帮我润色一下句子我这个人沉默寡言 什么事都不想去争论 觉得没必要 不喜欢这繁杂城市的喧嚣 喜欢安静 想像流水一样 淡淡的

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帮我润色一下句子
我这个人沉默寡言 什么事都不想去争论 觉得没必要 不喜欢这繁杂城市的喧嚣 喜欢安静 想像流水一样 淡淡的流着 就这样一辈子 我是文盲 下面是我自己想的句子
我本沉默 是非对错懒得去争论 隔离喧嚣 像潺潺溪水一样流淌

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残翼蝶 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
我本属沉默之人,是非对错、歪斜曲直都懒得去与他人争论.隔离喧嚣、求静获稳以像潺潺溪水一样流淌为理想,度人生之岁月.
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我习惯沉默 是非对错懒得去争论 远离喧嚣 像溪水一样潺潺流淌
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频阳刀客 共回答了1个问题 | 采纳率
我觉得你这句话,和上面意思差不多,最好改一改。
你不想改的话,我建义你改成下面句子。
我本属沉默之人,是非对错、歪斜曲直都懒得去与他人争论。隔离喧嚣、求静获稳以像潺潺溪水一样流淌为理想,度人生之岁月。
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1、在空瓶内盛满有色水.
2、用大头针在白纸上扎许多孔.
3、把有孔纸片盖住瓶口.
4、用手压着纸片,将瓶倒转,使瓶口朝下.
5、将手轻轻移开,纸片纹丝不动地盖住瓶口,而且水也未从孔中流出来.

薄纸片能托起瓶中的水,是因为大气压强作用于纸片上,产生了向上的托力.小
孔不会漏出水来,是因为水有表面张力,水在纸的表面形成水的薄膜,使水不会漏出
来.这如同布做的雨伞,布虽然有很多小孔,仍然不会漏雨一样.
手绢的秘密
思考:在水龙头下把手帕撑开摊平,打开水龙头,水是不是透过手帕而流下去呢
?
材料:玻璃杯1个、手帕1条、橡皮筋1条
流程:
1、 把手帕盖住杯口,用橡皮筋绑紧.
2、 让水冲在手帕上.
3、 水流进杯子里约七、八分满后关闭水龙头.
4、 杯口朝下,把杯子迅速倒转过来.
说明:
1、 从杯子上面冲水时,水会透过手帕流入杯内.
2、 杯子倒转过来时,由于大气压力的关系,水不会流出来.
延伸:
如果盖住杯口手帕的布料不同(例如棉布或是毛巾、麻布),水的进出情形会怎
样呢?
掉不下去的塑料垫板
思考:盛水的杯子上覆盖垫板,杯口朝下时,垫板会掉下来吗?
材料:玻璃杯两个、水、塑料板一块
操作:
1. 将玻璃杯里装满水.
2. 用垫板盖好杯口.
3. 一只手扶杯子、另一只手按住垫板.
4. 用手扶住,将杯口翻转过来,使杯口朝下.
5. 扶着垫板的手轻轻放开,垫板不会掉下来.

垫板覆盖在盛水的杯子口上,因为杯外空气压力比较大,垫板就不会掉下来.
创造:
如果杯子里的水不满、或没有水塑料板会怎样,请你试一试?
给外教的求助信 ,请求润色Dear Bonnie:Hi I'm your student in XX Universit
给外教的求助信 ,请求润色
Dear Bonnie:
Hi I'm your student in XX University.My English name is Joe,Chinese name is XXX.Long time no see.:)
I'm one of the Computer Secience class.Unfortunately,I failed in the second term of our English study.My final grade is 57.2.I was suprised because my English study NEVER cause me any trouble before.So I questioned my grade and found that my "Self-study Hall" grade is 0(15) and my regular grade is 2(5).I asked Mr Huang,the chief of the Public English Education Offce.He told me that they didn't recieve my exam grade in "Self-study Hall" .So they can't help me.
At first I didn't think this is a big deal,because I thought English is 2 study-point,and I can study this course again in the next year.So I didn't turn to disturb your life.But this term I found that English course is 3 study-point and because of this I would lose my Bachelor Degree.I have to ask you for help.
Would you please change my regular grade I admit that I was absent 2 or 3 times in your class ,but that is becase my health condition was quite poor and my friend Allan helped me to ask for a break .I finished all the journals and enjoyed many happy festivals such as Hallowmas ,Thanksgiving Day and Easter.I still keep the rabbit chocolate you gave me.
Ms Bonnie,I reallly need your help.Please help me.
Hope to hear from you soon
Sincerely yours
Joe
PS:my student number is xxxxx
以上就是给一位已经回国的女外教的求助信 .大概就是希望他高抬贵手 ,给我3分让我及格.请各位润色下 .最好修改的地方 能用其他字体或者颜色 标示出来
就这点分了 不行以后再加
狼之帝王1年前4
人月神话me 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率87%
那个学分应该翻译成credit而不是study-point,你说study-point人家怎么可能看懂?
把那个so I didn't turn to disturb your life去掉.然后后面改成Later on I found out that Entlish is a 3-credit course, and that I won't be able to get my bachelor's degree if I fail it.
另外,其实语法之类的不重要,重要的是你得言之有理.如果the Public English Education Offce没收到你的self-study hall的分数,因此不能给你改成绩,那外教凭什么要给你改成绩?你得拿出令人信服的理由来.反正我从你的信里没看出来.你因为这门课不能毕业并不是外教帮你改成绩的理由.你需要让他明白的是你这门课本就该拿到分,没拿到分数不是你的责任,你得解释解释为什么你没拿到那个self-study hall的成绩.
还有你也不用急着招认你缺了2、3次课,这不会是你不及格的理由.你finished所有的journal还有enjoyed什么什么节日还有你还留着他给你的巧克力,也不是你pass这门课的理由,你得说明你的成绩合格才可以.
再另外,如果仅仅因为这一门英语课导致你不能毕业,那是非常荒谬的事.即使你是英语专业的学生,也不该这样.如果是我的话,我会投诉学校.
英语翻译1编审特别提到,这篇文章需要进一步润色.(editor,polish)2他的家人对他的职业选择感到高兴.(del
英语翻译
1编审特别提到,这篇文章需要进一步润色.(editor,polish)
2他的家人对他的职业选择感到高兴.(delighted,profession)
最好人工翻译,别来***我
吹雪19691年前4
查不到 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率94.7%
1编审特别提到,这篇文章需要进一步润色.(editor,polish)
The editor especially mentioned that this article need to be polished further.
2他的家人对他的职业选择感到高兴.(delighted,profession)
His family are delighted at his choice of profession.
