“按商业信函格式给我写一封信，表明你对将来工作岗位的设想。”这是老师给的题目，地址用XXX表示就行，感

判官★ 你有点不老实哦.
我把最后一段复制了,放到google上用机器翻译 简直是一模一样.
好意思说是“人工翻译”!BS!而且还和第一个人 淳白记忆 翻译的一模一样
非常感谢您正式发出邀请函,尤其是感谢您安排我和你们的客户和合作伙伴的会议,我们非常珍惜这个机会,我想这很可能是开辟我们两家公司未来合作的新起点.
Thank you very much for your formal invitation,especially thanks for arranging me attending a meeting with your customers and cooperative partners.We treasure this chance.And I consider this would be a fresh new start for establising our future cooperation.
自从6月29日jim来访、尤其是在7月25日,您作为JOC公司的CMO光临我公司之后,通过沟通,我们进一步了解了贵公司的业务.同时,我也非常赞同您的观点：我们可以开拓更有意义的业务.因此,我们正在积极准备您提出来的那2个方面的合作意向.
Since from the day of June 29th,Mr.Jim came to visit our company,especially on July 25th.You presented as COM of JOC to visit us and communicate so that we both know more about each other.At the same time,I quite agree with your point of view - we may explore more potential business.Therefore,we are working hard on your discussed those 2 ways of cooperation.
……
如果您要我在10日前赶到美国,那我就只好一个人来了.由于我不会英语,在美国旅行将会很不方便,所以,我希望最好是安排在本月20日前,例如9月14～20日期间,您看如何?当然,如果你的安排不便,我也可以在9月8～12日之间来拜访贵公司.
If you need me fly to American before September 10th,so I can leave for US alone.Because I don't speak English,this will bring so much inconvience to me.So I hope I had better leave before 20th Sept.,for example; how about coming during 14th and 20th Sept.If you consider that time is not available to you,I may visit during 8th and 12th Sept.
这是我的翻译,

In business contacts, the business correspondence is not only the medium for communicate, but also a means of establishing friendship and attracting customers. The features and functionality of business correspondence decide that the letter must pay attention to the politeness principle. The success of writing it has an extremely important impact on the business of a company. Thus, in day-to-day business activities, we should noted the application of the politeness principle in the Business English writing in order to promote better co-operation and communication in the future business..

比如thee thy thou之类的 指的都是你、你们
这类词在莎士比亚的剧作以及英文诗词和英国文学中较为常见
抱歉没有什么商业信函可以列出来 但是现在的商业信函中难再见到古英语了
我也只是在学英国文学读那些年代较为久远的文学作品是才见过这类英语古词.

"This type of business letter has its standard format."
固定格式=standard format
regular format= 正规/固定格式
specific format=特定格式
例句:
(1) In the UK,a standard business letter looks like this:
(2) In the old days,you would draft a letter in a standard format and send it to the ...
(3) STANDARD LETTER FORMAT The format of the standard letter is precisely...
(4) Thank the reader for the action he/she has not yet taken.This is a basic standard format of a cover letter.BPO cover letter is not an exception.It is also written ...

如果是用email,对格式的要求并不是很高,普通书信格式即可.

Dear Mr.Lbe
Thank you for your reply.
Regarding the price of the prown we were talking about,I would like to explain our consideration here.First of all,the quoted price was already a very low-margin price.We proposed such a preferential price just because of the long-term coopeation between our two companies.Second,the production of the prown will dramatically decrease in this year,therefore the price would definitely ascend in the near future.Third,our products have been widely acclaimed in Japan for long time,just thanks to the extremely good quality,so you will not have any trouble in terms of quality.
According to above consideration,we suggest that you rethink about the offer,and it is highly expected you will accept the price we proposed.
Should you have any questions or concerns,please let us know without any hesitation.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanks and best regards
XXX
29/03/2011
我也是一个销售人员,经常写这样的邮件.

acknowledge 函悉
regarding 事由(兹复)

email其实属于非正式信函,大可不必写得很拘谨,只要一般的就行了,用得太书面反而很让人觉得你很难接近

是信头和信尾的称呼么?
信头用Dear Sirs
信尾用Yours sincerely
信中的称呼可以是
贵方之接说your xx
我方our xx

we have received the goods(the invoice Number : 123),but while checking the goods,we have found it that the invoice that was provided is not in accordance with the packing list.We have received goods B instead goods A,please refer to the attached picture.Please check your shipment documents and the goods to be transported,we are in great need of goods A,and please infrom us of the fastest time that we can receive it?We have been told by the supplier that it may difficult to complete the delivery when updating the goods delivery.And it will be completed in May with all together.If we take a partial delivery by diliver them one in April and the others in May,can you accept?I'm very sorry for taking you the inconvenience ,If you have any questions, please contact me .