书面表达:Darren received an email from his pen pal,Bill.Read it

1、介绍一下自己的爱好,习惯.（用
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Introduce myself
I'm Ann.I'm twelve years old.I'm in Chenxin School.I'm in Class One,Grade Six.I like reading.I like watching TV.I like surfing the Internet.I'm good at English.I'm good at playing basketball.My favorite animal is cheetahs.My favourite colour is blue.I go to school from Monday to Friday.I usually get up at 6:30.I go to bed at 9:00.
介绍自己
我是Ann.我十二岁.我在诚信学校学习.我在六年级一班.我喜欢读书.我喜欢看电视.我喜欢上网.我擅长英语.我擅长打篮球.我最喜欢的动物是猎豹.我最喜欢的颜色是蓝色.我从星期一开始上学到星期五.我通常在6:30起床.我在9:00睡觉.
2、介绍自己的家人情况.（用
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My family
There are three people in my family.They are my father,mother and me.My father is a driver.He is 36 years old.He is friendly.My mother is a doctor.She is 36 years old,too.She is very kind.She is very helpful.I am a student.I'm twelve.I'm in Class 1,Grade 6.I study hard every day.I love my family.
我的家人
在我的家庭中有三个人.他们是我爸爸、妈妈和我.我爸爸是一名司机.他是36岁.他很友好.
是一名医生.她也是36岁.她很善良.她很乐于助人.我是一名学生.我十二岁了.我在六年级(1)班.我每天学习很努力.
的家庭.易懂,就你了

This is our school.It's big and clean.There are 36 classrooms,3 teacher's offices and 3 science labs.
There is a gym,a library and a dining hall.The offices are next to the classrooms.The science labs are
next to the offices.The library is in front of the science labs.The gym is behind the science labs.The
dining hall is behind the classrooms.I like our school.
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The Green School Project has become part of the environmental promotes sustainable development and environmental activism in Israel.Schools are approved if they meet these three criteria:Integration of environmental subjects in the curriculum; Rational use of resources; and Contribution to the community.To date,about 130 primary and intermediate schools - spanning different geographical and population sectors in Israel - have joined the process.Plans are currently being advanced to "green" other areas - such as kindergartens,community centers and campuses.
Environmental projects have been set up in:Promoting sustainable development activities within schools,with emphasis on biodiversity,ecoplanning and industrial environment; Preventing pest nuisances to assure public health; Establishing infrastructure fur construction and demolition waste; Promoting bicycle paths; Cleaning up and disposing of asbestos waste from contaminated sites; Planning,establishing and operating urban recycling centers; and Promoting educational programs on the Deposit Law and on recycling.

亲爱的楼主：
Dear Mr.Liu,
I failed in my English test again.I think I have tried my best.I don’t know why I failed again.And I am afraid to tell my parents about it.I hope you can help me.
Yours,
Tom
Dear Tom,
Don't worry.I think you should find a good study way,and it very important for you.You can talk with you parens about this thing.And tell them that you tried your best.Maybe they can understand you.And you must study hard from now.You should do better in next English test than this you do.That will make your parens feel happy,and they will sent theirs love.
Yours,
祝您步步高升

括号里是英文提示里要求的短语, 大意是按照中文提示写的，约100单词,给分份吧LZ!! 下次多给点分 ^ ^
Currently,students of high school have very heavy pressure of study.
They spend all of their time on studying and even (stay up late at ...

The great changes in my hometown
I live in Guangdong.Guangdong is a very beautiful place.I like my hometown.Twenty years ago,my hometown is very behind.And much rubbish are in the streets.Many people are huddled to buy daily things in the bazaar（集市）.But now everything is changed.Now,streets are very broad and many nice car drive in the streets.Many Supermarkets are appeared.Now,to buy things become very simple.Total,Everything in my hometown is beautiful.I can study hard.I will change my hometown even more beautiful.It is my dream.

