帮我看下这短篇文章有没有病句啊?有的话请帮我修改一下!

在名人里,周国平的文章类似于寓言,故事精彩,寓意深刻,是不错的选择；另外,林语堂的文章笔触幽默,道理深刻,也是不错的选择,希望对你有所帮助.

可以去试读一下冰心的《谈生命》,可能长些.是以一段的形式写下来的,语言生动,会使你感到身上拂过一股暖流,直入丹田.

1年 好好学 就可以读懂 阅读比听力简单
180元的大字典 要不就买那个38元的小字典

时光沙滩的脚印（脚印越来越大呦）
成长无痕
如梦,似梦,而非梦（过去的时光如梦,但它真实发生过）
我飞过的天空
含泪微笑,那些时光
我那十分之一年

我觉得英语学习初期可以去看《书虫》系列的书籍,中英对照的,比较简单,故事性的,还比较吸引

给您推荐一篇散文
《秋天的怀念》,短篇散文,中国当代著名作家史铁生著.选自《史铁生散文自选集》.文中描述了史铁生对已故母亲的回忆,表现了史铁生对母亲深切的怀念,对母亲无尽的爱,以及史铁生对“子欲养而亲不待”的悔恨.
请尊重我的劳动
保证正确率 希望能够帮到你,

I have a white dog. Its name is Bobo. S he is a female dog. She comes from Bei jing, China. She has two big eyes and a small month. She wears white clothes. She often walks around at home. It has noth...

啊,又是一年过去新的一年即将开始时间过得真快欢乐的时光像在昨天晃晃悠悠就过去了也许元旦是春天春姑娘闻风而动带来一场雨迎接元旦也许元旦是冬天冬姑娘蠢蠢欲动下一场银白色的大雪为新年天上一幅美丽的图案2014年即将过去2015年马上到来让我们为崭新的一年打好基础

美文悦读这本书上的很好

小平铭 人不在高,有德则名；话不在多,有理则灵.斯是邓公,智勇超群.历史建丰碑,当代创理论.谈笑论国是,浮沉惊风云.可以挽狂澜,顶恶风；无“落难”之颓唐,无功高之忘形.南疆特区设,北国乾坤定.万众云：“伟哉小平!”

读者,千字千元,当然文章要特别出色,
青年文摘,800多
你要是头一些二三流的报社,登的可能性是大点,但是稿费和影响力也会大打折扣

Everyone has his own hometown . I’m sure that everyone is proud of his hometown . I specially love my hometown . I think my hometown is the most beautiful place in the world . I’m pleasant to introduce my hometown to you .
I was born in a small village near Jining ,I have been there for sixteen years . I love it very much . The air is so fresh that you won’t want to leave if you can have a chance to go there .There are also small bridge and small rivers .In summer , when the water under the bridge produces gentle but interesting sound , you must fall in love with it .Both of the sides of the river are planted with beautiful flowers and green trees .Sometimes even you can see some birds flying through the trees .How interesting is it !
Another thing that I want to tell you is that the night is so quiet .At night , you can enjoy the quietness , which creates another room that isn’t known by everyone else except yourself .
Do you like my hometown ? If you do , welcome to my hometown ,I’m sure you will have a great time.

1.Once Einstein gave a lecture in many places in America． His driver always listened to him and knew the lecture so well that he was sure be could give it himself． So Einstein agreed that the driver...

From the time when I was a young boy(girl),I have dreamed to become a teacher.No teacher how we walk on the way of life?As I grow,I understand why being a dignitary attracts me this much.The teachers not only did they pass their knowledge to us,but they also give love and care to everyone of the students.They are the selfless mothers who enjoys watching their children growing in their arms.They give the children everything needed to achieve success.They are the ones working around the clock,trying to pave the future by giving their experience to children.They are the ones who kept the continuation of human civilization.They embellished the world with textures,making it the most wonderful place to be.The children are the teacher walked into a leading to the inevitable stage in life is the first step.The children are really into the field of knowledge into the first step.Think about these think teachers are great.Those are the factors which made me believe that I would one day be a teacher,just like the beautiful angels I have encountered in my life.

Look!There is a kangaroo.It's jumping.OH!And a babykangaroo,it's so cute!there is tiger comeing,it's wakeing.

1.My pen friend
I have a pen friend and his name is Jack.He is eleven years old.He was born on January 3,2000.He comes from London,England.He likes playing basketbal and table tennis.He often plays basketball for an hour after school because he is a member of his school team.His favorite subject is English so we often chat in English.He is alo interested in collecting stamps and playing the violin.He is kind and friendly so I like him very much.
2.My winter holiday
I really had a busy and happy winter holiday.I did my homework and helped my parents with the housework every day.I like drawing so much that I spent lots of time drawing pictures and read books about drawing every day.I sometimes went to the library to read books and surfed the internet.During the Spring Festival,i visited my grandparents,friends and relatives.We really had a great time together.I prepared for the new lessons and read English,too.I really enjoyed my winter holiday.
3.How to keep healthy
It's very important for us to keep healthy because we nearly can do nothing without good health.There are several ways of keeping healthy.First,I think doing enough sports can help us keep healthy.Second,we should balance our diet.We'd better eat more fruit and vegetbles.Don't eat too much junk food because it's bad for our health.Third,it's very important to have enough sleep.Fourth,we should have good mood every day.Last but not least,don't drink or smoke.
你可以上百度输入“英语作文”,会找到你所需要的哟

Hello everyone!I’m very glad to speak English here.Look at me,I’m a happy and lovely girl.My name is XXX.My English name is XXX.I’m from No.2 Primary School of HuDong Road,I’m in Class 4 Grade 6.Our school is very beautibul.All the teachers like me.Do you like me?Today I will give you a talk about “Olympic and me”.
Do you still remember that exciting time?In the evening of July 13,2001,All the Chinese people are boiling.We won!China won!International Olympic Committee to host the 2008 Olympic Games in Beijing granted.
After more than six years of efforts,the preparations for the Olympic Games has entered the final stage sprint.
As a little host,I really want to be honorable volunteer for it,however,I am still too young to be a real volunteer,but I can still contribute for it.
First,as a people of China,I will welcome every friend from all over the world with my enthusiasm and smile to show us Chinese people’s friendship and hospitality.And let the foreign friends know China from the smile on our face.
Then,I will study English hard.During the Olympic Games,I can communicate with the foreign friends in English and serve for them such as to be an interpreter and show them the way,let them love China more from our enthusiasm help.
At last I will mobilize every students to learn civilization rite.Let Olympic game in Peking become a "green Olympics,humanitieOlympics,technology Olympics”
Let’s as women long-distance runners,starting step,over the future!
Thank you very much for being here listening to my speech.Have a good time.See you .