帮我改改这篇英语作文。2011年6月六级英语作文certificate craze

求人帮我改改英文演讲稿
看下语法,时态,词汇,的错误,
Hello!guys!I make a speech again.Last time my topic was “the development of China”.Today I would like to talk about my feelings about the exams.
My first exam in the normal school was Maths.At the beginning,I thought it’s very diffcult to achieve high grades.Because we had the same exam papers with students who study science.To my surprise,we did better than them.And I achieved high marks that pleased my parents.
This mid-term exam,I also have many thoughts.
It’s my first time that I don’t have enough time to finish the Chinese exam.there are more questions than I used to do.And there are some differences between this exam and the past”s.For example,there is a question about the auther’s living place.And there is also a question asks us to write the article’s title that few people pay attention to.
Maths and History are easy.And I have a lot of time to check them.
English!I can not use words to express the difficulty of the exam.Recently,I have been reciting a number of words.though it helps me a lot,there are lots of words and prase that I can’t understand or even I have never seen it before.Though I can understand,the questions are too difficult to complet them quickly.I had to think every question carefully.And I guess large amount of questions.From this examination I have learned a lot of experience!I should recite some words every day.to accumulate over a long period,I will have a large vocabulary!I think it’s a good idea to improve English!
That’all.Thank you!

英语短文有什么语病帮我改改?
Since science is developing quickly,almost every family in China have least one TV.It is easy to get information by watching TV.But I listening to the radio more than watching TV.Actually listen to the radio is not likely to be replaced by television.One can listen to the radio while waiting a bus or do some other things,but probably he won't watch TV in the meantime.I usually listen to the radio by my mobilephone,I can take them anywhere but it's impossible to bring a television everywhere.Though it has only got about 10 channels,I feel interested in it.In a word,both radio and TV can provide different kings of pleasure.
我是初中生,这篇作文感觉问题很多..可能还有点不必要的句子,希望大家耐心帮我改改,
有个them 打错了 是 it~

明天急用的3个问句,帮我改改好吗.
我周一要问一个英国小学副校长,您看看我表达的对吗?1、提高学生身体素质的好方法,尤其是如何保护视力?帮我改改,
Do you have any good methods to improve thestudent’s health,especially eyesight protection?
2、在你学校孩子也学外语吗?学什么外语?是必修还是选修?
Do your children learn a foreign language atschool?What the foreign languages are they?Is it optional or required?
3、在英国成为一名小学教师,需要具备哪些条件?
What are the qualifications for a primaryschool teacher?

英语高手给我改改.
Sandstorm is a nature phenomenon that causes disastrous consequence.It can make people’s eyes invisible.It can bury the farmland which brings tremendous losing to farmers.It can damage transportation system causing traffic paralysis.Most of all,it can hurt people’s health.

写了几句英语观后感
英文高手帮我看看,哪有写的不对的帮我改改好吗谢谢
I haven't written any more untill I saw a film called Alice in Wonderland which deeply touched me last week,because I am crazy about movie screen,personality is bright ,dress style,and the most important reason is confidence,even in war times also not forget keep beautiful,don't care what other people think.
This made me association -- Sometimes we are so worry about losing face that finally did not gain.

我的英文日记,高手帮我改改语病.
i feel a little tired now.but the reason isn't the work.i didn't done many work today.you wanna know why i felt that way.well,if you must know.i'll tell you the whole reason.because the time is 23:41 now.i,ve been hypnotize a few time back.for that reason,i inclined to fast over this diary.i used to show something or somebody easily.i didn't liked more masquerade.so writing hours are now over.everybody beybey..i honer to let someone find my mistake in this diary.thank you very much.

英语小短文一篇,帮着改改
In fewture ,I will be a painter.I will live in Hangzhou,and I will live with my friend,and then can give me some advice.I can draw many pictures for Hangzhou‘s scenery,wow,that's my dream.

哪位骨灰级的英语大师帮我改改这篇自我介绍.好久不写英文了,有想表达的意思,不过写不出来了.
Morning everyone.It's my pleasure to be here for introduce myself.I hope I can make a good performance today.
My name is Candice.21 years old.I lively and cheerful.My friends always say I do things in a mannish way.
But I'm not same in the life of me.I love photography.Used the camera to record every exciting moment in life to share with others,this is my greatest joy.
When I pick up my guitar,whenever fingers touch the strings,all unhappy disappeared.
This lively girl is me.

