Revise the following sentences with the given rhetorical dev

英语大牛帮我把句子改一下题目是Revise the following paragraph by whatever way you think is proper.
We should not rely so heavily onoil,Coal and uranium which are overused.We have a substantial energy resource in the moving waters of ourrivers.Smaller streams add to the total volume of water which the resourcerenews itself.The oil ,coal and uranium which are irreplaceable.The cost ofwater does not increase much over time.So the cost of coal,oil,and Uraniumrise dramatically.

SOS: revise my essay
My Beloved Father
There is a famous saying that father is daughter's lover in the previous life. Maybe that is why I am my father's daughter in this life. And nothing can express my love for you, my father!
My father is a typical Chinese man. He has brown eyes, big mouse, yellow even a little dark skin because of the heated sun. He has a big nose which has been inherited to me, matching properly with our faces. Of course, I don't think the big nose is ugly, instead, I enjoyed the big nose, because it is our special character, which is unique in the world. And his hair used to be very black and. While, nowadays his black hair has been gradually turning to white with the increasing of age. Now, he has been in his late forties. Besides, I also believe it is not only because of it, but also because of his toilsome unselfishness to the family. And what I like most is his mustache. I can still remember that when I was a kid, he usually rubbed my little face with his bushy but tidy beard, which always made me laugh. How happy it was! He looks so handsome in his casual clothes because he has a proper figure with an average height.
He is also an ordinary person. He has to work hard to earn money to surpport the family. He usually has to worry whether the money can afford to pay the tuition of his children. He is willing th do everything for the family. He always telephone me to tell me to live a good life again and again. He cares about us more than himself. He is not so healthy, while he think it too expensive to consult the doctors. And he just suffers his pain, which always makes me feel heartache. In my eyes, he is a great father like most fathers in the world. And he is my most beloved father who can't be replaced by anyone in the world. Whenever I need his love, he gives me all of his love without hesitation. Whenever I need his help, his tries his best to help me out of trouble. He has devoted all his time to the family.
I love you, father! You are the sunshine shining into my whole life! You always says that, my happiness is your happiness. But your happiness is really my happiness.

I went to bed too late last night,I_____(revise)for the exam and forgot the night

下面的题怎么排?revise/want to/so/I am/higher marks/going to/every evening/get/I/ma lessons/./

第一题的要求是:Revise these sentence to state their meaning in fewer words.Avoid passive voice,needless repetition,and wordy phrases and clauses
1Some people believe in capital punishment,while other people are against it;there are many opinions on this subject.
2The subjects that are considered most important by students are those that have beenshown to be useful to them after graduation.
3A campus really was attended by more than a thousand students.Five students were arrested by campus police for disorderly conduct,while several others are charged by campus administrators with organizing a public meeting without being issued a permit to do so.
4Trouble is caused when people disobey rules that have been established for the safety of all.
5It is expected that the new schedule will be announced by the bus company within the next few days.

Revise 1
Revise the following sentences to eliminate mixed of awkward constructions.
To look at rolling hills of white snow or snow-capped evergreens is far more beautiful than the brown slush on city streets.
After four weeks at sea,my wife was happy to see me back.
Lost in the mail,Thomas never received the letter.
Once out of the practice room,the drum beats no longer gave him a headache.
The little time we have together we try to use it wisely.

那这道题怎么填The students usually do___(revise) before an exam.
The students usually do___(revise) before an exam.

英语翻译
Ms.Helen,revise su nueva propuesta puede ajustar un poco el precio FOB.el pago seria de banco a banco,una transferencia bancaria favor enviarme el Numero de su cuenta y nombre del banco,de todo el pedido que he hecho si no tienen en stock favor indicarme para reducir en algun modelo espero su respuesta
Saludos
Edmundo Robles

英语翻译
Part 1 please revise the following sentences so as to make them formal and acceptable in business situation.
1.The letter I am writing is about your order for computers.
2.If you don’t improve your service,we will cancel the contract.
3.Come and repair the machine we bought from you last week.
4.We want to have your payment soon.
5.We can’t refund your payment.
6.We can reduce the price for large orders.
7.We strongly ask that you refund at least 10percent of our money.
8.We are extremely sorry that we can not accept the price.
9.I must tell you that you have delayed the payment by two months.
10.I will be very glad if you could pay us before the end of the month.
11.I am not sure if you could come to the worksite on Tuesday morning.
12.I received your letter which informs me of the latest prices of your computers
13.In this letter I’m complaining about your services.
14.We delivered the goods to you three months ago.
The cover of the machine is cracked.Please send us a replacement

