I am a sophomore? 这句话对不对?

请高手帮我英文改错
When I am sophomore I often study in the library and sit on same seat .About two months later I was surprised to find out th ere was a girl who had sit on the opposite seat was the same one then I prefer to watch her when I studied tired sometimes she felt my peep and she might looked at me puzzled I gave her a sunshine smile
Warm with the fancies of youth ,pretty with the issipid prettiness of the formative period and eye alight with certain natinve intelligence I make my mind I might be fall in love with the gril I went to the library eye time even rainy I regularity walk after her certainly she din not know
Another month past I can not bear I told myself I must told her I like her and take heart of grace all thine come those who wait t I catched a chance to walk with her and we talked a lot to the important I succeed to know her phone number that night was very sweetness and I knew that was just the beginess she become my girl friend
哎,我丢人,
When I was a sophomore,I often studied in the library and took the same seat .Two months later I was surprised to find the girl sitting in the opposite was the same one .I watched her when I was tired from studying .Sometimes she can felt my peep and looked at me in a puzzle.I gave her a sunshine smile in return.Driven by the feeling ,the passion ,the love .I felt I was falling in love with that girl .So I went to the library every day .I usually walk after her at a certain distance to make sure she did not find out.
Another month went by,and I could not bear this kind of feeling.I must told her I loved her!I seized a chance to walk along with her and we talked a lot.I managed to get her phone number.That night was really sweet and I knew that was just a little start .Finally,she became my girlfriend.
好象字数多了,需要压缩下，痛苦,怎么办,再改少点

Mini-Case
Victoria Getz,a college sophomore ,has been seeking ways to earn extra spending money.As an active sports enthusiast,Victoria plays tennis regularly at the Georgetown Golf and Tennis Club,where her father has a family membership.The president of the club recently approached Victoria with the proposal that Victoria manage the club’ s tennis courts on weekends.Victoria’s primary duty would be to supervise the operation of the club’s two indoor and six outdoor courts,including court reservations.In return for her services,the club agreed to pay Victoria $50 per weekend,plus that Victoria could keep whatever she earned from the lessons she gives and the fees from the use of the ball machine.The club and Victoria agreed to a one-month trial,after which both would consider an arrangement for the remaining three years of Victoria’s college career.On this basis,Victoria organized Tennis Services Unlimited.During September,Victoria managed the tennis courts and entered into the following transactions.
a. Opened a business bank account by depositing $350.x0b
b. Paid $80 for tennis supplies (practice tennis balls,etc.)x0b
c. Paid $110 for the rental of video tape equipment to be used in offering lessons during September.x0b
d. Arranged for the rental of a ball machine during September for $40.Paid $20 in advance,with the remaining $20 due October 1.x0b
e. Received $375 for lessons given during September.x0b
f. Paid $45 for salaries of part-time employees who answered the telephone and took reservations while Victoria was giving lessons.
g. Received $60 in fees from the used of the ball machine during September.x0b
h. Paid $35 for miscellaneous expenses.
i. Received $200 from the club for managing the tennis courts during September.x0b
j. Supplies on hand at the end of the month total $55.x0b
k. Victoria withdrew $300 for personal use on September 30.x0b
As a friend and an accounting student,Victoria has asked you to aid her in assessing the venture.
Required:
make the journal entry for the transactions.
Prepare the following:(1) an Income Statement for September; (2) the Statement of Owner’s Equity; (3) a Balance Sheet of September 30.
Assume that Victoria Getz could earn $3.50 per hour working 16hours per weekend for a fast food restaurant.Evaluate which of the two alternatives,the fast food restaurant or Tennis Service Unlimited,would provide Victoria with a better income per month.
不是翻译,可以帮我做一下英语分录吗,

翻成 junior high school sophomore
怎么看起来怪怪的?

College life As a sophomore,I feel that the time flies.You may consider that college life is bori
用中文翻译这段话

英语翻译
senior,junior,freshman,sophomore什么意思呀,senior2,senior3,junior2,junior3又什么意思,说是大学各学年,那什么2,3是什么呀

Frank Thomas is a sophomore at Princeton,majoring in literary theory.后面的非谓语是什么成分?

I took much time to prepare CET-4 in my sophomore year.请问这一句哪一处错误？怎么改？

英语语法问题
I am a sophomore who major in law.I'm a sophomore majoring in law.前面的major为什么不加ing

口语考试
Sophomore Oral English Final Examination
INSTRUCTIONS:
Each group consisting of five students will be required to speak for 15 minutes on one of the following topics. The groups will not know what topic they will need to speak on until the day of the final where they will randomly draw one of the topics below. Each student will receive an individual grade based upon their speaking ability.
Beauty and Physical Attractiveness
· How do you define beauty, using your own words?
· Does beauty affect one's success in life?
· Do people spend too much time and money on beauty?
· Do you think people should have cosmetic surgery to enhance their looks?
o If so what is the minimum age when someone should have plastic surgery?
o How popular is plastic surgery in your country?
o What is the most popular feature for cosmetic alteration?
o Do you think self-esteem affects beauty?
o Do you think beauty affects self-esteem?
· How important is beauty in your daily life?
· Have you ever noticed anyone ever feeling pressured to be more beautiful?
· What do you think of the proverb, "beauty is in the eye of the beholder?"
o Do you have any proverbs or idioms from your country that relate to beauty?
· What personality trait is the most important for inner beauty?
· What makes one person more attractive than another?
· Are beauty pageants good or bad?
Education
· Are college tuitions reasonable?
· Are women encouraged to pursue education?
· Do you think teachers are paid enough?
· Do you think your school is a good one? Why/why not?
· Do you think your teachers give too much homework?
· Do you think it is easier to learn as a child or as an adult?
· Is it difficult for people without a college education to get good jobs where you live?
· What are some good ways to learn English?
· What are the qualities of a good student?
· What are the qualities of a good teacher?
· What is your favorite class? What’s your least favorite class?
· Who selects the college you will attend --
· Why are you studying a foreign language?
· Does education guarantee a good job?
· If you could go to another college in your country which one would it be and why?
我只是想要用英语回答下面问题

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