征稿启事怎么写差不多一百字的样子,写了个草稿但字数不够什么的大概的格式就可以了

（3分）①处“知名人士”改为“学者”③处“必须”改为“请”④处“垂询”改为“征求作者意见”⑤处缺主语，可加“作者”为主语

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地球,不知从什么时候开始,变得越来越美丽了,蓝宝石般的肤色使她成为太阳系中最美丽的一颗行星.她不停地转动着,她身边的一切也在不停地转变.又不知从什么时候开始她身边出现了一群化妆师——人类.
　　起初,人类只是在地球的身上零星地点缀些房屋,理理地球那多年无人打理的毛发,让地球看上去更加美丽,更加精神.
　　化妆师们认为这样给地球打扮,不妥,地球还是那个老样子,并未达到让人耳目一新的效果.于是,他们开始对地球进行大规模的整容行动.
　　首先,化妆师们整治的对象还是地球那“郁郁葱葱”的毛发.他们认为头发过多会影响视觉效果,再者地球的毛发是很好的建筑材料,于是,他们想出了一个一箭双雕的办法,那就是给地球理一个碎发,越碎越好,有可理出一个碎得不能再碎的发型——“三毛”.若是一不小心将那三根毛弄掉的话,就可能变成“濯濯童山”了.所以说,化妆师们也不知道地球是否有可能被他们理成光头.他们接受记者采访时却说：“我们的目的是让她的发型变得前卫,怎么会给她理光头呢?”为了获取大量的木材,为了让地球的发型更加前卫,他们立马破土动工.殊不知,按他们的计划发展下去,地球变成一个大光头将成为必然.
　　于是,他们请来了很多的伐木工人和搬运工,将伐好的树木全都搬往他们已经规划好的地方进行建房大行动.当一幢幢楼房拔地而起时,地球确实变得越来越美丽,发型也变得越来越前卫了,化妆师们也越来越感觉到自己的伟大.他们认为他们大胆的设计是成功的.于是他们让伐木工人进行掠夺性的开发,让建筑师们疯狂地建房.本来生活得悠闲自在的地球不再觉得自己活得轻松.机器们没日没夜的吼叫让地球感到心烦意乱,建筑时飞扬的尘土让地球喘不过气来.于是,地球开始悲伤,开始流泪,泪水淹没了很多的城市.但化妆师们不理会这些,他们只是一个劲地干他们的.他们不但要给地球理头发,做衣服,还要给她“涂脂抹粉”.本来碧蓝剔透的脸蛋,被他们的脂粉一弄,变得浑浊粗糙起来.不仅如此,他们还给她抹上一层厚厚的油彩.地球并没有因为他们的打扮变得更加美丽,相反,还失去了以前的清醇.她再也忍受不了了,她开始发怒,她呼啸,她流泪.当化妆师们被地球的泪水冲到老远时,他们才明白她们给地球的妆太浓了,浓得让地球快要停止呼吸.他们意识到他们不是在装扮地球,而是在折磨地球,并且他们并未使地球因他们的存在而焕发出更迷人的色彩.
　　同学们,作为未来的化妆师,我们对地球的影响更是重大,所以我们要开始给地球卸装,让卸了妆的地球重新充满了朝气,洋溢着一脸的轻松.豪华落尽见真淳,地球又像以前一样悠闲自在地转动着.未来的建设者,创造者们,我们赖以生存的家园只有一个,保护环境是我们义不容辞的责任,所以我们更应从现在开始,从自身做起,来美化我们的环境!

（1）“诚邀”可改为“真诚欢迎”。（2）“鼎力”可改为“竭力”尽力”。（3）将“《真我风采》、《热点评说》、《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为引号。（4）“敬谢不敏”改为“错失良机” 。（5）“斧正”可改为“誊清”、“誊正”、“打印好”等。或删去“斧正后”。（5分，一处1分）

时间去哪儿了?

