求指正语法错误,问题多了些,分不多,请求改正语法错误.1.We should read books may be use

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求指正语法错误,
问题多了些,分不多,请求改正语法错误.
1.We should read books may be useful to us.
2.This test is end,but there is another test is waiting for you.
3.The driver of the red car was died on the spot.
4.Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective.
5.My sister go to the cinema at least once a week.
6.I was walking along the road,and there are not so many cars on the street.
7.We have little time to read some books which we interest.
8.I am a student who has studying in the college for two years.
9.Honest is so important for every person.
10.The old man was hit by a car when he across the street.
11.In modern society,people are under various pressures
12.The traffic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways.
13.Because of his excellent performance,the boss rose his salary.
14.Too many tests will do harm to cultivate our independent thinking.
15.All these contributed to solve the serious problem.
16.It may not good to our health.
17.They should spent much time.
18.There exists some new problems such as being dishonest.
19.We must pay attention to it and make solutions to the problem.
20.It also may help you to make success.

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jia_520 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
1.在books后面加,because it
2.去掉第三个is
3.去掉was
4.未找到
5.go 改为goes
6.are 改为were
7.which前加in,we 后加have
8.studying 改为studied
9.honest改为honesty
10.across 前加went
11.various 后加of
12.去掉was
13.rose 改为raised
14.cultivate 改为cultivating
15.solve 改为solving
16.may后加be
17.should 后加have
18.exists改为exist
19.to 改为for
20.make 改为get .或者make success 整体改为succeed
如有错误,欢迎楼下指正.
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彼岸楚歌 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率94.4%
主要问题是时态.学术文章一般用现在时,不必用过去式.
In the process shown in the figure,initial stable situation is maintained between part A and part B.However,the change of the data indicates the most significant difference between part C and part D.
Obviously,the essential of the problem is revealed by the figure.With the detailed analysis,it could be figured out that the factor of the problem is no longer restricted by several groups of simple data.The essential revealed out in the problem is worth of in-depth examining and handling.Of course,there’re always deeper sources for the occurring of any things.These factors may be the reflection of people’s concept,may also be society related.But no matter what you think,the creation of things often originated from interweaves of various factors.
英语句子成分划分练习,求指点还有翻译,求指正Must you interrupt now?Can't you see I
英语句子成分划分练习,求指点
还有翻译,求指正
Must you interrupt now?Can't you see I'm on the phone?
Sorry Sir,but it's urgent.
Must you(主语) interrupt(谓语) now?(时间状语)Can't you(主语) see(谓语) I'm on the phone?(宾语)
Sorry Sir,(?)but it's(主系) urgent.(表语)
你必须现在打断吗?你没看见我正在打电话吗?
对不起先生,但是非常紧急。
We could have faced the difficulty together,but why didn't you tell me?
We(主语) could have faced(谓语) the difficulty(宾语) together,(伴随状语)but why(主语) didn't you(定语) tell(谓语) me?(宾语)
我们能一起面对困难的,但是你为什么没告诉我?
He couldn't sleep,although he tried to,when he got on such a hunt for an idea until he had caught it.
He(主语) couldn't(谓语) sleep,(宾语)although he(主语) tried to,(谓语)when(时间状语) he(主语) got on(谓语) such a hunt for(定语) an idea(宾语) until he had caught it.(条件状语)
他不能睡觉,虽然他尝试了,当他找到这么个他想要的主意时。
蓝35341年前1
李一狼 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率95.7%
前面的句子成分分析得很好,但是下面这个句子成分得分析是有问题的
He couldn't sleep,although he tried to,when he got on such a hunt for an idea until he had caught it.
He(主语) couldn't(谓语) sleep,(宾语)although he(主语) tried to,(谓语)when(时间状语) he(主语) got on(谓语) such a hunt for(定语) an idea(宾语) until he had caught it.(条件状语)
情态动词不能单独做谓语动词,必须和实义动词一起构成谓语。故He(主语) couldn't sleep(谓语)when he got on such a hunt for an idea是由when引导的时间状语从句
He couldn't sleep until he had caught it. 这是一个完整的句子。until he had caught it.引导的是一个时间状语从句。
王伯伯买苹果,我孩子的自学题,请指正,
三灌帮四袋长长老1年前2
就是不说我爱你 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率88.9%
质量计算是对的,进价计算错误,应该先计算出总价=100×5.5×[1/(1+25%)]=550×4/5=440元
然后设大苹果的单价是5x,小苹果的单价是4x,则5x×40+4x×60=440解方程得x=1,所以大苹果的进价是5元,小苹果的进价是4元.
还有1周就4级考试了.请高手帮我修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,
还有1周就4级考试了.请高手帮我修改一篇4级作文,并评价指正,
For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitiled Spring Festival Gala on CCTV.You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
1许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会
2有些人却提出取消春节联欢晚会
3在我看来.
Spring Festival Gala on CCTV
