新托福和老托福作文题库一样么?

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Like the stone of Roman wall, which were held together both by the regularity of the design and by that peculiarly powerful Roman cement, so the various parts of the Roman realm were bonded into
a massive, monolithic entity by physical, organizational, and psychological controls.
解答如下
（1）介词短语作状语：Like the stone of Roman wall

（2）非限制性定语从句：which were held together both by the regularity of the design and by that peculiarly powerful Roman cement

（3）句子主语部分：so the various parts of the Roman realm were bonded into
a massive, monolithic entity by physical, organizational, and psychological controls.

（4）主句是个被动语态的句子,而且带有一个介词短语,然后短语后,有一个非限制性定语从句修饰,

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交通工具!
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Choose one of the following transportation vehicles and .
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你想干嘛?出国吗?那都得考啊,如果只是想学学考着玩当锻炼能力的话我建议你还是去学专四专八吧,考次托福1400,gre也900多,很贵的...还不算来回路费.
难度的话肯定是gre的要难的多,但是gre的作文题目都是给定的,有一个大题库,可以提前准备.托福作文简单的多了,毕竟这两个考试的目的是不同的,托福考的是你的语言能力,你写出来的东西能证明你能很好的掌握了英语写作就会得高分；而gre是考思维的,你得通过你的语言证明你的思路是清晰的,甚至是你是有文采的,才会得高分...

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我想知道自己目前托福写作的大概水平,想请教下各位看能不能帮我指点一下我的作文,看看能得多少分大概 我想知道自己目前托福写作的大概水平,想请教下各位看能不能帮我指点一下我的作文,看看能得多少分大概 题目：It has been said, “Not everything that is learned is contained in books.” Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books. In your opinion, which source is more important? Why? It is ridiculous to say that everything is learned is contained in books, the experience is not important. Admittedly, we can learn many things from books and we read books when we are kids even we grow up. Books are always knowledgeable and vivid, for, there are a mass of universal truth, pictures and theoretical knowledge in books. Anyway, I do really love reading books and I enjoy the happy that books brought to me. But I still believe that knowledge gained from experiences is more important than gained from books. First of all, books can not show anything to us and what should do or what should not do but our experiences do. We will have no idea by reading books when we have a tough problem. However, if we experience something and we make a mistake, it is good for our future because we know it makes a big fault to do it in this way, so, we will never make the miss like what we have made in the last time. At the second place, experiences show us how to do it. There is an example happened in my life. Once, I go for dinner in my friend who named Sue, I arrived her home and went into her house and got a found her kitchen was in chaos. I was ignorant of what happened, so I asked Sue who was making a phone to the restaurant. She showed me a cook book and explained that she wanted to make a cake by following this book and she did but made a fail yet by she had been never made a cake before. I help her to clean the kitchen and then, I taught her how to make a cake by my experience before. So, we see, experiences are more important then knowledge from books. It is true knowledge from books is also important for us and they taught us a lot of things. We can not ignore the gain from books. We get knowledge from books in a general way but in a more direct and realistic way from our experiences. To sum up, it is more important to gain knowledge from experiences but books. I totally agree with a proverb which said “Not everything that is learned is contained in books” and know how significant experiences are. k08181年前1: menayiyi 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%

It is ridiculous to say that everything is learned is contained in books,the experience is not
important.(这里everything后面的that不能省略)
Admittedly,we can learn many things from books and we read books when we are kids even we grow up.Books are always knowledgeable and vivid,for,there are a mass of universal truth,pictures and theoretical knowledge in books.Anyway,I do really(do和really有重复的嫌疑,因为do的在这里本身表强调,意为真的...）I love reading books and I enjoy the happy（happiness) that books brought to me.But I still believe that knowledge gained from experiences is more important than gained from books.(只能说than gaining from books或than which is gained from books)
First of all,books can not show anything to us and (tell us) what (we)should do or what should not do but our experiences do.We will have no idea by reading books when we have (meet)a tough problem.However,if we experience something and we make a mistake,it is good for our future because we know it makes a big fault to do it in this way,so,we will never make the miss like (mistake)what we have made in the last time.
At the second place,experiences show us how to do it.There is an example happened in my life.Once,I go for dinner in(with) my friend who(who需省略或用who is代替）named Sue,I arrived (arrive为不及物动词,在这里需加介词at)her home and went into her house and got a found her kitchen was in chaos.(went into her house,and found that her kitchen was in chaos).I was ignorant of what happened,so I asked Sue who was making a phone to the restaurant.She showed me a cook book and explained that she wanted to make a cake by following this book and she did but made a fail yet by she had been never made(she had never made) a cake before.I help (helped)her to clean the kitchen and then,I taught her how to make a cake by my experience before.So,we see,experiences are more important then knowledge from books.
It is true knowledge from books is also important for us and they taught us a lot of things.We can not ignore the gain from books.We get knowledge from books in a general way but in a more direct and realistic way from our experiences.
To sum up,it is more important to gain knowledge from experiences but books.I totally agree with a proverb,which said “Not everything that is learned is contained in books” and know how significant experiences are.
我针对你文章里面的语法改了些,你先看下.
额,时间有限,下班了晚点再帮你改哈.