谁帮我改改这句话?!
However, if we have participated in some activities in our university lives such as student organization or club activities, these experience would increase more benefits for us to hunt jobs when competing with others.

改语法和更好的表达 多谢!

哪位帮我改改这句话
Only obeys the natural law,family can be prosperous and preserved.

大家帮我看看这句话,是不是有错,帮我改改
You are not qualified to ask me I do not intent to do things,at least now

英语翻译
学生们应该被教育意识到经常体育锻炼的重要性.大家帮我改改.
students should be educated to ware the significant of Physical exercise.

请问这个英文句子有没有语法的错误.如果有请帮忙改改.
i smile,and i think i won't be retreat until i get success
我微笑,我想我不会退缩（退缩用retreat这个词合适吗?）,直到我获得成功.
如果有更好的翻译请写写,Thanks a lot!

英语达人帮忙润下这篇小演讲稿
鄙人的老师让轮流在班上做个讲演. 所以我希望有亲帮忙改改.让稿子读起来更顺畅有感觉些吧.我选的是关于friendship为主题的演讲.内容如下
.Recently,i read an absorbing moive called " the kite runner" i like the front part best,it says the pure friendship and innocent childhood between two boys.People who have seen the moive maybe ask " what is the true friendship"

In my opinion,It is to relate with somebody without need for money or objective. , no matter what their background , age , sex or personality. Friendship can be pure. However nowdays we often hear how one can be betrayed by friends. Many people get along with someone because they have a lot of money. It is doultful that is real friendship.

As the proverb says"a friend in need is a friend indeed" If you are in trouble your friends will help you through or at least comfort you. When you are happy , they share it with you.Best friends are always there for you to chat with at any time.
And i believe ,if the world is filled with friendship,it will be more beautiful.Thats all.thank you.!
还望亲们多多帮忙哈.不胜感谢.>

谁能帮忙把这句英语改改?哪里错了?
1. The water has been shut off at the office workersare replacing the pipes.
2. I have a lot of research to plan out this weekend I will not be leaving thehouse.
3. Class begins at 6:30 be sure you arrive on time.
上面三句话都有错的地方,谁能给更正下?英语不好.谢谢!

帮忙改改错误,语法 语义之类的 哪写的不好也帮帮忙.
Population’s fall and down are based on four components:fertility,mortality,migration and the size and age structure.And there are a large number of impacts of other fields that are related to population.Such as economic,social,environment and so on.In this essay,I will talk about the situation of Australia’s population,the impacts of population and immigration,and what are the benefits and disadvantages of maintaining the population at present 24 million.I have chosen four sources:a book,two journal articles and a wibesite.It tells us the impacts of population and immigration from the book and the situation of Australia’s population from the articles and wibesite.All of them are relevant,reliable and recent.In my report,first of all,I will state the situation of Australia’s population,after that I will find the impacts,next I will illustrate the advantages and disadvantage of the increasing population.Lastly,I will make a conclusion.
答得好的50分送

谁能帮我改改这段英文,只有一小段,
Companies in the development process,constant pursuit of quality products and good service and strive for customer satisfaction,maximize the value.Enterprises to "honest,trustworthy,quality" for business purposes,in order to "optimize product quality,the pursuit of customer satisfaction "as quality policy,to" dedication to customer service "in a spirit of enterprise development,to create a good benefit our customers,will to better product quality and better service our customers love Thanks.Willing to work around the new and old customers to create a better tomorrow.
不是翻译，是修改，有语法错误和中国式英文