纯手工写作如下,已经反复检查没有错误.如果有不懂的地方你就问哈,:)
Today is Dad's Birthday and I wanted to buy him a gift.I decided to go to a local bakery called Wei Duo Mei and buy him a birthday cake.On my way back home I had to take the bus.It was crowded on the bus and all seats were occupied.Although I was already with a big cake,I still chose to give my seat to a lady in need.After getting off the bus I saw a blind man who was trying to cross the street.I offered to help him by holding his arm and walked with him across the street.Both the lady and the man felt grateful for my kind assistance.Finally I arrived at home and my mother had already prepared many delicious dishes for dad's birthday celebration.My dad was very happy when we were sing "Happy Birthday" together.We all had an unforgettable evening with each other.

fgt

One possible version
Betty is my best friend. She is a busy girl. She gets up at 6:30 and goes to school at 7:30. Her classes
begin at 8:00. She has 4 classes in the morning and 2 classes in the afternoon. She has lunch at school. She spends about 2 hours doing her homework every day. She is a member of the school volleyball team. At
weekends she practises playing volleyball with her friends. She is very busy, but she has a good time.
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兄弟,你是广东人吧,模拟考这个英语作文题目,
Dear Jane：
Nowadays,what make me confused is I can't understand the difference between American English and Britan English ,you know ,as a volunteer,the skill of communicate with forigners is essential .howaver ,for my English ,some think it is American English ,and others reckon it is Britan English.So I hope that you help distinguish what is difference between them.
wanglin
2010.11.11

To be a good student, I have learned English everyday; I have been solving my problems one by one. To become a good writer, I practice a lot. To increase my vocabulary, I memorize whatever new words I come across. To improve my spelling, I practice typing the new words I am learning on a computer and let it tell me whether I have spelt them correctly or not.
Finally, to practice speaking, I memorize many essays and conversations and try to recite them, using a tape recorder. In this way, I have been gradually improving my English.

Different people have different hobbies.I used to ride a bike and read story books.They could give us lots of knowledge.I kept cats and dogs.I thought pets were very friendly and lovely,but now I like listening to music and chatting on the Internet,because music can relax me after the daily work and chatting can bring me happiness and friendship.I have different hobbies in different seasons.In spring I like flying kites.In summer I go swimming.I often climb hills in the fall.I like making snowmen best in winter.

Hello,everybody.My name is Li Tao.I am twelve years old.My English name is David.I am in Class Five,Grade seven.I love my class
Do you want yo make friends with me?
嗨,大家好,我叫李涛.我十二岁了.我的英文名是David.我是七年级五班的学生.我爱我的班级.
你想和我交个朋友吗?
o(∩_∩)o...也不知道你是几年级的,

My Dream Home
My dream home is a three-floor house located not far away from the motorway from Beijing to the Capital Airport. The house has 6 bedrooms, two sitting rooms, three bathrooms, one reading room, one mini-bar room, one gym room and a small home cinema. In front of the house there is a garden of 150 square-meter, where grow a lot of seasonal flowers and the air in the garden is warm and fragrant. The backyard garden is larger, which in 20 meter wide and 70 meters, and in it grow many different fruit trees, such as the peach trees, the pear trees, the apple trees and the cherry trees. There is also a fish pond at the far end of the garden, in which live many golden fish and red carps. I am working in Beijing and I have two sons and a daughter. My wife and I live in the house together with my three children. We have a very happy life.

A:Good afternoon! Can I help you?
B:Yes. I want a skirt.
A:What color do you like?
B:Red.
A:How about this one?
B:Can I try it on?
A:Certainly.
B:How much is it?
A:It's 128 yuan.
B:Ok, I'll take it.
满意请及时采纳,谢谢

We had a discussion over whether it’s necessary to carry out the outer space explorations at a class meeting the other day.Some of us think it important to research the outer space.First,people can get a better understanding of the outer space through their explorations.Second,new resources can be found there for humans to use.Third,explorations can possibly bring about new living space for human life.
　　However,others don’t believe so.They say this kind of exploration costs too much money.And it’s very dangerous for astronauts to do such work.
　　I think people should do the explorations and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out.

