纠错（It is a fine day today ,is it?)

Merry Christmas everyone.Santa Clause is finally coming around the corner.Glad you could join us for the one and only Christmas Special show.This is our first show.(applause) yea!Thank you very much for your support.
Let me introduce you to our newest members ABCD of the English broadcasting station.We'll be with you every Thursday afternoon from xx to xx.Hope you can tune in and join us for the hours of fun and laughter packed show.Now let's play a lovely tune by xxxx,followed by some important news that you do not want to miss.Don't go away,we'll be right back.

Dear Bob:
Thanks（加上for) writing and introducing your beautiful city to me.Now I'd like to tell you anything (anything改为something)about my hometown PingChang,which stand(stand改为stands） on the bank of the Bahe River.
It is a beautiful city for people to live（加上in）.Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past 10 years.Now factories,houses and roads have （加上been）built.More schools and hospitals are serving（serving改为in serve或are serving改为serves）

既来之,则安之
招聘启事

　　亲,您想问的是英语完型和阅读如何改错吗?
　　针对完型：我建议您将填错的空带回原文,然后逐句翻译,并找出自己的答错点在哪里,语法不会,句子不懂还是单词不认识.
　　针对阅读：建议您先把错的题再重新做一遍,仔细阅读原文,考虑前后段的关系.如果还是做错,就研究一下答案为什么是这个,而你选的不对,也可参考题后答案.
　　如果是做题速度慢,建议您每日给自己定计划练习,坚持才能成功.
　　希望可以帮助到您.

我认为是对的.time不可数,litter.

我认为是对的
look forward to doing sth.期望将要做某事

“syied”应该是拼写错误.said才对.
“awful homework”这个搭配有点问题.boring比较好.无聊的.
“and I did and did so long time ”这个语法错误而且语义不明.
“I still remember:in the morning ,I did it ; in the afternoon , I did it ;in the evening ,I still did it!”一般起强调作用不这么表达.I still remember that it's whole day that I just sat at my desk and did my homework.
“don't like me.”like如直接跟在助动词后作动词用.意为“喜欢”,作“……像……”时它是一个介词.必须加上be动词才得以构成完整意群.因此这个属前后文搭配不当的语法错误.而且也很少这样用法.Do not share my pain.我觉得这么用会比较好.但是我给出的翻译是一个引申式句子.不知道是否符合初中要求.可能老师会判成错误句子也不定.具体你自己斟酌.后面的“It really like……”同理是错误的.必须加be动词.
“at last”终于.用法不当.“In the end,”
基本上我看了一次就点出这么几个十分明显的错误.另外文章总体上受中文思维影响比较深.不符合西方语言习惯.尤其是前后句子逻辑比较中式化.另外缺乏逻辑副词加以连接.使得文章连贯性较差.
比如开头中“How are you ?Did you know how my last day off was?”这句话除了“Did”要改为“do”以外.总体上并没有大的语法错误.但是这样开头是中文思维的写信方式.具体上我也不能整篇帮你重写.总之斟酌一下思维方面吧.
其他问题不大.

半径是2厘米的圆的周长和面积相等.
说法是错误的,因为单位不同.
应该是 半径是2厘米的圆的周长和面积的数值相等.

it is high time that sb should do 或者did sth是固定机构,意思是到了做什么事的时候了

活页练?我们班物理没用这套书,但是我有数学和生物的书(答案收上去了,相信正常老师都把答案收上去)

I don't want to get up so early.我不想太早放弃.
Liu Ping likes making snowmen.LP喜欢堆雪人.
want to do sth.
like doing sth.

建议修改如下：
I came back to China already two months ago, and during this period I have had to deal with lots of teaching and administration work.
前半截加了ago，后面半截的时态改为现在完成时

什么题目啊?

one of the advantages is to go travelling conveniently

祝你考研成功!佛主保佑你.

1.第三行：and me!第四行：likes reading,watching tv,like 后面永远doing!第七行,he改she,你妈是女的.
animal改成animals,good at playing.
my favorite hobbies is drawing and singing.错的不少啊 兄弟

new应该相对于旧的,所以应该是用将来时吧.感觉We are going to have a new flat比较好一点.

