托福作文 people can learn more from books than from TVS

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草香茶缘共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率88.9%: With the astonishing development of technology, television plays a significant role in people’s daily life. There are some people argue that television maybe has some misleading information which will hide people’s thinking. For my perspective, I strongly believe that people can learn more from watching television than by reading books.

In the first place, television can illustrate abstract concept and theories in a clearer way: atomic motion; evolution of universe, etc. For example, if I want to know a car how to operate, what make it drive? When I watch television it will show me how the car organize and it will have a visual and audio that will make it easy for me to understand the part of car. However, if I read it from book which will drive me crazy, how I can see the tedious literally and simple figure can imagine what the part look like and understand the organize of the car. So learn from television make the learning process more appealing, thus people can have a long attention span when they study through TV viewing.

Moreover, through television we can access the latest development in science and technology in prompt manner. For instance, we can see and know the Shenzhou Five spacecraft how to work and in which way it sent to sky and how it changes its orbit. The latest we can know immediately from the television at the same time when the spacecraft send. If we get this knowledge from book it would not be the newest. To process to make a book is not easy, it should have someone to write down this knowledge, then someone to review it and publish it, and finally it can reach your hand. The process will take a lot of time. Maybe when you read this book about the technology how the spacecraft function you have already totally understand it from television and have your own idea about that.

To sum up, visual and audio can provide us various aspects of knowledge not only we can see it but also we can listen it. Also the latest we can learn from television which is more convenient and efficient for us. So ignore something on television about misleading information the benefits it bring to us outweigh than the drawbacks.; 1年前

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批改托福作文Preserving the past is a waste of time.The past decade 批改托福作文 Preserving the past is a waste of time. The past decades have witnessed an ever-widening gap between the tradition and modernization,owing to the rapid acceleration of technology and development of the society.It is on one hand claimed that preserving the past is a waste of time .Some people ,on the other hand ,put forward the notion that preserving the past is extraordinarily vital to the whole human society and progress of the technology. To begin with ,preserving the past is important for the whole community since the old historic relics are parts of the cultural heritage that gives the identity of the past and old life.Old homes and living quarters are also parts of the history ,and once destroyed ,and buried under thousands of tons to concrete and steel ,they will lose forever.For example ,The Great Wall is a prominent historic relics that indicates the hard-working of the our ancestors and also shows the brilliant and intellectual brain of the technology in the path of our China’s development.As a result ,we need to protect them well and preserve them by using a great amount of money and a huge number of labours.Because the Great Wall is a part of our cultural heritage which drawn a paramount attention from all around the world. Further more,relics and pasts are valuable for the scientific researches.As there are so much information which is offered by the history ,like many rare documents in the past and some codes which record the past vital information .In addition ,we can see many statistics from the old buildings.We need to learn about the past life and culture through the extraordinary pasts buildings .Taking an example of the pyramid,we can observe the marvel scenes and works which surprise all the people over the world.They see the pyramid and the scientists do researches to find the scientific equations and logic reasons from the building. Finally,we should let more generations see the old buildings.How can they live in this changeable world without knowing what is happened in the past and how can they adapt to this colouful world without knowing how brilliant of our ancestors?Then ,we can see the point.We need to preserve the pasts and build the museums in order to let our generations learn from the pasts and have a brighter future . In a word ,I give my heartfelt aggrement to the assertion that preserving the pasts is an absolutely meaningful job which means every one in our community should admit the significance of this issue . 麻罕见1年前4: 没见过大龄青年吗共回答了11个问题 | 采纳率100%