Every year when the Spring Festival sets in,many people prefer to watch the spring festival gala on cctv.Faced with different kinds of programmes,they can not only have a relaxing and amusing time,but also enjoy the harmoniousness with their family members.From this perspective,watching the spring festival gala on cctv can bring a lot of good to us.
In contrast,some people reckon that we should cancel the programme.These are some of the reasons,simple but thought-provoking.In the first place,they think that the spring festival eve is a chance for people to communicate with their family members.After one year's work,study,or some other things,it is necessary to have a chat with them.Only if we get together can we enjoy our time.Subsequently,some people assume that the programmes in the spring festival gala are some stereotypes.As time goes by,seldom do we see some changes in the programmes.
In dealing with this issue,I believe that we should take one's preference into consideration.After all,the spring festival gala is the most prevalent programme on spring festival eve.Millions of people watch it.Hence,I recommend that we should watch it.Surely,it is another choice that no sooner does it begin,than you start to do other things.
另外感觉这个话题不好写,自己感觉写得很烂,请根据我的文章给些好的建议和表达法
爱恨无用1年前1
我nn了 共回答了24个问题 | 采纳率100%
每一篇作文都会给一些要求句,把这些句子翻译出来作为主题句,然后扩展它.
如:“许多人喜欢在除夕观看春节联欢晚会” 开头可以写“As we can see, more and more people prefer to watch the Spring Festival Gala with their family on the night before Spring Festival " 然后扩展就好,可以举例子,字数有限,注意把握,不宜太长.
最后提出自己观点时最好加一句"as far as i am concern……或as a collage student, i think……“
多看看范文,找点常用的好句型.
最后祝你能去的好成绩!
用加横线法分析多重复句:因为我们是为人民服务的,所以,如果我们有缺点,就不怕别人批评指正.
jie15511年前2
zhaohyan1012 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
这个有点难度,我帮你设计一下,设计好了发给你,放心!
帮我评价下我写的英语作文准备考博用的,批评指正,评价地详细的再加10到20分不等.Open Mind Open mind
帮我评价下我写的英语作文
准备考博用的,批评指正,评价地详细的再加10到20分不等.
Open Mind
Open mind generally means positive and creative thoughts.Sometimes we might come into such case that a tough problem difficult to solve in a certain method can be easily setteled in another,but all too often,we do almost everything in our traditional ways rather than serch for any alternatives and at last only to find we have missed many opportunities.From the above case we can have a visible idea of what and how important open mind is.
Open mind can bring us a lot benefits.In the first place,open mind keeps our thoughts positive.As we have now entered information age,we can help ourselves keeping up with the times with an open mind by updating our knowledge structure with the aid of various data sources from books to newspapers and from television to internet.In the second place,open mind keeps our thoughts creative.When our mind keeps open,the traditonal ideals,behaviours as well as rules are likely to be questioned for their reasonableness and therefore we can dispose of those that restrain our development,and furthermore,explore more unknown fields and make more innovations.
Of course,recognizing the importance of open mind is only the first step to success and we have to put it into practice in our daliy activities as well.Take an example,for students ,they should learn more and think for themselves instead of merely holding what their teachers tell them,while for scientists,it is necessary for them to try new models and techniques rather than just follow the convention they are familiar with.
In short,remember to keep your mind open,catch as many opportunities as possible if you want to achieve greater success.
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可可爱做饭1年前5
wangbaoyuan 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率82.6%
line 2 "case"--cases
"difficult to slove"-- is difficult to solve
line 5 "visible"--clear
line 7 "infomation age" --age of computer technology
line 8"times"- time
line 10 "When our mind keeps open"--when we keep our minds open
" When our mind keeps open,the traditonal ideals,behaviours as well as rules are likely to be questioned for their reasonableness and therefore we can dispose of those that restrain our development,and furthermore,explore more unknown fields and make more innovations."--problem in sentence structure
谦辞敬语我知道。久仰、指正、久违、海涵、劳驾、打扰、借光、高见、恭贺、斧正①请人改文章说(斧正)②初次见面时说()③好久
谦辞敬语我知道。
久仰、指正、久违、海涵、劳驾、打扰、借光、高见、恭贺、斧正
①请人改文章说(斧正)
②初次见面时说()
③好久不见时说()
④麻烦别人时说()
⑤请人批评时说()
⑥求人帮忙时说()
⑦向人祝贺时说()
⑧求人原谅时说()
⑨求给方便时说()
⑩求人解答时说()
阿中之星1年前2
ping283 共回答了7个问题 | 采纳率42.9%
久仰
如图所示是一位同学为测量小灯泡的电阻而连接的电路(小灯泡标有“2.5V、0.3A”字样).请指正他的连接中的三个错误并加
如图所示是一位同学为测量小灯泡的电阻而连接的电路(小灯泡标有“2.5V、0.3A”字样).请指正他的连接中的三个错误并加以纠正.
①______.
②______.
③______.
hxc8081年前1
kkpddo 共回答了26个问题 | 采纳率88.5%
解题思路:根据滑动变阻器的“一上一下”的原则进行分析;
根据电压表的正确使用方法进行分析,即电流从电压表的正接线柱流入,负接线柱流出,所测电压不能超过电压表的量程等;
根据灯泡的额定电压和额定电流确定电压表和电流表的量程的量程.

