English diary作文

【English diary】求语法与词汇修改!
I need support from my family.But my father always seems sad and it may because of me.But I don't know if I think too much.Several years ago,my father have praised that his colleague's daughter is too hard in study to turn on the computer.The girl have passed into a key university.I am sad.I often ask my father what he is thinking about.But he always wouldn't told me.
我上面要表达的是：
我需要家人的支持.但我的爸爸看上去似乎挺伤心的,可能是因为我的缘故.但我不知道是不是我想太多了.几年前,我爸爸曾夸奖她的同事的女儿因为太用功学习连电脑都不知道要怎么开.那个女孩已经考入一所重点大学.我很伤心.我经常问我爸爸他在想什么.但是他却总是不告诉我.
求语法与词汇修改!谢谢热于助人的你们!

【English diary】求语法与词汇修改!_
I need support from my family.But my father always seems sad and it may because of me.But I don't know if I think too much.Several years ago,my father have praised that his colleague's daughter is too hard in study to turn on the computer.The girl have passed into a key university.I am sad.I often ask my father what he is thinking about.But he always wouldn't told me.
我上面要表达的是：
我需要家人的支持.但我的爸爸看上去似乎挺伤心的,可能是因为我的缘故.但我不知道是不是我想太多了.几年前,我爸爸曾夸奖她的同事的女儿因为太用功学习连电脑都不知道要怎么开.那个女孩已经考入一所重点大学.我很伤心.我经常问我爸爸他在想什么.但是他却总是不告诉我.
求语法与词汇修改!谢谢热于助人的你们!

修改一篇English Diary
Today,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played computer games,They were fun!
At twelve- ten,I was stop do it,a little white,the meal would ready in a minute.
虽然,Today,I had more fun,but I don't like today!

修改一篇English Diary
Today,my mother went for a work,but I and my father do not,so we were stayed at home.I did my homework,It was a little difficult!I spent three hours do it......“Finish!”I said.And I went to my computer room,played computer games,They were fun!
At twelve- ten,I was stop do it,a little white,the meal would ready in a minute.
虽然,Today,I had more fun,but I don't like today!