注意大小写。
My name is Zhang Qiang. I'm a boy. I'm fifteen years（用复数） old. I'm a student in Class 5, Grade 1, No. 1 Middle School of Shijiazhuang.(按照英语习惯，从小到大。是石家庄吧？拼错了。） I'm good at English and I like it. My teacher always says I'm a good student. I welcome you to China.
你几年级了？如果是初中，这样还可以。如果是高三或者以上，别这样写了。

Great changes have taken place in our studies since our school began to carry on exploring
learning strategies. In the past, teachers kept on explaining the language points in class. We students
just listened and took some notes. So we didn’t have enough time to think about problems by
ourselves /independently. We had to do much homework after class. But now teachers show the
problems to us first, then we discuss them for a while in pairs or groups. We try to find out the ways
of solving problems, through which we’ve learnt how to work/ study/ cooperate with others. After
class, we can have different activities. For example, we can read books we like, go to the library or
surf the Internet for useful information and so on.
In a word, now we are the owners of our study and we’re happy.
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很认真的帮你写了一下,应该加分鼓励呦：
Dear Mr Mayor,
Hello,I am a student in this city.I’m writing to tell you that the environment problems in our city is very serious.The air condition in our city is worse and worse,our sky is foggy,our river water is darker.We have to make real efforts to deal with it.Here is some opinions from me.First,we should plant more trees and grasses in our city,the more the better.Second,we should control the polluting gas and fluid released by factories and cars.We can punish polluters and use the money in good ways that is friendly to the environment.
Thank you for taking your time to read my letter.
Best regards,
XXX

One possible version:
Zhuanghua's life has changed a lot in the last few years.In the past,he used to have much time to play
after school.He spent a lot of time playing games with his friends.When he finished his homework,he
often watched TV or chatted with his grandma.On Saturday,he often went to concerts with his father.
But now his school life has changed a lot.He is very busy every day.He has to get up early and stays
in school all day.Because he has to study hard.He hasn't any more time to play games with his friends.
He has to do his homework and goes to bed late every night.He hardly has any time for concerts.He misses
the old days very much.
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last night on "yong lives",lana wasn't mad at maria after ben told her that marcia was going to have a party for her.and lana called marcia and told her that she could bring some drinks and snacks to her house on friday night.marica said she would be glad to meet her again.

Ken is 12 years old,and he is now studying in grade seven.His mother is a English teacher,and his aunt is a bus driver,he also has an old-aged grandfather.

书面表达I met her yesterday . I can’t remember our how long we met . Many years ago ,we was best friend.I still remember ,she like juice , like reading ,doesn’t she ?One year ago ,we together had a important exam .she didn’t had a good mark .SO, she was very sad .This matter left her without a way of hope .“Don’t give up ! We Are Best!”I said ,“Bliene by in yourself!” As time goes by my memory seems to got worse.Suddenly,I forgot to say to her :I miss you ,every time ! Never change!”[另可能有些语法特点。请多指教。]

As we all know,there are still some poor children living around us.Some of them even can't afford to buy food to eat when they are very hungry.We are studying together,so I think we should do something to help them.
First of all,we should give them respect.We should not look down upon them because they are poor.On the contrary,we should try to make them feel warm by caring them and minding them.
Then I think we should try to help them in every part of their life,such as studying,playing,and so on.
Finally,I believe if everyone has a king heart,they will feel happy ang warm,and grow healthily!

你的问题有点歧义，上面的人已经将那个词语翻译了一下，但我不认为你会问这么简单的问题。要写好试卷上的书面表达，关键是审题，围绕题目要求来写，否则会扣要点分；其次，尽量不要有语法错误，能有一些句法结构比较复杂的句子；再者，要注意行文流畅，有过渡句。最后，要卷面清晰。看看，这对你有用吗？这是我多年参加阅卷工作的一些经验，供你参考。...