英译中,顺便改改语法
It's 3 pm in Los Angeles.The sun shined over the giant Hollywood sign,making the cement ground hot and dry.
John,an unsuccessful carpenter,had been in LA for 3 weeks,and he had been auditioning for 3 weeks,too.Today he had only 8 dollars left in his pocket,and the friend who had been lending him his couch finally kicked him out in morning."I won't be able to afford both a burger and a bed tonight." John said to himself.He was overwhelmed with frustration and despair now.Suddenly,a shiny sports car with a sign that he couldn't recognize,rushed by him at the street corner,which almost knocked him down.The car even didn't slow down a bit.John watched the pretty girls in it drove away,laughing.He recalled the reason that he left his hometown for LA:to become a movie star and drive a car just like that.He also recalled the moment that he threw a wood pole at his boss,stormed out,and announced to everyone in town that he would become the greatest actor ever.
"Well,look at me now." John looked down upon his shoes,while standing at the intersect.They were worn out and all dusty."I can never get a part in these shoes." He took a step,but he was so occupied that he didnn't realize the signal has turned red,and a heavy truck was coming down the street in its full speed.With a disturbing sound of car breaks,John felt something was falling on him,a lot of somethings.Though he soon started losing his consciousness,John still could vaguely smell a scent of pine trees and fir that he's familiar with.
"Wood poles..."John tried to make a handsome smile with his last breath,but it was too small for anyone to notice.It's 3:08 pm in Los Angeles.The giant sign that bathed the hot sun,is reflecting an elegant silver light upon the hills.

请问一下这段话有没有语法错误或者别的错误.如果有错误,帮我改改吧.
I am honored to come here.First,My speech is excerpt from Madonna`s speech in the MTV stage .As far as we know ,Michael Jackson was passed away two years ago.I love his songs and He is a respected person.OK,I`m ready.

汉译英.背景是面试,说以前的一些成绩,这句话我时态掌握不好,高手帮忙改改
First, due to my hardwork, the salesman supported by me gets an
outstanding sales performance every month.

帮我改改语法错误～
Hainan is a beautiful place,it is the second largest island.The water is clear and the sky is blue .All the year round,there are many coconut palm trees,and you can on the long beaches do some watersports.Hainan is a populer city ,I think you should visit to there .There are many ways of traveling such as by plane,by train,by car and people can choose any of ways of traveling if they like.you can go there by plane,because it’s very fast.
I hope you will have a good time in Hainan!

雅思剑5第一篇小作文,希望大牛帮助改改,顺便给个分数,
This tendency graph,which from 1940 to 2040,demonstrates the quota of population aged 65 and over in 3 countries,namely Japan,Sweden and USA.All three countries’ percentages stared from lower than 10% in 1940 up to approximately 25% in 2040.The proportion of Sweden and USA had the same increasing tendency from 1940 to 1990(about 7% to 15%),but the percentage of Sweden rose more rapidly than USA between 1990 and 2015 with a peak in 2010 about 20%.However the quota of Japan decreased a little bit from 1940(5%) to 1960(3%),and stayed constant from 1960 to 1980,then the quota increased to 2015 to about 10%.After 2015 the proportions of all three countries rise dramatically to 2040.From the whole graph can man summarize,that the proportion of this three countries will keep rising with an almost same tend.

修改下面一段话,只要改改语法和顺序是否正确
Above all,we can draw aconclusion that pun is very important using in English advertisement.If we useadvertisement to spread the products,especially used with puns,the productscan become more competitive.lots of people may be absorbed in it.In today’ssociety,if you make full use of the advertisement.It can help a company a lot,and then they can win lots of consumers.There are main four kinds of punswhich are applied in advertising English; they are puns of homonymic,semantic,grammatical and idiomatic.I use six ways to translate in the paper,of course,there are other ways to translate the advertisement,I just choose six of them.Puns,as very important tools,can produce special pragmatic functions:theyare information function,humorous function,persuasive function,economicalfunction,readability function and association function.When you translate thepapers,it must be based on the concrete condition and then use other effectivemethods to express the meaning of text.It will help the future’s people toresearch Chinese advertisements if we study the English advertisementcarefully.And the successful translation of examples also helps translationagencies have a further development.

"我好想______" 600字左右 不要整段复制 先改改再给我
"我好想______" 600字左右

请大家帮我改改这段话!
Well,I would rather like to the person who prefers to solve any challenges all by myself.First,each challenge is a cherishing opportunity for me.If someone helps me with that,it means that i'll lose this chance.That's not what i want.In addition,trying some difficulties will develop your skills and enrich your knowledge.Thus only if,i am able to advance myself.Finally,if i figure out that challenge,i will become more confident.And that is beneficial to my study and life.As you know,if someone lack confidence ,he will lose every game in the society.