求英文作文润色The advantage of studying abroadOur human technology
求英文作文润色
The advantage of studying abroad
Our human technology is connecting the world ,and make it smaller and smaller.people in china can have the meeting with their partner in the USA by the internet.it is said that the world will be a small village in the future.now,there are more and more students choosing their way to study abroad,meanwhile it is commonly believed that there is a lot of advantage of studying abroad .
First,young students go abroad to study can open their eyes.because,young students are more like to absorb the new concept and new idea,and those are a little different from our country's.so it is a great chance for them to learn the culture of other country,which can open their eyes.
Second ,to study abroad can help two country's communication.communication is a very important way for our human to solve the conflict between us,and to promote the friendship between us.learning English can help us to communicate with english-speaking country,similarly,learning other country's culture can help us to communicate with their people,furthermore,the communication between two countrys can be achieved only by the people of both country.
Third,we can learn the advantage of other country.in some fields,our country's technology is not the best,that is the reason why we should learn from other,the students can go to those country and learn this hi-tech which is our country lack of,after their finishing study,they can return and serve our country.
PS:young students go abroad to study can open their eyes这句话是否正确,应该用going 还是go
toooooold1年前4
Solring 共回答了24个问题 | 采纳率95.8%
注:括弧内()的文字就是我润色的部分.我是一段一段的润色哦.
First,young students go abroad to study can open their eyes.because,young students are more like to absorb the new concept and new idea,and those are a little different from our country's.so it is a great chance for them to learn the culture of other country,which can open their eyes.
1.(Studying abroad definitely broadens your horizons.To most people,it is an enriching and eye-opening adventure.You will gain in-depth knowledge of another culture's customs,experience local culture and in the mean time improve your foreign language skills.)
Second ,to study abroad can help two country's communication.communication is a very important way for our human to solve the conflict between us,and to promote the friendship between us.learning English can help us to communicate with english-speaking country,similarly,learning other country's culture can help us to communicate with their people,furthermore,the communication between two countrys can be achieved only by the people of both country.
2.(Besides,a firsthand understanding of a foreign culture helps paving the way for mutual understanding and communication.Bonds of friendship among nations and the people can be created through the exchange of ideas and sharing of experience.)
Third,we can learn the advantage of other country.in some fields,our country's technology is not the best,that is the reason why we should learn from other,the students can go to those country and learn this hi-tech which is our country lack of,after their finishing study,they can return and serve our country.
3.(Last but not least,developing countries can be eventually technologically capable by participating in educational programs for technology transfer.Under such programs,students who go abroad to study are front-line pioneers to acquire advanced skills,knowledge,technologies,methods of manufacturing and facilities in their area of study.These students will be contributing their insight,expertise,knowledge and skills to the country of origin upon their return home.)
这个是我觉得你可以在第三段中加上的一个例子:
For example,some Indian graduates acquired valuable and transferable skills when their worked in Silicon Valley firms in the United States and went back to start their own firms bringing employment to the local people.)
PS:young students go abroad to study can open their eyes这句话是否正确,应该用going 还是go
Go正确,不过我会选择用一下这个句子来表达“学生出国留学以便增加见识”的意思:-
Students go abroad to study so that they can widen their horizons.
Students choose to study abroad because they want to widen their horizons.
英语翻译我本人已经将其翻译一遍,但是由于本人在努力学习英语中,水平并没有达到这样的境界.翻译过来后 总觉得缺少润色.--
英语翻译
我本人已经将其翻译一遍,但是由于本人在努力学习英语中,水平并没有达到这样的境界.翻译过来后 总觉得缺少润色.
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在竞争日益激烈的今天,企业内部沟通具有日益重要的战略意义.企业中人与人之间,部门与部门之间有效的沟通和交流,有利于企业文化氛围的形成,有利于各职能部门之间的写作配合,有利于增进员工间的相互信任,形成统一的价值观和强大的凝聚力,有利于满足员工的心理需要,调动员工参与企业经营管理的积极性和创造性,有利于提高企业的竞争力和经济效益.
沟通无处不在,沟通是双向互动的.企业要搞好内部沟通.首先要通过现代企业文化建设,大盘登记***,树立全员沟通的理念,其次,要建立健全有效的沟通渠道,通过双向交流和信息互动反馈,使内部沟通渠道畅通无阻.
CO乐1年前1
皮皮大肚 共回答了24个问题 | 采纳率87.5%
In today's increasingly competitive, internal communication has an increasingly important strategic significance. Enterprise between people, between departments effective communication and exchange, is conducive to the formation of corporate culture is conducive to the cooperation between the functions of writing, is conducive to enhancing mutual trust among the staff, to form a unified values and a strong cohesion, help meet the psychological needs of employees, employee participation in enterprise management to mobilize the enthusiasm and creativity, will help improve the competitiveness of enterprises and economic benefits.
Ubiquitous communication, communication is a two-way interaction. Enterprises to improve internal communication. First, through modern enterprise culture, tape registration system, and establish full communication of ideas, and secondly, to establish effective communication channels for interactive two-way communication and information feedback, so that the internal communication channels open.

希望能帮到你~~
英语翻译意译就可以,稍微润色一下句子更好.要地道的英语哦,我以前英语不是很好,但是在大学,通过我的努力我把它掌握的很好.
黑白胶片1年前7
hahahehe12 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率86.4%
once my english was not so good,but I made a progress through hardly work in my college.
求大神帮我润色修改英语作文the influence of television and movies
求大神帮我润色修改英语作文the influence of television and movies
前面就省略了. Therefore, what does television and movies has brought? It has also aroused more concerns about whether it will one day produce latent problems.
In 21 century, there is an increasingly use of computer, television and mobile phone among people. The television and movies, which is a modern entertainment style can be seen everywhere that has permeated our daily life.
In the short term, the television may bring about benefits to us. For example, we can get more knowledge and news by new broadcast which is broadcasting on CCTV everyday on time and aimed at making more persons have an entire understand of the social situation, the different cultures between different countries. Meanwhile, the movies are more and more wonderful which attracts people's eyes resulting in human spending much more time on it.
However, the negative influence of the television and movies on people's behavior cannot be ignored. Some people are so absorbed in watching TV and movies that it would tend to take them more time on TV. Which is known to all, violence play a common role in film and drama. Some youngster prefer to imitate someone who is awesome from their view in the televisions. In addition, the more time they spend on film which means the less exercise they do.
All in all, we can find a balance between watching TV and doing exercise if we can deal with it properly. Although, the video entertainment has become a popular leisure style, we had better to get intimate with nature.
katyguo1年前3
higee 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率100%
总体定的还行,错误不多,不过有些词用的不准确.改了几个句子上的问题.