【紧急求助】Revise the following sentences.
对此题型比较生疏,请问Revise the following sentences这类型的题目该如何着手最好,如何按照题目的要求修改得恰到好处?一并请详细给介绍一下.如下我摘抄一些该类型题目,劳驾认真帮忙修改一下,我想仔细再将题目例句及修改后的句子对比揣摩一下.谢谢
Revise the following sentences.
1、The old man returning home after 8 years' absence to find that all the neighbors he had known were no longer there.
2、Hurring to the conference room, no one there.
3、Shakespeare was one of the greatest dramatists.
4、Looking out of the window,the grassland streches as far as the eye can reach.
5、A man is judged not only by what he says but also what he deeds.
1. In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.——>In the year of 1840, the Opium War broke out.
2.10. He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude. ——>He did not tell the truth honestly.
题目要求相当于根据题目所给句子的意思改写句子，使句子通顺连贯。

(Have you got enough time left) to revise my work beafore i send it in?
括号中的内容正确吗?如果正确,为什么要用过去完成时.

英语翻译
Ms.Helen,revise su nueva propuesta puede ajustar un poco el precio FOB.el pago seria de banco a banco,una transferencia bancaria favor enviarme el Numero de su cuenta y nombre del banco,de todo el pedido que he hecho si no tienen en stock favor indicarme para reducir en algun modelo espero su respuesta
Saludos
Edmundo Robles

求高手解决英语问答!
exercise i
please identify the problems and revise following thesis statements
1. living in an apartment for the first time can teach you many things.
2. the library is a good place for students seeking academic help.


exercise ii
complete the thesis statements by adding possible subtopics. .
1. our *** should double the existing fines for first-offense drunk drivers. such a move would_______________________________________________________________________
2. apartment living is preferable to dorm living because_________________________________
3. not everyone can become an astronaut. to qualify, a person must have____________________

revise和review的区别是什么啊?
做“复习”时的区别,用法

SOS：revise the essay
How to Make bread in the traditional way
Nowadays,bread has become more and more popular among people.And its price has risen because of its popularity.But,do you know that,you can bake it in your own home?And it is very easy.Let's me show you the steps.
The first step of all is mixing flour.And then knead it into dough in a big bowl.After that,please don't forget to set the dough in front of the fire to"rise".During this time,you can do something else,because it will take several minutes for the dough to rise.When the dough has risen,you can divide it up into four parts.Subsequently,you should put the parts into bread tins.Of course,you can also "prog" the top of the loaves in an interesting pattern with a kitchen fork.Following this step,you shall leave them in front of the fire for a while longer.Finally,put them into the oven for several minutes,you can get the delicious bread.So enjoy your bread.
You can see that,it is not so difficult for us to make bread.Why not make bread by yourself,meanwhile,you can also get a lot of pleasure from the process.

英语翻译
Please revise the drawing base on my feedback below asap,tks!
- Attached is module dimension,pls adjust label size base on it
- Week/Year code is not correct,please refer to attached definition
- Please follow the barcode format I sent you

review和revise有什么区别
都作复习的时候有什么区别嘛.

Anyone help me revise a paragraph of my" WHY essay"?
Pls leave your id below.thx a lot!

China has promised to revise its existing regulations and __________ new policies according to WTO requirements. A．forming B．to form C．to be forming D．have formed

China has promised to revise its existing regulations and ______ new policies according to WTO requirements.

A. forming B. to form C. to be forming D. have formed

sat英语语法问题
The refusal of the management to revise (their) policy on family leave caused an uproar among emplyees.
为什么their用法错了，

Shortly after he finished his homework,he went on （）（revise）for the test 动词填空

Revise the paragraph to improve sentence style by varying sentence beginnings,correcting nonparallel structures,and revising stringy or wordy sentences.
When other children were collecting insects and shells,I was looking at leaves and flowers,and whenever my brother and I went fishing,I spent more then a majority of the time studying the vegetation on the riverbanks.

Revise the following sentences.Try to make them more effective.(30%)英语改错 求正解
1.To swim in a pool is not as much fun as swimming in a river.
2.Leonardo da Vince was known both as an inventor and painting pictures.
3.The foreman shouted at both of us,Peter and I,before we had a chance to explain.
4.In the book it tells us about a spring when no birds sang.
5.Rachel Carson was a woman who pioneered in ecological studies.
6.Ralph Nader has throughout our country become a well-known name.
7.Partly through his efforts safety devices were installed in cars such as seat belts.
8.On arriving at the river,the current was frightening.
9.At the age of 6 months,her father taught her to swim.
10.My father is a history teacher,so I take it as my major.