To begin with ,preserving the past is important for the whole community for the old historic relics is part of the cultural heritage that gives the identity of the past and old life.Old homes and living quarters are also parts of the history ,and once destroyed and buried under thousands of tons to concrete and steel ,they will be lost forever.For example ,The Great Wall is one of the most prominent historic relics that indicates the hard work of the our ancestors and also shows the brilliance and intelligence of our technology in the path of China’s development.To we should spare no money and efforts to protect them and preserve them.Because the Great Wall is a part of our cultural heritage which draws paramount attention from all around the world.
Further more,relics and history are most valuable for the scientific researches.As there is so much information which can be found in them,like many rare documents of the past and some codes which keep some vital records of the time gone by .In addition ,we can acquire many statistics from the old buildings.We need to learn about the past life and culture through the extraordinary pasts buildings .Taking the pyramid as an emample,we can observe the marvelous scenes and works surprise all the people over the world.It is visited with great frequency and lots of researches are under way in search for scientific equations and logic reasons from the building.
Finally,we should let more generations see the old buildings.How can they live in this changeable world without knowing what has happened in the past and how can they adapt to this colouful world without knowing how brilliant of our ancestors were?My point is that museums should be built to preserve the things of the past so that our children and theirs could learn from the past and have a brighter future .
In a word ,I give my heartfelt aggrement to the assertion that preserving the past is an absolutely meaningful job which means every one in our community should admit the significance of this issue .
你的英语应该还是不错的但是英文议论文有几点要注意：
1 议论文要客观,尽量避免we我们这样的词来表述观点 heartfelt来表达情感
2 英语说话很直接表到论点的句子一定直接精炼说白了就是短
3 最后也是最难的就是西方的逻辑思维有些论据用中文来理解很通顺,但在英文中没有直接逻辑关系就是一句话翻来覆去说
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帮忙批改托福作文If you are an employer,which kind of worker would yo 帮忙批改托福作文 If you are an employer,which kind of worker would you prefer to hire:an inexperienced worker at a lower salary of an experienced worker at a higher salary? When asked about hiring experienced workers with high salary or non-experienced employees with low salary,the majority people claim that they will choose experienced workers,but other people think the non-experienced employees is better choice.As far as I concerned,I think people can acquire more beneficial points than weak points if we choose experienced employees because we can save money and time. Why should we employ experienced workers?For one thing,among the most important reasons,one should emphasized first.Experienced workers can reduce the cost of the company.There is no more sufficient evidence in favor of choosing veterans.An observation shows that 90% companies such as IBM,Microsoft,used to hire workers who have working experience.With experienced workers,company can spend less money on training program.What's more,the veterans can be the model of new comers.To the already familiar facts a great deal of further evidence may be added.At the same time,we can easily understand the reasons why company wants experienced workers. For another,veterans can reduce the time that workers spend on their job.Ultimately,employees can be more productivity in a given period.We may cite a single example which is very persuasive.My friend Tom is a manager of a medium size company.They only hire the experienced,which leads them to a relatively higher productivity.There are still numerous similar examples existing around the modern world.Consequently,are there any reasons why we do not tend to choose the experienced? Not only experienced workers can give us pronounced merits,but also non-experienced employees may bring people some positive aspects.One of the advantages of non-experienced workers is that we can control the cost of remuneration program.Meanwhile,in another way,they can bring us new thoughts.Even though we do get a couple of advantageous points from rookies,I maintain that experienced definitely provides people with more notable,more significant and more proper profits. From what has been discussed above,we could safely draw the conclusion that choosing experienced workers is superior than hiring non-experienced employees for veterans can earns more profits for company.The benefits from rookies cannot compete with the dominant aspects from the experienced.With the great help of experienced people,company can be more competitive. 请指出不足和优点, 张爱珠1年前1: waiter 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率100%

整体感觉段落很清晰,不足就是一些小的语法错误,这些你自己都能找到的.
还有就是Even though we do get a couple of advantageous points from rookies,I maintain that experienced definitely provides people with more notable,more significant and more proper profits.这句话建议你放在结尾,因为第四段你是在写非选方的优点,这句话放这里不免有些霸道和自相矛盾,而放在结尾则说明了选方到底怎么比飞选方好,好在哪里.
还有就是感觉语言地道程度一般,而且第三段说服力不是很强,例子很好,但一定要在例子之后说明例子怎么了,为什么支持你的论点,说明什么之类的,要延伸
总体感觉问题就是说服力一般,但是20+的分数肯定没问题