（1）“诚邀”，诚挚地邀请，不合语境，可改为“真诚欢迎”。 （2）“鼎力”是“大力”的意思，敬词，可改为“竭力”尽力”。 （3）将“《真我风采》、《热点评说》、《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为引号。
（4）“敬谢不敏”，表示能力不够，难以胜任而恭敬地予以辞谢。也表示辞谢对方的邀约，不能从命。多用作自谦。改为“错失良机” 。（5）“斧正”，是请别人修改文章时所用的敬词，这里可改为“誊清”、“誊正”、“打印好”等。或删去“斧正后”。

My favorite season
There are four seasons in a year and spring is my favorite season.
In spring,the weather is warm and i think there is nothing better than taking a walk in countyside.Also,we can spend time on flying kites.I find it comfortably to small the flowers in spring.In my opinion,spring is wonderful and colourful.
Do you like spring?Please tell me about your favorites .

如过写 青春期 的话那就太偏激了,不如写一些小时候的逸闻趣事

NOTICE
All the students of our school,there will be an English composition match next month.
Welcome all to join us.
We will have a meeting to tell you something about the match in detail next Monday.
Students Union

①食物浪费与环境保护②如何避免食物浪费（共4分。每个2分，意思对即可）

本题是一道实践题。根据对材料的分析来拟写征稿的话题即可。

The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices, such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

the Middle-Autumn Festival
The Middle-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it is often held in September or October. During the festival, family members get united and have mooncakes together. THere are various kind of mooncakes, such as bean paste, egg-yolk or meat. The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolizes a big moon. Moreover, in the evening of the Middle-Autumn Festival, people get together in a vacant place, eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the dark sky. To conclude, the Midde-Autumn Festival is a very nice festival for Chinese people.
1.中秋节是中国的传统节日之一,一般在九月或十月过中秋节
2.中秋节家人团聚,吃月饼.月饼种类繁多,美味可口,形状是圆的,像月亮.
3.中秋之夜,人们常常在露天的地方边吃月饼边赏月.

改病句:校园宣传栏有总社团的招聘启事,其中一则是文学社的征稿启事

（1）“诚邀”，诚挚地邀请，不合语境，可改为“真诚欢迎”。
（2）“鼎力”是“大力”的意思，敬词，可改为“竭力”或“尽力”。
（3）将“《真我风采》《热点评说》《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为引号。
（4）“敬谢不敏”，表示能力不够，难以胜任而恭敬地予以辞谢。也表示辞谢对方的邀约，不能从命。多用作自谦。改为“错失良机”
（5）“斧正”，是请别人修改文章时所用的敬词，这里可改为“誊清”、“誊正”、“打印好”等。或删去“斧正后”。

2008年5月12日14点28分

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（A“绵薄之力”是谦辞；B“治癌”与“治癌”同音；C“荣幸” 是谦辞。）

（1）将“《真我风采》《热点评说》《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为引号。
（2）“鼎力”可改为“竭力”“尽力”。（3）“斧正”删掉或改为“修改”（4）将“左右”删掉（共6分，每处1.5分）

略

持之以恒 茁壮成长 泽雨无偏 心田受润

My classmateMy classmate Zhang Bin is a perfect student. Firstly, he is so good at his subjects that all his grades(成绩,等级) on the paper were A. Secondly, he is helpful to every one in class, whene...

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你太逗了，你的家规让我们写，然后你去投稿，是不是睡太多，把头睡扁了。

早晨好.中午好.晚上好.
Good morning / afternoon / evening.
2、欢迎您光临温泉大酒店.
Welcome to Hotspring Grand Hotel .
3、旅游愉快吗?
Did you have to nice trip?
4、我是接待员（行李员、电梯员、话务员、收帐员、电工、清洁工、洗衣工、厨师、餐厅服务员、调酒员、美容师）.
I am receptionist .
（porter/lift operator/operator/cashier/electrician/cleaning person/laundry worker/cook/waiter, waitress/bartender/beautician）.
5、需要我帮忙吗?
What can I do for you?
6、还需要些什么?
What else can I do for you?
7、请稍等一会儿.
Just a moment ,please.
8、很高兴为您服务.
I am always at your service.
9、希望您在这里住得愉快.
I hope you will enjoy your stay with us here.
10、对不起,给您添麻烦了.
I am awfully sorry to have caused you so much inconvenience.
11、如果您需要什么帮助,请及时告诉我.
Just let me know if there is anything I can do for you.
12、这边请.
This way , please.
13、请走这边.
Would you care to step this way , please?