①滑动变阻器应按“一上一下”的原则接线,因此滑动变阻器接了上面两个接线柱,应选用一“上”一“下”接线柱;
②电流必须从电压表的正接线柱流入,负接线柱流出,因此电压表“+”“-”接线柱接反了,对调“+”“-”接线柱;
③因为小灯泡的额定电压为2.5V,额定电流为0.3A,所以电压表选择0~3V量程,电流表选择0~0.6A量程,故两只电表量程选得较大,换用小量程.
故答案为:①滑动变阻器接了上面两个接线柱,应选用一“上”一“下”接线柱;
②电压表“+”“-”接线柱接反了,对调“+”“-”接线柱;
③两只电表量程选得较大,换用小量程.

点评:
本题考点: 电压表的连接;电流表的连接;滑动变阻器的使用.

考点点评: 会根据滑动变阻器的正确使用方法、电压表和电流表的正确使用判断电路连线是否正确.能够指出错误,并纠正.

高手您看看这两篇文章,若有句法语法等等错误,请指正!
高手您看看这两篇文章,若有句法语法等等错误,请指正!
第一篇:failing to take proper measures to protect the environment
the protection of the environment had became a daily topics nowadays,but,despite the media's effort to display that efforts had been placed on this subject,the total issue of environment still proved to be failure.how did it fail?well,everyone had done their best in helping the environment getting better,but some had thought that a cleaner and a more organized environment will do better.so,following this idea,those people had done their best possible to clear the forest and to plant trees in order.also,some other extremists had similar ideas.they even tried to artificially creat the best environment without any biological knowledge on how the ecosystem could do what it needed itself!other things,enspecially human factors,had affected the protection of the environment seriously.not only in asia,many countries in the world are spend billions of dollars on this issue but still when the money got to where it is needed it had also caused a lot of damage to the environment due to the need for transportation and usage of machineries.as a summary,it is not that people dosen't want to help to protect the environment,but it is the ways that they are doing the things that made the proper protection of the environment impossible.
第二篇:failing to take proper measures to protect the environment
it’s not surprising to find that protection of the environment is a common topic debated on amongst environmentalists.however,nowadays,one could find heated discussions on this very topic in our daily lives.from careless litter on the streets to the pollution produced by the huge factories in the industrial centers of the world,we as human beings are failing to take proper measures to protect the environment.
in fact,although many ***s worldwide claim that they spend billions of dollars on cleaning up the environment,results are rarely seen.as the population on earth grows,more cars are being produced,which in turn,creates smog and pollution.every second,the pollution on this planet increases.
what people have to realize is that damaging the environment is much easier than cleaning it up.when we use plastic bags in the grocery stores instead of paper bags,we never realize that plastic takes a long time to degenerate.all of this,bit by bit,is contributing to our failure to protect our environment.
we have to admit our mistakes now and take steps to make our earth cleaner,and less polluted for the generations after us,before it’s too late.
麻烦您补充一下哪些句子修改过,
小部1年前5
laimingcai 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率85.7%
以下只能作为一些个人建议,我觉得你才是高手,复合句用得很妙,读起来比较书面专业… 两篇不是同一个人写的吧?第二篇好像水准略高一些….
我文法本身就一塌糊涂,只能建议一些语句用法和文章条理结构.互相学习吧!
第一篇
1.The protection of the environment had became a daily topics nowadays-->Environment protection has became a trite topics nowadays (has become是”已经成为话题”,不是”过去成为”; “daily topic”也可,建议改为”老生常谈的话题”)
2.despite the media's effort to display that efforts had been placed on this subject,the total issue of environment still proved to be failure.-----> despite the fact that the medias displayed that a great effort has been placed on this subject,the current environment status as a whole still proved its insufficiency.(原句不是很理解)
3.How did it fail?--> How come?(因为我已把前面的failure去了,所以以只能改成这样,哈哈)
4.well,everyone had done their best in helping the environment getting better,but some had thought that a cleaner and a more organized environment will do better.---> (前后没有转折关系,何以用but?逻辑上不应该是everyone 都做到了保护环境这种事情,请楼主再考虑一下这一点.)
5.those people had done their best possible to clear the forest and to plant trees in order.--->those people has done their best to clean the forest and to plant trees.
6.they even tried to artificially creat the best environment without any biological knowledge on how the ecosystem could do what it needed itself!-->but they tend to artificially creat a good human-oriented environment than a good nature-oriented environment (赞一个,原句已经说得非常好,意思是违背生态规律建造适合人类的理想环境)
7.Other things---->建议改成其他,如otherwise,also等,后面也注意衔接一下.
8.As a summary--->In summary
9.it is the ways that they are doing the things that---->it is the methods they take
第二篇
1.It’s not surprising to find that protection of the environment...---->It’s not surprisingly to find that environment protection...
2.on amongst--->amongst
3.careless--->inconspicuous (“不起眼的”,对应后面的”huge”,或者可以两者同时去掉)
4.in the industrial centers(建议去掉,没有必要这样强调,污染的工厂不只限于在工业区)
5.When we use plastic bags in the grocery stores instead of paper bags---->When we use one-off plastic bags instead of shopping bags (最好不要这样写,试想像把我们使用的所有塑料袋换成牛皮纸,那得砍伐多少树木…所有过剩包装都是污染环境的.或者把instead of及之后去掉)
6.degenerate---->(这样说应该也可以,或者说be digested by nature)
7.contributing to---->ascribed to
Based on the improper measures human took (article 1) and the existing pollution factors (article 2),you illustrated your ideas well on the failure of environment protection,you got no problem in English,they would be perfect if you could try to polish your thoughts .
From thought in depth perspective,you would try to also consider the followings.
In developing contries like China,people who consciously realize the importance of environment protection and put it into action is still minority,whereas these countries possess a majority of the world population,just imagine how many garbages produced by them.Concepts are roots of all problems,education and propaganda are weak points.
Although more than a hundred countries joined in Kyoto Protocol,the U.S.,as the richest country produce the most greenhouse gas in the world,haven’t joined in this protocal.They keep criticising other’s pollution,but they also do no good for it.