In 21 century,there is an increasing number of people who use computer,television and mobile phone.
It is known to all that violence plays...
Some youngster prefer to imitate someone who is awesome from the television program.
In addition,the more time they spend on the film,the less exercise they can do.
Although后面的逗号去掉,we had better ge intimate with nature.
英文文章,求润色Chinese New Year is the most important festivity for
英文文章,求润色
Chinese New Year is the most important festivity for the Chinese people.It is also called the Spring Festival or the Lunar New Year.Chinese people light fireworks and firecrackers,they also wear new clothes with red.Do you know why?
旁白:Long long ago,there was a monster called NIAN.Nian was an enormous,ferocious,violent,single-horned wild beast,with sharp teeth and a long,powerful tail.It lived in the mountain in peacetime.Every new year’s eve,it came down to eat food.And it always ate people and people’s crop.
年:I am hungry!I want to eat something!wow,there is a village,there must be some people and I can eat them.I am hungry!
村民1:it’s NIAN!NIAN is coming to eat us!Help!
旁白:Many years later,with hundreds of people die,people knew a way to drive the monster away.
村民2:NIAN is afraid of red,blowout and fire.let’s put on red clothes and light bamboos.
村民1:And we can put some red paper on the door!
旁白:when NIAN came to the village,it saw the fire and red things.it is afraid and it could’t close villagers.
村民2:let’s begen splitting bamboo and making sure that the “pa pa” sound can be clearly heard.
村民1:yeah!look!NIAN is hearing the sound!it is taking off quickly!
村民合:we are winning!yeah!
旁白:After this,Nian never appeared again.But this custom continiues to today.now,people still wear red new clothes and light fireworks.
Every year has an animal’s name.These animals are the rat,ox,tiger,rabbit,dragon,snake,horse,ram,monkey,rooster,dog and pig.A Chinese legend says that these twelve animals had a race.The first year was named after the rat,the winner.The other eleven years were named after the order in which the animals arrived in the race.The clever rat jumped onto the ox’s back then at the end jumped over the ox’s head to arrive first!2010 is tiger year.tiger is a kind of beast.it symbols powerful,energy and brave.
求润色,还有寻找语法错误,
jaycn06231年前3
棋小猪1116 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率86.7%
The Chinese New Year is the most important festival for the Chinese people.It is also called the Spring Festival or the Lunar New Year.The Chinese people light fireworks and firecrackers and dress themselves in red.Do you know why?
旁白:Long long ago,there was a monster called NIAN,who was an enormous,ferocious,violent,single-horned wild beast with sharp teeth and a long,powerful tail.It lived in the mountain in peace time.Every New Year's eve,it came down to feast on people and their harvests.
年:I am hungry!I want to eat something!Wow,a village out there!There must be people around there,and I can eat them.I am hungry!
村民1:It's NIAN!NIAN is coming to eat us!Help!
旁白:Many years later,with hundreds of people dead,people finally found a way to drive the monster away.
村民2:NIAN is afraid of red,blowout and fire.Let's dress in red light bamboos.
村民1:And we can put some red paper on the door!
旁白:When NIAN came to the village,it saw the fire and the red things.It was afraid and couldn't prey on villagers any more.
村民2:Let's begin splitting bamboos and making sure that the “pa pa” sound can be clearly heard.
村民1:Yeah!Look!NIAN is running off quickly on hearing the sound!
村民合:We are winning!Yeah!
旁白:After this,Nian never turned up again.But this custom continues,till today.Now,people still dress in red and light fireworks.
Each Chinese year has a name of an animal,including those of the rat,the ox,the tiger,the rabbit,the dragon,the snake,the horse,the ram,the monkey,the rooster,the dog and the pig.A Chinese legend says that these twelve animals once had a race.The first year was named after the rat,the winner.The other eleven years were named after the order in which the animals arrived at the finishing line.The clever rat jumped onto the ox’s back and in the end jumped over the ox’s head to arrive first!2010 is the year of the tiger.The tiger is a kind of fierce beast.It symbolizes power,energy and bravery.
第三篇英语小日记,看看有错吗高三水平的润色一下就更好了,I have rested for a week .Even I
第三篇英语小日记,看看有错吗
高三水平的润色一下就更好了,
I have rested for a week .Even I felt good and free.I began to feel bored.I had a lot of time to do the things I like .But most of the time I was alone.
Luckly,The Spring Festival comes.This is a family reunion day .I was very happy to see many relatives and friends.Adults were all very busy for the Spring Festival,so was I.But the thing that I expect most was the older generation makes red paper containing money as a gift for me
seeking19841年前1
余醺微觉红浮面 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率85.7%
I (had been resting) for a week.Even (though) I felt good and free.I began to feel bored.I had a lot of time to do the things I (liked) .But most of the time I was alone.
Luckily,The Spring Festival (came).This (was) a family reunion day .I was very happy to see many relatives and friends.Adults were all very busy for the Spring Festival and so was I.But the thing that I (expected) most was the older generation (making) red paper containing money as a gift for me !
【作文】初三的作文,希望各位能来帮我指出错误并润色一下,
【作文】初三的作文,希望各位能来帮我指出错误并润色一下,
As we know,studying is student's duty.If you want do your favorite work,First you have to work hard.And then you should get a good grade.Finally,your dream will come true while you growing up.Although some people think it's unfair to these poor students.But I think these poor students will get good-work's change in the future.
对了,我发现these要改成those。
hgq19821年前3
da-di 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
1.student's-----students'
2.want do-----want to do
3.you growing-----you are growing up
4.think it's unfair-----think it unfair
5."But"去掉,最后两句应该是一句话
6.第二个“these poor student”可改为they避免重复
7.逻辑上讲,(1)应该是先study hard,不然和你的第一句话无关了;
(2) finally的层次跟前面好像不太一样,改成放在句中可能会更好一点,当然老师应该不会看这么仔细
求帮忙修改英语作文,希望可以修改错误和润色,
求帮忙修改英语作文,希望可以修改错误和润色,
With the development of the times ,chatting online has become an indispensable part of our daily life,especially with college students.As one of my most meaningful experiences,chatting online has brought a lot of benefits to my life.For one thing,it provides us a convenient and efficient method to contact our friends,let us even thousands of miles away can also keep in touch.Unlike the telephone,we have to have a mobile phone each other can we have a talk ,and the worst thing is that we can only talk with one person each time.Chatting online can offer me much opportunity to talk with several friends at the same time.For another reason,chatting online can help us make friends from the entire world as many as we can.Also,it can save our time and money and practice our comminuting skill.
Though chatting online,I have more chances to make new friends who can help me and exchange our ideas and learn more from each other.And the most critical result of chatting online is that we can share our mood with our friends at any time,any place without the worry about the embarrassment which may happen in face to face talk.