The Middle-Autumn Festival is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it is often held in September or October. During the festival, family members get united and have mooncakes together. THere are various kind of mooncakes, such as bean paste, egg-yolk or meat. The shape of a mooncake is round as it symbolizes a big moon. Moreover, in the evening of the Middle-Autumn Festival, people get together in a vacant place, eating delicious mooncakes while appreciating the beautiful moon hanging in the dark sky. To conclude, the Midde-Autumn Festival is a very nice festival for Chinese people.

One possible version：
Dreams Lighten Life
Dreams can make us powerful and different. It is good to make an effort to make our dreams comc true.
I have been dreaming of becoming a doctor since childhood. Each time I see someone suffering from a disease, I feel sympathy for them. Also. I really admire doctors, for they can help patients by using their professional knowledge. I know if I want to become a doctor. I need to master the essential medical knowledge and accumulate a great deal of experience. Keeping this dreain in mind. I need to take action to realize it. As a middle school student. I know I should work hard right now to master some basic knowledge and try my best to enter a good medical university. This is how my dream can lighten my life. Now I have a goal to fight for! My life has become completely different.
Admittedly, it is not easy to realize our dreams. I think the most important thing is that we stick to them and never give up. Apart from this, we should also use the right method.

本文是一篇给出了简单汉语提示的作文。每个人都有梦想，把梦想写出来并写出梦想的作用。这符合中学生的实际，让每个人都有话可写。成文时应注意以下几点：1.文章内容齐全：（1）你的梦想是什么；（2）阐述拥有梦想如何点亮人生,使你的生活变得不同；（3）你认为实现梦想需要什么。2.人称：以第一人称为主；3.时态：一般现在时；4.注意使用一些高级词汇、短语和句型，以提高文章的档次；5恰当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章表达自然、流畅。

不唯一
How to deal with used books after graduation?
In the three senior high school years,we students have learned much knowledge and consolidated our knowledge by doing plenty of exercises from the reference books we continually buy.When it comes to how to deal with these books after graduation, I think there are different ways.
Throwing them away is of course the easiest way but a waste of money, material and even our wisdom because we have left some helpful marks in these books. Selling them to be recycled can be beneficial to our environment but it isn’t a completely satisfying way. I think if we want to make full use of these books we can send them to the younger ones who are poor but need them badly.
Thus they not only save money but get the experience of learning from the books we used. Perhaps this is the best way to deal with our used books.

吸引眼球就要有个性 有不同
你这些句子最普通的语法了 怎么可以突破?
改改 but I most like the weather is raining 比如这句 换个说法
which i like best is rainy days、、、
多用用语法 用别人不用的

One Possible Version
The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home to attend the celebration. The moon that might looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to the traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as traveling and visiting our relatives or friends.

I think the future life will be interesting and colorful. Everybody will carry a pocket computer which can make their life easy and colorful because the computer will give people the answers to all their problems. We shall all have telephones in our pockets,too. And we'll be able to talke and see our friends. Machines and robots will do most of the work so people will have more free time. They will be able to fly to the moon or live in the water.

A good parent-child relationship is expected, but there are often problems.
As for children, they don’t trust their parents and are unwilling to communicate with them. Some children lose their temper easily because of the study burden, while some parents tend to neglect their children’s ideas and try to impose their own ideas on them.
How can these problems be solved? In my opinion, children should be considerate and respect their parents. When they disagree with their parents, they should tell them. On the other hand, parents should learn to listen to their children’s ideas instead of deciding everything for them. In this way, a good parent-child relationship can be established.