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虽然托福成绩很满意,但是时间很紧张,我心里有点慌,我该如何在短时间内准备好SAT作文呢? ppll12341年前1: 874540d5620f3692 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率82.4%

　　1.不要用长句.
　　长句有两个问题,一是中国学生水平不够,很难写出语法没有错误、意思表达准确的长句,语法错误、几个逗号连用、倒装从句混合是经常的.二是看essay的人也是人,经常是那种大学生研究生,没人愿意看长句混在一起的文章,短剧更讨人喜欢,并且表达意思更加清晰,准确.
　　2.细节要注意
　　出现My brother,
friend的时候要加上名字,出现university的时候要给上名字,给出事例的时候要给出时间地点人物,没人愿意看“我的弟弟去了一个大学,然后再大学里交了很多朋友,后来去了公司里那些朋友成为了他的财富”,而“我的弟弟Dan去了Upenn读书,在学校里认识了Jeff、Dennis等好朋友,而他后来去Google公司工作的时候发现了他们成为了自己一生宝贵的财富”比上面那句好了很多.实在要写流水账也要写出细节和感觉.
　　3.瞎编要编的像
　　这个问题尤其出现在例子的应用上面,很多考生对于想要引用的例子并不是十分清楚,就自己按照一个模糊的印象进行描述.这是非常危险的事.天道专家建议考生在备考的时候,对于自己想要用的例子,一定要有一个清晰的了解.
　　4.自己的事例难写,最好不要写
　　应用自己的事例最重要的问题是主观性太大,没有太多的代表性.尤其是,对于自己的例子,考生提前准备的几率并不大,所以如果没有对文章结构等的把握能力,最好不要用.
　　5.积累,积累,再积累
　　这个就是老生常谈了,写作是最需要平时积累的,无论是论述和方法还是论点的新颖与否,或者是例子的应用.
另外,SATonline手机APP上线,可以免费在线做SAT题了.
祝你好运啊!希望答案你能采纳

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关于2002年9月老托福一道语法改错题详解~急~ 关于2002年9月老托福一道语法改错题详解~急~ An activist for women's rights, Leonora O'Reilly promoted women's vocational training besides fought for increased wages for garment workers. 正确答案说是"besides",那么应该改成什么? 而且fought不是过去式么?garment workers又指什么? 最好能翻译一下~ 求详解~ 新星座1年前3: zzzz之辉1 共回答了13个问题 | 采纳率92.3%

应该改成 “and“ 或者别的并列性的单词.
因为 ”promoted women's vocational training“ 和 "fought for increased wages for garment workers" 是成并列关系的.
至于 ”fought“ 的确是过去式,但因为前者的 ”promoted“ 也是过去式,两者是成并列关系的所以不矛盾啊.
最后,”garment workers“ 指的是制造服装的工人.

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托福独立写作求批改!请给出建议和优缺点还有几天就考试了字数339 托福独立写作求批改!请给出建议和优缺点还有几天就考试了字数339 Question:Many people believe that it is very important to make large amounts of money,while others are satisfied to earn a comfortable living.Analyze each viewpoint and take a stand.Give specific reasons for your position. As we all know,money is important in our daily lives.We can use money to do a large amount of things like buying clothes which is really expensive or travelling around the world which is a dream for most people.But we don't really need those expensive clothes or luxious travel.As a result,in my opinion,I prefer to earn a comfortable living than make large amounts of money. For one thing,having large amount of money can bring too many trouble.For instance,many people who is wealthy may have a high frequent of robberies.Due to their huge amount of money,those criminal can know their address,names and other private things easily because so many people know about their lives.They are sort of famous peoples who has no private like those movie stars or singers.The robberies which are brought by their wealthy can put them in danger.They may be killed during the fight against the criminals who wants their money. Another reason is that the richers wil not be satisfied about their money,they want more.There is an old saying which says people will not be satisfied with what they already have.Just like the saying says,wealthy people will never be happy about the huge amount of money they have because they don't think it's enough.So they work harder and harder in order to get more money.The more money you earn,the fewer time you will spend on your family.And as a result,they will lose what is far more inmportant than money - family. Finally,our goal of earning money is to give us a comfortable living.So if you already have a comfortable living,why bother about how much money you have?We should never lose our goal because of anything.Sadly,so many people just lose this goal on their way of making money.And they slowly begin to change their goal to make more money.It's really a tragedy. audiomjq1年前1: 小雪最棒16 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%

看了一下你的文章,你的语法句法都挺好的,而且单词拼写也没有错误. 你的第一段也给出了观点,但是给的例证不够充分,不够说服力.的确有钱会引人眼红,但是很多有钱人过得很好,你一定要给出具体的人或事来说明,或者report...