好心人帮我改改托福作文
崇拜的演员或运动员,WHY?
It is universally acknowledged that famous persons have a great influence on today's life.All things about them such as "what are they doing now","what will they do in the future",ect,are concerned by people.Why?Just because of their excellent character loved and respected deeply by people.If I had a chance to meet a famous person,there is no deny that I would choose Jacky chen who is hard-working,obliging and what's more he brings China to the world.
First of all,when it comes to an excellent character of Jacky chen--hard-working,we can not emphasize the importance of that too much to his success.His success which is not by lucky like some other enterainers is owing to his consistent endeavour and that is the most important character which I admire.Once he acted as a dead man at the beginning of his career,and the director asked him to lie on the ground without moving.The ground was cold and his body was numb,but he did not give
up and sticked to the task until it was finished.Eventually,his excellent performance leads to his success.
Additional,successful as Jacky chen is,he never forgets to help others.We could find his shadow from lots of charities,as an example of his kindness one must only look at his recent efforts in China to help raise money for SARS research,and he was almost the first entertainer who standed out to do some charities for SARS.Also,After the earthquake in Si chuan province in China,he sent his donation of large amount money to the area and did lots of performance for free in order to let more people pay attention to the area.
What's more,Jacky chen is not only known by Chinese but also known by world,nothing is more important than to bring China to the world in his career.He began to go into Hollywood and did a good job like what he had done in China.Many of his movies are popular worldwide,such as RUSH TIME,WHO AM I,ect.His movies let more people know him as well as China.

翻译：我从网站上得知了你关于XXX的研究工作.帮我改改这句话!
I learned from the website about your research works on XXX.

本人仿写《爱莲说》写一篇文言文,望广大网友帮忙改改.
水陆草木之花,可爱者甚蕃,北宋周敦颐独爱莲,唐杨贵妃爱牡丹,自李唐来,世人盛爱牡丹,予独爱海棠之即使当红一瞥,也要红艳娇世.其犹如秋菊,迎风怒放.不禁浮想联翩.
予谓莲,花之君子者也.海棠,花之奋斗者也.牡丹,花之富贵者也.噫!莲之爱,周后鲜有闻,海棠之爱,同予者何人?牡丹之爱,宜乎众矣.

帮我改改这篇文章 英语!
The Spinng Festival is coming,all of us are excited.We prepare delicious food,drings and buy fireworks.We wear new clothes because we need to visit some relations and they also visit us.
In the evening,we watch Spring Festival Gala Evening and set off workfires ,though it is very noisy but we thing it makes Spring Festival more interesting .Children always get a lots of money,butparents always order them to save money in thebank.This is the most sad things in the Festival!
这种文章所用的主要时态应该是什么，我是在春节前写的。

能帮我改改这篇英语作文吗,极其的感谢~~~
Dear dad: As the Thanksgiving Days is coming, through all my life, I supposed you must be the first man I ought to express my gratitude.
Not only did you so much for me in material but also in psychology. Due to my silent character, in spite of I wanted to express some genuine statement of heartfelt appreciation to you, I have never bothered you just with a "thank you".
Dad, do you still remember? Once you wanted to teach me something in volunteer work, whereas I just taken your idea for rather firm and useless. Although I did not straightforward evaluate you concept, you still felt my aversion and draw a conclusion that I'm flashy. I was sad and angry at that moment, deciding not communicate with you any more. As time flying, I can slowly arrive at the highly state that you wish. Only you can tell me something about that, regardless of my reluctant. I love you.
Your lovely daughter