Try to do some search online to get more information to enrich your article.
Cheers~
如果错了请指正我们更应该多注意有点而少注意缺点.we should more focus on the advantag
如果错了请指正
我们更应该多注意有点而少注意缺点.
we should more focus on the advantages less than on the disadvantages.
wonderlandξ1年前6
xiaojessie 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
不对,we should focus more on the advantages than on the disadvantages.比较级more.than.
请指正这一错误说法,马铃薯的块茎中含有较多的糖且接近于白色,可用于进行可溶性还原糖
百变神猪1年前5
清风翠竹 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率94.4%
还原性糖的检验是用菲林试剂,而菲林试剂检验的实际是醛基官能团(我们检验的葡萄糖就是一种多羟基醛)而马铃薯的块茎中含有较多的糖是淀粉,淀粉不具有醛基所以不能用来做还原性糖鉴定.
帮忙看看是不是病句麻烦看下咯,如果是病句的话请指正.[I’m a happy girl.I always smile i
帮忙看看是不是病句
麻烦看下咯,如果是病句的话请指正.
[I’m a happy girl.I always smile in every day .]
=,=莪说...请在前面+丄 是不是病句...
是的话说是,然后再指正啦...……不是的话就说不是啦...
aquamarine131年前3
xiaozhu_369 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
I'm a happy girl.I always smile everyday.
非负偶数是不是就是指正偶数?
mike_jiang1年前5
modok 共回答了25个问题 | 采纳率88%
非负偶数包含0和正偶数
什么叫两个点电荷之间的库仑力.“之间“怎么理解,是指正中间么?
什么叫两个点电荷之间的库仑力.“之间“怎么理解,是指正中间么?
如果两个点电荷的电荷量不同,那么A、B两点之间的库仑力是A对B的 还是B对A的。
W2851669331年前4
不敢轻言爱7 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
之间的库仑力
=
相互的库仑力
=
“共同”的库仑力

