港大个人简介请大家提提意见Personal Statement Dear teachers,I’m a student

请好心人帮忙修改申请港大的personal statement!
Hong Kong University has great appeal to me.As a student who is going to enter the field of Business,Hong Kong University provides excellent business programs.Hong Kong has an ascendant geographical location and vital status of international finance and business,which is an ideal place for me to pursue my education and career.It is also in close proximity to my hometown,Shenzhen.Therefore,I desire to enter Hong Kong University.
I have spent the past two years studying in Canada.In these two years,I not only experienced the Canadian culture and exceptional educational and language opportunities,but also developed my personality in diverse aspects.
At school,my grades put me in the top three in every class.I received a “Super G Award” and won the “Fermat Mathematics Contest” in my first school year in Canada.Outside of the class,I take part in many different activities.
I spent many hours volunteering with an organization called Alexandra Neighbourhood House.Because I’m enthusiastic,responsible and capable,I was invited to join the BWIN Leadership Group.As a group member,I participated in planning and organizing activities held by ANH and started a program to welcome and help new immigrants to adapt into Canadian society.This program has had huge success and long-term influence on other Neighbourhood Houses.As a continuation of this program,we planned project for youth new comers.I was one of the three youth in the planning group and contributed in carrying out the idea,writing the application,planning activities and raising funds.
The highlight of my volunteer experience was when I received a “BC Good Neighbour Award”.This award is given to youth who have demonstrated commitment and support to Neighbourhood House or Camp activities as well as their school and community.
My work with ANH allowed me to hone my organizational and planning skills.I learned to manage my time and balance my life.I learned to be responsible for my work and be considerate in my tasks.I learned to take the initiative and seek opportunities and make decisions independently.At the same time,my English language skills improved significantly.
It was exciting that the 2010 Winter Olympics were held in Vancouver the first year I was living in Canada.The most exciting thing for me was that I got the opportunity to perform Guzheng (a Chinese traditional instrument) at the Olympic Ceremony held in Surrey.It was a special opportunity for me to display the Chinese traditional music in Canada.As a newcomer to Canada,it was also a challenge for me to introduce the instrument and interpret the songs in front of very large audiences.The response from the audience was overwhelming applause,which was a rewarding tribute to my years of practise.
后面还有两段贴不上来了 我贴在回复里面好了!T感激涕零
When I was in high school in China,I was actively enrolled in extra-curricular activities as well.I was a member of the school student council,planned and organized school events.I was a student reporter for the Youth Newspapers,published several articles in newspapers and magazines.I was a volunteer teacher and tutored children of low-income families.I was also a businesswoman,selling fried chicken at school.These activities enriched my after-school life,and simultaneously encouraged me to be brave - to try and to think.
I believe I would be a good fit at Hong Kong University because I am fluent in English,Mandarin,and Cantonese; I have a zeal for studying Business; I have the ability to be successful; and I have the desire to study at a university that will provide me with the opportunity to learn from world class professors and expand my knowledge of the world of business.

港大的校训是"明德格物",那么"明德格物"是什么意思呢
这的确是香港大学的校训，可是不大明白

英语翻译
港大的录取条款里的一段话不懂
先给全文
ACCEPTANCE
I accept this offer of admission and in so doing
 I agree to obey all rules and regulations of The University of Hong Kong as long as they apply to me as a student member of the University.
 I understand that I am liable to pay the deposit and that fee once paid is not refundable.
 Pursuant to the Personal Data (Privacy) Ordinance,I agree that the personal data provided by me can be used by the University for all academic and administrative purposes.
 I understand that concurrent registration without the approval of the Senate given in advance is prohibited by University regulation and that breaching this regulation may result in discontinuation of studies at the University.
 I understand that in accordance with the arrangement agreed by the Mainland Ministry of Education,my acceptance of the offer of admission will be made known to the Ministry,and that I will no longer be considered for admission to any Mainland institution.
就倒数第二段不懂
google给的：我明白未经参议院批准的预先登记,同时禁止由大学监管和违反本条可能导致停止在大学学习.

参加港大面试用英语怎么说地道的表达~
参加港大面试 翻译这个短语就可以了

如何填写港大申请表格（部分细节疑问）
因本人曾在国内就读普通高中到高二下学期（未读到学期末）,后转学到加拿大BC省从高二（当地GRADE 11）重新开始读,现在是GRADE 12.在填以下Current Study的信息时,请问应该如何写PROGRAMME DURATION（2 or 5）and CURRENT YEAR OF STUDY（Year 2,Year 5 or Year 12）


同样在Previous Study信息里是否要写先前的高中?
如果要的话,在以下表格中应该如何填写PROGRAM DURATION （2 or 3）?
PLUS 在之前高中就读时没有高二期末成绩,我是否要提供高一的成绩,还是直接写N/A?