Different people have different future.In 20 years,I am 36 years old.I think I will have a happy family in Guizhou because it is my hometown.At that time,I will take good care of my parents and give them happiness.As for my job,I will be a teacher.I will be good with my students because they will be like my kids.In my free time,I will play part in my neighbour.Such as:helping other people.Probably,I will keep more pets like dogs、cats and birds.though,because I will have less free time.And my home will be good for pets because it will be very big.In a word,I will have a wonderful life.
作者在学习之余展望未来.20年后的我,将会有家庭,有工作,有宠物,还有我愿意做的业余工作,过的很精彩.在文章中使用了一般将来时will+do 的结构,还多处运用连词because,at that time,as for,probably,in a word使文章更加流畅.文章用Different people have different future.点题,In a word,I will have a wonderful life.结束,使读者一目了然文章的中心思想.

March 20,2009
Dear boss.
I'm sorry I can't come to OFFICE today.I'm feeling terrible,i have a fever.I saw the doctor yesterday evening,I was told by the doctor to stay home for two days and take good rest.so I am sorry totell you that I cannot go to work and ask for two days ' off.Tonny will take this note to you .I'll return to office very soon.I hope you understand.
Sincerely
Jack
二.1.coming 2.to 3.there 4.how 5.about 6.in 7.Are 8.by 9.be 10.so
三.was born/ began learning(to learn )

Every family has its own rules. Some of the family rules seem so strict to the family members, however, the rules of my family are quite sufferable to me.My family rules are all based on the word of "FAMILY", that is "Father and mother, I love you." We set these family rules in order to keep the good relationship among us and make my family as a united one. To be a student in school and a child at home, I think basically I should fit to some of the family rules that they could help me to follow the right directions. For example, my mom does not allow me go out or return home late. She thought it would make my studying bad and even cause something in negative effect.In addition, I should get up at six o'clock every morning and do homework immediately after school. I could not be able to watch television, surf on internet and play computer games during the nights in school days. On weekends, I have to clean my room by myself.My family rues make me become busier than others. Although I am very busy, I still feel happy and meaningful

Dear teacher,
I'm a student in our school.I just heard that our labrary is looking for a new librarian recently.I would like to apply for this job.I really love this work.I always read and study in our library,and I was often helped by the warm-hearted librarians.I always appreciate these volunteer work a lot.I think this job is to help build a better environment for students to learn.And since I've long been benefiting from it,I also want to help other students.I think I am quite qualified for this job,because I'm always good at organization and arrangement,as well as memory.I can find and arrange the books for others efficiently.Therefore,I really hope you can accept my application.Thank you very much!
Yours sincerely,
xxx

My favorite animal is a panda .the panda look like a bear and polar bear .I think the panda are very cute and lovely ,and is very strong and heavy .they can walk ,and they can climb trees .they lives in the china .I like them .
Panda is one of the scarcest animals.People in the world like it very much.There used to be many pandas in China long ago.As the balance of nature was destroyed and the weather was getting warmer and warmer,pandas became less.But at present,the number of pandas is increasing year by year.There are now so many pandas that some are being sent to other countries so that people there can enjoy them.
Nowadays,the biggest nature park for panda in China is in Sichuan.There is a research centre for nature and wild life there.Scientists hope that one day they will have enough pandas to be set free and let them live in the wild again.

关键是英语课本上的短文,都要熟背.要记牢固定的句型和短语,多写,多改.要学会检查,不犯语法错误和拼写错误,句子通顺,不跑题,字数够,大概作文就可以满分了.

there is (are).
it is easy (difficulty) to.
I think that.
As a reason of .

要养成独立完成任务的好习惯!
it's very important for you to from a good habit to overcome the daliy homework!

What should we do?
I am a middle school student.As a teenager,I think we should study hard and
try our best to learn all the subject well.We shouldn’t concentrate much on our
clothes and food.
We must help each other and learn from each other.We should obey the rules
of our school,get on well with our teachers and students.At home,we should
help our parents do some housework..
What do you think?Can you tell me?

If one day,I became a teacher.My efforts will teach students and turn them into useful person.
如果有一天,我成了一名老师.我的努力将教导学生,使他们成为有用的人.

How to Keep Healthy
Here are my advices about how to keep healthy.
Firstly, build normal daily routine and eat regularly. You should go to bed and get up early. Make sure you can have a good rest. Pay attention to your diets. Don’t eat too much meat and sugar. Eat more vegetables. Secondly, have a good mood towards life. A good mood will bring you a healthy body, too. Last, do some exercises. Exercises help you build a strong and healthy body.