本文的主题的如何改善孩子与父母之间的关系，与考生的生活实际非常贴切，有很强的可写性，正因为是熟悉的事情，所以考生有话可说。本文的要点基本上都已经给出，只需要按照适当的顺序组织成英文即可。在写作的时候注意使用合适的连接词和高级的词汇，让文章更流畅，同时也要使用2-3个高级的句型如强调句，倒装句让文章更有档次。

TravelingTraveling is a very good activity. When you get tired of your work or study, and when you have free time, you can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature or other cities. Y...

（1）“诚邀”，诚挚地邀请，不合语境，可改为“真诚欢迎”。
（2）“鼎力”是“大力”的意思，敬词。可改为“竭力”或“尽力”。
（3）“敬谢不敏”，表示能力不够，难以胜任而恭敬地予以辞谢。也表示辞谢对方的邀约，不能从命。多用作自谦。改为“错失良机”。

3分，每处1分。

缺少了征稿截止时间和征稿对象.

As a child, we can't walk, my mother taught us how to walk, how to speak, how to eat and so on. Mothers are our first teachers. A mother will teach us some Weirenchushi truth, I will give my mother came back, and wash your feet, and I will take care of my mother, will listen to her words, I love my mother!

TravellingMost of the people like travelling because it is a very good outdoor activity. We may enjoy the nature when we go out for travelling, and we may enjoy the fresh air outside. The important ...

One Possible Version
Last month, our monitor suggested at a class meeting that we do something to decorate our classroom. Some classmates wanted to hang several pretty pictures on the wall, while others thought it would be great to put some plants in the classroom. Most of us preferred the second idea. In the following week, a variety of beautiful plants were brought to the school, which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere. Every day after class, we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly. With fragrant flowers around us, we felt at peace with ourselves and it surely helped us reduce some stress.


此书面表达有图画兼文字提示，因此在动笔前先要审阅提示在整篇文章中，努力避免只是用一、两个句式。要灵活运用各种句式，如主从复合句、定语从句、分词短语、介词短语等。要把每一副图片的内容描述清楚，不用适当的关联词，连接起来，是文章意思上下连贯，符合语言环境。尽量避免重复使用同一单词或词组。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如 we devoted our spare time into caring these plants, watering them regularly With fragrant flowers around us。 还运用了 which immediately created a relaxing atmosphere定语 从句等等。并注意了句子的衔接如： Some classmates， while others thought，In the following week, Every day after class, 等等。
考点：

1年前

（1）“鼎力”是“大力”的意思，在表示请托和感谢时用，是敬辞，可改为“竭力”或“尽力”。（2）将“《真我风采》、《热点评说》、《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为双引号。
（3）“敬谢不敏”，表示推辞做某件事的客气话，多用于自谦。可改为“错失良机”。
（4）“斧正”，用于请别人改文章，敬辞，不合语意，可改为“誊清”，或删去“斧正后”。

Travelling
Most of the people like travelling because it is a very good outdoor activity.We may enjoy the nature when we go out for travelling,and we may enjoy the fresh air outside.The important thing is that we can
forget that we are tired and the unhappy things.Travelling is good for our health.
However,sometimes,we may run into troubles when going travelling.For example,we can't change
the weather.It may be rainy when we are travelling.So we should prepare things well before the trip.
And I hope everyone could enjoy himself during the travel

