英语纠错My hometown is hangzhou .Hangzhou is the most important

英语纠错
My hometown is hangzhou .Hangzhou is the most important city in Zhejiang Province,is the capital of Zhejiang province,Hangzhou has a long history,There is no doubt that Hangzhou is beautiful city.hangzhou is famous for the West Lake.A lot of people come to Hangzhou to see the West Lake every year .if you want shoping you can go to the yanan road ,hangzhou's food is also famous in the world .i think every will like live in hangzhou ,but if you want living here you must be hard working ,because of hangzhou house price is too expensive.so if we want live hangzhou.we need good good study and day day up.请好心人把改好的整篇发上来