Most memorable day that you gave me.i'll always remember 求翻译

You can do something you like to do

It has never been a moment so memorable in my life

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这一生铭记你的爱.

额,典型的chaglish(中式英语),故事我看懂了,但语法上有一些错误,可能外教会有疑惑,把有语法错误的句子改下就可以了

是要翻译吗
你可以描述一下在过去的5年中发生的值得纪念的事吗

memorial 主要用法是名词,意思是纪念碑,纪念馆或纪念活动；当然也有作名词,侧重于追悼的,纪念的这层意思.
memorable 就是个纯粹的形容词了,这个次就是我们平常用的比较多的,难忘的,值得纪念的（修饰人或事）意思.

Please choose a memorable word o
请选择一个容易记住的单词啊
希望我的回答可以帮到你

谁不珍惜与朋友和家人难忘的聚会呢?
这是反问句.

A bitter lesson is always to be remembered to the end of my life.
Last semester,I had an embarrassed experience in my examination.After having a round looked through the sheets,I began to answer them one by one.The examination questions seemed somewhat so easy that it took me only half of the hours to fulfil them with the slightest effort.When I was checking up my paper,one of my classmates next to me asked me to pass the last sheet of mine to him for cheating.I generously satisfied him after having gone over it first.No sooner had I finished reviewing my sheets,he stealthily returned it to me.Without having a simple glance,I placed it back,stood up and handed them to the teacher.Unfortunately,I didn’t know he had stolen mine and replaced it for his until the teacher questioned me why I had cheated in the exam.

One of my favourite countries is China. China has large of population and enrich culture. There are so many interesting places to visit. Such as the Great Wall, Summer Palace, Yellow River and so on. Everybody knows that the 29th Olympic Games was held in Beijing which belongs to China. In China, where has a small city named Guiyang. This is a beautiful city where the wether is good for our health. 追问： 再加那里的people,geographical location 和 scenery

过去的就让它过去吧,没有什么值得特别纪念（记忆）的

1.my most memorable moment
Once,I left my keys at home,and went out.After coming home,only to remember the key at home.I thought to myself,no one at home,how should I do?At this point,I have a good idea:call the police.I immediately call 110.After a while,a policeman came,asked me what happened.I will it give chapter and verse for to tell him,but he let me to the police station to explain,I had to follow him to the police station.That is my most memorable moments.
第二个我不会,不好意思.

only one thing GIVES me (singular,所以是第三人称单数）
The thing 听起来很奇怪,U should use ONE THING
six-YEARS-old (plural)
grandparents' or grandpa's
no adults AT home
we were as natural as to play together (这句话不通） what are you trying to say?
去掉“to be getting"
too small FOR us
SUDDENLY (check ur spelling)
i FELT (not felled)
i felt A GREAT SURGE OF PAIN COMMING from my right arm
MY ARM HAS FRACTURED
i begun to CRY
CALLED my parents while they comforted me
去掉"very" ,just great courage
People's Hospital 大写
remember it forever..倒过来 =]

Despite months of anticipation, nothing could have prepared me for the impact of the actual day. Tears welled up uncontrollably in my eyes when I slowly stepped into my Alma Mater on high school graduation day.
This was not what I had assumed before.
I was over whelmed by a rush of sadness, not excitement. Perhaps this day was the last time I saw my old school, which had been my devoted companion for three years.
I looked around, attempting to carry everything into my mind.
The quiet trail, decorated with spotted sunlight shadows casting through the spaces between the leaves, the refreshing sweet diffused in the air, the brilliant flowers, the chirping crickets, and the vivid green grass! All the things I will miss!
As if in a daze, I received my diploma from the headmaster.As I reached out my hand, I knew that I was reaching not just for a piece of paper but for a brand new life.
Exciting as the prospect of a new life seemed, it wasn't easy saying goodbye to the old one, the familiar faces, the familiar routine. I would even miss that mathematics class I wasn't particularly fond of and the long commute each day that I abhorred. Good or bad, it was what I knew. There had been sunshines and rains, laughers and tears, and they still existed in every corner I could see. From that day on, I became a grown up, with all the bitter and sweet memories behind.

My Most Memorable Examination
Recently,we have experienced the Month Examination.although I passed the exam,the marks was not good enough.The mark of Chinese is 104,but maths' is 96……

feature可以指面貌的一部分特征
他的十分有特点的尖尖的下巴是最难忘的面部特征

最让我难忘和最佳经验将留在我的脑海里多年的到来。对于大多数人来说，马都只是动物，应该只用于赛车，为了钱。自从我只有几年的历史，马一直是我的激情（酷爱之物）。我的梦想是骑一匹马。当那个时候我附近焦急的小生命终于来了，我的心脏跳动一千倍一分钟。
马上我以为我可以骑这匹马。我把其他的方式，去寻找我的妈妈得到一些钱。我看见她买杂货和带领她到马了。主人回来了，并说这是他的马，我不能骑它。眼泪（眼泪）热烈流淹没了我的脸颊我妈妈试图询问该男子，让我骑的马。他终于同意了高昂的代价。他教我如何获得马和向我解释说，保持脚跟下来，手臂稳定是非常重要的。马的小跑的节奏（小跑）唤醒所有感官的我，我知道我当时在乌克兰最幸福的小女孩。我开始计划我是如何打算买一匹马后，我成了百万富翁。之前我就知道了，骑了过来。出人意料的是，我居然学会了控制马。

First time participates recites the competition.The impression is profound.