因为两个点电荷的库仑力是同时存在,大小又相等
没有单独的库仑力
常说之间

这是我们俩之间的事
不是你的事,也不是我的事
是我们之间的事
是我们共有的事
雅思作文求指正,顺便估个分数吧 Today food travels thousands miles from the
雅思作文求指正,顺便估个分数吧
today food travels thousands miles from the farm to the consumers.what is the reason?is it a positive or a negative trend?
in the contemporary world,technology,as a symbol of 21st century,accelerates the progress of our society on varies fronts.thanks to the improvement of transportation,people nowadays have more choice on food,even foreign food.in this essay i will analyze the causes of this trend and give my own perspective to this situation.
first of all,the improvement of transportation makes the long distant transportation come true.as is known to all,the fruits and vegetables get rotted and bad easily.now the air transportation can deliver the food to the destination in several hours.for example,people living in north part of china can enjoy the food produced in the south and even abroad due to the convenient transportation.also people can enjoy anti-seasonal fruits and vegetables.
secondly,there are economic benefits to both the exporting and importing areas.people can make a lot of money and enjoy a more comfortable life through transporting food to a long distance away from the farm.meanwhile,the *** can have more revenue.the *** can use this extra money to improve its people’s living standard.
from what has discussed above,people can get a clear understanding of the causes of this trend.however,many people assert that the long distant transportation is a waste of fuels and human labor.the food transported to a long distant far away from the farm can be more expensive.many people can not afford that.but in my opinion the consumers themselves will decide what to buy.
all in all,from my own perspective,it is a positive trend.people can enjoy a more comfortable life and the *** can have more money to improve its people’s living standard.
nancy_81年前1
雅倩啊切 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率94.7%
有几个问题
1.第一段 最好能尽量回答 题目中的问题.
2 倒数第二段 是说明 这是一种积极趋势吧 消费者自己决定买什么 这是你的理由 怎么能说明积极趋势呢?
3 In this essay I will analyze the causes of this trend and give my own perspective to this situation.
From what has discussed above, people can get a clear understanding of the causes of this trend.
这种话最好别用 要用就用最简单的表达方法.这个考官一看就知道 是套话 因为用的人太多了.
语言不错 综合考虑得6分没问题
请高手帮忙判雅思作文,需要高手指正细节!
请高手帮忙判雅思作文,需要高手指正细节!
news media has become influential to our life nowdays.some people think that it is a negative development .to what extent do you agree or disagree?
the 21th century is the age of information explosion,to all the world,and nearly every one is more and more confitioned to get and ues all kinds of information..meanwhiel,news media plays a highly influential role in our life.because of this,some people think that it is a negative development.personally,i think this view overlooks important factors of this issue.
there is no doubt that news media enriched our life and advanced personal quality to adapt to the high-speed development of world .to start with,news media saves us a great deal of time with less and actions to achieve our intention.for instance,in 1980,reading newspapers was the best way for people to get the news,but it costed money and time.by contrast,people would receive all kinds of news by pressing some buttons,because of vast of news medias ’putting in use.it makes it easy to enrich people’s lifu quality with less cost.in the second place,through the closercontaction between life and news media,people get numerous benefits on their study and work.news media affords a great deal of information which can satisfy our metal requisites.and we can get valuable information about work and study by the prevalent news media.more importantly,news media’s influential creats business and employment opportunities ceaselessly.
i admit that news media has detrimental influence upon our life nowadays.the reason for this is that there are not right action to avoid the disadvantage,to issustrate,the excessive violent and pornographic contents,all kinds of scandals,violating someone’s privacy and false news.truly,they brings too much negative effections to society and hurt someone’s benefit.even so,it is worth nothing that ***s have been taking action to control the development of news media.take china for example,this year china published the law about news media.it ordained the right and obligation of news media.
