提点建议:小学四年级英语应该怎么复习呢?

诗歌怎么停顿
因为学校有朗诵比赛,所以求大家提点建议, 像在哪停顿,以什么感情,语气去读,. 谢谢了 乡愁 席慕蓉 （女） 故乡的歌是一支清远的笛总在有月亮的晚上响起故乡的面貌却是一种模糊的怅惘仿佛雾里的挥手别离离别后乡愁是一棵没有年轮的树永不老去 一片槐树叶 纪弦 （男女） 这是全世界最美的一片, 最珍奇,最可宝贵的一片, 而又是最使人伤心,最使人流泪的一片, 薄薄的,干的,浅灰黄色的槐树叶. 忘了是在江南,江北, 是在哪一个城市,哪一个园子里捡来的了, 被夹在一册古老的诗集里, 多年来,竟没有些微的损坏. 蝉翼般轻轻滑落的槐树叶, 细看时,还沾着些故国的泥土啊. 故国哟,啊啊,要等到何年何月何日 才能让我回到你的怀抱里 去享受一个世界上最愉快的 飘着淡淡的槐花香的季节?. 望故乡 于任右 （男） 葬我于高山之上兮,望我***；***不可见兮,只有痛哭. 葬我于高山之上兮,望我故乡；故乡不可见兮,永不能忘. 天苍苍,野茫茫,山之上,国有殇 乡愁 余光中 （合） 小时候乡愁是一枚小小的邮票我在这头母亲在那头长大后乡愁是一张窄窄的船票我在这头新娘在那头后来啊乡愁是一方矮矮的坟墓我在外头母亲在里头而现在乡愁是一湾浅浅的海峡我在这头***在那头

给文章修改,提点意见(300字英文)
Economy is considered as an important criterion to a country’s success.But others think there are still other factors that can measure a country’s success.What do you think are other factors?Which is more important than economy?
With the amazing acceleration of industrialization and prosperity of economy,the positions of many countries stretch from the well-being society to more developed period that it is never undergone.Some economy experts contend that economy is considered as a crucial aspect to determine country’s success.Quite a few other scientists argued that there are many other areas that can identify whether a country’s success.The purpose of this essay is to explore the factors which will influence a country’s success and present my own opinion about which factor is most important.
First and foremost,the majority of educators believe that the quality of education system is one of the factors to influence country’s success.Generally speaking,it is no denying that the power of knowledge is a precondition of country’s success.This is because that professional technique in all-round aspects can be improved by the advanced knowledge.Internet,for instance,can encourage the world communication and international trade,which will increase the country’s economy.Therefore,it can be concluded that education can be considered as a significant factors to determine a country’s success.
Another important aspect to maintain a country’s success is healthcare system.It is universally acknowledged that most people will prefer to consider a good healthcare as a principle of country’s success that will stabilize their life rather than a country’s economy.To be specific,both infant death rate and average lifespan can represent the situation in a country whether success or not.Obama,for example,persuade the congress to pass the healthcare protocol,which will change the detrimental atmosphere that a wealth of US citizens cannot afford the basic healthcare.Hence,it can be concluded that a good healthcare system can determined a successful country.
To sum up,in spite of the fact that both economy and healthcare system are the crucial factor for a successful country,the quality of education system is predominant factor among those three aspects.So,in my own view,improving education system and narrow the gap of education quality between urban and rural areas are the first step to be a successful country.

设计师提点是什么意思,类似于一个提点两个提点三个提点?能给我举个例子说明一下吗
例如有10000怎么分

大家看看我这句英文,提点建议啊,我写作文呢...
With the development of medical science,advanced skill could save more people than before.
这句话有语病么?怎么写更好呢?

对我作文的开头提点意见~可以对不好的语句进行修改
雨,是一位女性.在春天,她是一位婀娜多姿的少女.在夏天,她是娇艳美丽的淑女,在秋天,她是性格刚烈的大嫂.在冬天,她是步履蹒跚的老婆婆.然而,我最喜欢的,还是秋雨.
秋雨的来到,让人们感到愉快.因为,秋雨的来到,象征着丰收,人们在喜悦的同时,忽略了她本存的温柔.谁能想到,性格刚烈秋雨曾是那么婀娜多姿与娇艳美丽呢?在惊奇中,我不得不承认,秋雨也有过温柔,毕竟,野百合也有自己的春天呢!

关于平面向量的问题
最近学了平面向量,没有听懂,作图什么的都不会,有什么诀窍啊?也给我提点建议,拜托各位啦!另外我想问一下,平面向量在高中数学中重要吗?初中所学的平面向量的知识在高中派多少用处?