Now I tend to chat online in English,which can promote our spoken English.In short,there is not anything in my life that is more beneficial than chatting online if we can arrange the reasonable time on the network.
侧耳伶听1年前1
dd式厕所 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率76.2%
With the development of the times (随着时代的发展应该是With the development of time,),chatting online has become an indispensable part of our daily life,especially with (这里介词应用for)college students.As one of my most meaningful experiences,chatting online has brought a lot of benefits to my life.For one thing,it provides us a convenient and efficient method to contact our friends,let us even thousands of miles away can also keep in touch(改为and we can easily keep in touch no matter how great the distance between us).Unlike the telephone,we have to have a mobile phone each other can we have a talk(改为we can only start a conversation by holding a moblephone in hand) ,and the worst thing is that we can only talk with one person each time.Chatting online can offer me much opportunity(more oppotunities ) to talk with several friends at the same time.For another reason,chatting online can help us make friends from the entire world as many as we can.Also,(改成in the meantime) it can save our time and money and practice our comminuting skill.(改成time and money is necessarily saved and we can practice our comminuting skill in the process.)
Though (通过吧?through)chatting online,I have more chances to make new friends who can help me and (+we can )exchange our ideas and learn more from each other.And the most critical result of chatting online is that we can share our mood with our friends at any time,any place without the worry about the embarrassment which may happen in face to face talk.(in a face-to-face talk)
Now I tend to chat online in English,which can promote our(改成my,不然和前面的I不搭) spoken English.In short,there is not anything in my life that is more beneficial than chatting online if we(I) can arrange the reasonable time on the network.
楼主写的很好,我只是稍加润色
按要求对句子进行润色.1.一片碧绿的草地就在我们脚下 改为:2.五彩的花朵开满了溪边 改为:
按要求对句子进行润色.1.一片碧绿的草地就在我们脚下 改为:2.五彩的花朵开满了溪边 改为:
头顶是瓦蓝的天空,A一片碧绿的草地就在我们脚下,身旁是清澈的小溪,B五彩的花朵开满了溪边,这是多么美的意境啊!
A处改为:
B处改为:
白色小桃子1年前1
nikaoni 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率75%
是要把结构改为一致吗?
A脚下是碧绿的草地
B溪边开满了五彩的花朵
初一英语三分钟演讲。求润色及补充Hello everyboday :Today I am so happy to be
初一英语三分钟演讲。
求润色及补充
Hello everyboday :
Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.
My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subjet is maths and English .My favorite color is ocean green.
My favorite food is rice . like reading books and playing sports very much.So,I am healthy.
My dream is to be a writer. I sure my future no dream! I am sure that it will come true
急急急!扩充一点就好了呐!
云本飘然1年前1
lijw0530 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率85.7%
Good morning, everyone!
I just couldn't be merrier to show up here and have such an honor to introduce myself to you.
My name is Liu, Zhaoyang, and I'm 12 years old. To be honest, I'm kind of ...
英语高人帮忙!急 谢谢!请高人帮我翻译下列文字一下,对方是个很有学识的外国长者,请酌情考虑语境,能润色一下就更好!感谢!
英语高人帮忙!急 谢谢!
请高人帮我翻译下列文字一下,对方是个很有学识的外国长者,请酌情考虑语境,能润色一下就更好!感谢!
新年快乐,不知道事情进展的还顺利吗?
我已经把盲童读的诗歌翻译好了,不知道是否及时?希望对您的写作有所帮助.
等待你进一步的的消息.
祝好!
我是宝宝的粉丝1年前5
浪笛 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率85.7%
没错,一定要考虑场合和对象.楼主说得对,也是我一贯坚持的.=)
个别地方有调整,因为不适应西方人的习惯,比如对长者应当先有问候再说事儿.修改在里,补充在()里,楼主自己是否需要.
Dear Mr.XX,
亲爱的XX先生:
First,happy new year to you!( I hope everything goes on well with you.)
(首先,祝您)新年快乐!(希望您一切都好.)
Well,does the work goes on smoothly?
不知道事情进展的还顺利吗?
I have already translated the poems for blind children.i hope it was finished in time,and can offer some help to your writing work.
我已经把盲童读的诗歌翻译好了.(“不知道是否及时” 改成 “希望完成得及时”)希望对您的写作有所帮助.
Looking forward to your answer.
期待您的回音.
Best wishes with regards,
祝好!(直译过来是“充满敬意的最好的祝愿.”另外,一般不说“best regards”,习惯搭配是best wishes.)
某某,x日-x月-x年
---gelumi~XD 有点多,但是我觉得加入说明很必要
英语短文语法修改及润色,30分!
英语短文语法修改及润色,30分!
有英语的短文,300来字,求大神润色及修改,请把邮箱留下给我,我发给你,改完发给我我给分!
准备去婆家1年前1
wensong55 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
很急么?晚上再回复给你可以么? 我的邮箱是 emilytin@hotmail.co.uk
初一英语三分钟演讲求润色及补充Hello everyboday :Today I am so happy to be h
初一英语三分钟演讲
求润色及补充
Hello everyboday :
Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.
My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subjet is maths and English .My favorite color is ocean green.
My favorite food is rice . like reading books and playing sports very much.So,I am healthy.
My dream is to be a writer. I sure my future no dream! I am sure that it will come true.
急!
hello_HW1年前4
桂林洋大酒店 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率93.8%
说说你喜欢的运动或者是你的生活习惯,日常爱好
也可以说说你的一些小缺点,请大家多多包涵之类的
至于楼下说的一点小错误 如果是演讲的话 单词写错了不要紧 会念就好
求高人帮忙润色一下这篇文章,再加个结尾.谢谢
求高人帮忙润色一下这篇文章,再加个结尾.谢谢
Now, we can say that electrical energy is the most important thing in the community. We use it to cook and light. Our lives are almost inseparable from electrical energy. The energy used in our daily life mainly comes from other forms of energy’s conversion, such as hydroenergy, solar energy, wind energy, tidal energy, geothermal energy, and so on.
Solar energy is a clean, and renewable energy. The working principle of solar power is to use the convergence of the sun to boil the water until it changes into steam. In this way, we can generate electricity.
The water energy which the hydropower usese mainly is the potential energy hidden in the water. In order to change the hydroenergy into electrical energy, we need to build different types of hydropower station. When the river flows from a high place ,the potential energy changes into kinetic energy. Then the turbine use the kinetic energy as the driving force to promote the generator to produce electricity. In China we have the world-famous Three Gorges Hydropower Station. It works like this.
