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求助,修改英语语病~急求!
With the rapid social development, life and working rhythm also more and more quickly, the car has become the main means of transportation, it brings us a unprecedented convenience,
In all exclamation social progress and enjoy social progress at the same time, it also brings us a disaster, one of the fresh life disappear in a driving wheel, a happy family in a broken.
Someone once said traffic accident as "modern social traffic war", the traffic accident like a invisible killer, lurking in the road waiting for illegal illegal person appear.
Therefore, people should learn to protect themselves, to develop civilization, civilization driving the way of walking. The tragedy of the blood tell we must obey the traffic rules, accomplish truly "care for life, safety travel".
On nov 16, 2011 in the morning, a traffic accident happened in gansu province.
According to introducing, the accident school bus nuclear load 9 people, real load 64 people.
According to reporter understanding, the victims of the 19 people, there are 17 is kindergarten children, a teacher and a company by personnel.
In addition to 13 children badly hurt, and child minor injuries
The two above is China's major and a representative of the traffic accident.
Our country traffic accident death toll remains high, there are many reasons.
The picture on the left is summarized the main cause of road accidents
2011 July 23 night, hap
pen lukewarm line jumbo moving cars piled up after the accident, the car four carriages from the viaduct fall off.
The accident resulted in forty people were killed and 200 people were injured.
In the traffic regulations maintenance, we all have security, let us obey the traffic rules.
Cherish life, away from the traffic accident, please obey the traffic rules.
Thank you for you listens

英语 语病.
This morning I woke up at 6 o 'clock is to the kitchen for mom made a bowl of
beef and tomato noodles,mother looked at me as she do breakfast is very happy,
she finally put all eat noodles,very delicious,also say I grew up,not a kid,
can look after himself,I listened also very happy.
你们看一下有语病吗,总觉得不太对,一个小学生写的,让我帮他参谋一下.

what is your name 貌似语病
这个英语词组貌似有病,单三才是is的,your明明是are额?为什么用is呢?

急求英语句子语病修改
work!Due to the existing two Q66 American EV hot tripping is not available .One EV Q44 burned .But EV Hefei Maintenance point,is unable to repair.If you want to repair,three EV will be sent to the Nanjing office maintenance,All maintenance costs must wait until the results come out to know,but in Nanjing before repair Department will inform the hotel of all maintenance fees!
If bad,will affect the process of the Conference!Hope to get the approval of the department of management,and EV maintenance work

Thanks to the financial support of 语病
Thanks to the financial support of xxx Scholarship,I could focus on my
study without worry about living expenses.
是否有语病?

那个没有语病