纠错 ---How soon have you lived here? ----For three years.

第二段,逗号前后怎么都是句子?中间加个and吧.还有应该是need to do something,没有need do.的形式吧.不是纠错的话working最好改成duty,is going to ...about改成he may .

chinese都要大写,class用单数,known用原形.insect 后加上it is,
句子首字母都要大写.

why not 后面直接跟动词原型 是why do not 才跟you或者we

different countries have different languages.

在我看来,在任何时候我们都不应该忽视A的重要性.
这句话,好像没有错误啊,语法用了倒装,没错

1.sandy was one of the models(C) at the fashion show(D).one of 后面可数名词用复数
2.sandy (A:wore) (B:her hair) (C:in a 1990s style (D:last Friday).表示20世纪九十年代
3.miss hu came into the classroom and the students stopped talking.停下正在做的事情用ing
4.simon often takes Amy home and they play the piano together.home 前面不用介词to
5.there are at least three thousand students in our school.
6.Who makes the boy do his homework all day?make sb do sth
7.there is going to be a trip to the Great Wall.典型的误用there be
8.the builders are busy building tall buildings.be busy doing sth
9.the actor swam cross the pool to the corner,原句意思有误,应该是游到角落.
10.the food gives me energy for the afternoon and to play volleyball later.

The summer vacation had COME again.I was happy that I could FORGET school at least for a while.Lest I fool around all through this summer vacation,I made a plan ON how to spend it.First,I thought I should go over all those things my teachers HAD taught in the previous term so that I could have a better understanding of them.Then I thought I should take up SOME EXERCISE,such as walking,running and rowing,to keep me physically strong.It stood to reason that with such a good plan I should make the best of my vacation time.I did,because I lived up to what I had planned.
改过的地方用大写了.
其他错误我觉得应该是没有了,但是读起来觉得表达蛮奇怪的,有的地方有点累赘.你是写这个暑假吗?那用一般过去时就够了.还有我觉得倒数第二句的should 可以改成would或could,不懂你在那里是想表达什么意思就是了.

The Olympic（ Olympics) is coming!
Seven years ago,on July 13.(,)Thirteen(t小写） hunderd million（millions)(of) chinese were ebullient(+ed) because of(because of后面要加名词或名词性短语,自己改改吧~） China gained the right to host the 2008 Olympic Games.Twenty-four years ago ,Xu Haifeng fulfilled chinese Olympic Games’ break-through from zero on gold medal record.Seventy-six years ago,the first chinese who joined the Olympic Games（——） Xu Changchun got set on the racetrack lonely.
Look throgh the developement（of) history ,we will fine(改成find) that seventy-six years’ great changes of chinese Olympic Games’ history witnessed how (去掉how)China,a small(以下两个“,”去掉） ,closed,backward country became opening and strong .That converged so many generations’ hardworking and beautiful dream.
Since China won the bid for hosting the 2008 Olympic Game（s)successfully,the rootstep of the Olympic is approaching .The 29th Olympic Games emblem “Chinese stamp dancing Beijing” release ceremany held in Beijing,the temple of Heaven Qi Niandian; Beijing unveils Olympic medals in gold and jade ;the clothing that the athletes were(改成ware) to receive their prize were made up of xiangyun and the flag red (国旗红).All the thing about the Olympic Games ,they all represented chinese acient ,traditional culture and the hospitality of thirteen hundred million(+s+of) chinese and they have also condensed the wisdom of a lot of designer’s(改成s').They show to the world that we are ready!A commercial,
globalization fast developing China is ready to welcome people from all over the world .
There are only 20 days of(before) the Games start .Every one of chinese must realize(+that) the Olympic is coming .As a chinese,it’s our duty to make a good image to the world and make China stronger than ever.
The Olympic is coming!
好累啊能不能多给点分呢嘿嘿~
更重要的是你的学习要靠自己啊!下次注意啊：）

楼主的句子是很典型的中式英语.例如：想要表达“我们在学校会有XXX”时,便很自然地直接说成："we will have XXX in our school".不过,正确的英语表达方式,却应该是 "There will be XXX in our school".

