TheUglyDuckling(3) 作文

The Ugly Duckling stretched his wings and found that they were strong enough to carry him.He flew upon and over the lake,high above the trees and fields.He should have been very happy,but he was not because he felt so lonely.A few days later,he looked up to see the large white birds he had seen in the autumn.They looked beautiful as they landed on the lake.They Ugly Duckling admired their white feather and long necks.He swam over to take a closer look at them.)The Ugly Duckling(shyly):"Please,will you tell me who you are?You are so beautiful and I am so ugly.I've never seem anybody like you."One of the swans:"Ugly?How silly!"Another swan:"We're swans.why do you think you're ugly?Look at yourself in the water."未完待续……

The ugly duckling became a beautiful swan

为什么丑小鸭不希望和他们呆在一起?

a wolf in sheep's clothing 披着羊皮的狼 ugly duckling has grown into a swan 丑小鸭变成了美丽的天鹅

丑小鸭
丑小鸭别悲伤
呷呷 呷呷 呷呷
开心点 开心点 开心点
湖中游着美丽的鸟儿
等你醒来也会变得美丽
不押韵,大体意思是这样的

Hen:"Oh,you're still there I thought you'd be on the pond by now."Mother Duck:"It's this last egg,it hasn't come out yet."Hen:"Let me see,well no wender.It looks like a goose egg to me.You'll be here for a long time."Mother Duck:"Oh dear,I have my five little ducklings to teach to swim.What shall I do?I can't leave it."Hen:"Aah well,I'll go to well Goose Mother."(The hen went off.Goose Mother hrard that one of her eggs was in Mother Duck's nest.Goose Mother walked up to the nest.)Goose Mother:"Is it true?Do you have one of my eggs?"Mother Duck:"I think so."(They both looked in the nest.)Goose Mother:"Huh,that's not mine.It looks more like a turkey's egg."未完待续……

低 阿个哩 哒可领
di agli dakling
元音字母前the要读di

意思是废话连篇
同样意思的短语还有talk the hind leg off a donkey

不对.应该是 I am an ugly duck.

Mother duckling feeds worms to her babies.

应该是填一个f,也就是of这个单词.
是用了名词所有格,没生命的用of.

需要翻译吗

What did the ugly duckling become

把is改为isn't

...原来是要看语法...翻译了半天...
有不少错误啊~不过为了尊重你原本的意思,我没给你改内容,只是纠正语法和逻辑错误哦
还有,感觉那位把你的文章删的好狠...总之语法就这样差不多啦~
1.Local dog attacked the duckling,Little girl brokenhearted
local和little前都应该加冠词a,duckling前也应加a而不是the,brokenhearted是形容词,前面应该有was.
2.A duckling was attacked by a local dog Jackie and died very soon after.This ducking belongs to a local girl called Adeline
jackie前应该加一个named,而且这句话太罗嗦,改成定语从句吧,A duckling which belonged to a local girl called Adeline was attacked by a local dog named Jackie.
3.she loves the duckling so much that she had spend most of her time with the duckling
had去掉,这只是在叙述过去的事,不要用过去完成时.整篇文章是过去时,loves和belongs好像不对.
4.therefore she named the duckling PLT stand for precious little treasure.
stand改成standing,是非谓语动词
5.Unfortunately the duckling was killed by dog Jackie
dog前加THE,JACKIE去掉
6.But that’s not all; Adeline’s father caused PLT’s death because he wants to test dogs obedient.
这句话表达的不对,最好改成The reason for PLT'death was that Adeline's father just wanted to test the dog's obedient.
7.After the innocent duckling had been killed,little girl Adeline was brokenhearted.She helped PLT to hold a funeral with her third brother Gregory.
innocent换成poor,little girl去掉,后面改成Adeline was brokenhearted and hold a funeral for PLT with her third brother Gregory.
8.From this event,we have carried on a series of investigations on 20 pedestrians
have去掉.
9.96% of pedestrians say that it is fathers fault,he should know want is going to happen before he act it,and he should cares about Adeline’s felling.
改成that Adeline'father was erring because he should think what would happen before he did it and he should cared about Adeline's feeling.
10.because this is such a giant hit for a kid like Adeline’s age
like改成in.
11.and if it’s an animal that’s wake then they own from the external,they will try to attack or demo the animal to show their status.
把and去掉,其实你这句话的意思我不太明白诶~逻辑有点混乱啊,告诉我你想表达什么,我再帮你改吧.
12.From this event we also had an interview with third brother Gregory
third brother去掉,有点罗嗦
13.because he attended PLT’s funeral.
这句与前一句不构成因果啦,去掉because
14.He mentioned sympathy with Adeline,she cried so hard during the funeral.
这句与上一句一起改成He attended PLT's funeral and expressed sympathy to Adeline because she cried so hard during the funeral.
15.And he thinks a part form that is him faults,because he accidentally picked PLT out of seven ducklings.
最好改成Gregory thought that he also had fault because it was he who accidentally picked PLT out of seven ducklings.用一个强调句~