这样就可以了.中国菜在美国其实都没有对应的菜名.就是大概翻译个意思就可以了.还有很多比这个更怪的.
我现在就在美国.很多中国餐馆的名字也都是大概翻译的.意思对就可以了.没有真正的规范.
也有个别菜用的稍微统一点,比如公煲鸡丁一般叫kongpo chicken 之类.

去找范文吧!

意为 从不放弃 短语 give up(doing sth) 放弃（做某事）

　　Recently,the problem of … has aroused people’s concern.
最近,……问题已引起人们的关注.
　　The Internet has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.It has brought a lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.
　　互联网已在我们的生活中扮演着越来越重要的角色.它给我们带来了许多好处,但也产生了一些严重的问题.
　　Nowadays,(overpopulation) has become a problem we have to face.
　　如今,（人口过剩）已成为我们不得不面对的问题了.
　　It is commonly believed that … / It is a common belief that … 人们一般认为……
　　Many people insist that … 很多人坚持认为……
　　With the development of science and technology,more and more people believe that…
　　随着科技的发展,越来越多的人认为……
　　A lot of people seem to think that …
很多人似乎认为……
　　引出不同观点:
　　People’s views on … vary from person to person.Some hold that ….However,others believe that….人们对……的观点因人而异.有些人认为……,然而其他人却认为……
　　People may have different opinions on …人们对……可能会有不同的见解.
　　Attitudes towards (drugs) vary from person to person.人们对待吸毒的态度因人而异.
　　There are different opinions among people as to …关于……,人们的观点大不相同.
　　Different people hold different attitudes toward (failure).对(失败)人们的态度各不相同.
　　结尾
　　Taking all these factors into consideration,we naturally come to the conclusion that…
　　把所有这些因素加以考虑,我们自然会得出结论……
　　Taking into account all these factors,we may reasonably come to the conclusion that …
　　考虑所有这些因素,我们可能会得出合理的结论……
　　Hence/Therefore,we’d better come to the conclusion that …
　　因此,我们最好得出这样的结论……
　　There is no doubt that (job-hopping) has its drawbacks as well as merits.
　　毫无疑问,跳槽有优点也有缺点.
　　All in all,we cannot live without … But at the same time we must try to find out new ways to cope with the problems that would arise.
　　总之,我们没有…是无法生活的.但同时,我们必须寻求新的解决办法来对付可能出现的新问题.
　　提出建议:
　　It is high time that we put an end to the (trend).该是我们停止这一趋势的时候了.
　　It is time to take the advice of … and to put special emphasis on the improvement of …
　　该是采纳……的建议,并对……的进展给予特殊重视的时候了.
　　There is no doubt that enough concern must be paid to the problem of …
　　毫无疑问,对……问题应予以足够的重视.
　　Obviously,… If we want to do something … ,it is essential that …
　　显然,如果我们想做某事,很重要的是…
　　Only in this way can we … 只有这样,我们才能……
　　It must be realized that …我们必须意识到……
　　预示后果:
　　Obviously,if we don’t control the problem,the chances are that … will lead us in danger.
　　很明显,如果我们不能控制这一问题,很有可能我们会陷入危险.
　　No doubt,unless we take effective measures,it is very likely that …
　　毫无疑问,除非我们采取有效措施,很可能会……
　　It is urgent that immediate measures should be taken to stop the situation.
　　很紧迫的是,应立即采取措施阻止这一事态的发展.
　　论证
　　From my point of view,it is more reasonable to support the first opinion rather than the second.在我看来,支持第一种观点比支持第二种观点更有道理.
　　I cannot entirely agree with the idea that …我无法完全同意这一观点……
　　Personally,I am standing on the side of …就个人而言,我站在……的一边.
　　I sincerely believe that …我真诚地相信……
　　In my opinion,it is more advisable to do … than to do ….
　　在我个人看来,做……比做……更明智.
　　Finally,to speak frankly,there is also a more practical reason why …
　　给出原因:
　　This phenomenon exists for a number of reasons.First,… Second,… Third,…
　　这一现象的存在是有许多原因的.首先,……；第二,……；第三,……
　　Why did For one thing …,for another ….Perhaps the primary reason is&hellip
请按一下手机右上角的采纳哦~

getting up early is a good habit. it is of great importance to us all. first it helps to keep us healthy. if we can get up early, we can breathe fresh air,and do morning exercise, which builds our bodies. second, it helps us to memorize what we have learned in class by reading aloud in the morning.third, it can help us to find enough time to prepare our work of the day. in one word, if we stick to getting up early every day, it will do us a lot of good.