to sum up,news media’s growing is not without its adverse influences.however,the active effect created by news media far outweigh the disadvantages.i would conclude that we should limite ourselves in searching and reading news,to reduce the need to the badly news.at the same time,the *** should pay more attention to punishment for regular the news medias’ action.
请高手指明错误,
dd伊甸园1年前2
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你太谦虚了,你那么厉害!
()我们是为人民服务的,()我们()有缺点()不怕别人批评指正。填关联词语。
pisa4matherboard1年前3
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因为 所以 只要 就
赐教:高见:贵姓(尊姓)大名:高寿(高龄):恭候:奉陪:恭喜:雅正:斧正(指正):
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赐教:敬词,表示请求对方给予指教.
例:请您赐教
高见:更好的看法.高:更好的,不一样的.见:见解、主意、思想.一般不与第一人称一起
贵姓(尊姓)大名:对别人姓名的尊称.用法:作宾语;含褒义; 用于口语
例:不知先生有何高见?
高寿(高龄):①长寿古人把高寿大体分为五个年龄段:老,指50-70岁;耆,指70岁以上;耋;指70-80岁;耄,指80-90岁;期颐,指百岁高龄.②敬辞,用于问老人的年纪
例:老大爷高寿啦?
拜托:托人办事的敬词
例:这儿的事情就拜托先生了
恭候:敬辞,恭敬地等候
例:恭候大驾
奉陪:以诚恳的敬意,来陪伴别人共度时光.
例:恕不奉陪
恭喜:恭祝恭贺,道喜,道贺
例:恭喜发财
雅正:请人校正
斧正:请别人修改文章的敬词.
1下表是某品牌电动自行车的部分技术参数,其中有一个物理量名称与单位不符,请指正
1下表是某品牌电动自行车的部分技术参数,其中有一个物理量名称与单位不符,请指正
2若电动自行车的效率为80%,行驶过程中所受阻力为车重的0.06倍,求车以4m/s的速度在平直公路上匀速行驶时的工作电流(g取10N/kg)
香江德福1年前1
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1.轮胎承受最大压强的单位应为Pa而不是P(话说楼主的“型号”打错了~~)
2.G车=mg=80kg*10N/kg=800N
因为f=0.06*G车 所以f=0.06*800N=48N
由于车是匀速行驶,所以阻力与动力相等
F=48N,根据功率公式P=Fv=48N*4m/s=192W
I=P/U=192W/80%/48V=5A
答:略
下列题中均有一处错误请你找出并指正
下列题中均有一处错误请你找出并指正
1.Many young people were interesting in the sope operas.2.My friend told me that he called me the next day.3.In English I am good at reading than listening.
dozen88481年前2
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1.interesting应该是interested,前者表示物,后者一般的主语是人;
2.he called应该是would call,因为是next day;
3.good应该是better,比较级.
如图,蓝线的地方帮忙看下,我没看明白,是不是写错了?如果错了请指正一下,
芝麻ee1年前1
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答案是正
首先,图上点O是线EF和辅助线HN的交点;
其次,因为对顶角相等,所以角HOF=角EON.
科室牌 做门牌的英文翻译,有不对的地方拜托指正院长室 President Office副院长室 Vice Preside
科室牌
做门牌的英文翻译,有不对的地方拜托指正
院长室 President Office
副院长室 Vice President Office
馆长室 Curator Room
副馆长室 Deputy Director Office
书记室 Secretary Office
行政办 Executive Office
综合办 Integrated Office
部长室 Minister's Office
办公室 Office
档案室 Muniment Room
会议室 Meeting Room
收发室 Mail Room
舞美队 Stagecraft Team
乐队排练室 Orchestral Rehearsal Room
展厅(1) Gallery I
展厅(2) Gallery II
几度花1年前1
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院长室 Principal's Office
副院长室 Vice Principal's Office
馆长室 Curator Room
副馆长室 Deputy Director Office
书记室 Secretaries ' Office
行政办 Executive Office
综合办 Integrated Office
部长室 Ministers ' Office
办公室 Office
档案室 Muniment Room
会议室 Meeting Room
收发室 Mail Room
舞美队 Stagecraft Team
乐队排练室 Orchestral Rehearsal Room
展厅(1) Gallery I
展厅(2) Gallery II
what's your attitude about consumption 我的小练笔,请帮忙指正(错误、表达方式等)
what's your attitude about consumption 我的小练笔,请帮忙指正(错误、表达方式等)
Direction:there's a big difference betwwen chinese and american,what's your attitude?
There is a big difference between Chinese and American in light of concept of consumption.I believe that the significant differences show as follows.
To begin with,Chinese people value material consumption such as eating,drinking.However,American people think a lot of spirit consumption.Secondly,Chinese people attach importance to money-saving,they regard industry and economy as a traditional Chinese virtues.On the contrary,American people hold that it is not necessary for people to save money,they often purchase famous brand products to show off their richness in order to get respect and praise from others.Last but not least,American people may also take ignorant consumption,including qigong,medicine and so forth.
As far as I'm concerned,I argue that consumption habits are depending on different cultures.They will be reasonable,as long as consumption forms don't hurt people's interests.
xy981年前2
黑衣传教士 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率92.9%
etween拼写错误啦~
think a lot of改成 pay attention to比较好.
还有,用了to start/begin with,最好后面的连接词用morever,besides
第二段第三行a删除
i argue最好改为i think/conside
沟通与技巧问题?1.你的老师或长辈误把李白的一首诗当成杜甫的,你怎么指出对方所犯的错误?2.你的朋友写一篇演讲稿请你指正
沟通与技巧问题?
1.你的老师或长辈误把李白的一首诗当成杜甫的,你怎么指出对方所犯的错误?2.你的朋友写一篇演讲稿请你指正。该稿写得像散文,根本不适于演讲,你怎么指出这个缺点?3、你的邻居的孩子高考落榜,遭到父母的痛骂,并威胁说:“如果明年再考不上,就把你赶出家门。”你该如何指出这家父母的错误呢?4、将军问一士兵:“马克思是哪国人?”士兵“啪”地立正并不加思索地说:“马克思是苏联人。”在场官兵皆想笑又不敢笑。你认为将军应如何指出士兵的错误?5、你和朋友在饭店吃饭时,对面一个顾客吃包子不小心,将肉汁溅到你的鼻尖上,可他看了你一眼,却没道歉,你的朋友忙拿出手绢要给你擦。你觉得有必要指出对方的错误,该怎么说好呢?
村上佳裕1年前1
轻风浮云 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率88.9%
技能:理解和人类
第一个自己感兴趣的和不感兴趣的其他事情,换句话说,一个人关心他们的关心某人或某物超过一百万次。