文章的主题是如何产生电能 ,希望结尾与此有关谢谢
huangshiwan1年前2
有171个昆虫 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率89.5%
Now,we can say that electrical energy is the most important thing in the community.We use it to cook and light.Our lives are almost inseparable from electrical energy.The energy used in our daily life mainly comes from other forms of energy’s conversion,such as hydroenergy,solar energy,wind energy,tidal energy,geothermal energy,and so on.
Solar energy is a clean,and renewable energy.The working principle of solar power is to use the convergence of the sun to boil the water until it changes into steam.In this way,we can generate electricity.
The water energy which the hydropower uses mainly is the potential energy hidden in the water.In order to change the hydroenergy into electrical energy,we need to build different types of hydropower station.When the river flows from a high place ,the potential energy changes into kinetic energy.Then the turbine use the kinetic energy as the driving force to promote the generator to produce electricity.In China we have the world-famous Three Gorges Hydropower Station.It works like this
Imagine life without electricity,not just a brief power outage.We all know how inconvenient life becomes when our electricity is out for only a few hours.How hard it is to remember for that short period of time that the light switch will not produce instant light,the hair dryer will not immediately blow dry our hair,or that we can't even run water into our homes.Our homes and lives have become so dependent on electricity it is really hard to imagine everything that would change without it.
Lifestyles will become very Inconvenient.
求...谁帮我改下或润色下这几句“诗”谢谢了
求...谁帮我改下或润色下这几句“诗”谢谢了
再见了窗外的秋千,我好久没有再把你推动
再见了村口的梧桐树,下个秋天我不会含泪为你朗诵
再见了老屋子,离别时我不想回忆起伤痛
再见了小时候,再也不停留在懵懵懂懂
再见了,那些已经失去了的快乐,但愿用一千年的眼泪赎回我孩童的梦
改得都很好,但是还是不太满意...
我是想表达自己张大了但是还对小时侯很怀念的情感
忧忧惋风1年前1
J墨鱼 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率82.6%
再见了窗外的秋千,(要多久我才能把你再次推动) .
再见了村口的梧桐树,下个秋天我不会含泪为你(吟诵).
再见了老屋子,离别时我不想(泛起点点伤痛).
再见了小时候,再也(无法)停留在懵懵懂懂 .
再见了,那些(已逝去的)快乐,但愿用千年的眼泪赎回我孩童时的(懵懂与憧憬).
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大体上OK,就觉得(我好久没有再把你推动)有点不好.因为你要表达你对小时侯很怀念的情感,那么你应该是怀念小时侯的.所以秋千应该是你孩童是的依靠.所以帮你改了一下,但这只是个人意见.
帮我把这个烂文章.改成500字的优秀文章.词语润色下,加点情景
帮我把这个烂文章.改成500字的优秀文章.词语润色下,加点情景
人与人有各种各样的情感,但总少不了一种,那就是:友谊.
记得一次上数学课,我把要交的卷子不小心夹在了数学册子里,第二天直接想也没想得把册子交了,可是当老师让我交卷子的时候,我却发现了卷子不在我手里,而是去了册子里,我去找老师要回了册子,老师给我册子让我自己找,我找了半天,一大摞册子我自己搬不动,这时候她就来帮我抬起了一半的册子,放回了老师的讲台上.
ddju1年前1
宇宙发发 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率87.5%
你一点财富的鼓励都没有,谁那么无聊跟你改作文.
求 英文 年终总结 [润色]I have joined BBIT for 4 months.Have learned l
求 英文 年终总结 [润色]
I have joined BBIT for 4 months.Have learned lots of knowledges about Windows Server and Citrix,
understand the application and services details of each customer.
I joined the trainings of ITIL,Windows Azure Pack,RHCE.
Enter the Operation Centre to complete the relevant work.
Succeed in completion of some change about BBIT and BBIO.
Established a good relationship with my colleagues and help each other.
Hope to make persistent improvement in the future.
cousin12251年前2
baobei034 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率93.3%
It has been four month since I joined BBIT and it's absolutely an rewarding experience for me and I feel lucky and happy to work with all of you,my lovely colleagues.
During the four months,I 've learned a lot,I knew the skill of windows server and citrix,the details of each customer.I particited in ITIL training ,Azure pacl and rhce and learn how they works.Moreover,I can sucessfully enter the OC to complete my work .And the most exciting is that I have been getting well with my colleagues and I enjoy working with them.
Hope to make persistent improvement in the future.
为了使计划的文字增添凝重的书面色彩,括号中的词语怎样修改润色才行?
为了使计划的文字增添凝重的书面色彩,括号中的词语怎样修改润色才行?
(到时候),(同)新闻部门联系报道的(事情).
137223485711年前2
微笑的红雪 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率100%
(届时),(会同)新闻部门联系报道的(事宜).
英语翻译成汉语后没有文采,请帮忙润色一下
英语翻译成汉语后没有文采,请帮忙润色一下
这是英文原文
Robinson Crusoe is a legendary person created by Daniel Defoe. In the novel, Defoe traces the growth of Robinson from a naive and simple youth into a mature and hardened man, tempered by numerous trials in his eventful life. He survived on a lonely island for twenty-eight years with his amazing willpower. And finally he overcame the adversity and created the splendor of his own life. Robinson here is a real hero. Robinson Crusoe is an adventure story very much in the spirit of the time. So when it was published, it became an immediate success.
.”我翻译的,请大家帮忙修改的有文采一些!谢谢了!
“这是鲁滨逊是笛福创造出来的一个传奇人物.在小说里,笛福描述了鲁滨逊从天真,朴素的青年成长为一个成熟,坚韧的人,在他平静的生活里经受了大量的考验.他以自己顽强的毅力和坚强的意志在孤岛上生活了二十八年之久,并且最终战胜了艰苦的环境,创造出了人生中的精彩.鲁宾逊是一个真正的英雄.一个典型的十八世纪的英国中产阶级人物.《鲁滨逊漂流记》代表了这个时代的冒险精神.因此,这本书一出版,就立即获得了成功.”我翻译的,请大家帮忙修改的有文采一些!谢谢
尤其是汉语,怎么说才能有文采?还通顺!谢谢
zhangzhen1年前2
ll822001 共回答了25个问题 | 采纳率88%
鲁滨逊是笛福创造出来的一个传奇人物.在小说里,笛福描述了鲁滨逊从天真,朴素的青年成长为一个成熟,坚韧的人,他在原本平静的生活里经受了大量的考验.最终,他以自己顽强的毅力和坚强的意志在孤岛上生活了二十八年之久,...
求润色一句英语需要表达的意思是:如非特殊说明,用来表示修改位置的行号、页码表示的是修改版本中的位置.需要润色的表达为:U
求润色一句英语
需要表达的意思是:如非特殊说明,用来表示修改位置的行号、页码表示的是修改版本中的位置.