英语翻译
我报考港大的原因很简单,我很喜欢他,有些时候,对一个事物的好感,出于第一感觉的,我对港大也是这样,我很感兴趣的是医学,恩,姥姥是老医师了,当然是中医,因为我觉得只要兴趣在就做好了,人不能太功利,做人要善良要单纯,我希望自己以后多方面发展,文理都有了解,但是仍要专一一门,有事业,也有一门不以此为生的好爱,港大是我的梦想,矢志不渝,我成为港大一员,也会利用港大给我的帮助,从新开始

港大读研,为什么还有“至少三年的研究生经历”?full time和part time的研究生有什么区别?
原文：
Full-time Programme:HKU MBA in partnerships with London Business School and Columbia Business School/ HKU MBA in China business concentration:
1.Recognised Bachelor's degree
2.Satisfactory GMAT score
3.Minimum TOEFL 550 (paper based)/ 80 (Internet based) or IELTS band 6.5,with no subtest lower than 5.5
4.At least three years of postgraduate full-time work experience (as at July 2013)

港大的申请中的自我简介要怎么写
如题.
不过不用什么具体的范文.
我想知道大方向要怎么写（虽然就那么一点字）
还有就是有没有什么重点要突出的?
知道的人可以指点一下吗?感激不尽
那是说这个自我简介没有什么用吗?
那主要是看高考成绩了?

港大个人简介修改，改好的悬赏100
Personal Statement
I am a student from Dalian No.24 Middle
School. I have a great interest in Bachelor of Social Work in your university. Here
is my self introduction
I am a happy and optimist girl. I can find
bright light in everyday life and try to decorate my life with smile and
laughter. And I do my best to make my school life meaningful and colorful.
With high capability in study, I can do
well in my school work. In my case, study is not a hard work, but something
enjoyable. Thanks to my high school, I have formed my own style of study. I have
an ability to work independently and rapidly. Many people say that liberal arts
is all about remember，recite and practice. However, as an open-minded girl, I can link all
the knowledge I’ve learnt together, and manage to make my own learning method.
I have been working in our student union as
one of the leaders. Thanks to this experience, I fulfilled my potential and developed a sense of responsibility. I learn that the
best way to solve the problem is never to complain, but to face it and search
for a practical method in your mind.
I agree that interest is the best teacher,
and that’s why I choose Bachelor of Social Work as my major. I’ve learn that I
can have several subject to choose from in the second years, and I am
interested in many of them. I want to explore how the mind works, to gain
insights about who we are and why we act, think, and feel the way we do, and to
learn to understand others. All these subjects are fascinating in my own right.
I believe it can help me apply to real-world problems wisely and make
difference in the world.
The University of Hongkong always attract
me for its global view and great study environment. would be most appreciate if
I could be admitted to HKU.
Thank you for your reading.

港大的个人简介 急
As a mainland student,HKU is a attractive school in my mind.The view of globalization and the academic atmosphere of freedom made it a vital school,which attract me most .In my opinion ,with the process of globalization,the advantages of HKU can make its students have a longer view and be more creativity,which will benefit their whole lifes.So I want to be a member of your school,not only improve myself,but also be a part in HKU’s imprsovement.
As for the major,I’d like to choose BECON/BFIN/BECON&FIN as my first choice,and BBA as the second .The stock market has grow fast these years.I’m interested in economy because my mother joined in it.Since then,I became concern about the
improvement of Chinese financial market .Compared with western countries ,China is still not that mature in the stock market and financial field.So study economy is a good choice for me to help my country and
research what I’m interested interested in .
Concerning about the future,to have health body and soul is my goal.I also want to some achievement in the financial field.I’m looking forward to being admitted by the HKU eagerly.
15号之前交，现在14号了，咱就200分，谁帮我修改掉错误，全给你。

英语大牛们,急!急需帮助!港大个人简介,请帮助修改!
话说,15号截止,250字内,也就是今晚···时间紧迫,期望你的帮助、批评、指教·····
刚憋出一点点,请帮忙改正~~
As a mainland student, HKU is an attractive school in my mind. Meanwhile, at the approach of HKU, I find the further steps I take towards her, the tighter I get attached to her. The rich history, extraordinary teaching capacity and international learning atmosphere allow me to integrate functional skills, leading me to perfect myself.
I chose Business and Economics as my first will .The study of economics provides explanations and predictions, as well as more universal theories, which can help me explain human behavior, and offer insight into the validity of the various political choices competing for our favor.
下一段,想写个人经历,因为的确稍有不同.中文如下,请帮忙翻译···谢谢谢谢···
I believe that each experience is a fortune.三年高中近一年缺席课堂,经历使我成为今天的自己.数学竞赛让我思维敏捷,辩论比赛让我机智表达,班长工作让我细心负责,车祸病痛让我坚强勇敢,这一切,给我一颗坚韧的心,我跟随它,向港大梦想勇敢前行.
愿最美好的年华,与港大相遇.Thanks you for your valuable patience and time.
我的确写的有点不对路,但我真的不想写一些没用的夸奖,又无奈英语成绩非常有限········期待你的帮助!