提示:如何巧妙
与别人交谈时,他们最感兴趣的话题与他人交谈 - 他们自己。要使用这些词 - “您”或“您”,而不是“我”和“我”
记住:要学会引导别人谈论自己。

技巧:如何让别人觉得自己很重要
赞美和恭维他们,关心他们的家庭
前,回答他们的聪明,一点点的停顿(展览集中听取和认真的思考对他说话等)
肯定等着看你的人(“对不起,让您久等”)

技巧:如何巧妙同意与他人
学会赞同和认可。 (文化自然同意与他人和他人的认可)
当你赞同别人时,必须说出来。 (强点头,说:“是的,”看另一只眼睛,说:“你说:”我同意你的观点是很好的。“
当你与其他人不同意,绝对告诉记者,他们不能取得胜利,除非万不得已。
当你犯了一个错误,我们必须敢于承认。
避免与人争吵。(耶稣基本上不认为,没有人可以说没有得到朋友的说法。)
正确处理冲突。

提示5:学会倾听
听别人聪明(一个好的倾听者比一个好,说必须赢得更多的良好的印象。)
听着,看着扬声器。(对方的眉毛,你的眼睛可以营造轻松的氛围)
不要打断发言者的主题。
聪明的,只是正确的问题(问题也提出了更高的奉承形式)
仔细聆听,了解对方的脾气,性格,并在相同的时间去探索对方的需求,并发现别人想什么,然后告诉他们你愿意帮助实现的目标,以及如何帮助他。

技巧七:如何说服他人
当你说一些有利于自己的,人们通常会怀疑你和你的聪明的说,请不能直接解决,而不是别人的话,让别人跟你说话,即使是那些在该领域或该人不存在,因为人们通常很少的真实性产生怀疑的事实描述间接将认为你是站在他的身边来看待和分析问题,然而,当你直接说出来,他们会深表怀疑,没有理由,只是因为你说,由第三方口讲话。(如果有人问你关于该产品的质量到底,你可以把它这样说:“我的邻居有3,4年,还是不错的。”)

技巧八:如何巧妙地让别人决定
告诉你为什么要同意并保证你的人。
问了一些只能用“来回答问题。
让人们在两个”好“的选择替代
技能14:如何巧说话
必须知道和理解你说的话。(如果你不知道该说些什么,没有站起来,不开放)。
说话后,马上坐下。(没有人会批评你,因为人们谈论的人数少讲废话,每个人都恨他,千万记住,见好就收。)
说话,请观看的观众。BR />技能XV的原则,沟通与人交流,如何与人沟通
原则:80 20规则 - 20%的提问,80%听,学习服从
原则:做?不打断别人
原则三:不要指出别人的错误
:不要猜测对方的心意

如何与人沟通:
口(听)
让对方冷静地强制(微笑,营造轻松的氛围)
让对方知道你想听到的,他产生了意见
提问 - 并鼓励对方的色调或中性色调。
消除干扰因素 - 集中

要有耐心,彼此产生情感上的共鸣 - 设身处地为对方着想,具有强烈的爱
在他们心中的愤怒,不要与人交谈
以避免不??必要的争议和批评别人

问题完全回答问题,然后加以解释必要

谈论的东西收起来的大小来表达清楚
重复点的点,该点来看
要做到的原因,以回应对方,如发现有关异议,希望确保他的观点的观点。
英语翻译如果有翻译得不对的地方,请指正.
英语翻译
如果有翻译得不对的地方,请指正.



茶_君子1年前1
十字伤痕 共回答了25个问题 | 采纳率100%
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英语翻译如题,用英语翻译是不是:I have loved you already如果不对,请指正那我这个有没有错?
hekenfeng1年前9
有点小烦 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率78.9%
我已经爱上你了 的英文翻译是:I have fallen in love with you
I've(I have)fallen in love with you.也可以
I have loved you already 的基本的意思是 我爱你已经
大致意思也是对的
雅思大作文 求指正Nowadays,distance-learning programs are such common
雅思大作文 求指正
Nowadays,distance-learning programs are such common thing for us (the study material by past,by interest),but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as these by attending college or university in person.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Distance-learning is pervasive and persuasive for its efficiency and low cost,while in most counties,face to face taught by teachers is still the main trend of study.Should we alter the means of learning and replace the tele-education of the classroom?From most people,the answer is definitely no and so do I.
To begin with,even though with the advent of distance learning,more students can study at home and their schedules become flexible due to they can book the class they need,teachers can provide us with something special which cannot be obtained by distance-learning.From my experience,the matters I learn from my teacher are not only knowledge,but also about how to be a useful social member,how to confront with troubles,how to cheer up even when you fail for thousands of times.All the thing above can only be learned from the experience we get along with our teacher.Moreover,we are also influenced gradually by teachers.Socrates generated the novel philosophy thinking from his teacher,Pluto.King Alexander learned the way to manage a country from Aristotle.All the celebrities have a teacher who can enlighten their mind and become their guider,partner.In this sense,teachers are more than an individual who imparts knowledge.
From another side,tele-education can only work on the computer.For students,sitting a long-time in front of the computer and watching the screen preoccupationally may cause physical hazards,such as eyestrain,wrist and neck pain.Moreover,studying alone,without the company of peers,the child has lost a golden chance to enhance their social skill and they may be hard to be sociable,extroverted and generous in adulthood.
What I want to say is that distance-learning and schooling should never be contradictory to each other,they can work mutually.Distance-learning is a complementary path to promote students' academic performance,whereas schooling is the predominate way of studying.
aixuyong1年前1
hmhxl 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率80%
Good writing, structure!

