挑错 以下句子都有错误,1 Bob have a black jacket.2 This is a orange.3 W

连接词while解释为（当.时）,引导的是时间状语从句,当它引导时间状语从句,且这个从句的主语后面是be动词中的一中,可以将该从句的主语和be动词的一种集体省略.
所以这个状语省略了 he is .即：while he is contributing to the success of his teammates
当他对队友的成功作出贡献的同时.
希望能帮到您.

前面说多个中的一个,所以library 应该变为libraries .among 在……中〔三者或以上〕,正确.complete 〈我查了一下〉有形容词的意思,完备的.

y bike
不加介词
或者on her bike
都是固定用法

1.(As)We all know
2.There are 1.3 billion
3.harding(hard)-working people(去掉people）
4.what'more(what's)
5.China have (has)
7.olympic game (games)

put这里是put的过去式,put-put-put,注意时态是过去的,puts就是现在时了,跟句子后面那个was也矛盾了

First I think copying others' homework isn't right.I know the teachers ask us to do （a lot of) homework and the homework is difficult .The most (important thing) is (that) many student(s) (aren't) interested in studying and they are lazy .But they must finish their homework,because they want to make the teachers happy .
In my opinion,I think they break the school rules.we should be honest and study hard .As a student ,we should try our best to study .when
we have (difficulties) ,we can ask our teachers and classmates (for) help.
This is my opinion (on) the problem.
括号里是修改后的部分

应将twelve改成twelfth

1.Hiking is fun and exciting,but don't neglect safety.(这边说你别忽略安全比较好)
2.Rafting is a good way to experience nature.对
3.Looking up at the giant's head and down at the giant's feet makes you feel so small.（这句话意思好奇怪,是不是说在巨人脚下看啊,巨人是giant）
4.To know them will help you have a good impression of them.(这里knowing不常说,have a good impression of 对……有好的印象)
5.having good table-manners means sensible.(这里意思是不是：好的餐桌礼仪意味着懂事?)

My good friend
Hello!My name is Nancy.I have so many friends.But I think Mary is my best friend.She always plays with me.We always take a phone.I like my good friends very much,and my friends like me very much!

1.It has been held for five years.start 不能接时间段
2,And we also talked about something that we were interested in.---- are->过去时
3.We exchanged the experiences of learinging English from each other
experience 应为复数,互相学习,learn English from each other,
4.I have learned a lot in this activity.---learn 接的词一般是不可数名词,学到了很多用learn a lot.
5.I think that it’s helpful for me to study English---对我来说,用for,而不是to ,另外,学习英语一般用learn English.

And animals can get good care of people.of 改成 from
语法错误还好,单句太多,建议改成复句.

1.blew --blue
2.watter--water
3.astranaut---astronauts
4.lite---light

对自己要有信心,你写的这一段在我见过的很多作文里算水准相当高的了,严格意义上你这段话一个语法错误也没有,但是句子之间不够连贯,个别词组也可以改进.以下为建议：
1.Maybe you think that is not large number.(只用一个that太vague了,而且句子可改成You may think that is not a large number以突出第二人称的口气）
2.在during the next hour前面加上“However,consider this,"
3.So it goes on的so删掉,逗号保留.
4.people have to改为"people would have to"
5.find food for over 250,000 mouths more改为 "find food to feed another 250,000 mouths".
6.倒数第二句改为Just think how many more people there will be within a year!

C++中,引用变量之前必须对其初始化,看了你这段代码,发现你的变量r在for循环判断之前并没有初始化而直接对其判断是否为0,这是一种错误的引用.而且对於输入的两个数m、n,在处理的时候最好不要改变它们本身的值,而将其拷贝给另外俩个变量（自己重新声明两个变量）,这是一种很好的编程习惯.

1.They are trying to rely on themselves, that's good.
他们正学者依靠自己,这样很好（rely on)
2.The scientists are trying to find the disconnected satellite
科学家正努力追踪失去联系的人造卫星
3.I made my way inside the crowd to buy two tickets.
我好不容易挤进人群,买回两张票（make one's way)
4.I some way, it is well done.
从某种程度来说,这个工作做的很好（in a way)