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托福作文,topic:what is the main role of university professor,to 托福作文, topic:what is the main role of university professor,to educate students or to do research? People may not appreciate a university professor who spends much of his time doing research rather than teaching.After all,it has been teachers' responsibility to teach since ancient times.However,this view is far too simplistic nowadays because millions of students can benefit a lot from their teachers' researches.Therefore,I firmly agree that the main role of university professor is to do research. To begin with,researches could bring great progress to human society and maybe it would make great breakthroughs one day.University professors are usually the most outstanding persons in their fields and thus,their involvements in research will give more impetus to scientific development.So many achievements did Aristotle make in physics and philosophy,he was also an excellent teacher.In modern society,if professors could discover a cure for cancer or a solution to solve global warming,it would benefit millions worldwide.From this point,we can clearly see that it is reasonable for professors to do some researches. Furthermore,a successful research would benefit both the university and its students.First,the university would receive national fundings to further the research.This money could be used to build up advanced laboratories and purchase new experiment facilities,which would conversely benefit the students who use them.Secondly,the research could improve recognition and reputation of the school,which might attract more investment and were conducive for students to pursue higher education. Last but not least,by continuing researches,professors can get to know what are the most recent development and be kept at the forefront of the field.His students thus are able to enjoy the fresh and advanced knowledge brought by the professor.For example,my professor is a famous architect who usually enriches himself by exploring the latest architecture structures and materials.Consequently,you can easily see the most recent constructions applied in our own design,which have hardly been used in any buildings worldwide.From this case above,we can conclude that us students have benefited from our professor from his whole-hearted research. All in all,research benefits the society,university,professors and students.It should,undoubtedly,be given precedence over teaching.This does not mean professors should neglect teaching their students,but they should pay more attention on research. wxy06061年前1: 纤纤betty 共回答了11个问题 | 采纳率90.9%

topic:what is the main role of (加a) university professor,to educate students or to do research?
People may not appreciate a university professor who spends much of his time doing research rather than teaching.After all,it has been (加the) teachers' responsibility to teach since ancient times.However,this view is far too simplistic nowadays because millions of students can benefit a lot from their teachers' researches.Therefore,I firmly agree that the main role of (加a) university professor is to do research.To begin with,researches (改为researchers) could bring great progress to human society and maybe it would make great breakthroughs one day.University professors are usually the most outstanding persons in their fields (去掉and) thus,their involvements in research will give more impetus to scientific development.So many achievements did Aristotle make in physics and philosophy,he was also an excellent teacher.In modern society,if professors could discover a cure for cancer or a solution to solve global warming,it would benefit millions worldwide.From this point,we can clearly see that it is reasonable for professors to do some researches.
Furthermore,a successful research would benefit both the university and its students.First,the university would receive national fundings to further 去掉 the) research.This money could be used to build up advanced laboratories and purchase new experiment (是experimental) facilities,which would conversely benefit the students who use them.Secondly,the research could improve recognition and reputation of the school,which might attract more investment and were conducive for students to pursue higher education.
Last but not least,by continuing researches,professors can get to know what are the most recent development and be kept at the forefront of the field.His students thus are able to enjoy the fresh and advanced knowledge brought by the professor.For example,my professor is a famous architect who usually enriches himself by exploring the latest architecture structures and materials.Consequently,you can easily see the most recent constructions applied in our own design,which have hardly been used in any buildings worldwide.From this case above,we can conclude that us (改为”we —“)students have benefited from our professor from his whole-hearted research.
All in all,research benefits the society,(加the) university,professors and students.It should,undoubtedly,be given precedence over teaching.This does not mean professors should neglect teaching their students,but they should pay more attention on research.
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托福作文 eleven months of study is more effective education.do y 托福作文 eleven months of study is more effective education.do you agree or disagree?（写三大点思路即可） 想钩美人鱼1年前1: oppsal 共回答了10个问题 | 采纳率90%

Disagree.
1.they will have no time to do part-time jobs and internships.they don't have a chance to put theory into practice.But we know that the most effecive study is that connectting what you've learned in books with practice tightly.
2.students will feel very bored with what they're learning,which will bring negative effects to their study.
3.continuous study will even bring physical and spiritual problems.3.1 they don't have enough vacations to relax themselves.3.2 under high pressure for a long period of time,people are more likely to have some psychological problems.
because of limited time,i can only offer this answer.Good luck!