另外,"we will have" 也可能不对,因为,一般的未来时态应该用 "we shall have".不过,如果楼主是想表达一种承诺（即我们一定会做到的）,那麼,用 "we will have" 便是正确的.所以,究竟是用 "we will have" 还是 "we shall have",还是由楼主按照你想表达的意思来决定吧.

还有 "many interesting and fun" 当中的 interesting 是个形容词,後面应该加上一个名词才对.例如 interesting activities.

最後,由於 fun 是不可数名词,而楼主却用 and 字连接起来把它和 interesting 连起来,那麼,它们前面的 many 便最好改为 a lot of,因为 many 只适用於可数名词,而 a lot of 却可用於可数名词和不可数名词.

我建议把楼主的句子改成下面的样子：

There will be many interesting activities and a lot of fun in our school during this term.
（我们学校这个学期会有很多有趣活动和开心玩意.）

以上谨供楼主参考.如有错误,望高手出手指正,以免我误人子弟.

The importance of Chinese
Chinese is spoken by about 1.4 billion people in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people abroad speak Chiese as well such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The schoolchildren in the UK and USA are learning Chinese and they like Chinese very much .Needless to say,Chinese will play a more important rule in the future .And if Chinese become an international language in the future,our country would have a steonger inlfuence all over the world. 框架没改,只改了改语法错误,鉴于你才上初中没用高级句式.应该比较符合初中水平.望采纳.（一楼修改不太地道,虽然没大语法错误但不符合英语表达习惯.提高一下阅读量写作语感就出来了.对于初中生来说你的水平还是不错的,祝学习进步!）

这句话有语法错误.
应为The show began.或The show has begun.

1.A thief entered the room.
2.A thief climbed into his house.
3.He ran as quickly as he could.
4.He came downstairs slowly.
5.He had done his homework before he went out.
6.She went on holiday after she took the examination.
7.The thief dropped the torch.
8.His voice is sweet.I like it.

she is runing in the playground.

They are his's----- his's 改成 his.
I'm looking forward to visit the park-----visit 改成 visiting

is 改成 are

on the tree改成in the tree

1.They have humps,long eyelashes,and they live in the desert.
2.they can store food
3.their eyelashes are long so that...
4.camels are very important to people.

　　以下是蔡老师的专业纠错,
!蔡氏招牌,成就未来!
　　Last week(这应该是题目吧)
　　I was very busy last week,I went swimming with my friends in the saturday morning.I went to class in the afternoon.I had to do the homework on sunday morning.In the afternoon,I watched TV at home.It was really a very busy but cool weekend.

contain--contains
单三形式

改为
The Internet is becoming a useful tool for us
useful:第一个字母的音标是辅音,所以用a修饰

are-have

答案：【carrying改为carry 】才对

help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事


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emains
英语中when and where /how and why 作主语谓语动词用单数

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lie改为lying如果我能帮到您,请您及时采纳我为最佳答案吧~谢谢!

Hometownp's 改成 State（因为没有Hometownp's 这个词）
在It is cool前面加In fall,
在We need have an umbrella 前面加In summer,(因为夏天太阳大,要遮雨伞）
去掉and
在wear boots前面加In winter和We(因为1、冬天才穿靴子2、缺少主语）

改well为good.well 作形容词时是指身体好 .
The food in the hotel is good,but the service is poor.
宾馆的食物很好,但服务不行.

把 did 改为 were
what were they like 他们人怎么样

这两句话都对.
This book is dedicated to my beloved friends listening to my moment of life.
这句中的listening to my moment of life是现在分词做伴随状语
This book is dedicated to my beloved friends who listen to my moment of life.
这句中的就是转换成了相应的定语从句形式.

