soaring forex reserves

[]里面是我觉得可以改进的地方
()里面是改动的建议
参考看看
At present,with the soaring petrol price and the escalating credit crisis,global economy [becomes](moves into) recession.More specifically,recession means [two quarters of negative growth](两个四分之一的负增长?还是两方面的负增长?two aspects of negative growth); [many firms fall in the business](many firms' business fall apart/ many firms have a sharp fall in profits),which leads to a lot of people [loss](losing) their jobs.Therefore,some people argue that in this special time,businesses should reduce advertising because it is very [expansive](expensive) and [more useless](less useful) than before.However,other people do not think so.They consider that businesses should maintain [the customer’s](customers') loyalty and also [have competitive advantages](remain competitive).In this essay I will [examine](analyze) both [side](sides) of [controvert](the controversy,controvert是动词).
Some people contend that managers should [more focus](focus more) on [others](other) promotion than [focus on](可以省略) advertising,such as direct selling,public relations and sale promotion.It is because that in the recession era,the quantity of demand is decreasing,[suppose if](suppose if重复,留其中一个就行了) advertising [does](is) not effective,[therefore](then) the amount of [sells](sale) can not increase,businesses will [loss](lose) a large [number](amount) of money.Therefore,with the amazing development of [internet](the Internet),some companies [consider](have started) selling online.For instance,in the first half of 2007,Tesco Online [enjoyed](achieved/reported) a 29% rise in its sales revenue.Comparing with a 12% rise for Tesco (local) stores,(the) online (sale) is more profitable for Tesco than its [normal](local) shop [business](sale).(Business study for A Level,2008,200) There is no doubt that in some [area](areas) online selling is better than advertising.

随着物价的飞涨,许多年轻的大学毕业生不能赚到他们谋生的工资,更不用说支持他们的父母（意义为：更不用说为父母分忧了）.
With the soaring of prices是状语,a number of young college graduates是主语, cannot earn 是谓语动词,their living是宾语,to say nothing of supporting their parents是目的状语,of后接动词的ing形式.

中午好,欢迎来到翱翔（Soaring）.

不可以的
副词只修饰动词或形容词
这里的mainly是修饰整个短语“because of the expansion of artificial irrigation sistems”的.英语语法上没有“副词修饰连词”这种说法.

During the war, the price of oil soared. I went to school by car every day, so my family had to spend more money for the car. The soaring prices of the oil also cause all the prices of commodities to go up, and because transportation of commodities was required, the rise of cost of oil will also result in increase in transportation fees. Therefore all the price of commodities were soaring. And that caused the people to be unable to afford too much things as they were expensive, and this may cause inflation. Because of inflation,people's salaries become lower and lower and unemployment may also occur as some companies may close down. And at that time, my family was short of money; because the commodities were expensive and my life was uncomfortable unlike before .
But something good still happened. Because of the soaring price of the oil, there weren't many cars, thus the environment became better. Pollution became lesser of a problem, there wasn’t that much CO2, (the global warming may won’t be that serious*this is my own opinion, this could be wrong*)

来看看世界上最年轻的走钢丝选手!
以每小时100英里的速度飞向天空,一对来自英国的9岁女孩打破了世界纪录并常为了最年轻的走钢丝选手.
罗斯和傅雷姆是表姐妹.搭乘了两架双翼飞机飞上了天空,其中一架飞机的飞行员是他们的爷爷.在两架飞机相隔几米的时候,姐妹俩在钢丝上从一架飞机走向了另一架.
从飞机上下来后,她俩说,“多么不可思议啊!从高空向下看好酷,房子都好小.
不是每个九岁的孩子都敢挑战这个.罗斯和傅雷姆比她们的同龄人都勇敢.另外,她们也来自一个走钢丝运动员的家庭,她们所听所看都深受家里的影响.
这次参加这项挑战,两个姑娘不单是为了打破世界记录,还想向家里人证明自己的实力,更是为了为一个慈善团体集资和提高其知名度.她们想为团体做些有意义的事情.

物价直线上升,这样子下去,我们锅里可没什么东西煮饭.

（近几年,近些年）汽车数量的增加/猛增/剧增让长久以来的烦恼问题（这里没具体说明是什么问题,在上下文中应该有提）更加严重,因此我们应当坚决减少对汽车的严重依赖,至于最后一句话感觉包含两重意思,像是中文说的一语双关,我就不翻了,看个人理解.

they are all groaning about soaring health budgets,the fastest-growing component of which are pharmaceutical costs.翻译．05．75
他们都在抱怨健康卫生医疗预算上升太快,其中药品价格上升最快
component of which组成它的成分,构成这种现象的因素
component [简明英汉词典]
n.成分
adj.组成的,构成的

in bid to 意为试图.加了个new,整句话理解为央行试图新一轮的遏制通货.

相反的风向,适合飞翔 ?
感觉好奇怪的.