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哪里可以练习新托福小作文（带阅读和听力） 哪里可以练习新托福小作文（带阅读和听力） 有没有在线的网站可以练的 zheju1年前4: z_wy7 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率90.5%

高分120

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复习新托福请英文高手帮忙看下这两句话怎么理解(两篇文章的各不相干) 复习新托福请英文高手帮忙看下这两句话怎么理解(两篇文章的各不相干) And Cousteau’s adventures were hightech,with lots of fancy equipment,whereas Painlevé kind of patched the equipment together as he needed it. Another incredible photograph was taken from the International Space Station in 2006.This picture showed the Earth with a large,round dark “circle” during the day.This was,of course,the moon’s shadow over the Mediterranean Sea. yanghao123161年前2: lotr5 共回答了26个问题 | 采纳率96.2%

第一段：
Cousteau的尝试有较高的科技含量,其中运用了大量复杂的设备和器材；相反,Painlevé只是根据自己的需要把已有的设备和器材拼凑修改一番.
这里应该是把Cousteau和Painlevé的adventure进行比较.重点是理解whereas在此处的意义.
第二段：
另一张令人叹为观止的照片于2006年拍摄于国际空间站.这张照片呈现了在一天之中,地球被一个又大又圆的黑“圈”所环绕.毫无疑问,这个“圈”就是月亮在地中海水面上的投影.

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【急】懂托福的进写了篇独立写作的 【急】懂托福的进写了篇独立写作的 我不会托福独立写作的compare and contrast and state your opinioin 的我觉得一写这种类型的就会有些观点模糊大家看看我写的文章请耐心改一下如何改正我23号就考了第一次准备还不够啊 作文题目是It has been said,"Not everything that is learned is contained in books."Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.In your opinion,which source is more important?Why? People constantly explore the question whether knowledge is gained from books or from experience.Some people might believe that the knowledge gained from the books is more professional .However,in my view,I think that knowledge gained from the books is more impressive,more practical and more useful.“ Experience is the best teacher”is an old chiche,but I agree with it. We can get much more professional information from the books.The author can provide us the specific information in a certain field of study.By studying from these books,we can raise our knowledge greatly and develop our intelligence at the same time.On the other hand,we also can increase our knowledge from experience.Only by experiencing something can you remember this thing much deeper.Like we study and take the exam.Only you have taken the exam and have analyzed the wrong answers can you correct the false answers the next time.In a word,it’s more impressive after having doing it yourself. Furthermore,it is a fact that you can get much more information from the books because you can’t experience everything .The knowledge you gained from the books can provide you a wide perspective.For example,they will tell you in the books how to solve a difficult math problem.Only you have understand it and try to solve the question yourself again,then the knowledge has become yours.Take myself as an example,once I have seen a book written by Sarah Mars,which is mainly about how to develop the friendship.But these advices and suggestions will be practical only if you have used these in your daily life .Thus you can form your own thought to deal with your social relationship.So,in my point if view,knowledge gained from the experience is more practical. Some people may hold quite different views from me .They maybe think what we all learn from school are from textbook.But that’s not true because you also do a lot practice like doing your assignments,taking exams and preparing for a presentation,These are all you valuable experience.The knowledge you gained from your experience is much more impressive,more practical and more useful. lc-wangzi1年前1: 明天儿共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率100%

我问一句,你完整的读过这篇文章没?有些逻辑上的错误,还有一些自己支持观点的前后不照应.以上问题,读几遍就应该找得到.再来就是一些语法的问题了,象"deeper"应改为deeply," Like we study and take the exam"就是明显的中式英语了

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我的托福口语可不可以复议阿!?1030号分出来时30+22+18+21=91...口语给了FLL 个人感觉口语的发挥还不 我的托福口语可不可以复议阿!? 1030号分出来时30+22+18+21=91... 口语给了FLL 个人感觉口语的发挥还不错可以复议吗?加2分就行 现在刚刚91...申请本科还算够用..我怕一旦复议掉下90我就坑爹了.. 口语我主要是全部题目都听懂了~ 而且说得也挺多的~ 但是我紧张~所以很多小语法肯定都有问题~ 这样的情况可以上20吗? 我裸考就听懂3道题..乱说了一通还15呢~ 这次是提前写了稿子读着回答的才18~ T-T看来小语法伤人啊 zy12122191年前5: 过期水泥专砸SB 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率94.4%

