以My visit to xintai为题写一篇70词左右的英语作文

Last Monday,I went to Xian Tai by car.I set off at 7:30 in the morning and arrived there at 8:30.When I got there,there had been a lot of people.Then,on my way to the top of the mountain,I had my photos taken.On the top of the mountain,I picked some flowers and brought them home.Although I felt tired,it was really a good journey for me,I will remember it forever.
我也是学生,见笑了

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