英语自我介绍演讲稿,提点建议!
Hello,erevyone.My name is XXX,and my English name is Helen.I'm 11,in Grade 6.I can play the piano and draw picture.
In my free time,I like reading books.books are very interesting and useful.You can know lots of things in books.They can bring happy or sad to you.So this is why I like reading books.And then,I like walking.Because it can make me healthy and strong.And it isn't like running so tired.I think walk is the best of sports.
This is me.Do you remember me?

有个严肃认真的问题想问你们呢 你们认为历史课应该怎么上才会有意思呢 给历史课提点建议吧 请各位各抒己见 认真想想再回答我 说出你们的想法吧!越多越好 我要认真思考过的回答 最高可以加200分!
你认为一堂好的历史课应该是怎么样的?

科学关于地壳运动的,只是我有点混淆,麻烦知道的提点一下,急
地壳变动的上升下降 水平岩层在内力的作用下,或发生弯曲,或引发断裂,这是地球上山脉和谷底形成的最重要原因 地震是地壳岩石在地球内力的作用下,发生断裂或错位而引起震动的现象 三者讲的都是同一个吗?

帮忙看看英语作文,提点建议,就当作改错题.
in the Beijing Olympic games,Liuxiang had quited his race.that makes people in china astonished.there is an investigate that how did people think of that.first,34 percent of the people considered a athlete should finish the race even though he had got injured and about 20 percent of them think healthy is much important than the medal,however,he can take part in the Olympics 4 years later when he is fully recovered.

现实生活中算数应用题.
我是店长,老板规定我拿底薪3200,提成则是店里每个营业员的平均提成数的1.5倍.营业员的提点是1%.营业员分成两班每班4人,4人均分此班提成.本月销售额为400000.最后请问下我拿多少钱工资.轻列出来公式.或分式逐个说明.

顺便提点写作上的意见
似水流年
流年似水
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―题记
大约在一个清晨,大地笼罩在隐隐约约的晨雾里,叶子上凝成一层薄薄的水珠,当一颗颗细小的水珠凝在一起小草也被压弯了腰,水珠顺着小草的纹路轻轻巧巧的滑下,平静的湖面,“叮”的一声,一圈圈漪纶在湖面荡漾开来,我很喜欢这种感觉：清脆而愉快.记得《认真的雪》中有过这种声音,所以很是喜欢,我喜欢水,是一滴水,是一滴水发出的声音.我想这就是水在生活中给我带来的亲切!
我们公司宿舍楼下,有一小池子,池子是一个不怎么规则的半圆,池子里有假山.水藤.金鱼.假山上缠满了水藤,水永无止境的从假山“溪溪啦啦”的流下来.偶尔一阵风过,吹起几个小水泡,在阳光照射下格外灿烂,手指轻轻一碰,便破了!鱼儿此刻正享受着这份安宁,甩着鱼尾安然的泳戈着；随手捡起一块石头扔进池子里“咕咚”顿时水花四溅,惊的鱼儿四下躲藏,不一会,又恢复宁静!
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漆黑的夜晚里仰望星空,沉思着：时间不等人,悄悄一年已经过去,脚步突然停下过去回望,心情也好像开始沉重了.
记得,《蜗居》里面海藻跟海萍在亭子里避雨的对话：
在喧嚣的街道上,其实我们都不用走,那个人流就推着我们向前走,我不走都不行,想停下都不行.我当时就笑了,我说这就是我们的生活,来不及细想,没有决断,就这样懵懵懂懂地被人推着往前走.而我青春年少时候的理想上哪去了!我的理想,就被这匆匆的人流推得无影无踪.是啊,我曾经的坚持,内心的原则和我少年的立志,被家庭,被工作,被房子,被现象生活磨砺得不剩些许.太多的无奈!而不是伤感!
后记：灰白交错的地板,记载着我们的梦.至今虽一事无成,但每天奋斗刷新着新的成绩!这座城市有我们共同的理想,打拼之余给我们奋斗的力量!我相信目标会在未来的道路上等着我的拥抱!总有天会等到好天气!

要写一篇英语作文是一个学生不擅长与人交流所以没朋友给他提点建议,要3条还要写出做了以后的好处（用英语
只要把建议学出来就行了不用写开头和结尾

给关于生命的作文起个题目
参赛作文,主题是"生命,永恒的乐章",给我起个题目就行了,或者提点建议,从哪个方面入手,别给我范文.