As I was 5 years old的As用When是不是更加连通一些
,my family lived in a factory in which my mother worked中的in which 可以用where代替
My father taught in another town where not far away forms us.中的far away 词组用错可以删去away,另外forms拼错,froms.
Father came back home every week中的home可删
I can remember one of my friends who call Jane.中的call改为called
Because of Jane had got a poliomyelitis her intelligence like 5 years old although she has 18 years old.语序应调换
Nobody likes to play with Jane but me.中的but应该用except
We play happily until that accidence happened.Everything had changed.时态用错,主句应用过去式.
It was a quite morning that just only server workers to prepared their breakfast.中的only server workers to prepared their breakfast.应表伴随用过去进行时
实在对不起因为有事没有看完,希望能给你些帮助

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you can talk about spring festival, take on new clothes,parents will give you pocket money, play fire work and so on. depand you mind, I think this topic is easy to speak!

上海的目标是,举办一届成功的、盛大的、令人难忘的世博会

毕业的日子一定是值的记忆的日子

天呐 是我英语差还是什么啊 怎么感觉好多语法错误啊
A memorable event in my life
There are many memorable events in my life,but only one thing give me deep memory.As a child,I was so naughty that I often got into trouble.The thing happened when I was six-year- old.One day,I went to my grandpas’ home,but there was no adults at home,only my two brothers,we were as naturaly as to play together.It was a very hot summer,so we began to play with water to let ourselves be feeling nice and cool.We climbed up the windowsill; the windowsill was too small to us,sulldenly I felled down the windowsill.We were all stupefied.At that time,I felled a hugely painfully comeing from my right arm.I know my arm was fracture,so I began to cry.My brothers called my parents while comforting me.I was very afraid,they had given me very great courage.They didn’t leave me until my father came back.They took me to the No.4 people’s hospital.Though it has passed 16 years,I’ll remember it forever.不知道对不对啊

四月十二日是值得纪念的的日子.因为在这一天我们班举行一次有意义的活动.上午我们骑车到郊区植树,一路上我们又说又笑.一到那里 我们马上开始干活,有的挖坑,有的搬树种树,有的浇水.活干完后,我们树了一个牌子 提醒人们保护树木.在离开之前,我们拍了一些照片 记录下我们的绿色行动.看着一行行的树木,我们都很有成就感.我们觉得保护和美化我们的环境是我们的职责.

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The moment that I will never forget
Do you have any unforgettable moment in your life? Most of your answers must be “Yes”! Here I’d like to share a story between my father and I. It has changed my view on father’s love. I still cannot forget the moment until now. The story happened in an evening in summer when I was about 9 years old.
I had been engaged in doing the homework since I went back home in the afternoon. When I was going to write the composition, only to find the exercise book had been used up. I went to panic for the teacher was very strict and required us to hand in the composition the next morning. Looking through the window, I saw my father doing the cleaning in the yard. I was about to call him to buy me an exercise book, but I held back, because it was getting dark and I knew father was extremely exhausted after a day’s hard work. But what should I do? I had no idea.
A moment later, father came into my room as usual and asked whether I had finished my homework. I said nothing but the using up of the composition exercise book; however, I did not ask father to buy it for me. Then I continued doing the homework without paying attention to what father was going to do. It was suppertime when my mother asked my father and I to enjoy the meal. However, there was no response from my father. None of us knew where father was. We were all confused and had no idea why he was out: it was dark and raining outside. It suddenly occurred to me that he might go to the shop to buy the exercise book for me. I stood at the door and waited.
Some minutes later, I saw father running back in the rain without an umbrella. Before I could ask where he had been, he gave me a new exercise book. I was so surprised and moved that I could not say even a word, just looking at the raindrop dripping from his hair and imagining how he protected the exercise book from being wet.
After dinner, I went to write the composition. I wrote the title “My Great Father” carefully and sincerely in the exercise book. Later, the composition got high marks and was read in front of the class. Until now I still cannot forget the moment that I received the exercise book from my father’s hand.
It is not just an exercise book but his
for me. I used to think my father was careless and did not
me enough. However, my thought has changed since then. In my eyes, he is a careful, considerate and great father!