需要润色的表达为:Unless otherwise noted,line numbers and page numbers refer to positions in the revised manuscript for indicating where corrections have been made.
感激涕零,抱歉只有5分了
us陈年老酒1年前1
冰雹一切 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率90%
Unless any exception is noted,line numbers and page numbers (used to mark the position (where correction is needed)) refer to the position in the revised edition.
需要一个复合从句才能表达清楚这个意思.另外 “特殊说明”我认为用exception比otherwise合适.
英语广播词纠错这是我们第一次英语广播的词,写得很哈比,希望高人们能给改一下或润色一下,Merry Christmas m
英语广播词纠错
这是我们第一次英语广播的词,写得很哈比,希望高人们能给改一下或润色一下,
Merry Christmas my audience,this is school English broadcasting.as you can find,here comes the new four-ABCD.as the new members of english broadcasting station,we're gonna be with you every Thursday afternoon to share a fantastic period with you.this is our first show,and is also the X'mas special.after a song,here's coming the news today.
青青的来青青的去1年前1
jwangms 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率76.5%
Merry Christmas everyone.Santa Clause is finally coming around the corner.Glad you could join us for the one and only Christmas Special show.This is our first show.(applause) yea!Thank you very much for your support.
Let me introduce you to our newest members ABCD of the English broadcasting station.We'll be with you every Thursday afternoon from xx to xx.Hope you can tune in and join us for the hours of fun and laughter packed show.Now let's play a lovely tune by xxxx,followed by some important news that you do not want to miss.Don't go away,we'll be right back.
汉译英,一句写给自己提醒自己鼓励自己的话,顺便再润色一下中文意思,我都觉得不通顺
汉译英,一句写给自己提醒自己鼓励自己的话,顺便再润色一下中文意思,我都觉得不通顺
是一句想写给自己的话,大概意思:“保持警醒,没有恐惧,没有愤怒,永远别放弃自己,永远别忘了与自己战斗,为自己而战.”
学校里学的东西确实只会几个单词了,这个帮忙翻译一下,不是翻译单词,希望语法通语境准确;
如果可以再重新润色一下汉语意思,就更好了,作为理科生我确实表达不好,语言太匮乏了,谢谢
ddt12021年前1
清鸟 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
stay in awake, no fair, no fury, never give up, fight with self-weakness, strive for myself.
(Inner piece, buddy)
急求润色改正一片英语演讲稿!Pleaserefuse to give money to the beggarsGoodm
急求润色改正一片英语演讲稿!
Pleaserefuse to give money to the beggars
Good
morning ladies and gentlemen.First of all,let me ask you a question.Have you
ever had such experiences that the beggars come to beggar you for money on your way home?The beggars might be
disabled men,old people or even little children,they stand in the street,
cold wind blowing and they can’t stop shivering.Will you give them some money?
My answer is no.
I’m here to appeal to you to refuse to give the beggar money.
Because your little help can’t give them substantial help,instead,it will
have bad social influence.
Please say no to the beggars,because many beggars use our
sympathy to cheat us more and more obviously.According to a social research,
more than 80% beggars are professional beggars.They often controlled by a
certain leader and perform a certain type of begging that the leaders ordered
them to do.Then after a long day work they give more than half of their
earning to the leaders and live tighter as a group.So they beg doesn’t because
they have to,on the contrary,this is their job.
Please say no to the beggars,because to beg means to show
people’s poverty helplessness and sickness to the public.They sell their dignity
to give you the chance to give them alms and get the satisfaction easily and
cheaply.But this kind of action shouldn’t be strongly promoted and advocated.
The right and general value of our culture is to respect the self-made man –
the man who has made it through his own efforts.
Please say no to the beggars,maybe some of you will ask me how
about some true beggars who really need help urgently.Yes,we can’t figure out
who really need help.And furthermore,we don’t have the obligation to do so.
What we truly need is the official charitable organization to be responsible
for these affairs.The organization accepts the donations from the public and
also the supervision,ensuring the transparency of the accounts and helping us
to use the raised money to whomever in desperate need.This method can save us
from a lot of unnecessary trouble to distinguish the beggars.
Don’t feel ashamed whenyou refuse to give the beggar money,it doesn’t means you are cold-blood.
Don’t feel guilty whenyou refuse to give the beggar money.Your money can’t help him efficiently.
Please refuse to give
the beggar money with smile on your way home and believe that you make theright choice.
zn07161年前1
陌默漠 共回答了13个问题 | 采纳率84.6%
Maybe that beggar is a real cheat,but one who gives would only lose a Nickle.
Yet if Otherwise,that one might lose the LIFE.
Then which one is more important?
Good Language is For Good,and For God.
I admire your GOOD English,really; and you being the master.
GOOD LUCK
英语翻译最好别用机器翻,就算翻的也给好好润色下一篇专业文献摘抄下来的的,麻烦英语大牛给翻译一下.到了@的地方麻烦就空着,
英语翻译
最好别用机器翻,就算翻的也给好好润色下
一篇专业文献摘抄下来的的,麻烦英语大牛给翻译一下.
到了@的地方麻烦就空着,还用@来代替,
正文
数目较上一个时期,分别下降了3%和16%,从此我们可以发现有一个明显的下降在总量上,这也反映了@的发育其实一个@过程.
为了更好的分析数据,我们把差异基因分成了其余俩个类别:相差10倍的和相差15倍的.
通过此我们可以看出,差异是很明显的,
在10倍差异仍有很多基因,无论是那个时期对比,下降仍是主要趋势,说明变化很大,也能发生了说明@过程值得我们继续深入研究
众所周知,@数据库分为俩种.我们的工作比对的是其中一个数据库.通过比对另一个数据库,可以获得更多的生物信息学分析,
我们以80%为阈值,对@进行整合.可以完善了我们的@分析,也为下面的软件分析奠定基础,对比的结果列表如下
通过数据库整合,我们多获得了@个数据,例如
同时,我们也能整合以前别人的工作.
我们基于水稻物种俩个都测序了,分析数据量较少,可以与粳稻整合,整合出来的数据
可以多的分析.我们认为这对于今后分析是分析的好办法和趋势.
jsbxz1年前1
O唯爱O 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率100%
数目较上一个时期,分别下降了3%和16%,从此我们可以发现有一个明显的下降在总量上,这也反映了@的发育其实一个@过程.
为了更好的分析数据,我们把差异基因分成了其余俩个类别:相差10倍的和相差15倍的.
通过此我们可以看出,差异是很明显的,
The number,compared to that of last period, has decreased by 3% and 16% seperately.So we could find an obvious decline in the total quantity,which also shows us a @ process in the @ growth.