括号里的是修改后的词,有些是替换前面的一个词,有些是补充的
I met my wife totally by accident, but I fell in love with her at the first sight.
It was a delightful winter night, no cold wind and （and 改为or） the bothersome noise, that （that 改为 when）I decided to hang out to relax my poor nerves tightened by those work affairs for a long time.
Staring on（on 改为at） my shadow under （the） street lamps which turned （from） long and （and 改为 to）short, I could even hear the shadow’s cheers（建议用cheers of shadow 代替 shadow’s cheers） for such a cheerful break from the heavy work. “Oh, it must have shortened my lifetime.” Thinking of the work, I complained.
“Don’t worry, you will live long.” A woman’s voice came to me suddenly.
I turned around straightway, and there was a tall girl dressed in white standing right by me. Her hair waterfall( 如果不是确定有你这个表达的话建议换下顺序改为waterfall hair) against the light-coloured skin hangs down and her attractive eyes catched my attention.
“I’m Xie Bi-an and would you do me a favour?” she said.
“Of course. What is it?”
“I get lost with my brother, who is a little short with dark skin. Could you help me look for(to find) him? You know, I’m somewhat scared in these dark nights.
“Ok,” I smiled, “Is there any other feature about you brother?”
“Huh…he wears a top hat, like this.” She conjured a wired top hat at the same time. I looked at her surprisely, and she just smiled and stuck her tongue. “Such a funny girl.” I thought.
“I even don’t (管用表达是don’t even) know your name.” She said.
“Oh, Xiao Ming… Wow, look there, is he your brother?” I pointed at a man with overhigh hat hitting toward us.
“Terrific. He’s my brother Fan Wu-jiu. I can’t finish my task without him tonight.” She breathed a sigh of relief.
“Your task?”
“Yeah, now I have to (back是副词,搭个动词 go) back to my work.” She shot a glance at her brother and continued, “It is really nice to meet you.”
“Could I see you again?” I liked this girl and blurted out.
“Of course, we must see each other someday. Bye, Xiao Ming.” She waved her hand as she was walking away.
Tomorrow (隔天,是用 the next day), I still thought of the mystical girl while I was passing (by) a neighbor whose family were preparing for a funeral.

1选A,复合词不用复数.
2选C,with 短语只看前.

In recent years, more and more international students come to Australia TO SEEK higher education. However, there are many challenges FOR THOSE STUDENTS especially TO ADJUST to a new academic culture. This essay will talk about three main DIFFERENT AREAS FROM style, assessment system TO educational background then some advice to help those students overcome the difficulties.
One of the main problems for international student is about the thinking style. THAT a Japanese student who studied well in Tokyo but failed in his essay in Australia can be taken as a good example. The teacher wanted students to compare and analyseS the similarities and differences between two person’s views. Unfortunately, although the Japanese student introduced lots of details about their background and personal life, his summary was so brief that there WAs no comment in his essay. (Ballard & Clanchy 1984). It is clear that the Japanese student still insisted IN writing IN his old thinking style. Therefore, the essay without critical thinking was not acceptable. According to his situation, some methods should be taken to solve this problem. Firstly, the international students should make an effort to adjust to the new academic culture. Secondly, students have to change their thinking style to consider more about new situation and new culture style. Finally, seeking help from teachers is the most significant way to get higher scores and overcome the problems.
The different assessment system can cause a lot of problems for international students. Assessment grades is a good example; the assessment grades here include 4 levels; Pass, Credit, Distinction and High Distinction. Many international students feel disappointed about their first mark, because they were usually get high marks before but only got pass here. So the system of mark in Australia is so tough that some American students were shocked by the marks for their first essay. (White 2003) In addition, some students found it is hard to write their essay. They cannot just follow their teachers’ ideas and must always give references to avoid plagiarism. It is a hard job for some students and if they ignore the importance of reference they will not get a high mark. Now it is clear that nobody can adapt to a new environment perfectly. So asking teachers for help will be the best way to solve the problem and can lead international students into a right way to adapt to the new assessment system. Besides, make sure that you know the requirements about your essays or exams clearly, WHICH can avoid many unnecessary problems.(THIS EXPRESSION IS NOT CLEAR ENOUGH)
Different educational background is another challenge for international students. A student from Sri Lanka told Her experience. According to Ponniahpillai (2000) in her country students have a lot of respect for their teachers and they always keep distance from their teachers. The teachers will call a student if they find some of them have problems. So their learning experience do not encourage them to ask QUESTIONS and most of them never DO IT although they do not understand. This academic habit is not acceptable in Australia for the aim of education here is to develop independent learning skills. So one of the most efficient methods to avoid problems is use library. They search for useful information which will lead international students to be independent. Another way is ‘if in doubt ask’(Ponniahpillai 2000), teachers in Australia talk with students friendly, so do not feel shy BUT talk with them SO THAT the problems can be solved quickly.
In conclusion, it is clear that if international students want to succeed here they must change their thinking style as soon as possible and make sure they know the new assessment system. Moreover, forget their old educational background and enjoy this new academic culture. In addition, remember TO ask for help from the teachers or friends when in doubt and it can help international students solve the difficulties quickly. There will be a promising future for the international students if they can overcome those challenges and difficulties.
不是education background,是study pattern而已拉.