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托福作文修改~~谢谢~~TPO-1 Independent writing task At universities a 托福作文修改~~谢谢~~ TPO-1 Independent writing task At universities and colleges, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support. Nowadays, there is a debate about whether sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries, I’m shocked by the distance between different thought of people, in my opinion there is no doubt that sports and social activities is important and should acquire equal finance support as classes and libraries, the reason as follow. First of all, developing the sports and social activities can reduce the rate of psychological problem in the college students. In my university, students suicide appear every year, to my surprise, these youth chose to die only for some problem that is very prevalent among college student. Such as diverging with her (or his) lover, missing a good chance of work, having a bad relationship of chums and so on. These problem have a long distance to serious, but so many beautiful life lost because of them, the essential problem is students’ vulanarat heart, they cannot breakthrough the dilemma, and why them cannot do it is that they lack of experience. If a student can have more chance to touch the real society, to communicate with other people who have experience, they will know how to cope with the depression. On the other hand, sport and social activities also can distract people attention and reduce their press. Second, the social activities have a function which classes and libraries is hard to instead, strengthen the ability of knowledge application. Clearly, sports and social activities in the universities and colleges provide students with a perfect setting to practice their social skills. I remember a few days before, a American senior students invent a sort of paper which can testing decades of cancer shocking all over the world, how he success is also make people feel incredible, he just learn by himself and test again and again, no class, no teacher, what teach him is the experiment. So, theory is a guide, practice is the way to success. Regardless how much knowledge a students get, if he can not apply them in his life and work, it is useless. Theories and practice are the two arms of succeed, of course, they should have a equal status. Finance supply is a important resource of college and university developing, how to allocate it is a vital strategy. As we said above, sports and social activities play equal important roles as classes and libraries, should acquire the same supporting. 空灵nh1年前1: lizhenhong 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率100%

At universities and colleges,sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support.
Nowadays,there is a debate about whether sports and social activities are as important as classes and libraries,I’m shocked by the distance between different thought of people,in my opinion there is no doubt that sports and social activities is(复数要用are) important and should acquire equal finance(是financial) support as classes and libraries,the reason as follow.
First of all,developing the sports and social activities can reduce the rate of psychological problem (in 要改为 of) the college students.In my university,students suicide (应该是student suicide 是个复合名词) appear(appears) every year,to my surprise,these youth chose to die only for some problem(problems) that is very prevalent among college student(students).Such as diverging with her (or his) lover,missing a good chance of work,having a bad relationship of chums and so on.These problem(复数problems) have a long distance to serious (这一句我无法可以理解出究竟你要表达甚麼?),but so many beautiful life(复数lives) lost because of them,the essential problem is students’ vulanarat(大概你是想说 vulnerable脆弱的 ) heart,they cannot breakthrough (break through 是两个字) the dilemma,and why them(是they) cannot do it is that they lack (去掉 of) experience.If a student can have more chance(chances) to touch the real society,to communicate with other people who have (加got) experience,they will know how to cope with the depression.On the other hand,sport(sports) and social activities also can distract people(people's) attention and reduce their press(pressure).
Second,the social activities have a function which classes and libraries is hard to instead(应该用replace),strengthen(strengthening) the ability of knowledge application.Clearly,sports and social activities in the universities and colleges provide students with a perfect setting to practice their social skills.I remember a few days before,a(是 an) American senior students(student) invent(ed) a sort of paper which (can testing 要改为 could test) decades of cancer(shocking all over要改为 and has shocked) the (whole) world,how he (has) success(succeeded) is(was) also make(making) people (to) feel incredible,he just learn(ed) by
himself and test(ed) again and again,no class(es),no teacher(s),what teach(taught) him is(were) the experiment(s).So,(要加the) theory is a guide,practice is the way to success.Regardless how much knowledge a students(用单数student) get(s),if he can not(cannot 是一个字) apply them in his life and work,it is useless.Theories and practice are the two arms of succeed (succeeding / success),of course,they should have a(an) equal status.
Finance supply is a(an) important resource of college and university developing,how to allocate it is a vital strategy.As we said above,sports and social activities play equal(是 equally)
important roles as classes and libraries,should acquire the same supporting.
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托福作文打分u agree that it is more enjoyable to have a job where 托福作文打分 u agree that it is more enjoyable to have a job where u work three days a week for longer hours than work five days a week for shorter hours. Although working less days a week sounds to be a pleasant idea to some people,I don't find it more enjoyable than the orginal way of working hours in some ways.I'll state my oponion in personal,historical,and sociable ways. Personally,working 3 days a week may be less than enough for each individual.A week is made of up to 7 days,if we only squeeze out 3 days to work,the other 4 days may seem to be a waste.Because 3 days barely count up to half of the days in a week ,we cannot simply let the precious time slip away through our fingers if 2 days are cut out.Some may argue that in a 3-day situation,it will be the same since we can work for longer hours.While I find it hard to believe since people may get tired working for longer hours a day,and they may not be as productive as the normal hours of working conditions. Historically speaking,everything shows up for a reason.As we all know ,the fixed formula of working five days a week has been formed a long time ago.Our ancestors have already made full consideration into the length of working days,therefore there is no need to change it.Apparently the 5-day working formula is adopted by most companies and enterprises nowadays,and the reason is clear because it is extremely suitable to both the physical and mental health for humanbeings. 完整版在这里。字数超了。 dxfru1年前1: 蓝色味道共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率95.2%