In orde to have a good analysis on the data,we seperated the different genes into two other groups according to the differences about 10 times and 15 times.And we could draw a conclusion that the difference is exactly obvious.
在10倍差异仍有很多基因,无论是那个时期对比,下降仍是主要趋势,说明变化很大,也能发生了说明@过程值得我们继续深入研究
There're still many genes within the difference of 10 times.The main trend is to decrease whatever period it is compared with,which means that the great change could happen.And the process of @ is worth further and deep study for us.
众所周知,@数据库分为俩种.我们的工作比对的是其中一个数据库.通过比对另一个数据库,可以获得更多的生物信息学分析,
我们以80%为阈值,对@进行整合.可以完善了我们的@分析,也为下面的软件分析奠定基础,对比的结果列表如下
It' known to all that the datebase has two kinds,one of which is the object for us to work with and compare.We could get more information of bioinformatics analysis by comparing it with anther.
We combine @ by the threshold of 80 percent ,which could also complete our analysis about @ and lay the foundation for the next software analysis.The result of comparison is as follows:
通过数据库整合,我们多获得了@个数据,例如
同时,我们也能整合以前别人的工作.
我们基于水稻物种俩个都测序了,分析数据量较少,可以与粳稻整合,整合出来的数据
可以多的分析.我们认为这对于今后分析是分析的好办法和趋势.
By combining the database,we have gotten more data for @,for example
At the same time,we can also combine and get more information from the work done by others.
We have both checked up the gene sequence on the basis of the rice specie.For the little data,it could be integrated with Japonica rice,which will produce more data for us to analyse.We think it a good way and trend to study the same subject in the future.
纯手工翻译,仅供参考,如有不解,欢迎来函(Hi)
谁能把这篇文章改成演讲稿,要求大概在五分钟,写的不足,不通顺的地方可以润色一下
谁能把这篇文章改成演讲稿,要求大概在五分钟,写的不足,不通顺的地方可以润色一下
这世上有一种非常珍贵的东西叫幸福.幸福对于每个人都有着不同的定义,而且每个人都在不断的追求着自己的幸福.
x05实际上每个人对幸福都有着自己不同的看法,从古至今的人们又对幸福有不同的解释.在辞海中翻越幸福这个词,它是指人们在感受外部事物带给内心的愉悦、安详、平和、满足的心理状态.,我不完全认为是这样,我认为幸福不仅仅是一种感受,而是一种延续不断的过程.曾经在电脑电视中看到过一些节目,当主持人问:“你幸福吗?”大部分问回答:“我不幸福”.当问起为什么的时候,他们会回答:“因为我的物质生活不够富裕,钱不够花,工作不稳定,学习没谁好之类的话”而有一部分人回答:“幸福,因为我天天衣食无忧,工作又好又不累,不缺钱花”而他们都没有真正理解什么是幸福.
x05 实际上幸福很常见,只要放慢心态,自己用心去观察,去体会,幸福无处不在,欣慰幸福是一段过程
x05 赋予我们享受权利的是父母,如果没有他们,我们就没有这个享受幸福的权利,所以我们要学会感恩.
x05 感恩并不是一个任务,他更是一份必须有的责任.当我们一直,无时无刻不在接受这份幸福的时候,是不是已经***?每天父母给我们准备一日三餐,临行前叮嘱我们带好东西,在不得意时的安慰,事实上,没有人是理所应当给你什么的,说以我们学会感恩!
感恩是一种处世必知的哲学,是生活中的大智慧.人生在世,不可能一帆风顺,种种的失败、无奈都需要自己勇敢的面对、旷达的处理.这是,不要一味的埋怨生活的不公,更不能从此萎靡不振!而是要对生活满怀感恩,跌倒在爬起来.它是昏黑中为你守望的光源,它是彷徨中为你指示的路标,它是寒风中为你保暖的外衣,它是流言中为你抵挡的臂膀.常怀感恩之心会让你成长,并走向成功.而你不感恩,最终不仅可能一事无成,还会使你看不到幸福.
x05 成功的时候,感恩的理由固然可以有很多.失败是,不感恩的借口只需要一个,但在失败时更应该感恩,因为感恩之心是对自己给予帮助的事物表示感激,铭记于心.
x05 不知足的人不会去感恩,不感恩的人无幸福可言.
叶枫风1年前1
pengpeng823 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率100%
你应该有能力再在感恩的地方多写点的吧 估计这样子会更好
我在英语自学上有点困难,希望能得到您的帮助,请您能修改润色一下这篇小短文!
我在英语自学上有点困难,希望能得到您的帮助,请您能修改润色一下这篇小短文!
Calamity bring out one’s best quality
Just as the sweet-smelling of the plum blossom is from the coldest winder’s training ,the calamity is contributing to an important extent to the development of one’s quality .there are two different views about calamity during our society.Some people consider it is beneficial for one’s bring-up,but some think it not.Why in my opinion ,calamity is a challenge for our limit ability .it is advantage to improve our society capability ,and will bring out one’s best quality .
It is impossible for everyone meet nothing calamity all their life .if you are not ready to face various calamity during your life ,you maybe lose some important chances,such as receiving university education ,finding a satisfactory job .what is more ,calamity is playing a vital role to enhance one’s quality.Firstly ,it teaches our how to solve problem .secondly ,it tells our what to cherish happiness.thirdly ,it give our some pressure help ourselves to stronger and stronger .
Last but no least ,everyone know the coin has two sides ,the calamity has two sides,too.If we want to success in our life ,we must overcome it’s inactive aspect.
有话就讲1年前2
dewi 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
Calamity brings out one’s best characters
Just as the sweet-smelling,which is of the plum blossom,is from the coldest winder training ,the calamity is contributing to an important extent to the development of one’s characters .It's said that two views about calamity are in our society.Some people consider it a beneficial for one’s bring-up,but some think it not.Why (这里加点儿什么,感觉到这里突然断掉了.应该稍微剖析一下原因.)
In my opinion ,calamity is a challenge for our limited ability .it is a positive way to improve our society capability ,and will temper one’s best characters .
It is impossible for everyone meeting no calamity all their life .if we are not about to face various calamity during your life ,we may lose some important chances.举例的部分改一下,例子不是很好.what is more ,calamity is playing a vital role to enhance one’s quality.Firstly ,it teaches us how to solve problem .secondly ,it tells us what to cherish happiness.At last ,it give our some pressure help ourselves to be/get stronger and stronger .
Last but no least ,everyone know the coin has two sides.If we want to succeed,we must overcome calamity's inactive aspect.