C


“声”应为“伸”）

（1）“贵刊”改为“本刊” 。
（2）启事末尾加日期。

要的是你勇于参与的精神,付出的背后是胜利无论是否成功,我们永远赞美你,你们永远是我们的骄傲,54环形的跑道一圈又一圈的坚持,毅力与精神活跃在会场上,湿透的衣衫,满头的大汗,无限追求 奋力追赶,我们为你欢呼 跳跃 ,我们为你骄傲
致运动员 生活中,我们每天都在尝试 尝试中,我们走向成功 品味失败,走过心灵的阴雨晴空 运动员们,不要放弃尝试 假如你成功了 这就是下一次尝试的动力 假如你失败了 就总结经验,吸取教训,继续努力
无论失败与否 重要的是你勇于参与的精神 付出的背后是胜利 无论是否成功 我们永远赞美你 你们永远是我们的骄傲 努力吧,运动员
走过荒山野岭高峡低谷,我们在沿途燃起篝火,一站一站的路被抛在身后,我们感到疲惫感到困惑.还有那么长的路伸向远方,远方那片星光藏在哪儿,远方那颗童话树躲在何处,努力吧,奋斗吧!远方有我们的理想,有我们的希望!
磨炼的是非凡的毅力,较量的是超常的体力,拼搏的是出类拔萃的耐力.
把长长的跑道跑成一段漫漫的征途,听!呼啸的风在为你喝彩,看!猎猎的彩旗在为你加油,加油吧!为了到达终点时那一刻的辉煌!
胜也好 败也罢 唯有参与 方能领略到运动的真谛!
曾几何时,我为痛失奖杯而忏悔不已：曾几何时,我因别人而羡慕不已.伤心,失落已成为过去,新的机遇也即将到来.这次不需要使自己留下任何遗憾,努力准备吧!
你是跑道上划过的流星,燃烧自己,洒下光辉,也许你并没有看到成功像你挥手,但你已奋斗拼搏过,相信自己,力量就在心中.
风雨中洒脱你的激情,阳光下释放你的希冀,没有你过去的过去,只有把握现在,没有你明天的明天,
只有眼前的路.逝去的已经逝去,要明白,今天的才是真正的你,用你的真实,你的所有,挥洒出心中的希望.
你胜利了 望着远方红色的终点线,那是汗水铺成的路,泪水堆成的山,平时的努力与奋战,不就为这一瞬间,于是你们用尽全身力气,冲向那决定命运的红线,你胜利了,耳旁飘来了同学们的欢呼与赞叹.
运动生命在阳光里展现风采 生命的凯歌在阳光中走向辉煌 运动的序幕已经拉开 让我们用运动的火光来点燃生命的激情 生命阳光永不锈
诺大的竞技场期待着你矫健的身影 瑟瑟的秋风为你送来爽朗的气息 朋友,在你踏上跑道的那一刻 告诉自己----将信心进行到底 无论成功与否 请微笑着跑完全程 只要年轻的心还在蓬勃的跳动 就要大声告诉自己----将信心进行到底
或许,有意无意之间,你已陷入一场惊心动魄的争夺之中,即使天崩地裂,日月无光,你毫无怨言,永往直前.既然心中已锁定目标,就抛却一切,以智慧、体魄为羽翼,以坚韧、刚强为动力,扶摇直上,挣脱束缚,跨越障碍,在终点处先拔头筹,在磨砺中超越自我.
在竞技场上,你付出汗水,释放光芒；辛勤耕耘,收获成果；为别人喝彩,以努力拼搏激励自己,感动他人.
在竞技场上,你证明自我,交朋结友,让生活更丰富,使生命更精彩.
接受挑战吧,你会更坚强；直面困难吧,你将更自信.愿我们在竞技中成熟,用真正的实力创造美好的未来!
看!那一面面迎风飘舞的彩旗,是一朵朵盛开的鲜花； 听!那一阵阵惊天动地的欢呼,是回响在耳边胜利的风声.运动场上的你们,是胜利的标志,运动场上的你们,是青春的赞叹.去吧!去迎接那伟大的挑战,去吧!去做一名追风的少年.你们代表的是----东,西,南,北----风!

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A,绵薄之力是自谦用句
B,从速交还有警告意味,适合公告.
C,荣幸也是自谦说法.