不错!我只说没做对的,好吗?
Pandas are one of THE MOST POPULAR animals in the world.
熊猫是这个世界上最受欢迎的动物之一.
不可以说 "one of the popular", 语法不通.
Soon after the earthquake, some people WERE SAVED on May 13, 2008.
Were Saved = 被救
Saved = 救
在地震后,应该是“有些人被救”,不是“有些人救”.
Details decide IF/ WHETHER WE SUCCEED or not.
细节决定我们成功与否.
The child broke his leg BY ACCIDENT when he was climbing the mountain.
By Mistake = 错误地
By Accident = 不小心／意外
所以意外跌伤应该是By Accident
If I WERE a bird, I COULD FLY in the sky.
Edison SET UP a chemical lab of his own （你的作业本把这个拼错了哈哈）at the age of 10.
请你查一查 set 的过去式是什么.
China is one of the OLDEST COUNTRIES in the world.
这个语法和第一题（熊猫）相似,你把两句话比一比,看看 "one of the _____ ______ in the world" 应该怎么用.(:
有什么没搞懂的请追问.加油!

Dear Life,
Thanks for your variety and creativity that produces such a reality thing. I appreciate your deglighted part which makes me feel（去掉feel） happy. However, I am much more grateful for those difficult part what （what 改为that）teaches me lessons and helps me to grow up. Going through all those you give to （去掉to）me, I act much（去掉much） more like a mature adult and learn more things. Thanks again and I'll keep a heart of thanking （thanking改为thanks）for you!
Love,
XXX

1.
what is your phone number?
2.
card
boy
answer
last
look

it is important to learn a second language.
或者
Learning a second language is important.

参考答案：本题中的on是多余的,应该删除,正确的表达是：
Most of the fashion show right now is T-shirt or dress.
翻译：马上上演的大多数时装秀是T恤衫或裙子.
show ：表演.
right now：马上.
fashion：n.时尚,时装；
T-shirt：T恤衫
dress：连衣裙；礼服
例如：There is a great show right now.
翻译：马上有一场很棒的演出上演.

to 改为for
第二句
said 应改为 say ,to 后必须是动词原型

My mother and I went to the supermarket on Sunday.

第一时间为你提供正确答案：
anyone改为　everyone
问大家都在这儿,应该用everyone
anyone 是任一个的意思
everyone是每一个

I was born onJuly 20,1992

Ich finde, dass meine Frust meine Lust nach und nach ersetzt hat.
Ich mag Tennisspielen, aber ich kann nicht sehr gut spielen.
In der Freizeit gehe ich in die Stadt oder zu der Bibliothek.
Ich will bald in die Stadt wieder gehen.
Die Spezialitäten dort waren sehr gut. Wir haben viel gegessen.
Ich bin mit meiner Mutter in den Sommerferien nach Seoul gegangen.
Meine Studentinnen sind sehr nett.
注意小细节,很多三格四格楼主都是混着用的,不懂的继续问.

没什么错.就是最好在rulers前面加个and更合适和连接

The school makes a decision that students will clean the toilets themselves. This leads to the argument that wheather or not is this a good idea. Some thinks that this idea is good as most of the student are lazy, they hardly do any work, and therefore do not appreciate the cleaner's job. Some thinks that it's a bad idea as it's too dirty a job. As students, they should not be doing it. Cleaning up their own classrooms will be enough for them.
May I have your attention,please? I would like to tell you about the activites in our school this week. There will be a Mathematics contest on Monday. On Wednesday, American Smith is giving a speech. After the speech, you all can have a chat with him on how to improve on your English. From Friday to Saturday, the school is having a sports meeting in the gym. All students must wear uniform. The sports meeting starts at 8am.
累死了.

