My couson Robin is very naughty.

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My couson Robin is very naughty.
I Am A Small Teacher
This holiday,I finish all my homewok,then I go to my grandparents' home.And my couson Robin is in there.He is very naughty.
Firstly,I give he his homewoork——an English exam,but he doesn't want to do it.I say,"You must do it,then you can watch TV for 30minutes."He looks happy,but his exam is too bad:
I pig are vrey cut.(My pig is very cute.)
I love is.(I love it.)
……
Oh ,I'm unhappy.But I let he to watch an English cartoon.He likes cartoons.And I ask he some questions.He cananswer it,I praise he;he can't answer it,I let he reads key with me.
It's noon,I have lunch at here.When I go home,he says"bye!bye"to me in English.
I'm so happy!Because I am a successful teacher!

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dugufei 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率86.4%
Roubin is in there改成is over there好一点吧?
I let he to watch an English cartoon好象是let sb do sth
I have lunch at here去掉at
1年前
skyfox1984 共回答了114个问题 | 采纳率
small teacher?小老师?不明白
cousin不是couson
全篇讲述的是过去的事实应用过去时,称述客观事实用现在时
He is very naughty.He likes cartoons I'm so happy!Because I am a successful teacher!
first 不能用firstly
homework 不是h...
1年前
giagu 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率
上午一位小老师
这个假日,我完成所有我的作业,然后我去家庭我的祖父母的。并且我的堂兄Robin那里。他是非常淘气的。
首先,我给他的作业——an英国检查,但是他不想要做它。我说, “您必须做它,然后您能为30分钟看电视。“他看起来愉快,但是他的检查是太坏的:
我猪非常被切开。(我的猪是非常逗人喜爱的。)
我爱它。
……
噢,我是不快乐的。但...
1年前
lengmei_651 共回答了1218个问题 | 采纳率
首先,要注意的是,述说一般上要用过去式
然后,那些 I give he(都是错的,要用第三人称,- him)
This holiday,I finished all my homewok,then I went to my grandparents' home.And my couson Robin was there.He was very naughty.
First...
1年前

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