20140205)一道高中英语书面表达题,

天歌圣子2022-10-04 11:39:541条回答

20140205)一道高中英语书面表达题,
目前,高中学生之间经常会举办很多聚会,如生日、节日等.对此现象,人们表达了不同的观点.请根据下面表格的信息,给某英语报社写一篇文章,阐述两种不同的观点并谈谈自己的看法.
支持的理由
反对的理由
自己的观点
1.增进友谊,加深感情;
2.交流学习心得;
3.放松心情;
1.浪费时间;
2.浪费金钱;
3.存在安全问题;

At present,more and more high school students hold varieties of parties frequently to celebrate some significant things,such as birthdays,festivals and so on.Aiming at the popularity,some people are favor of it while others are not.
Those who support the parties think that we can develop our friendship and sweet feelings during parties,and we can communicate with each other on study experience.Besides,we can relax ourselves.But others don’t agree with them.They think it’s a waste of time and money,more seriously,it’s not safe because there may be some bad men trying to get money or any other things.
From my stand of view,I think we can take part in some proper parties when it’s necessary,But on the parties we should be careful so that we can enjoy safe and happy parties.

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cnwuxy 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
语法上没有什么大错误
注意以下几点:①:such as后面最好打逗号,然后etc.
②:some people are favor of it while others are not. ……………………But others don’t agree with them.
两句话有点重复了……后面那句是衔接不好的原因.
③:Besides, we can relax ourselves.
这句话可以改成分词作状语的句子,和上面连成一句话会更好.
④:there may be some bad men trying to get money or any other things.
说的有点怪怪的……直接说打劫rob就可以了,get money因为get的缘故可以有很多意思的……理由不太好,至少也要加一个“在过去的路上”吧.
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