AvoidingSentenceFragmen 作文

A sentence is defined as a group of words containing a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. If any of these elements is missing, then the group of words isn't a sentence. A fragment is a group of words that is punctuated like a sentence and that is trying to function as a sentence, but one of the necessary elements is missing.There are several ways to find and correct fragments. Any group of words functioning as a sentence should be checked for the basics. Does it have a subject? Does it have a verb? Does it start with a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun that keeps the thought from being complete? If the answer to any of the questions is no, it is a fragment.Correcting fragments is fairly simple and you have several options. For a fragment that is missing a subject or verb, add the missing element. If the problem is a subordinating conjunction, the conjunction can be removed which would make the fragment a complete sentence. Another option is to join the fragment to another sentence either before it or after it in the paragraph creating a complex sentence.No matter how you choose to correct the fragment, it is important for you to eliminate them from your writing. Fragments are considered to be a major grammatical error in writing because they indicate that the writer isn't sure what a sentence is. Readers will often not pay attention to the point a writer is making if the reader thinks the writer doesn't even understand how to write a complete sentence.

问题不在于完全避免风险的而是一种管理风险在一个理智的方法.
一种

I'm considering taking on sponsors after avoiding it for three years.The cost of operating the Cafe was getting too much经过回避了3年後,我现已考虑接受赞助, 因为咖啡馆的开支已越来越大. 很乐意能够帮到你...

亲爱的 大家 善意地提醒 为了避免耽误顾客 对所有向PT Namnam的派送 请用我们的老地址 至少在这个月 一旦新地址被固定使用我们将会通知你们 对此造成的不便表示歉意

There are several ways to find and correct fragments. Any group of words functioning as a sentence should be checked for the basics. Does it have a subject? Does it have a verb? Does it start with a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun that keeps the thought from being complete? If the answer to any of the questions is no, it is a fragment.Correcting fragments is fairly simple and you have several options. For a fragment that is missing a subject or verb, add the missing element. If the problem is a subordinating conjunction, the conjunction can be removed which would make the fragment a complete sentence. Another option is to join the fragment to another sentence either before it or after it in the paragraph creating a complex sentence.No matter how you choose to correct the fragment, it is important for you to eliminate them from your writing. Fragments are considered to be a major grammatical error in writing because they indicate that the writer isn't sure what a sentence is. Readers will often not pay attention to the point a writer is making if the reader thinks the writer doesn't even understand how to write a complete sentence.

掌控那些你所避免的事务,以消灭欲望为生活方向.我们所避免的事务往往是那些让我们感到痛苦的东西,但我们与这些痛苦斗争的次数越多,我们未来道路的选择也越多.

人们只有在经历过灾难后才知道本来应该避免他们的
1、即使是不清楚这种状况（指上一句所描述的）的人,也应该已经学习过这种情况将会发生.
2、然而在一切都毁灭之前,我们的盲目和固执却将我们带入更大的风险,就像我们不能齐心协力工作一样.
原文的意思是：无视风险 和 勉强在一起工作 这两种事情都会造成大灾难
勉强工作的意思,是指大家工作时都不配合,不情愿一起,所以不会有好结果

Avoiding eye contact might be considered impolite.避免眼神接触被看做不礼貌.impolite做consider宾语

1 I hope my proposal will benifit to them
2 He kept on avoiding me after we quarreled
3 He knows little about the nature of my work
4 但是今天的帮助会对很多这样的人带来快速以及方便,只要充分的利用他的airphone（这个单词不知道什么意思）.

第一句中 有all day,说明 avoid 这个动作一直在进行,到现在还没结束,说明要用现在完成进行时
即have been avoiding ,而为什么会躲避我,是因为我已经做了什么事,所以第二句用完成时即have I done ,
这句意思是,你为什么整天都在躲我,我做错了什么了吗

避免在阳光下暴晒能够阻止最危险的皮肤癌——黑色素瘤的产生。
一项新的研究表明,人被诊断出患有这种最危险的皮肤癌的概率是33年前的两倍。
疾病控制和预防中心主任Tom Frieden博士说。“黑色素瘤是最致命的皮肤癌，而且患这种病的人数正在增加。”
这项由美国疾病控制和预防中心主导研究表明，在2011年，每 100,000人 中就有22.7人被诊断出患有黑素瘤。而在1982年，这一比率为每 100,000 中有 11.2例。
了解皮肤癌
黑色素瘤是异常的不受控制生长的皮肤细胞。当细胞损伤引起变异,或遗传缺陷时黑色素瘤才会发生。这些缺陷导致恶性肿瘤的产生,或危及生命。其他形式的皮肤癌和癌前增生包括光化性角化病，基底细胞癌和鳞状细胞癌。好消息是，基底细胞癌,是一种最常见的皮肤癌,很容易治疗。只要在癌症早期好好治疗，一般不会有危险。
不容易啊，采纳了吧

Sentence is defined as a group of words containing a subject, a verb, and a complete thought. If any of these elements is missing, then the group of words isn't a sentence. A fragment is a group of words that is punctuated like a sentence and that is trying to function as a sentence, but one of the necessary elements is missing.There are several ways to find and correct fragments. Any group of words functioning as a sentence should be checked for the basics. Does it have a subject? Does it have a verb? Does it start with a subordinating conjunction or a relative pronoun that keeps the thought from being complete? If the answer to any of the questions is no, it is a fragment.Correcting fragments is fairly simple and you have several options. For a fragment that is missing a subject or verb, add the missing element. If the problem is a subordinating conjunction, the conjunction can be removed which would make the fragment a complete sentence. Another option is to join the fragment to another sentence either before it or after it in the paragraph creating a complex sentence.No matter how you choose to correct the fragment, it is important for you to eliminate them from your writing. Fragments are considered to be a major grammatical error in writing because they indicate that the writer isn't sure what a sentence is. Readers will often not pay attention to the point a writer is making if the reader thinks the writer doesn't even understand how to write a complete sentence.

在任何情况下,在我看来,而不是避免严重的问题
通过限制和收敛速度,是给他的读者欧拉股票的经验
以具体例子,将使操作有实际意义.对微积分的
给他们.当然,如果读者具有良好的计算充分理解
1◦看到罪所产生的问题系列的截断或使用价值
氮,不够大,他或她也不会对他有太多的困难提供
需要的误差估计.