不可避免,面对困难需要信心…
　　　　2、试举一例说明信心在学习(考试、生活等)方面的作用…
　　　　3、你对困难的态度…
　　It is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties. When we are faced with them, nothing is more important than hope and self-confidence. With confidence, we can find sometimes the question is not as “huge”as we imagine.
　　Take most of us for example, the entrance exam to college seems to be a horrible monster. Accordingly, some people give up, some persist. In my eyes, with confidence, right assessment of the difficulties, as well as full preparation, try and exert your strength, and then we will overcome all problems and challenges. On the whole, I believe we youngsters should face the difficulties in right manner. And nothing is impossible, brave it out and just do it!

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1、Our school is located in the 20km away from the north of the city.
2、It's 10 o'clock now, and I will meet you two hours later.
3、I am writing this letter to inform you of my complaints of my recent purchase of your mobil phone.
作为一个去年参加过高考的学生来讲,想要告诉你几点.
距离2014年高考还有200多天,而你已经认识到你在英语作文方面的不足了,这是非常好的一点,你所要做的就是多背、多练；多背一些好的范文,不光是背其中的好词好句,更重要的是背了一段时间后你会发现在写作文时会不自觉的用上你所背过的文章,另外,平时上课时课文里讲过的和你们做过的阅读、完型的词组也要多背,最好有一个积累本,在平时积累时用不同颜色的笔标出哪些经常在阅读里出现而你总记不起来意思的、哪些是以后写作自己可以用到的...积累之后就要经常尝试去用.老师平时布置的写作作业要认真完成,我相信高三的课业还是很重的,让你每天或每周额外练一篇作文估计也不能实现,最好的方法就是课堂上认真跟着老师,认真完成阅读、写作.等上了大学你就会知道,高中老师真的很负责,高中的课程非常细,虽然我们原来也常常抱怨高中学的大部分都没用,但是在以后,偶尔提到高中学过的知识每个人都会非常激动非常怀念...好好珍惜后三分之一的高中生活吧~加油 祝你好运!