it is important to you have a healt do have good eating habits.考点it is important to sb sth do sth

Lionel Andres Messi is a famous and successful football player around the world.
莱昂内尔安德烈斯梅西是一个著名、成功的世界足球运动员.
He was born on June 24,1987 in Argentina.He began to join a football club in 1995 when he was only 7 years old.He played football there for 5 years.At the age of 13,Messi went to Barcelona.In 2003,he not only took part in his first match but also won the match.When he was 20 in 2005,he became one of the best,the youngest and the most popular football players.
他出生于阿根廷1987年6月24日.1995年他七岁的时候开始加入足球俱乐部.他在那里踢了五年的足球.十三岁的时候梅西去了巴塞罗那.2003年,他不仅参加了他的第一场比赛也赢得了该比赛.2005年他20岁的时候在,他成为了最优秀,最年轻以及最受欢迎的足球运动员.
Messi played football so well that he made many people have a good time.He has a lot of fans,and many young people want to be a football player like him.
梅西足球踢得那么好,使得很多人都很开心.他有很多的球迷,而且很多年轻人都想成为一个像他一样的足球运动员.

狗
dog,it is our good friend.It also is our good partner.It helps us to look after our house when we are out.It can listen to you when you want to pour out some borings.It has a very ingenious nose.It can smell many scents.It often help the policeman to find the stealing.Dog is very clever.
海豚
Dolphin is one of the most precious animals. Their bodies are very long, about one zhang（丈）. Dolphins live in the sea. They live on fish, shrimps and so on.
Dolphins are very friendly and peaceful. They never attack people. Instead, they have saved many people in danger in the past years. How helpful the dolphins are!
Dolphins are very clever. People often train them so that they can give a dolphin show which brings people a lot of happiness and joy.
Unluckily, the number of dolphins is getting smaller and smaller. Because of water pollution, there is less and less space for dolphins. Many people make money by hunting dolphins. If we don’t protect them, maybe we’ll lose our good friends one day. As a student, I hope more and more people should take actions to protect dolphins.
乌龟
Tortoise walk not fast. But I like the tortoise. Why? Because, tortoise is a cute animal. It have a short tail and a four short foot. It have a little head and a hard shell. They are forty-five little and cute tortoise in My home. They like to play in the water. When they afraid some thing. They wall run fast. They like to eat the fish. I often buy some small fish to them to eat. They can catch the fish fast. First, they fake(假) sleep. When the fish swim near they mouth. They catch the fish fast and bit the fish head. So, the fish die. They can eat the fish. In winter. They like to sleep in the sand. When they sleep, they don’t eat any food.Because they wall hibernation. But, when they are thirsty. They come out of the sand. So, we must give water to them to drink.

单词量,句子,最好能多背范文!

这个分很多方面诶,基础的词汇和组合你要先掌握好,然后在此基础上语句的衔接还有不同的句式方面你可以多添彩,多看看范文咯 当然阅读页可以扩宽知识面增加词汇量咯

It is a common practice that teachers are used to hanging out the exercise books.
教师习惯于用练习簿来打发时间,是一种常见的做法.

据我们老师的经验,要多写还要另外背一些,当然一定的词汇量是基础啦

Love For My Parents
I love my family.I love my parents.Today was Mother's Day,in order to show my love for my mum,I decided to do something for her.When lunch was over.I said,"Mum,just rest.Let me do the cleaning".Mum was very glad.I put the dishes into the kitchen,and began to wash them.A few minuts later,I finished the job.I was so happy.My looked at me,with smile on her face.