我认为答案是B吧,首先倍数表达中不存在倒装,排除A,既然是倍数+as...as的表达方式就不能再使用than排除掉D和E,为帮助分析句子你把倍数拿掉还剩下.descent were likely to be self-employed正好有sb be likely to do sth表示某人可能做某事（有做某事的倾向）,符合题意,以上是个人观点,供你参考,如我分析的不对,烦请告知

kill time: 打发时间
意思和解闷差不多

……
LZ……
IE题往往会栽在最最简单的问题上
celebrated characteristics of urban life that [were] once
注意,characteristics是复数,of urban life修饰characteristics
况且冒号后面的也不是life的内容
这不像是There be句型,没有就近原则,否则会很没有逻辑.
of的定语从句怎么看,我觉得根据具体情况来比较好.比如例题中,冒号后面说的不是life,而且life也没法说,只能是characteristics
至于LZ提出的四种情况,我认为没有必要阐释清楚.一定要根据具体情况来.比如第二种,which可以去修饰O2,当然,如果仅把of O2看做是对O1修饰,那么很显然是O1
总而言之,出题人不可能让你从两种甚至更多的情况里猜的.一定要阅读上下文,通过修饰的成分来判断它究竟修饰了什么.
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按照2L的说法,难道 ……the number of cats,which love eating fish,which 后面的内容修饰the number,数字?

The writer did not pay attention.
Most students didn't use the book.
I didn't paid attention to it.
Some students thank to the teachers and talk about their dreams.
I could attend the ceremony

Hello,my name is XX ,many people should have known me well. So i don't WANT to EXPRESS myself simply IN A WAY as most people do , but INSTEAD I WANT to say something different
For example, as I said I was an outgoing boy, but many people may not BE ABLE TO understand what i want to express. You are supposed to know i won't hang out unless i am not free . I like hanging out with others .Especially WITH girls, oh , WITH beautiful girls~ So you can call me on Sunday. My phone number is XXXXXXXXXXX, but not only girls can call,boys can do it AS WELL.
Sorry,sorry, IT IS only a joke.
But do you know why I said so much ? I only WANT to prove that English is not very DIFFICULT. Maybe I have made lots of mistakes, but I AM sure you have UNDERSTOOD me.Because we are Chinese ,right?
At last , I have to say sorry to our English teacher. I haven't been ready enough for this daily report.
But I only want o make you FEEL a little different,or pleasure.
Because everyone in this class doesn't want to make you DISAPPOINTED with us.
That's all, thanks

me - mine

1 You are in a bad mood 心情不好 2If you do 不是does 3 go to sleep 3 write diaryswa 5 the best way to relax yourself 6 when you go shopping go ... go..7 listen to 8have a try 9 Ithink Your mood will get better 这篇在4-6分吧 你的作文

The 60th birthday of the United Nations is in September 2005.
这里不能用was而用is,因为“联合国的60周年纪念日是在2005年九月”是一个客观事实,客观事实应该用一般现在时.比如：
the earth travels around the sun.地球绕着太阳转.
Growing is hard for most people.
把Growth变成Growing,growth是指增长,比如GDP等事物或植物的的增长,不能表示人的成长,grow在这里才有表示人的成长.

1.谁不想在我国传统的新春佳节里合家团圆呢?有,他们是检修部的广大职工.他们身穿工作服,在我国传统的新春佳节时,照常进行15号机组的大修.
2.我知道第2句的问题所在了
一年中,李芳每天天不亮就起床做饭、洗衣、伺候病人,然后摸着黑挤奶,天放亮就出工.
3.3.公元前53年的一千古之谜今天终于有了答案：汉代罗马战俘城经史学家们考古,在甘肃发掘,展现在世人面前.

站在现代伊朗的波斯波利斯放眼远眺,就像大流士一世做的那样.在巨大的连绵起伏的山上是去领略古波斯帝国的幅员辽阔.
应该没错

我只找到两个地方不好
1.can often to work,这里你的can是实意动词,后面接to do没错,但这里还是把can当然助动词的好,直接说can work.
2.faithful & be good at communicate & response rapidly,这一串,一般情况下这种并列关系的段落,里面的词性都要一样(在这里你是要表明自己的特长,全部选形容词比较好),faithful是形容词,后面的几个最好也用形容词形式,比如说be good at communicate改成communicative(当然,不一定要这样改,只要改成形容词就行了),

in 1960s.
改成in the 1960s

So it is nice to know that I need not give up any of them .
need not 用法值得推敲 不如should not
they make me excited改成they are exciting 更地道一些
part time **part-time

貌似要把 yet 去掉
因为 yet 一般是用在否定句或者疑问句中的

work是不可数名词,不可以用aan修饰

You speak very abstrusely!But I can pick up many mistakes from yoursspeech.I am a love select the wrong person to the others,certainly Ialso can have very many mistakes.