在丑小鸭里面,每个人都取笑的角色其实是有内秀的.
请及时采纳,多谢!

The ugiy duckling turns into a white swan
The ugiy duckling transforms into a white swan

l don,t no

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"The Ugly Duckling" is a fairy tale by Danish poet,playwright,travel writer,short story writer,and novelist Hans Christian Andersen .The tale was first published November 11,1843.
"The Ugly Duckling" tells the story of a duckling ostracized by his fellow barnyard fowl because of his awkward homeliness.To his delight ,he matures into a graceful swan,the most beautiful bird of all.With "Thumbelina" and other tales,"The Ugly Duckling" demonstrates Andersen's indentification with,and his sympathies for,the 'outsider' searching for his or her place in society.
The tale is one of Andersen's most popular.It is regularly included in selected tales collections of his works and is published time and again in illustrated storybook editions for children.The phrase,"ugly duckling",has entered several languages.The tale has seen animated film and other media adaptations.Late in life,Andersen was asked if he would write his autobiography.He responded,"I have.It's called,"The Ugly Duckling.""

(How) (is) the duckling.(你觉得）这只鸭子怎么样?

丑小鸭

“嘎嘎!”鸭子们叫道.他们奋力叫着,在绿叶丛中四处观望,妈妈允许他们恣意环顾,因为绿色对眼睛好.“这个世界到底有多大!”年轻的小鸭子们问道,因为现在可比他们在蛋壳里有更多的活动空间了.“你们认为这就是整个世界么?”妈妈说道,“到花园的另一端还有好长的一段距离,一直通向人们的田地,但我还从来没到过那么远!现在我想知道所有小鸭子们到在这了么?”她站了起来,“哦不!我发现你们不是都在这儿了,最大的那只蛋还在那里呢,他还要多久才能孵化出来?”

1Where
Where was the picture?

The ugly duckling(Long long ago,in a farmyard,a Mother Duck sat on her nest.She was waiting for her eggs to become little ducklings.There were six eggs,so she would have six little ducklings to teach to swim.One sunny spring morning,the first egg began to crack."Tap,tap,tap."Went the little duckling inside,trying to get out.Mother Duck watched as the egg cracked open and and out came a fluffy duckling.)Mother Duck (proudly):"One".(The nest day,the second egg cracked and out came another fluffy duckling.)Mother Duck(proudly):"Two."(On the third day,duckling number therr came out.)Mother Duck:"That leaves three."(On the fourth and fifth day,ducklings number four and five hatched.)Mother Duck:"That leaves one."(She had to sit on her nest when her ducklings gathered around her.But on the sixth day nothing happened.on the seventh day)Mother Duck:"How strange,it should have come out by now."(One of the farmyard hen walked by.)未完待续……

does.把它化为陈述句可知为 The duckling has how many legs.所以此句的主语为the duckling为单数 所以用does