如果路程是o,位移也是o,就是静止了

time has gone by,many things in these days hzve changed a lot that i am not used to it.i feel sad ,i miss the old days but it can not come back.
now,i am a student in the key class where everyone is perfect and i think i am the worst among them.teachers are very good,they make every lesson interesting,but sometimes,i don't undersand them.classmates around me often talk about some difficult problems that made me feel myself foolish.so i has been unhappy these day.an idea occurs to me is that i should go home.

so去掉,或改成very,Sometimes I think about setting up 表意不明,改成so I want to run,but it is almost impossible,almost 去掉,him,the boy ,改成a boy ,who I loved ever,with前加companied ,drawn 改成draw,what does she like,改成how she is ,But I am still unwilling和前面矛盾了,think改成feel,met改成meet,live on后的on去掉also will换一下顺序,可以了,祝好运啊!

两句中的person都可以去掉,道理同“the rich”“the poor”,都是the+形容词表一类人的用法.
另外,because the traffic light was no voice to warm them.应该改成：because the traffic lights have no voice to warn them
原因：红绿灯用单复数可能问题都不大,但个人认为复数比较好.而warm是温暖的意思；warn才是警告的意思.没有声音应该翻译成“have no voice”因为此处已经用了拟人的修辞了,把红绿灯拟人化,所以要用“have”的“有”而不是“be”的“有”
最后,你的第一句原句语序有些别扭,虽然语法上没问题,但调整一下会比较好：
It is very dangerous for the blind to cross the road because the traffic lights have no voice to warn them.
第二句除了“person”去掉,其他的没有问题.
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希望答案你满意.

1 Tom said he was watching TV
2 Tom asked me if I went to the libary
3 Tom asked me when I bought the book
1 Tom在说自己,所以这里用第三人称 He
2 3 这里分别在问"我",所以问句中的you在从句中换成了第一人称"I"

按二语习得的一些研究成果看,纠错作用不大,尤其是语法错误.这次纠正了,下次还会犯的.不过就教学看,教师纠错还是必要的.
多读一些简写的小说,像床头灯系列,书虫等.语法知识不要死记,多阅读,慢慢会掌握的.
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楼下的,我是英语专业的,研究二语习得的,我只说些研究结果.语法的掌握是个长时间的过程,习得一个语法有时要花几个月的时间,甚至更久.纠错是有必要,但一时的纠错多半是显性知识,要习得就得要隐性知识.

1.It always make me helpless.中的make--makes
2.evaluation of the last term中的 the去掉
3.I just got about 72 points which make I feel so sad
make-made更好,I必须改成me
4.I was not a person who think highly of achievement in the past,中think如果用一般现在时的话应该后面加-s
5.and what make meget changed,the environment or I just want to change我认为这样表达更好些
What made(过去时更好些)me change?Is it the environment that changed me?Or I want to change.
6.I would make great effort,and then I would become an excellent girl.中 would改成will好些

基本上没问题啦
passionate最好改成名词性质 passion
前面high形容passion

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有不少错误,和不合理的地方,纠正如下：
The fashionable products from the western developed countries are going into the daily life of the people who live in the developing countries.
或The fashionable products from the western developed countries are going into the daily life of the people living in the developing countries.

