英语翻译dependence is marked by the increased tolerance.这里 depen

A is marked by B. "B是A的(典型)特征"
mark (v.): to be a distinguishing feature of; e.g. a day marked by rain (This phrase means this day would strike people most as a wet day.)

There is no substantial difference between the three renderings you have provided as far as correctness in understanding is concerned, except that the first borders on translatorese.

By the way, one of the possible translations for "日益增加的" would be "increasing", please note it is "increased", which could be more appropriately translated as "增加了的".