英文：改语法!和改句子结构
求高人帮我改改语法吧.我这文章写得幼稚,顺便帮我改改有些句子的结构.最好写的和美国人一样,加点修饰词之类的~
All three of these pieces are a portrait and there are deep meaning behind them.Andy Warhol helps Pop Art paintings and screen printings movement in the 20th century.Warhol’s Blonde makes me remember the characters in Avatar because of the blue skin.I think Avatar shows the changing from 20th century till now.In this picture,the woman looks plastic,and Warhol really likes plastic because he thinks plastic people are more beautiful than real people.According to the research he said he thinks people forgot what emotions were supposed to be during the 1960s.That is the reason he likes to focus on famous people’s faces and catch the emotion.My first thought on The Blonde is she looks happy.And then I focus on her face for 5 seconds,I think she looks a little bit upset.At the beginning I think she looks happy because the color is bright.Thus,the color of the picture can change the emotion.The Self-portrait is also from 20th century.Compared to Warhol’s Blond,the Self-portrait looks sad.From her picture we can see she really wants to stop wars because of her experience.She just can use his drawing to show her thinking and sadness.She doesn’t want to speak to others that she hates war,but she just hope his drawing can tell and resonate.The picture of Gudea statue is really different from other two pictures.Gudea was the ruler of the Sumerian city state of Lagash.This statue includes ruler ship and religion.And it reminds me the Chinese Buddha.The same idea is they have their own beliefs.The color of the Gudea statues are always dark because the dark color looks serious.Thus,people would respect it.

你能帮我改改这个题吗?
Problem A:Counting
Time Limit:1000MS Memory Limit:65536K
Total Submit:14 Accepted:12
Description
一本书的页码从自然数1 开始顺序编码直到自然数n.书的页码按照通常的习惯编排,每个页码都不含多余的前导数字0.例如,第6 页用数字6 表示,而不是06 或006 等.数字计数问题要求对给定书的总页码n,计算出书的全部页码中分别用到多少次数字0,1,2,…,9.
编程任务：
给定表示书的总页码的10 进制整数n (1≤n≤10000) .计算书的全部页码中分别用到多少次数字0,1,2,…,9.
Input
输入由多组测试数据组成.
每组测试数据输入只有1 行,给出表示书的总页码的整数n.
Output
对应每组输入,输出共有10行,在第k行输出页码中用到数字k-1 的次数,k=1,2,…,10.
Sample Input
11
Sample Output
1
4
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
1
代码是
#include
main()
{ char str[5];
x05int n,i,j,m,a,b,c,d,e,f,g,h,k,l;
x05while(scanf("%d",&n)!=EOF){
x05x05a=b=c=d=e=f=g=h=k=l=0;
x05x05for(i=1;i

求大神帮我改改这段英语,
从另一方面来说,石油本身就是一种宝贵的化工原料,可以用来制造塑料、合成橡胶和合成纤维等.把石油作为燃料烧掉了,不但十分可惜,而且还污染了人类赖以生存的环境.解决这个难题的唯一可行办法,就是加紧开发新能源.根据调查显示,汽车所造成的空气污染占整个城市空气污染的60%甚至到90%.不可再生能源的日趋枯竭,城市污染的加重,世界范围内的温室效应,海平面升高等一系列环境问题都给我们人类的持续发展敲响了警钟,促使我们必须寻求一条绿色发展之路,寻找可以代替不可再生能源的新能源（清洁能源）.毫无疑问具有清洁、高效并且取之不尽用之不竭等优点的太阳能被人们列入了第一考虑对象.
On the other hand,the oil itself is a kind of valuable chemicalraw materials,can be used to make plastics,synthetic rubber and syntheticfiber,etc.The oil as fuel is burned,not only great pity,but also pollutesthe environment to the survival of humans.The only feasible way to solve thisdifficult problem,is to intensify the development of new energy.According tothe survey,car air pollution caused by the 60% of air pollution in the cityand even to 90%.Non-renewable energy depleted,city pollution is aggravating,the world within the scope of the greenhouse effect,rising sea levels and aseries of environmental problems is the sustainable development of human beingsis a wake-up call to us,we must seek a path of green development,seek newenergy can replace non-renewable energy (clean).There is no doubt that isclean,efficient and inexhaustible advantages of solar energy has been listedas the first consideration.

帮改改作文
间如流水一般匆匆而逝,很多的记忆已随日子的消失而褪色.但有一件事,让我历历在目,感动不已——那一份深沉的母爱
我觉得这段话感动不已后接那一份深沉的母爱,似乎有点不通顺

请帮我改改句子,句意不变.
第一小题：韩英郁是女生.
1改成否定句,句意不变.（ ）
2改成双重否定句,句意不变.（ ）
3改成反问句,句意不变.（ ）
第二小题：童年的夏夜是美妙的.
1疑问句（ ）
2感叹句（ ）
3否定句（ ）
双重否定句（ ）
注意：回答问题时,把上面的复制下来,在括号里答题.