four month ago.I had a accident.
the accident is I broken my left leg.then I felt scared when I lose a lot of blood.What should we do?
the frist.I with cotton moisten ethyl alocholwash my wiund,in order to avoid the wound infect of bacteria.
afterwards I call my classmate help me,substitute for me call my school's doctor group me wipe medicine on my leg wound.
final I at my home recuperate.
与1楼有同感……
麻烦你一行行地对吧~*^0^*
订正如下：
第一句four month ago.I had a accident
f要大写,accient是元音开头,要用an,broken应改为broke
第二句the accident is I broken my left leg.
t要大写,事故发生在4个月之前,应用过去时,is应改为was
第三句then I felt scared when I lose a lot of blood.
t要大写,scare是动词,应改为形容词,可以用frightened,lose应用过去式
第四句What should we do?
把we改为I,shoule最好改为could
第五句the frist
改为At the first.
第六句I with cotton moisten ethyl alocholwash my wiund,in order to avoid the wound infect of bacteria.
这句话……好多错单词啊ethyl、alocholwash、wiund……!你的大概意思是不是：我用沾有乙烯的脱脂棉擦拭我的伤口,以防伤口被细菌所感染?如果是,我跟你翻译了一下：
I uesd the moisten cotton with ethylene to wash my wound,in order to avoid the wound infect by bacteria.
第七句afterwards I call my classmate help me,substitute for me call my school's doctor group me wipe medicine on my leg wound.
a要大写,afterwards与I中间要加逗号,call要用过去式,且整句要用动词不定式,substitute是动词,不可以用来开头,后半句是中文是英语,应该改为：Afterwards ,I called my classmates to help me.They called school's doctor group for me.The doctors wipe medicine on my wound.
第八句final I at my home recuperate.
final是形容词,在这里应该用副词finally,且f要大写,I是代词,at是介词,不可以连用,整句应改为:Finally,I arrined my home and recuperated.
全文如下:
Four month ago.I had an accident.The accident was I broke my left leg.Then I felt friehtened when I lost a lot of blood.What could I do?
At the first.I uesd the moisten cotton with ethylene to wash my wound,in order to avoid the wound infect bybacteria.Afterwards ,I called my classmates to help me.They called school's doctor group for me.The doctors wipe the medicine on my wound.Finally,I arrined my home and recuperated.

需要改成名词.可以用youth and vitality.青春和活力.

1.少先队员在辅导员陪同下参观"中国儿童活动中心".
2.爸爸虽然年纪大了,但是做事情很会用脑子.
3.如果我们注意饮食卫生,肠胃病就能避免了.

Look!Those men managers are cleaning their offices.

apple后加s
I'm 改为This is

关於句意或者是文章理解方面犯错的可以不必摘录,因为这个是对针对每篇文章的解读方面的,通常需要大量的练习和揣摩,久而久之就会培养出语感或者是揣摩的出出题者的意图.如果是短语搭配或者是单词理解方面的问题,只需要摘录那句话或者是只记录下那个搭配或者单词就好.总之,无论哪种情况,都无需抄下整篇文章,费时费力也没有很好的效果.不过,如果这篇文章你觉得写的很好,属於美文,有经常阅读学习借鉴的感觉,那麼就可以抄下来时时翻阅

most of my friends
I asked my father for the money
he said he could only give me half of the money
when I showed him the money a month later
He gived me the other fifty.
You can imagine how happy I was when I rode my own bicycle to school.

away和school之间加from,表示离……远

我觉得从语法方面来说没有什么问题啦!写的不错,但有些句子有些冗长,不是太精炼.应该长短结合.希望我的想法对你有些帮助~GOOD LUCK MY FRIEND!

eview改为reviewed
最后的the the 改为 a an

The film shocked me and watched me.【watched---touched】
During the Chinese style education among my life,I didn't even know how important to listen to the voice from my heart.【among--in; how important is it to listen.;】
Those days I watch the film 'Legends Of The Fall'.【watched 用过去时态】
It was a romantic story 【was---is 电影的内容不会再改变.】

把逗号去掉,此处是一个主语从句,不应该有逗号
beautiful本身就是是形容词

1.you're running out of the time.
2.you are so slow to response.

I don't know which one I had is wrong. 是对的.I don't know 后面全部做宾语.第二句完全是中式英语.

第一句正确,just表示刚刚这个意思时,常和完成时态连；第二句错误.did 后动词原形 buy
毫无疑问

eceived

这段对话中有一个错误,slender应改为thin
Slender implies a generally attractive and pleasing thinness.
Slender refers to people or their body thin in an attractive way

The furthest distance in the world is not life and death but when i stand in front of you ,u are playing the cellphone.

attention 后面的 to 好像不能省略吧

In the past,I hardly ever help with housework.改为：In the past ,I didn't do my homework carefully.
In the past,Ieat junk food four or five times a week.改为：In the past ,I ate junk food four or five times a week.
In the past,I always play computer games.改为：In the past,I always played computer games.
I will outgoing.改为：I will be outgoing.
.In this winter,I will draw and play soccer..改为：In this winter,I am going to draw pictures and play soccer.

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