我感觉还是别复了

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一道听力题一道托福听力题according to the discussion,what is commonly bel 一道听力题 一道托福听力题 according to the discussion,what is commonly believed? 答案选的是这个 they were the 1st to offer insurance 这个听力原文 lolyd's of london was the 1st insurance company to be organized as such,but it would be wrong to say that they were the 1st providers of insurance 这个答案和听力原文的最后一句话矛盾啊?为什么选这个? 为什么没有人回答我啊！ 要考试了…… 3monkey251年前1: 八挂专用hh 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率89.5%

听力原文的意思是伦敦的LOLYD'S是如此组织的第一家保险公司,但是说他是第一家提供保险的企业是错误的.
既然说他是第一家体提供保险的企业是错误的,那么当然理解过来就是大家都说他是第一家提供保险业务的.
所以说commonly believed,大家都相信的是什么?是错误的说法.这个错误的说法就是他是第一家提供保险业务的.
有点绕,你再理解一下啊

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sat 托福混合备考现在是2月份,打算参加一下10月份的SAT考试.我现在高一,英语水平相当一般.之前看了猴哥的SAT sat 托福混合备考 现在是2月份,打算参加一下10月份的SAT考试.我现在高一,英语水平相当一般. 之前看了猴哥的SAT托福混合备考法,觉得自己还是没有理解透彻,并说明各个时期应该要做些什么. 3月到6月报了一个托福班. 以上就是我目前能考虑到的情况了. 因为是新手,所以有点不知所措的感觉.不知道从哪里开始. 背单词背着背着就走神了,一天下来100个都背不了,和预期的500个差距很大很大很大. 我很纠结. 目标TOP10,呵呵 ps.sat 2 准备考数学2, junfeng6011年前1: seek71420 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率100%

top10?有目标是好的,但是top10不是容易的,可以说top30都不是容易的事情啊.
单词不要坐在那边盯着它看着背,这样一会就走神了.你可以没事就拿着单词书看看,当然盯着背的时间也是要的,但是一般30分钟就可以停一下了.单词先从SAT800词汇背起,然后你会发现托福里也就差不多这么些单词.背完SAT800你就可以开始背托福单词了,建议用李笑来的21天,然后你可以开始背SAT2100（忘了,貌似是2100吧,都大半年过去了）高频词汇.SAT高频词汇全背下来就差不多了.
报的托福班一定要好好上,如果是新东方的话要更注意了.小班还好,大班很没效率,一般就是在那边讲段子.
SAT2你怎么会考美国历史啊?!那是最难的诶~你要是没搞得很明白很明白的话还是不要考美国历史吧.里面问的问题要把你折磨死的.SAT2不用3门,其实很多大学2门就够了哇.
还有问题的话可以继续问.姐姐过来人了.

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sat作文有模板吗?sat作文有没有像托福一样的模板啊 苏若兮1年前1: jeanlover_2000 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率100%

没有..只能靠自己多练了

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我6月8号就考托福了阅读问题急救 tpo一直在做前9套已经过了两遍了 10到第13套做了一遍 我6月8号就考托福了阅读问题急救 tpo一直在做前9套已经过了两遍了 10到第13套做了一遍 我6月8号就考托福了 tpo一直在做前9套已经过了两遍了 10到第13套做了一遍但是阅读的出错率还是很高.如果给我足够的时间的话我的对题率很高但是20分钟不知道为什么就是做不对词都认识但是看快了看三句第一句就忘了慢慢看才能记住但使用的时间很久很久得40分钟就是边看边做题,有的时候看完第三个选项第一个讲的么就忘了.和白痴一样,但是词基本都认识 .怎么办.就五十分了. MONKEUY1年前4: 慧尾共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率85.7%

不要上来就看文章啊先看下题目是single topic 还是 sub topic 然后心里有个底直接看题按照提干定位原文例如在提干里出现了A 这个专有名词到文中直接找出来答案就在他的附近在选择的时候注意几大易错点虚假否定极端词等等可以有效的减少错误率
PS：强烈建议你做完TPO后自己分析一下错题看看为什么会出错避免以后再出现类似的情况很有用我的老师就是这么教我的