谁帮我改一个英文句子给25分!这是一个英文改错题,我不会做你们谁帮我改改.请写清楚错在哪里,然后帮正确的写下来谢谢!this rose colored sweater was gave to my mother and i by my Grandmother who lives in atlanta

一个小英语作文求高手帮忙改改错误的地方.
I can't see you next week because i'm going on holiday witch my parents.
we always stay near a town very small on the coast.There is lovely and sandy beach and the sea is clear and warm.
The town has lots of old beautiful buildings.my parents like going to the galleries art but I get boring so I go to the shops.
you can buy cheaps clothes there.
I hope we go to my restaurant favourite.
Write back and tell me all your excited news.
看看形容词.有8个错误这里面..

请大家帮我改改英文介绍
大家帮我看看呀 这个是我的英文介绍
也许不是很好
帮我看下,可以修改的地方请告诉我
It’s my pleasure to introduce myself to you here.
My name is Di wen yi.My English name is Yami.
I hope to come to apply for the reception of your company.
I'm very happy that I am qualified for this interview.
I am 23 ­years old, born in Shanghai.．I am a faithful girl .
I have had two years' working experience
I have learned a lot about business and mastered basic office skills.
In addition, I learned how to cooperate with my colleagues from my previous job.
With strong determination, I believe I can succeed in the future.
I have lots of interest, such as drawing .reading and so on.
I hope to be your student.
I hope I can enter your department.
Thank you for your time.
Wish to see you again

请高手帮忙改改我英语作文中的错误,
If I were a boy
I wish I were a boy!
I still remembered that when I was a child,my parents ofter said to me “How I wish you were a boy.” Because if I were a boy,my father would not have lost his job,my family would be a good family.
Were I a boy,I would try my best to learn knowledge as much as possible.Because in order to support the family,parents try their best to work hard.I want to let them live a happy life.
1
If only I were a boy!
If I were a boy,I would help the girls who need help.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my love and protect she.
If I were a boy,I would take good care of my parents and my little sister/ brother.
If I were a boy,I would…
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Today,I would rather I had a job.
If I had a job now,I would make much money.However,I am studying in the college.To be frank,I would rather I had a job.Because I think if were at work,I also can get much experience and knowledge.I think it will be make me more wonderful.To be the truth,I am very regret to study here.If I had not choose to study here,I think I would be happy now.In addition,If I were rich,I would buy a house for my parents.I want to live a life of ease and make people around me have a good life.In all,I will try my best exertions to study and I can find a good job.

