上台演讲hello everyone my name is xxx..I have many hobbies,such

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上台演讲
hello everyone my name is xxx..I have many hobbies,such as playing basketball,Listening to music.
Then Bring to you the a music
放完.
i hope that everyone in this class could enjoy the lovely simple life in the music world.
.需要改哪里

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zgy77318 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率85.7%: Then i will show u a beautiful song~
I hope all of u could enjoy a simple life in your music world~; 1年前

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第二句 the 后面的a 要去掉.bring to也觉得别扭,要表示给他家带来音乐,可以说then let's enjoy some music.
最后一句中,enjoy不合适,你希望大家都能感受(个人觉得享受不妥)到这个音乐情景中的简单的生活.用feel合适.
lovely 形容生活不合适.应该去掉

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