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在线修改托福独立写作,没人改啊,我马上要考试了急啊,高人帮我看看谢谢啦（修改完再加50） 在线修改托福独立写作,没人改啊,我马上要考试了急啊,高人帮我看看谢谢啦（修改完再加50） 2010.3.27 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The best way to achieve happiness yourself is to make others happy. Since the world is rapidly changing and the modern life has become more complicated,there is ardent controversy in our society of late whether the best way to achieve happiness yourself is to make others happy or not.Some people believe that obviously it is true,while others put foward that the opposite idea.As far as I am concerned,this idea is unconvincing.My arguments are listed as follows. To begin with,it cannot be denied that let others pleased is the one of ways to achieve happiness yourself.This is because when you do something make others delighted,especially your close friends and parents,you would have a sense of achievement and feel contended which acquire the satisfaction at the same time.To introduce a concrete example,Lei Feng,a famous person in china,who never stop helping others and he would try to help the people surrounding him even when he travelling on the train.From the interview about his life,giving a hand to others can bring the joy to the them and he will cheerful when he see others happy. Nevertheless,it is not confirmed that make others happy is the best way to acquire joy.A recent poll conducted in university by experts about the best way to be happy reveals that it is no doubt that obtaining the knowledge is the best way to get delight.Either university students or high school students,the knowledge is countless and useful and we learn it every day with pleasure.It is acknowledged that falling into a sea of the knowledge is so jolly,and apparently there is more pleasure obtaining from knowledge than that from making others happy. In addition,there are plenty of ways better than making others pleased to get happiness,one of the vital crucial which is finding a good job.For instance,I used to be a blue-collar worker in a factory and finally became a financial management in a big company by personal effort.I believed that I was the happiest person in the world,which due to an excellent job. Although making others happy is a way to acquire delight,obviously other ways obtaining the happiness is better,such as getting a good job or learning more knowledge.Base on the factor I mentioned above,a conclusion is drawn safely that the best way to achieve happiness yourself is not to make others happy. ` 白墨汁1年前1: candycjj 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率81%

总体感觉：论证不充分.分数3分,不会到达四分（不要说我打击人,实事求是,希望楼主理解）
优点：1.结构清晰.典型的“开头+三段论证+结尾”式结构,让人一目了然.且三段论证采用的也是“2个观点段落+1个让步段（即你文章第二段这种的）”
2.没有太多严重的语法错误.别人可以通过读你的文章大体了解你的意思.
需改正的地方：
1.开头：只要小补充.因为happiness是个很大的概念,你得先给他个定义——就你文章内容来讲你可以定义“happiness=self-satistication”,这样后面好论证什么事情让你happiness了.
1.让步段（及全文第二段）需修改：
理由：
需要首先说明的是,让步段的作用是以“退一小步”补充你文章的观点,给别人留下你的想法很可观的感觉,其本身对你中心论点的阐述是一个折扣,所以,让步段出现的前提就是不可以影响到你中心观点的表达效果.
就从篇幅上讲,该让步段的篇幅比两个陈述你观点的论证段都要长,这个本身就是一个弱项,他给人的感觉是你对你本身的观点就没有太深刻的论证.
从位置上讲,你这个让步段不适合放在论证部分的开始.因为你第一段就说“for the following reasons”,所以正常思路应该就是讲“reason”了.
就内容上讲,第一：该段topic sentence后,本段唯一一句论述性语言是个标准的病句.第二：这个例子举得完全没有必要,因为你这个例子本身涵盖的内容没有给论证起到真正的补充,而且草草带过,看完完全没有什么深刻的印象,而且不要忘记这是让步段,你只需要在观点上“让一小步”就可以了,举一个“concrete example”是自找麻烦
修改建议：将它放到结尾段之前,将开头的“to begin with”改成“in addition”.删除那个例子.把论证再改一下,比如可以改成：Because delighting the one who you love, you would both satisfy from the thanks they return and the happiness you offered for them.（仅供参考）
2.论证段（全文3、4段）需修改：
理由：用官方指南的话讲就是没有expre your point effectively.
从思路上讲：因为论证段是要紧扣题意,所以先从题意理解出发：该题题眼是“best way”,也就是说,你只要能论证他不是“best”——换言之有“better than this way”的存在就可以,由此可见这其中有一个比较的成分.作者第二个论证段中有这个意识,但是没有突出“better”,你说有很多方法也可以让自己幸福啊又举了例子啊,但是这没有说明“making others happy”不是最好的啊,就像我说杨贵妃最美,你说王昭君和西施还有很多人都是美丽的,这前后两个观点毫不矛盾.
再从内容上讲,第一个论证段的理由说服力不够.首先题目问的是“do 【you】 agree or disagree”,所以拿别人的观点作为自己的支持论据这本身就不够给力.所以你完全可以把“调查中那些存在不存在都很难说的学生的观点”变成自己的,这样分量一下就不同了.
修改建议：在这两段中分别居一种你觉得“better than making others happy”的让自己幸福的方法.可以就用你现在的思路：“firstly,I think gaining knoeledge is better than……”、“Also, a good job is another way better than……”先说这个方法本身怎么让你幸福了,比如说学知识不仅满足了自己对外面世界的好奇心,更让自己有了奋斗的资本,这一切让自己很满足所以很幸福（这样和第一段的定义就挂上钩了）；然后再比较：学知识比想办法让别人快乐要容易很多（要有细节：学知识自己只要了解自己那些只是不知道然后再学就可以了,而让他人高兴你得很清楚的了解到别人的想法,了解自己总是比了解别人要容易的）,所以学知识比让别人快乐的方法,所以让别人幸福并不是最好的方法.第二段亦如此,逻辑层层递进,而且不需要有什么高难度的句子,既简单又有说服力.
因为这两段改动会很大,个人觉得就不用再重修改句子了.在写的时候注意一句话,不管长句短句,在写时脑子里的句子一定不能断.就是说一句话一次性考虑好、写完,这样最不容易出错.要是长难句有困难,短一些也没什么关系,重要的是不要有大错误.评分员可能会因为你句式结构简单不给你最高分,但绝对不会因此给你降分,但若是你错误太明显就不一样了.
以上这些来源于个人考试和指导经验,对苍天保证绝对复合ETS思路.
希望对你有帮助哈.若有什么问题请留言,尽我所能回答
加油^^祝楼主考好成绩