谁能帮我改改这篇作文?要给外国学校看的.收不收我就看这片作文了~尽量改得自然些,
everyone has an admire historical figure?i also have,she is the person i admire most,helen keller.i believe you have seen (if gave me three days light).this is the famous book which moved the wold,be from the blind and deaf mutilated girl keller
helen keller was born in america,south.nineteen months old,because a bad illness,making her since then lost eyesight and hearing.eight,helen's mother for her to find a tutor -- anne miss sullivan,and enter the perkins copyright learning.at age 16,helen into harvard university affiliated cambridge college for women learn english history,german,latin,mathematics and many literary classics.four years after that,she goes into harvard university,began to try writing.after graduation from the university,helen heart concentrated in pushing the blind care the social movement,such as publishing blind journals,established security blind cell committee,making the blind by society heart finally value.in 1959,the united nations general assembly,the delegates consistent praise her contribution to human.in 1968,helen keller calm go through her hard and full of glory.
a deaf and blind can have made so great achievement,how amazing and admiration.if helen succumb to unfortunate fate,so,she will become a poor and foolish dodger.but she didn't head to fate,she with amazing perseverance,indomitable spirit,walked the way of life,and for the human make a great contribution,become a knowledgeable and respectable.helen's life,is no ordinary.she gave people a great encouragement,so that those who idling people very regret.she is the kind of indomitable perseverance,make me forever,that it is i admire her reason
尽量写得和***高中水平差不多.
我也有,她就是我最敬佩的人,海伦凯勒.相信大家都看过（假如给我三天光明）.这个惊动世界的文学巨作,就是出自那个双目失明,双耳失聪的残废女孩海伦凯勒
海伦?凯勒出生在美国南部.十九个月大时,因为一场大病,使得她从此失去了视力及听力.八岁时,海伦的母亲为她找到了一位家庭教师——安妮苏利文小姐,并进入帕金斯盲校学习.十六岁时,海伦进入哈佛大学附属剑桥女子学院学习英文史,德文,拉丁文,数学及许多文学名著.四年后,她如愿进入哈佛大学,开始尝试写作.大学毕业后,海伦把心力集中在推行盲人关怀的***运动上,诸如出版盲人刊物,成立保障盲胞的委员会,使得盲人的心声终于受到***的重视.一九五九年,在联合国大会中,各国代表一致称赞她对人类的贡献.一九六八年,海伦凯勒平静的走完她艰辛又充满荣耀 .
一个盲聋人能取得这么大的成就,是何等的令人惊讶和钦佩.如果海伦屈服于不幸的命运,那么,她将成为一个可怜而又愚昧的寄生者.然而她并没有向命运低头,她以惊人的毅力,顽强的精神,走完了人生的道路,并为人类作出了伟大的贡献,成为一个知识广博、令人尊敬的人.海伦的一生,是不平凡的.她给予人们极大的鼓舞,使那些虚度光阴的人万分悔恨.她的那种坚忍不拔的毅力,使我为之感动,这就是我敬佩她的原因.额.这是中文原文.如果需要分的话,我可以去开几十个新号去给分你~

帮我看下这文章有没有错?错在哪?帮我改改!
Could you help me go to the shop ,buy some drinks and chocolate .could you help me prepare six chairs Because have six my friend .They is Ann and Dan and Apple on so …..

求专业英语翻译大侠,请进 .下面汉翻英是我翻译的,好像有些错误,请帮我改改,谢谢啊,
西方艺术史就是这样一个用光书写的历史,解读西方的艺术则可以从“光”在其文化和精神领域中的意味作为切入点,基督教教堂建筑艺术更是如此.文章通过对基督教教堂“光”的设计为线索,解析了安藤忠雄的“光之教堂”及其设计理念.认为该作品是“上帝之光”的中世纪教堂和“理性之光”的朗香教堂的逻辑发展,与后现代主义艺术注重“交流”与“对话”的大潮相契合.安藤忠雄的“光之教堂”的设计是“人性”的回归,所体现的就是“人性之光”.The history of western art is such the history be writing in light, interpretationof western art can be used as the starting point from the "light"’smeaning in its field of culture and spirit, Christian church architecture artis so. This paper analyzes Ando Tadao's "Cathedral of light" and it’sdesign concept through a clue--Christ Church's "light". Articlethinks that the "Cathedral of light" is the logical development of “godlight”-the medieval church and “reason light”- Ronchampand it corresponds to post modernism art tide what payattention to "exchanges" and "dialogue". Ando Tadao's"Cathedral of light" is back to the “human”and it embodies the “humanitylight”.

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“When I feel lonely, onlyyou by my accompany, when I the sad and helpless, only you by my side to silentcompanionship and guardian”, Shala, my best friend,it's a dog. It's very cleverand kind. It has white and soft furs with two small ears and a long tail. It isgiven by my aunt as my birthday. It is so friendly and lovely that we all loveit very much. It likes playing balls outside so I often take it our for a walk.It also likes to be clean so I wash it and make it clean twice every week. Itlikes one of my best friend. I often play with it after work.

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Go shopping
Today,my mother asked me,"do you want to go shopping with me."I thought a lot of time and said,"yeah,I'd love too."So,mother took me
to surpermarket."oh,how many things in the surpermarket."I bought a lot of things,soccer,a beatiful dress,books and a little fruit.The soccer was for me.I like it very much.The dress was for my sister,I thought,"she can be very happy."The books were for my dad,he never don't like books!Then mom took me home.

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It is one of the most traditional Chinese festival which as important as Mid-Autumn Festival and Chinese New Year in China.