my dream flat一篇七年级作文.

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我的语文故事
光阴似箭,眼看6年小学时光即将逝去,回想起小学生活中点点滴滴的往事,不由得引起我无穷的回味.它们像是里程碑,标志着我学习的进步;它们像一级级的阶梯,见证着我的不断成长;它们像一盏盏明亮的灯,照亮着我未来的征途.其中学习语文的过程让我记忆深刻,特别是学习作文的故事,更令我终身难忘.
说实话,以前我的作文可以说是很糟糕,日记常常两三句话就写完了,内容很空洞,如果给父母看,父母就会哈哈大笑,所以我不喜欢给父母看我的日记.在作文课上,我的作文也常被老师在班上做为“例文”,把“优秀”的句子读给同学听,同学听完了,个个都像看一个笑话一样,哄堂大笑,我的脸“刷”的红到了脖子根.下课后,我恼怒地把作文撕了,扔进了****桶.作文课成为了我的噩梦.
在四年级的时候,王老师当了我们班的语文老师,王老师第一次上我们班的作文课的时候,让我们写一篇作文来描写自己的同桌,如果写的不好,就要去老师办公室.尽管我再不想去老师办公室,于是绞尽脑汁来完成这篇作文,但是最后还是被“请”到了王老师的办公室.我以为王老师会批评我一顿,但王老师和蔼地让我坐下,耐心地帮我分析了我作文中的毛病,从作文的构思到用词一一进行了讲解,最后做了一个总结:我的词汇量太少.对症下药,王老师让我买个本子,专门摘抄好词好句.在王老师的指导下,我把作文重写了一遍,写完后王老师又对我的作文进行了修改.
第二天,我的作文竟然被老师表扬了,而且还第一次被贴到了黑板上.虽然我的作文是改动最多的,一张作文纸就像是一朵红色的杜鹃,不过在以后的作文课上,我都能学到点作文知识,积少成多,作文级别也从不及格升到优,成为了老师最得意的学生.我也感到自豪.
我在作文上进步仅仅是我学习语文过程中的一个方面的故事,我在学习生字、阅读等方面的故事,也是说不完、道不尽.在以后的学习中,我将更加努力,力争在语文学习上能取得更大的成绩.
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I live in a flat in a building. The building is very modern. There are about ten floors and I live on the top floor. I think my flat is very wonderful. The dining room is next to the kitchen. We always have dinner there, and my mother often cooks some delicious food for us. I can’t cook, but I often help Mum wash the dishes. Sometimes my friends come to my flat and they teach me how to cook. So now, I can cook something for my family. I like the sofa in my sitting room. It is very comfortable and it is purple. What a nice colour! The bathroom with a bath and a shower has a mirror. It is in the shape of star. There are four members in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and I. My parents work hard. They are very tired and I think they should have a good sleep. So the bedroom is the best place. My younger brother is only six years old. I love him even though he troubles me some times. In my bedroom, there are lots of posters of Angela on the wall. Angela is my favourite super star. She is beautiful. There is a garden in the district. You can go walking there. I also want to tell you about my dream home. It is near a sea. It’s made of wood. Maybe that will come true