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围绕责任感或者幽默感谈谈都不错吧
比如说小时候没责任感,然后妈妈得了次病结果我就知道要去做事了,有了责任感.
又说小时候也不知道笑话能有什么用,结果成长后发现跟同学谈话讲几个笑话让大家都跟我交朋友了,我也就培养了幽默感了.
这两个品质可以说是万能的啊

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我想说sat essay对字数还是有要求的,起码字数多卷面相对好看一些.那么主要问题就是写成3个论点想要每个都讨论充分时间可能不够.评分中虽然说reasoning和example皆可,但是对一般高中生,全用说理很难讨论透彻,全用例子又很难准备3个.当然,有一些不常见的题目,如果没有example,写成托福作文也没有问题,保证有说服力就好.

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要分清指代词究竟指代什么,一般都是向前找,而且通常情况下离指代词越近的越有可能.这整个句子里“that”后面是从句,修饰“edvidence”.这个从句里主语是“the desirability of events”,谓语是“affects”,后面adaptational outcomes和amounts of change是并别的成分.要找“they"指代的是什么就是要往前找一个复数的名词.这整个句子里面其实就只有events,amounts和outcomes.“that they require”本来就是定语从句,that是指代了amounts了所以they肯定不是修饰它的.outcomes本来是它的并列成分肯定也不是修饰它,所以they就是指代events了.如果你把句子看简单点看成“the desirability of events affects the amounts of change that they require”也许就好理解点了.

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上面的回答,观点我基本同意.但是他讲的不是针对你的文章来的.6 or 6.5估计是雅思写作的分数.这是托福的大作文,一篇文章并不决定你的分数.要和综合作文一起看的.写得还行,还有一定的改进空间.具体的语言上,表达还好.大作文一般字数越多分数越高,但是字数也不是绝对的.建议400以上吧.其实文章结构很重要,但是更重要的是你的逻辑.否则模板只是生搬硬套.Good Luck!

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请帮我评价一下这篇托福独立写作? 请帮我评价一下这篇托福独立写作? Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?One should never judge a person by external appearances.Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. In most cases,one should never judge a person by external appearances.Sometimes when I walk down the street at night,I avoid people who are acting tough and loud,but in general,I prefer to reserve judgment until I get to know someone.Judging someone by external appearance can be deceptive.Judgments based on external appearances prevent you from getting to know a person reinforce stereotypes,and are superficial and limiting. In high school,I stayed away from students who were called the "bad students" because they dressed a certain way.I wanted nothing to do with them.I later had the chance to meet one of these "bad students" because of our mothers,we started talking and I realized that we had a lot in common.My impression of him was very different once I got to know him. If you form an opinion of someone based on stereotypes,you risk never getting to know someone who is different.You may are be missing out on an opportunity to make a good friend.In addition,you are reinforcing that stereotype by believing it without given the person a chance.If you take the time to get to know the person,you might become friends. Judging people by external appearance is superficial and often unfair.After all,you don't know what circumstances the person might be facing or who the person really is.Perhaps the person comes from a less fortunate family than you and cannot afford the kind of stylish clothes your friends wear.However,that does not mean the person is less intelligent or interesting than you are. People should not be naive about new people they meet,but should take time to get to know them.External appearance often does not tell us anything about a person.Judging someone by their appearance is misleading,reinforces stereotypes,and is limiting.Doing so could prevent you from making a true friend. 魔女YU1年前1: wuque_ho 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率78.9%