原文：Astronaut Jim Voss has enjoyed many memorable moments in his career,including three space flights and one space walk.But he recalls with special fondness a decidedly earthbound(为地球引力所束缚的) experience in the summer of 1980 when he participated in the NASA ASEE Summer Faculty Fellowship Program.Voss,then a science teacher at West Point,was assigned to the Marshall Space Flight Center's propulsion lab in Alabama to analyze why a hydraulic fuel pump seal on the space shuttle was working so well when previous seals had failed.It was a seemingly tiny problem among the vast complexities of running the space program.Yet it was important to NASA because any crack in the seal could have led to destructive results for the astronauts who relied on them.
“I worked a bit with NASA engineers,” says Voss,“but I did it mostly by analysis.I used a handheld calculator,not a computer,to do a thermodynamic(热力学的) analysis.” At the end of the summer,he,like the other NASA ASEE fellows working at Marshall,summarized his findings in a formal presentation and detailed paper.It was a valuable moment for Voss because the ASEE program gave him added understanding of NASA,deepened his desire to fly in space,and intensified his application for astronaut status.
It was not an easy process.Voss was actually passed over when he first applied for the astronaut program in 1978.Over the next nine years he reapplied repeatedly,and was finally accepted in 1987.Since then he has participated in three space missions.The 50-year-old Army officer,who lives in Houston,is now in training for a four-month mission as a crew member on the International Space 原文：Station starting in July 2000.
Voss says the ASEE program is wonderful for all involved.“It brings in people from the academic world and gives NASA a special property for a particular period of time.It brings some fresh eyes and fresh ideas to NASA,and establishes a link with our colleges and universities,” Voss explains.“There's an exchange of information and an exchange of perspectives that is very important.”
For the academic side,Voss says,the ASEE program also “brings institutions of higher learning more insight into new technology.We give them an opportunity to work on real world problems and take it back to the classroom.”
译文：宇航员吉姆沃斯有着许多难忘的瞬间在他的职业生涯,其中包括3名航天飞行和一个太空行走.但他特别喜欢回忆决定性太阳系（为地球引力所束缚的）的经验,1980年夏天,他参加了美国航天局ASEE夏季学院奖学金计划.沃斯,然后一位理科教师在西点军校,被分配到的马歇尔航天飞行中心的推进实验室在阿拉巴马州,分析为什么液压油泵密封在航天飞机上的工作如此出色时,没有以前的印章.这是一个看似微小的问题之间的巨大复杂性,运行的航天计划.然而,重要的是美国航天局,因为任何裂纹的印章可能导致破坏性的结果,宇航员谁依赖于他们.
“我有点与美国航天局的工程师说,”象“ ,但我做到了主要由分析.我用一个手持计算器,没有一台电脑,做热力学（热力学的）的分析.“结束时的夏天,他像其他美国宇航局ASEE研究员马歇尔工作,总结他的调查结果在正式专题介绍和详细的文件.这是一个宝贵的时刻沃斯因为ASEE计划让他了解美国航天局说,加深他希望台飞行在太空中,并加强了申请宇航员地位.
这是不是一个容易的过程.沃斯实际上越过当他第一次用于宇航员计划于1978年.在今后9年来,他重新反复,并终于在1987年接受.自那以后,他参加了三次太空飞行任务.50岁的陆军军官,谁住在休斯顿,现已培训了4个月任务的机组成员在国际空间站上开始于2000年7月.
沃斯说,ASEE计划是美好的所有有关各方.“它使人们从学术的世界,使美国航天局的一个特殊财产为特定的时间内.它带来了一些新鲜的眼睛和新鲜的想法,美国航天局,并建立了联系与我们的高校,“沃斯说.“这里存在一个交流信息和交换观点,是非常重要的.”
学术方面,沃斯说,ASEE计划还“带来了高等教育机构更深入地了解新技术.我们给他们一个机会,工作的现实世界的问题,是否可以回到课堂.“

上面的翻译从题目到最后全错了...在线翻译害死人啊...
我重新翻了一下,可能比较口语化一点,但是对这个中文篇已经绰绰有余了.是小学生作文吗?
The most memorable person
I think the most memorable person of my life should be someone who trades me best or worst, otherwise it will be someone did something that you could never think about.
My most memorable person is my grandpa. In my memory, he was not tall, and he had white hairs on his head, his face covered with wrinkles. Grandpa was a tough old man, but his hobbies is collecting ragged which is every family member hated. He went out in the morning, always came back with bunch of ragged which are all his precious. He told me that is not good to waste. Grandpa was a kindly man; he took the completely good stuff from home and gave them to junkman and beggars, but he used the stuff which already broken. “It’s not stupid to be stuffer looses, it’s actually gain extra advantage”, he always said so. I was thinking how dump is he, but I can understand the meaning more and more with my age and experience growth. Grandpa already left us for many years, but every time when someone mentions him, they said that he was a great man.
Grandpa, I miss you. How have you been in heaven?