4.5应该可以了吧
总体把问题都交代清楚了.用词也比较独到
语句合理
不过最终结果还得看阅卷老师他的心情也很重要.

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关于托福作文.Many students spend most of their time on their studi
关于托福作文.
many students spend most of their time on their studies wothout pariticipating in school activities discuss the advantage and the disadvantageof thir attiude towards their school life.
we can see many students studying in classroom day and night without pariticipating in school activities.studying is important for a student.but should we study all day without taking part in any activities?i think studying is not the only in a student's life and a good student should combine his study with pariticipating in school activities.
pariticipating in school activities have many advantages.the start with it can help us to obtain many experience.we may learn many things from the activities such as improving your ablitily and teamwork.the experience will make our horizon improve and it will be helpful when we get a job.second we can make many friends in participating the activities.we will work with many other people in taking part in the activities,so we can make friends with them .we can learn many things from our friends and they might help us if we were to get into trouble in the future.third doing this will make us confident when we work.we may think :"i have so much experience from the school activeties so my job also will not be diffcult."so pariticipating in school activities benifit us too much,it is useful for us in our school time even for my whole life.
and if we only study in the classroom ,there will be many disadvantages.first you can not obtain any experience by doing this.you can not learn anything out of the textbook so you will not realize how beautiful this world is.second you do not know how do deal with the relationship between people.when you work in the company you say may something that your boss do not like but you do not know.it is harm for your career.the of critical important thing is you will not be creative.you just know follow others but create something new.
for the aforementioned reasons,i think students should not spend most of their time in studying without pariticating in school activities.it is harm for them.a student with no experence and friends is diffcult to be successful.
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首先,你不觉得第一段太短了吗?你只表达了自己的立场,但应该再作适当解释,个人认为不太合理.拼写错误有点多,如下：第一行wothout-without,pariticipating-participating,第二行 disadvantageof-disadvantage of,thir-their,attiude-attitude.以后的participate拼写还是错的.第三段第三行：ablitily-ability,第9行：activeties-activities,倒数第二行：diffcult-difficult,benifit -benefit.最后一行:experence-experience,diffcult-difficult.这是拼写错误.个人语法很烂,不能妄作评价,还是找一个老师改的好.participate如果不会拼写做好换别的词的代替,核心词一直拼错会很影响成绩的,虽然拼错词是允许的,但还是越少越好.写完了可以放倒WPS或WORD文档,这样错词就直接划横线了,用我的写作老师的话说就是,大多数人刚开始写的时候基本上都是“万里山河一片红”.一点建议,

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托福作文 people can learn more from books than from TVS

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