这句话中的still 和can 的位置对吗.说明理由,
不对,应该是 can still,再如：
We can still finish the job in time.注意：still作为副词,放在 can之后.

1.pretend-pretends/pretended
2.demand-demands/demanded
to surgery-to do surgery
3. pleased-pleasing
4. He-His
hall-the hall
5. He (has) found a splendid house to live in.

改Here is a letter to you.这是一封给你的信.
原来的意思是这里是一个为你写的信.
意思也凑合可以成立.

疑问句, 缺少助动词
when do we go?
when can we go?
when should we go?

A正确
B融洽
C沧桑
D黯然失色

1、按每日计件制算出来的工资总额就错了,一周一共生产了1400+5-4-2+13-10+16-9=1409辆,所以一周工资总额为7*60*200+9*60+（5+16+13）*15-（2+4+10+9）*20=85050（元）
而按每周计件工资制计算结果为1409*60+（1409-1400）*15=84675(元）,所以,每日计件制的工资更多.
2、不是最开始写着a=1/2吗?怎么到了计算时就变成了（-1/2)了呢?如果a=1/2,则结果为7.
如果a=-1/2,则3（2a平方-a)-2(-5a+1)+2*1+2
=3*2a平方-3a-（-10a）-2+2+2
=6a平方-（3a-10a）+2
=6a平方-(-7a)+2
=6*(-1/2)平方+7*（-1/2）+2
=6*1/4+（-7/2）+2
=3/2-7/2+2
=-2+2
=0
3、a1=-1/3,则a2=1/(1+1/3)=3/4,a3=1/(1-3/4)=3,a4=1/(1-4)=-1/3,依此循环,2011除以4余下3,所以a2011=a3=3.

A

C错误,塞万提斯是西班牙的现实主义作家.

这道题我做过……
正确答案是audible
auditory是 听觉的 的意思
而audible是 可以听见的 的意思
后半句话的意思就是说“…………即使是whisper(小声说话),那些坐在最后一排的人也可以听见”
在SAT语法中这种错误比较难以辨别,相同类型的有perspective和prospective等
需要平时积累,因为反复出现的无非也就这么几个啦~

1.on 没有错,具体到一天时,用on
2.在两个或两个以上的人称并列时,I要放后面,
改成my younger brother and I
3.two people没有错,现代英语里面,people前可以跟具体数字.
4.family指家庭成员的时候要用families,否则就是家庭的意思,单数
5.than表比较,then是"然后,那时"的意思.
6.不必要用had not,用have not现在完成时即可.

就这么长么?为嘛后面要加 to take place..

XXX market is located in the west of walking street,Nanjing road and X market which extends long along the street.XXX is next to X supermarket,The most influential large-scale consumption place in Shanghai which integrates buying power and the leisure consumption as a whole.
buying power [简明英汉词典]
购买力

第一篇第一行,a surprise for me,改成to,表对象.
第一篇第五行,relation换成relationgship比较合适,后者多指人与人的关系.
第二篇倒数第五行,hurting跟death应该并列,都用名词,改成hurt比较合适.
第二篇倒数第三行,wish后便一般跟虚拟语气,如果想表示希望的意思,用hope比较合适.

楼主很强势,有少数修改意见仅供参考,探讨而已,不足为凭.
1.I learned that your company is going to employ a financial analyst,so I am writing to you because I am very interested in the position and competent to your requirements.
1,want用于无人称主语不是很好,hire不如employ更常用,competent是胜任就无需meet了,意思重复.
2.I have experience in financial investment.I have worked in a consulting firm providing financial institutions with investment advice for more than 2 years.As a consultant,I have been actively involved in various consulting projects such as market scan for investment opportunities,due diligence investigation and study on listed companies.
2,I am experienced我经历了金融投资,比较别扭,不如改为我有……的经验,如想表达经历（不是一次）,那可用复数.Provide……with……是典型的用法.用for more than 2 years就用现在完成时即可,同样表示现在还在这家咨询公司工作；如用完成进行时,那用since 200× 比较好.Due diligence加个investigation意思似乎更清楚一点.
3.I have a strong education background which shows my outstanding learning ability.I hold a master's degree in Management Science & Engineering and a bachelor's degree in Management and Information Systems both from Tsinghua University in Beijing.
3.背景加个不定冠词较好,I是第一人称,hold不应该用单数.
4.I have learned a lot of financial knowledge and passed CFA level 1 and level 2 exams in 2008 and 2009 respectively.
I would appreciate your time in reviewing my enclosed resume and if there is any additional information you require,please contact me.I would welcome an opportunity to meet with you for a personal interview.
With many thanks,