、D（A“微薄之力”是自谦之辞，用到别人身上不合适。B赶紧；尽快，有命令的语气，应用谦辞。C“荣幸”是谦辞，此处应用敬称。）

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哦,在这里,我—— 老师,你----- ,等待录取通知书的那个夏天 定格一种倒下的姿势 抽打心中的樱桃花 牵挂是思念,有如高飘的风筝挣不脱细长的绳线；牵挂是多方面的,比如（1）牵挂是对亲人的思念；（2）牵挂是对友人的情怀；（3）牵挂能催人奋发向上.
请以“牵挂”为题,选择上述材料某一方面的内容；选择除诗歌以外的某一种体裁,写一篇不少于800字的文章.
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二 一滴水在宇宙中只不过是一个微小的点,可是它却能反映出整个太阳.这就意味着整个太阳被“压缩”进一个水滴之中.于是,当我们面对清晨绿叶上的串串露珠时,仿佛看到无数的太阳在微风中舞蹈；当我们凝视到秋潭般碧澈的眼睛时,似乎看到了一个奥妙无穷的宇宙.
要求：（1）根据以上材料写一篇文章.内容、题材不限,只要合情合理.（2）题目自拟（3）除诗歌外,其它文体不限（4）不少于800字.
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五 阅读下面材料,按要求作文.
“神笔马良”是一个脍炙人口的神话故事.马良自幼勤奋好学,但家境贫寒,买不起纸笔.他用树枝画画的刻苦精神感动了神仙.神仙给了他一枝神笔,马良用这枝神笔画什么就有什么,为老百姓做了许多好事.后来这枝神笔被贪婪的皇帝抢走了.皇帝拿着这枝神笔却是画一样,就多了一样与自己作对的东西.
请以“假如我有一枝社笔”为作文范围,写一篇文章.
要求：（1）写作时可以大胆想象,内容只要与“假如我有一枝神笔”有关就符合要求,具体的角度和写法也可以多种多样,比如编故事,发表见解,展望前景,等等.（2）自拟题目,（3）除诗歌外,其他文体不限.（4）不少于800字.
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六 ———漫想
要求：（1）在横线上填补完整你作文的标题
（2）除诗歌外文体不限
（3）不少于800字
[提示〕写本文要注意三点.（1）所填的词语例如“时间”“水”“二十一世纪”“灯”“圆”等,无论是什么样的概念,都必须是你写作的中心,联结全文的纽带,必须有储备,方可驾驭.（2）驰骋千里的想象也应有清晰的顺序,或时间顺序,或逻辑事理顺序,或兼而有之等.（3）行文要注意虚与实,放与收的合理安排.
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七 将“我发现——”补充完整,然后以此为题写一篇文章.
要求：1、思想健康,内容具体,力求有创意
2、除诗歌、剧本外,文体不限
3、不少于800字
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八 阅读下面材料根据要求作文
这是一片起伏的灌木从生的原野,灌木上结着鲜红的大小不一的浆果.有一天,三个年轻人从这走过,被这繁星般美丽的浆果吸引住了.他们约定,从小路的起点到终点,每人摘一枚浆果,看谁摘取的最大.当然,每人只能有一次采摘的机会,而且只能一直朝前走,不能走回头路.
假如你是其中的一个年轻人,你怎样摘到一颗较大的浆果?这一段路途的经历对你的人生有什么启示?请以此为范围写一篇文章.
〔注意〕 （1）题目自拟（2）文体和写法不限（3）不少于800字
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九 人在这个世界上总离不开风雨雷电.你可能有关于风雨雷电的事情；面对风雨雷电,你可能有所感受,有所领悟.
请以“我和风雨雷电”为话题写一篇作文.
要求: （1）作文内容与“风雨雷电”中的一项或几项有关都行（2）文体不限（3）不少于800字
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十 有人说:“有两种东西,一旦失去才知道可贵；一是青春,一是健康.”其实,失去后才知道可贵的又何止于此.
请以“失去后才知道可贵”为题写一篇不少于700字的文章,文体不限.
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十一 如果这世间真的有轮回,那么,你将选择怎样的一个新的生命?是一只盘旋的鹰,一条快乐的鱼,一只轻盈的蝴蝶……还是仍旧做一回现在的你?
请展开联想,自拟题目,不少于800字
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十二 《与——的对话》
要求：
1、空白处可任意填写.如；时间、历史、未来、环保、人口、科学、自然,还可填奶奶、妈妈、老师、同学,还可填风、雨、沙尘暴,还填三毛、余秋雨、鲁迅、司马迁、杜甫等.
[提示]这道作文题 给予考生的思维空间是十分广阔的.可以写人叙事,也可以寄语抒情,但更重要的是与时代结合起来,打破了时空的界限,学生可经纵横驰骋,遨游古今.
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十三 有人说当代中学生常是矛盾的.一方面带着个性化的脸颊,他们开始认识到自我,自信“我就是我”；另一方面,在缤纷炫目,而且必须面对的生活面前,他们有时也迷茫,常常会问；“谁能告诉我我是谁?”
请结合成长中的切身经历,以“我的故事”为题目,讲出一段真实的体验和感受.文体不限,题目自拟,不少于800字.
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The Mid-Autumn Festival
The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15 ^th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar.
As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful noon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