看不懂英文版《永别了武器》英语学习高手给我提点建议怎么在9月1日前把这本书读完
这是假期作业,必须完成,还要写读后感,查字典不现实,不认识的词实在太多,求英语学习高手给我提点建议.怎么在9月1日前把这本书读完

帮忙改一下这篇sat作文.提点意见.
Assignment:Are all important discoveries the results of focusing on one subjuct?
I think all important discoveries are the results of focusing on one subject.To find a truth or invent something needs a person to be hard-working、patience、and accumulate enough knowledge.Even the discoveries that seem to be discovered by fortune are also the results of concentration.Only when a person knows the knowledge about the aspect can he or she be lucky enough to find it.Truth is prepared for the one who is focusing on it.Throughout history,many famous people set the examples of the importance of concentration.
Thomas Edition,the famous inventor in America,invented over a thousand things during his life.The light bulb was brought out by him to light up the whole world.However,brfore it was invented,he had tried over a thousand experiments.Locking himself in the small lab,he spent all his day searching for the proper materials for the bulb.Failure followed him again and again,but he never gave up.Day by day,his concentration on his experiments finally earned him a great invention,and he has become"the father of invention"ever since.
Another example is LiShizhen,a famous Chinese medicine doctor in ancient China.His medicine book is a monument in Chinese medicine.But few people will think of his hard time in finishing the book.He had spent over 40 years before it was finished.In order to explain every Chinese herbs properly and clearly,he went to the mountain every day to pick up some kinds of herbs to study.How much patience and concentration he needed!40 years is really a long time for a person,it means that he spent almost all his life concentrating on the Chinese medicine and finally made a great contribution to it.
Concentration is the fundamental element of success.All important discoveries are the results of concentration.Through the discovering period,you should pay all your attention to the problem.Then finally the discovery would come along to you.

关于道家思想的哲学论文
希望大家提点建议 该从哪个角度去切入 总感觉单纯论述的话太老套了点 千篇一律 希望能写出点新的时代下的东西

根据材料写作文,以下的材料谁能给提点提点,点拨下!3Q
一天,我收到一封邮件,上面写道：“有一种成功叫撤退,有一种失败叫占领.”并且强调：这是《潜伏》里的台词,用来指导炒股真合适.我一直属于占领者,”看着他的文字,我想,生活中有些事情也是如此.

高中函数,速度来,有绝对值,都来看看,提点思路
f（x）=x|x-a|+2x-3
求a的取值范围,使得函数y=f(x)在R上恒为增函数
我就这么困扰着

有句是内容大概是沧海桑田,朝代更替,但不变的是与古人共赏一轮明月.记得不是很准.记得不是很清晰,各位方家有知道的给提点一下.

对我作文的开头提点意见~可以对不好的语句进行修改（完结篇）
雨
雨,是一位女性.在春天,她是一位婀娜多姿的少女.在夏天,她是娇艳美丽的淑女,在秋天,她是性格刚烈的大嫂.在冬天,她是步履蹒跚的老婆婆……
然而,我最喜欢的,还是秋雨.
如果春雨是小楼一夜听春雨,深巷明朝卖杏花,那么秋雨就是自古逢秋悲寂寥,我言秋日胜春朝.因为,秋雨是不张扬的.
秋雨的来到,让人们感到愉快.因为,秋雨的来到,象征着丰收,人们在喜悦的同时,忽略了她本存的温柔.谁能想到,性格刚烈秋雨曾是那么婀娜多姿与娇艳美丽呢?在惊奇中,我不得不承认,秋雨也有过温柔,毕竟,野百合也有自己的春天呢!
入秋的午后,在窗边,泡一杯茶,坐在窗边,用心去体会秋雨的声音.听,沙沙的声响是秋雨在跳舞,她在用那优美的舞姿去唤醒人们对秋的喜悦.听,那嗒嗒的声响是秋在唱歌,她在用美妙的歌喉向人们问好.听,刷刷的声响是秋雨在笑,因为她看到了秋天丰收的景象.
秋雨说：“看一看我的形体吧!像一把利剑,像一朵花针,像一根丝线,像一缕轻纱,敲击着你的窗口,落下来,由丝化成滴,由滴变成串轻轻滑下,我跳舞,飞窜,再消失.
“悟一悟我秋雨的心灵吧!旱地时,我愿润土,为人们换来丰收,也许是我太性急,总在某处轰轰烈烈的下雨,再轰轰烈烈的去另一地下雨.所以,人们在赞美雨时,从不曾想到我,我默默接受这份冷落,继续我的 轰轰烈烈.”
“我,秋雨儿,浸润了大地,浇灌了心田,在人文岁月变迁的日子里,轰轰烈烈地走来,却不曾回首,人们是否读懂了我——秋雨的心曲?,那人们不曾了解的温柔”
我喜爱秋雨,正是因为她不张扬,从不刻意演示自己,尽管她性格有点刚烈,但她显得那么的独特,那么的独一无二,让人喜爱……

一篇以师恩为主题写中学老师600字作文体裁诗歌除外,能否提点意见怎么写
因为才相处了几天

碳酸镁与碳酸钠
碳酸镁沉淀中加碳酸钠溶液后沉淀会溶解,原理是什么?请写下反应方程式,最好能加上解释
为啥没人回答,提点想法,一起探讨…