1.“ wanted nothing to do with them” 你不觉得这句很怪吗
2.【Because of my mother】,I later had a chance to meet one of these “bad students”.(把逗号改成句号) We started talking 巴拉巴拉是不是更好点
3.You 【take a risk】/ risk never 【going】 to know someone who is different
4.You 【are probably missing a chance】 to make a good friend.你写的太复杂而且我表示看不懂= = 怎么又是 are 又是be的,还有这里只用missing就好,opportunity是偶然的机会,我觉得不太好
5.People should not be naive about new people they meet,【instead,we 】should take time to get to know them.
6.Judging someone 【from his】 appearance is misleading.【Meantime,】reinforces stereotypes【 is limiting.】
“【】”是修改的地方,我个人意见,仅供参考~
我觉得你这篇文章还是理论太多,例子太少.第一段太长
每段之间最好都有点关系,然后用连接词,什么因果啊,承接啊多用用
老美逻辑能力不好,所以连接词很重要,他们不适合跳跃性思维.

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2009年1月23日托福口语下面第五题用英文怎么说? 2009年1月23日托福口语下面第五题用英文怎么说? 口语5 图书馆限制借书到10 本,理由是学生一次借太多书看不过来.还有不按时还甚至丢书.女生反对,说她写research paper,一次就需要20 本,另外,图书馆这样做明显是不信任学生,她从不会不按时还,不会把书弄丢 ppcgy1年前1: zxky 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%

the library has a check-out limit of 10 books, on the ground that students cannnot finish all the books he borrows in limited time. Furthermore, late returns and lost books are not uncommon. But the girl opposes to such claim, saying that she needs to write a research paper which demands the reading of 20 books at one time. Besides, the library has demonstrated obvious distrust for the students: she was never the one who returned books late or lost books.
你是要翻译还是要论点啊?

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到底该怎么提高英语写作呢?弄过托福的进!我T的写作一直就是在21和22徘徊. 到底该怎么提高英语写作呢?弄过托福的进!我T的写作一直就是在21和22徘徊. 现在不用弄T了,我现在就希望能通过什么方式实实在在的提高一下我的作文水平.出出主意吧,我不想是为了应试,就是单纯地提高一下 原始密zz1年前2: 穷的只剩下排骨共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率93.3%