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第一篇：Taking a Part-Time Job
Nowadays,many people think that college students should take a part-time job for several advantages.For one thing,it gives the students a chance to know the society to learn to be independent.For another,they can also get financial reward and working experience as well,such as teaching or selling practice,which is helpful to their growth.What's more,they can put what they have learned into practice,and know their strong and weak points so that they can improve their studies and personalities,which are beneficial in their later lives.
However,still many people think taking part-time job may have some negative effects on students.In their opinions,it will take them much time and energy,and will affect their studies as a result.What's worse,some students may be so keen on making money that they may neglect their studies in the end.
In my opinion,I am in favor of taking a part-time job.But we have to keep a balance between the job and the study.After all,study is our main task at school.
第二篇：Taking a Part-Time Job
Many college students take part-time jobs in their spare time.Whether it is good or bad is still subject to constant debates.
Some people believe that taking a part-time job certainly brings about several advantages.To begin with,students can learn how to get along with people and know the society better by taking a part-time job.Furthermore,to take a part-time job provides the students with a valuable opportunity to put what he has learned from books into practice.Finally,students can make some money,which helps to unload their families' financial burden.
However,problems may also arise.Firstly,some students spend too much time doing part-time jobs while neglecting their studies.Secondly,when taking part-time jobs,the students may be distracted from their studies by the colorful lives in the society.Thirdly,some students may be cheated or hurt by their employers,because they don't know how to protect themselves.
As for me,I share the view that college students need to step out of the campus and take some part-time jobs if their schedule permits.After all,it opens them a window to know about the society,which is essential to their maturity.
第三篇：
Whenever we have more free time,our classmates will be busy recommending part-time jobs to one another.
When we pass by the bulletin board on the campus,we often catch sight of some want ads attached to it.It is obvious that holding part-time jobs has become a growing tendency among university students.More and more students would like to work after class and their chances of getting a job are becoming abundant.
There are always two sides to a question.Part-time jobs are no exceptions.They have either the pro side or the con side.On the one hand,part-time jobs not only enable students to cultivate their abilities,but also help them apply their knowledge to practice.Furthermore,students who have part-time jobs can relieve,to some extent,the economic burdens of their parents.However,on the other hand,after-class work may distract the students' attention from their studies.Some students who have secured part-time jobs have already shown a decline in their studies.
I don't want to argue on the feasibility of holding part-time jobs.But there is no doubt that as a student,great emphasis should be placed on his studies.He should not allow his four years' time in the university to slip by for nothing.Instead,he must treasure his time and absorb as much knowledge as he can to lay a solid foundation for his future career.
选一篇吧.

（1）“诚邀”，诚挚地邀请，不合语境，可改为“真诚欢迎”。
（2）“鼎力”是“大力”的意思，敬辞，可改为“竭力”“尽力”。
（3）将“《真我风采》、《热点评说》、《校园律动》”三个栏目的书名号改为引号。 （4）“敬谢不敏”，表示能力不够，难以胜任而恭敬地予以辞谢。也表示辞谢对方的邀约，不能从命。多用作自谦。改为“错失良机”。
（5）“斧正”，是请别人修改文章时所用的敬辞，这里可改为“誊清”、“誊正”、“打印好”等。或删去“斧正后”。