用所给的短语的适当形式填空（每个短语只能用一次）：revise for,have a picnic,look forward to,
do some sightseeing,stay in bed,play table tennis,listen to,walk up,do one's homework,get from ...to
1.It takes me half an hour _______
2.We should _______our test carefully
3.If you are ill,you'd better _______this afternoon
4.Is Lucy looking forward to _______the Great Wall?
5.I often _______with my friends after school
6.All of us _______the coming holidays
7.Dalian is a beautiful city.Would you like _______this afternoon?
8.How do you _______New York _______Beijing?
9.Are you going _______in the open air tonight
10.Students should _______teachers carefully in class

英语!T-T!
Revise the following sentences.Try to make them concise.
1.In the year 1840 the Opium War broke out.
2.There are more books in their library than in our library.
3.He returned back home after he graduated from college.
4.We planned to meet just before sunrise very early in the morning.
5.The cause of the flood was due to the heavy rain in late spring.
6.He was asked to repeat the sentence again.
7.I play badminton equally as well as my brother.
8.It seemed to his friends that his attitude was of a puzzling nature.
9.These watermelons are large in size and sweet in taste.
10.He did not tell the truth with an honest attitude.
11.There are a number of students who want to join the drama club.
12.He was kind enough to let me share the same umbrella with him.
13.Zhao was the person who was elected the representative of the class by the whole class.
14.At the present time I am taking the course of World History and in addition a course in geography too.
15.The plane circled around the airport for about ten minutes or so and than disappeared and could no longer be seen.
16.What I am trying to say is that in my opinion he has not done his work very well and it needs improving.
17.I would like you to consider the question of whether or not you will let our journal publish your recent article on women scientists in China.
18.Owing to the fact that he had missed many lectures,he was aware that it would be possible for him to fail the exam.
19.You must first work out an outline for your paper,and then after you have done that,you need to collect all kinds of material to support your point of view.
20.In that country violent death has become a commonplace thing,a thing that occurs every day.
21.He is not only a good pianist,but also a good singer as well.
22.This pretty actress keeps apeearing in TV serials repeatedly.
23.As a rule,students are usually not allowed to take books out of this reading-room.
24.According to the speaker,it is obvious that the responsibility system has helped to increase production and he has no doubt about it.
25.One reason why people are well informed in this countryi s becuase of the fact that there are many newspapers which can easily be bought or subscribed to.
26.Statistics show that in the decade from 1980 to 1990 enrollments at this school doubled:in 1990 there were twice as many students as in 1980.
27.There are so many inexperienced unskilled workers without training in a particular job that production of the factory has been affected.
28.There are about 50 patients or so in this ward,among whom many are being given acupuncture treatment.
29.His name is called James Williams.
30.Whatever he does,he works seriously with great care,and does his best so as to do it well.

英语翻译
1.这部法律正在被修改,很快就会颁发.（revise）
2.我在翻阅一些旧杂志时照到了这篇文章.（browse）
3.青藏铁路的开通将一个古老而神圣的区域与现代文明连接起来.（connect）
4.没有人会相信他与上周六发生的事有关.（connect）
自然会给你分的啊~

The meaning of following sentences is not clear.Revise the sentences so that they are unambiguous and precise:

The riskness of these bonds alone does not determine their selling prices.
The FASB has not officially written a pronouncement on the handling of requisition costs.

英语翻译
请帮忙翻译以下西班牙语为中文,
cesar buenas tardes te encargo que revises el pedido con kat ya que creo que se equibocaron te estoy renviando la orden final
ellos estan contemplando 12 de zorb -01 y 4 zorb -04 y deben de ser 10 y 5 respectivamente ademas que me quiere cobrar 100 dlls mas
y no estoy deacuerdo por que eso no me lo dijo antes de recibir el pago comentale que si este es el ultimo pedido que quiere recibir.

200分！！英语专业高手进 Revise the following sentences with the given rhetorical devices.
Revise the following sentences with the given rhetorical devices.
1. David’s beloved grandfather passed away last week.
2. He looked at me with a sad look.
3. Sorry, my pocket can’t afford such a pair of shoes.
4. I never believe until then that any meal could defeat me, but on that day I met my Waterloo.
5. Her hostility melted.
6. She is lovely, kind-hearted and has a quick mind.
7. I was knocked down by a motorcycle, but it was not serious.
8. He is a man of wide experience and who is also very popular with the farmers.
9. To chew carefully and eating slowly are necessary for good digestion.
10. On the train I met with a girl from my hometown and who just graduated from Tianjin University with MA degree.
11. My heart is like a singing bird.
12. She is as cool as a cucumber..
13. They were short of hands at harvest time.
14. The bad news was a dagger into her heart.
15. They stormed the speaker with questions.
16. He looked at me with a bitter look
17. You want your pound of flesh?
18. He doesn’t have an idea of his own. He just parrots what other people say.
19. His grandfather passed away recently.
20. Her happiness vanished like the morning dew.
不是让你们翻译 是让你们做题

英语翻译
if you don't revise for 24 hours：如果你不复习达24小时
revise：vt.这里是：复习
1.修订,修改2.改变，修改（意见或计划）3.修正；改变4.[主英国英语]复习，温习

China has promised to revise its existing regulations and ___ new policies according to WTO requirements. A．forming B．to form C．to be forming D．have formed