托福“英文写作必背句型”35句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.There is no one but longs to go to college.Nothing is more important than to receive education.Since I went to senior high school, I have worked very hard.The harder you work, the more progress you make.The more books we read, the more learned we become.Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports. So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it. There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.We should bring home to people the value of working hard.We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.It pays to help others. What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.Smoking has a great influence on our health.Reading does good to our mind and Overwork does harm to health.Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed. Summer is sultry, That is the reason why I don't like it.We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.Taking exercise is closely related to health.By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory. There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us. The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air(supply fresh air for us).An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution. We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
最简单的方法就是学习使用写作中常用的句式,连词等等.比如：
一、~~~ the + ~ est + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
~~~ the most + 形容词 + 名词 + (that) + 主词 + have ever + seen ( known/heard/had/read, etc)
例句：Helen is the most beautiful girl that I have ever seen.
海伦是我所看过最美丽的女孩.
Mr. Chang is the kindest teacher that I have ever had.
张老师是我曾经遇到最仁慈的教师.
二、Nothing is + ~~~ er than to + V
Nothing is + more + 形容词 + than to + V
例句：Nothing is more important than to receive education.
没有比接受教育更重要的事.
三、~~~ cannot emphasize the importance of ~~~ too much.
（再怎么强调．．．的重要性也不为过.）
例句：We cannot emphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much.
我们再怎么强调保护眼睛的重要性也不为过.
四、There is no denying that + S + V ...（不可否认的．．．）
例句：There is no denying that the qualities of our living have gone from bad to worse.
不可否认的,我们的生活品质已经每况愈下.
五、It is universally acknowledged that + 句子~~ （全世界都知道．．．）
例句：It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.
全世界都知道树木对我们是不可或缺的.
六、There is no doubt that + 句子~~ （毫无疑问的．．．）
例句：There is no doubt that our educational system leaves something to be desired.
毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意.
七、An advantage of ~~~ is that + 句子（．．．的优点是．．．）
例句：An advantage of using the solar energy is that it won't create (produce) any pollution.
使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染.
八、The reason why + 句子 ~~~ is that + 句子（．．．的原因是．．．）
例句：The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can provide us with fresh air.
The reason why we have to grow trees is that they can supply fresh air for us.
我们必须种树的原因是它们能供应我们新鲜的空气.
九、So + 形容词 + be + 主词 + that + 句子（如此．．．以致于．．．）
例句：So precious is time that we can't afford to waste it.
时间是如此珍贵,我们经不起浪费它.
十、Adj + as + Subject（主词）+ be, S + V~~~ （虽然．．．）
例句：Rich as our country is, the qualities of our living are by no means satisfactory.
{by no means = in no way = on no account 一点也不}
虽然他们的国家富有,他们的生活品质却不太令人满意.
十一、The + ~er + S + V, ~~~ the + ~er + S + V ~~~
The + more + Adj + S + V, ~~~ the + more + Adj + S + V ~~~（愈．．,愈．．．）
例句：The harder you work, the more progress you make.
你愈努力,你愈进步.
The more books we read, the more learned we become.
我们书读愈多,我们愈有学问.
十二、By +Ving, ~~ can ~~ （借着．．．,．．能够．．．）
例句：By taking exercise, we can always stay healthy.
借着做运动,我们能够始终保持健康.
十三、~~~ enable + Object（受词）+ to + V （．．使．．能够．．）
例句：Listening to music enable us to feel relaxed.
听音乐使我们能够感觉轻松.
十四、On no account can we + V ~~~ （我们绝对不能．．．）
例句：On no account can we ignore the value of knowledge.
我们绝对不能忽略知识的价值.
十五、It is time + S + 过去式（该是．．．的时候了）
例句：It is time the authorities concerned took proper steps to solve the traffic problems.
该是有关当局采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了.
十六、Those who ~~~ （．．．的人．．．）
例句：Those who violate traffic regulations should be punished.
违反交通规定的人应该受处罚.
十七、There is no one but ~~~ （没有人不．．．）
例句：There is no one but longs to go to college.
没有人不渴望上大学.
十八、be + forced/compelled/obliged + to + V （不得不．．．）
例句：Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.
既然考试迫在眉睫,我不得不放弃做运动.
十九、It is conceivable that + 句子（可想而知的）
It is obvious that + 句子（明显的）
It is apparent that + 句子（显然的）
例句：It is conceivable that knowledge plays an important role in our life.
可想而知,知识在我们的一生中扮演一个重要的角色.
二十、That is the reason why ~~~ （那就是．．．的原因）
例句：Summer is sultry. That is the reason why I don't like it.
夏天很燠热.那就是我不喜欢它的原因.
二十一、For the past + 时间,S + 现在完成式．．．（过去．．年来,．．一直．．）
例句：For the past two years, I have been busy preparing for the examination.
过去两年来,我一直忙着准备考试.
二十二、Since + S + 过去式,S + 现在完成式.
例句：Since he went to senior high school, he has worked very hard.
自从他上高中,他一直很用功.
二十三、It pays to + V ~~~ （．．．是值得的.）
例句：It pays to help others.
帮助别人是值得的.
二十四、be based on （以．．．为基础）
例句：The progress of thee society is based on harmony.
社会的进步是以和谐为基础的.
二十五、Spare no effort to + V （不遗余力的）
例句：We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.
我们应该不遗余力的美化我们的环境.
二十六、bring home to + 人 + 事（让．．明白．．事）
例句：We should bring home to people the value of working hard.
我们应该让人们明白努力的价值.
二十七、be closely related to ~~ （与．．息息相关）
例句：Taking exercise is closely related to health.
做运动与健康息息相关.
二十八、Get into the habit of + Ving= make it a rule to + V （养成．．．的习惯）
例句：We should get into the habit of keeping good hours.
我们应该养成早睡早起的习惯.
二十九、Due to/Owing to/Thanks to + N/Ving, ~~~ （因为．．．）
例句：Thanks to his encouragement, I finally realized my dream.
因为他的鼓励,我终于实现我的梦想.
三十、What a + Adj + N + S + V!= How + Adj + a + N + V!（多么．．．!）
例句：What an important thing it is to keep our promise!
How important a thing it is to keep our promise!
遵守诺言是多么重要的事!
三十一、Leave much to be desired （令人不满意）
例句：The condition of our traffic leaves much to be desired.
我们的交通状况令人不满意.
三十二、Have a great influence on ~~~ （对．．有很大的影响）
例句：Smoking has a great influence on our health.
抽烟对我们的健康有很大的影响.
三十三、do good to （对．．有益）,do harm to （对．．有害）
例句：Reading does good to our mind.
读书对心灵有益
Overwork does harm to health.
工作过度对健康有害.
三十四、Pose a great threat to ~~ （对．．．造成一大威胁）
例句：Pollution poses a great threat to our existence.
污染对我们的生存造成一大威胁.
三十五、do one's utmost to + V = do one's best （尽全力去．．．）
例句：We should do our utmost to achieve our goal in life.
我们应尽全力去达成我们的人生目标.

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