把a去掉
red 的词性是形容词,直接修饰名词,不需要冠词a

not being

The little girl spoke so (quietly)
that i could hardly hear her.
2.Each driver should check the oil level in( his )car every three months.
3.I hated (to )ask Anita who is a very stingy person to lend me money.
4.She decided to quit her high-pressured job,she didn't want to develop (a)heart trouble.
5.the flakes in this cereal (taste) like sawdust.
6.Much of my boyhood was devoted to getting into rock fights,crossing railway trestles,and the (hunts) for rats in drainage tunnels.
7.(Turned) on the ignition,the car backfired.
8.I asked the clerk if the store had Srevie Wonders’ latest CD.
9.THe decisions of the judge seem questionable.
10.Early in the day,she took a taxi to the airport,kowning that her time was limited.

min=z;
@for(link(t,j):z>=a(t,j)*t);
@for(document(y):
@sum(time(x):a(x,y))=1);
@for(time(t):a(t,1)+a(t,2)+a(t,3)

I like playing basketball
You know that i am a number of the NO.2 middle school basketball team.On this November,our team won the championship of the school basketball league.when the time i went to the medals podium,i felt quite excited.i think that is the fascination of basketball,and i love the sport

首先第一个问题.因为主语是一个不定式,且宾语的way是单数形式,所以应该用is.对比下面这句话：To learn more and to work hard are the real ways to success.两个句子意思有差别.你那句潜在的意思是,要成功需要同时学习更多和工作努力.而后面这句潜在的意思是学习更多和工作努力是成功的两条途径.
第二个问题,应该用is,因为你的宾语用的是单数.和上面的不定式做主语用法类似,如果这句你想表达的是要成功需要同时学习更多和工作努力,那么就是Learning more and working hard is the real way to success.相应的,如果你想表达的意思是学习更多和工作努力是成功的两条途径,那么就是Learning more and working hard are the real ways to success.
不定式做主语判断上比较简单,句子里一个To就用is,两个To就用are.动名词作主语要难一点,一般需要根据意思来判断用is还是are.这里简单的在于,你可以根据宾语是单数还是复数进行判断.更复杂的一种情况如下：
Drinking and smoking are bad habits.喝酒和抽烟是（两种）不好的习惯.
Lying in bed and listening to music is enjoyable.躺在床上听音乐令人愉悦.（强调同时做）

呵呵好长的句子啊.怎么感觉这个应该是it's ...that ...的强调句型,which 应该改成that
去掉back from ,where 加from是正确的,但是放在这里太重复了.这是说jean去旅游的 地方,前面有了where ,所以只要travle 就好了.travel后不能加to介词.
正确的：It's a beautiful present that was bought in South Korea where Jean has just travelled.

At 8:00 in the morning,I have Chinese.
I Have Chinese at 8:00 in the morning.

答案：【 keep改为keeps】
因为The beautiful scarf 是第三人称单数,所以动词keeps要用第三人称单数形式
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看了下楼上的回答发现错误还挺多,我详细讲讲好了.
1.Wenn ich mit meiner Freundin ausgehen möchte, kann ich sie durch Computer informieren.（mit后面加第三格,女朋友应该是单数吧,复数有点夸张了）
2. Wenn ich ein Problem habe, will ich meinen Compuer benutzen.（Als用在过去发生过哦一次的事情上,而起“必须”用过去式或完成时,表示经常性的用Wenn）
3. Nach meiner Meinung soll ich den Computer klug benutzen. （Nach meiner Meinung后面直接跟句子动词,或者Meine Meinung ist ,dass...）
4. Jetzt haben viele Leute einen Computer.（不要随便说一个词然后再说一个句子,不行的）
5. Der Computer spielt eine ganz wichtige Rolle in unserem Leben.（此处的习惯上带上一个不定冠词,第三格变位自己看咯）
6. Viele Leute haben keine genug Zeit fürs Studium.（Studium在德语中基本不用复数形式）
7. Jetzt bin ich eine Studentin und es gibt mehr Nutzen für mich.（两个句子互相独立,为什么第二句把动词放第一位?只有前面是占位的从句或者不定式才可以这么做）
8. So kann sich mein Wissen erweitern.（此处反身用法）
9. Für eine moderner Mensch ist es unglaublich!（同7）
10. Für immer errinnere ich mich an die Sache, die im Jahre 2001 ich erst den PC spielen.（楼上的错误是Jahre是德语中为数不多保留古德语第三格名词变位的单词,单数依旧要加上一个e）