Nowadays, distance-learning programs are such common thing for us (the study material by past, by interest), but some people argue that courses can never be taken as good as these by attending college or university in person.Nowadays, distance-learning programs have become common ways of learning. However, some people are still doubt about them and argue that
remote learning courses can never achieve better effect than attending college or
university to get lectures face to face.
To what extent do you agree or disagree? (This is not necessary as you are not making presentation to raise listeners' attention)delete this sentence.
Distance-learning is pervasive and persuasive for its efficiency and low cost, while in most counties, face to face taught by teachers is still the main trend of study.Although distance-learning is pervasive and persuasive for its low
cost , face to face taught by teachers is still
the main forms of learning in many countries.
Should we alter the means of learning and replace the tele-education of the classroom? From most people, the answer is definitely no and so do I.Should we alter the means of learning and replace the tele-education with classroom lecture? For most people, the answer is definitely no, and for me the same.(are you sure you are in favour of tele-education? read the following paragraphes)

To begin with, even though with the advent of distance learning, more students can study at home and their schedules become flexible due to they can book the class they need, teachers can provide us with something special which cannot be obtained by distance-learning.(Are you sure you come back to talk about the disadvantages of tele-education?)
Although more
students can stay at home to learn their courses through reading on-line teaching material and their schedules can be very flexible, sometime there are certain drawbacks as teachers can provide us with
something special that cannot be obtained by distance-learning.

From my experience, the matters I learn from my teacher are not only knowledge, but also about how to be a useful social member, how to confront with troubles, how to cheer up even when you fail for thousands of times. Based on my experience, I believe what I learn from my teacher are not only
pure scientific knowledge, but also the knowledge about how to grow up to become a person can contribute to our society, how to face dificulties, problems and failures, and how to cheer up even when you fail for thousands
of times.

All the thing above can only be learned from the experience we get along with our teacher.All the above mentioned can be better learned by attending face to face lecture because you have more chance to learn by observing teachers' work, the ways and attitude they deal with others.
Moreover, we are also influenced gradually by teachers.
Socrates generated the novel philosophy thinking from his teacher, Pluto.
Socrates got the novel philosophy thinking based on his learning from his teacher, Pluto.

King Alexander learned the way to manage a country from Aristotle.

All the celebrities have a teacher who can enlighten their mind and become their guider, partner.
All the celebrities have a teacher who can enlighten their mind and become their personal tutors.In this sense, teachers are more than an individual who imparts knowledge.In this sense, a teacher is more than a person who imparts knowledge.
From another side, tele-education can only work on the computer.
On the other hand, with tele-education you can only work on the computer.
For students, sitting a long-time in front of the computer and watching the screen preoccupationally may cause physical hazards, such as eyestrain, wrist and neck pain. For students, sitting a long-time in front of computer and watching
the screen preoccupationally may cause physical problem, such as
eyestrain, wrist and neck pain. (they are not harzards yet)

Moreover, studying alone, without the company of peers, the child has lost a golden chance to enhance their social skill and they may be hard to be sociable,extroverted and generous in adulthood. Moreover, studying alone with no companion of peers, children may lose a golden chance to enhance their social skills and become uneasy
to be sociable, extroverted and generous in adulthood.
What I want to say is that distance-learning and schooling should never be contradictory to each other, they can work mutually. (the two forms of learning can only coexist, they cannot work mutually as they don't have lives)
My opinion is that distance-learning can be a good way of learning but classroom learning should never be totally replaced.

Distance-learning is a complementary path to promote students' academic performance, whereas schooling is the predominate way of studying.
Distance-learning is a complementary way to enhance students'
academic performance, whereas schooling is still the irreplaceable education form at the moment, especially for young pupils.
简单英语!上课时,我们老师叫我们选一个最好的沟通方法!我选了笑容,写了下面的英语,麻烦指正!i like best th
简单英语!
上课时,我们老师叫我们选一个最好的沟通方法!我选了笑容,写了下面的英语,麻烦指正!
i like best the smiling.because it is best forms in the world.when you ungry and see it you will feel happy.
min1nn2351年前1
月夜听松 共回答了24个问题 | 采纳率83.3%
i like smiling best because it is the best expression in the world.
when you are angry and see it you will feel happy.
改病句...“这是我刚出的第二部专著,篇幅比第一部少了一倍,现惠赠一本给你,请惠存、指正.”就是这个句子,
barca_fans41年前2
gdkl235 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率89.5%
这是我刚出的第二部专著,篇幅比第一部少了一倍,现敬赠一本给你,请敬存、指正.
惠:敬辞,用于别人对自己的行为:惠赠、惠顾、惠存.
表示自己对别人的行为的尊重 应用 敬