英语翻译要发给很多老外,英文底子差所以求救了劳烦给润色下,翻的正式些内容如下:附件为A客户3月份帐单,运输费为B人民币,
英语翻译
要发给很多老外,英文底子差所以求救了
劳烦给润色下,翻的正式些
内容如下:
附件为A客户3月份帐单,运输费为B人民币,其他费用为C人民币
运输费发票号为C,其他费用发票号是D
核aa1年前7
daidunfeng 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率82.6%
Dear Sir,
The Mar.bill of customer A is attached please notice to check.The transport cost with invoice No.C is RMB B and other costs with invoice No.D are RMB C.
第8页第三题三 词组“润色”(确实是词组“润色”没有打错或看错)( )的空气 ( )的脸庞 ( )地开放( )的面目 (
第8页第三题
三 词组“润色”(确实是词组“润色”没有打错或看错)
( )的空气 ( )的脸庞 ( )地开放
( )的面目 ( )地摇动 ( )地站着
( )的斗志 ( )的驼铃声
第9页第六题的第2小题
六 改写句子.(不改变句子的原意)
2.妈妈在电话里说:“宁宁,妈妈要加班,你先自己吃饭吧!”
间接转述:
顺便问一下:间接转述与转述句有区别吗?
chenyulove3331年前5
henansheng 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率87.5%
1.润色的脸庞
2.妈妈在电话里说:“宁宁,妈妈要加班,你先自己吃饭吧!”
间接转述:
妈妈在电话里给宁宁说,她要加班,叫宁宁自己吃饭.
间接转述与转述句基本上是一个意思.
下面是我的英语介绍,希望大家帮我修改一下,润润色,再帮我把中文的句子译成英文.
下面是我的英语介绍,希望大家帮我修改一下,润润色,再帮我把中文的句子译成英文.
Hello everyone.
This is my best friend HJH.This my best friend HX.
Three years ago,we met in the same class.Today we still get togetheer.
HJH is very friendly.She often helps me.If I get into trouble
she often gives me a hand.When I feel sad.I often chat with her.She often makes me happy.
HX is very helpful.She often helps me to learn English.She is the best listener 听我诉说快乐与悲伤.
We all like pop music.Lee Hom is HS`s favourite singer.RAIN is HJH`s favourite star.If we are free ,we will go shopping or go skiting
与你再一起让我感到很充实
I must 珍惜our friendship.
I think we will have more friends in class nine.
konggu991年前4
青青子衿3888 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率100%
Hello everyone.(since this is an self introduction,you'd better first provide some information about yourself)
This is my best friend HJH.This my best friend HX.(you can't have two best "friend".you can say "this is ...,and this is .they are two of my best friends")
Three years ago,we met in the same class (in this class).Today we still get togetheer.( are together)
HJH is very friendly.She often helps me.If (when)I get into trouble
she often gives me a hand.When I feel sad.(,)I often chat with her.She often makes me happy.
HX is very helpful.She often helps me to (不要to) learn English.She is the best listener 听我诉说快乐与悲伤.(of my happiness and sorrow).
We all like pop music.Lee Hom is HS`s favourite singer (HS is a fervent fan of Lee Hom).RAIN is HJH`s favourite star.If we are free ,we will go shopping or go skiting
与你再一起让我感到很充实 (to be with you alone makes me content)
I must 珍惜(cherish) our friendship.
I think we will have more friends in class nine.
写得不错,加油!
请帮我把这段话润润色,修改下今天,我要向大家讲述的是曾经发生在我和我父亲之间的故事,几年前,在一次旅行中,我兴奋的坐在列
请帮我把这段话润润色,修改下
今天,我要向大家讲述的是曾经发生在我和我父亲之间的故事,几年前,在一次旅行中,我兴奋的坐在列车上,突然,列车顶部的一块钢板直冲着我的后背砸去,而就在这时,我身边的父亲用他的胳膊挡住了正在下落的干板,正因此,父亲的手臂上留下了两条长长的血痕,我从那血淋淋的伤口上,体会到父亲( )的爱,我会永远感激并( )我的父亲
请在( )中填两个词.
字数不要变太多,朗读时间是一分钟.
最好在告诉我朗读这段话要注意的地方 .
妙舞境界1年前1
wsmc 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率90.9%
今天,我要向大家所讲述的是曾经发生在我和父亲之间的故事,记忆回溯,几年前,在那一次旅行中,坐在列车上的我显得尤其兴奋,可突然间,列车顶部的一块钢板直冲着我的后背砸去,然而就在此瞬间,我身旁的父亲用他粗壮而有力的胳膊挡住了正在下落的钢板,此后,父亲的手臂上出现了两条长长的伤痕,我看着那血淋淋的场面,我呆住了.瞬间体会到父亲( 不顾一切 )的爱,我会永远感激并(敬爱 )我的父亲
求强人润色这段话(英文),改的好追加100
求强人润色这段话(英文),改的好追加100
My enthusiasm for doing pharmaceutical research comes from one of my female apprentice,She used to be majored in biological science too,but since she study abroad in USA,she change to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science.I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her,like drug efficacy,drug safety and drug design.And I found pharmaceutical research is much more attractive to me than my recent research,because unlike my research about microorganism,it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly.From this chance,I found my real interest.
只要意思对,可以大改.
我晕,是让润色这段文字,不是翻译成中文。这是我自己写的,因为觉得写的不够好,“female apprentice”是表示师姐的意思,不是女助手。
tanguren1年前2
wujiawen555 共回答了8个问题 | 采纳率75%
润色如下:
My passion for pharmaceutical research has much to do with one of my female apprentices.She used to major in biological science,but after she went abroad to America,she began to pursue PhD in pharmaceutical science.I learned a lot about pharmaceutical research from her such as drug efficacy,drug safety and drug design,etc.And I found pharmaceutical research attracts me much more than my recent research,because unlike my research about microorganism,it is human oriented and people can benefit from our research directly.It is due to this coincedence that I have come to know my real interest.
英语演讲稿求改英语演讲稿一篇,求修正语法错误+美化润色,原意不能变.有好的加悬赏分.My favorite movie
英语演讲稿求改
英语演讲稿一篇,求修正语法错误+美化润色,原意不能变.有好的加悬赏分.
My favorite movie is Everybody’s fine.It told us a story about a father travelled between different cities in the USA to see his children.The old man lived in the countryside and his children lived in different cities.His wife has gone,so he missed his children very much.Every weekend he called his children to come home to eat dinner together,and they all agreed.So the old man cooked the dinner very carefully every time.But every weekend,his children all canceled on him at the last minute.Every weekend at last,he had to have the delicious food alone.
Lastly one day,he decided,although all of his children didn’t show up for a visit,he would go to visit them.He tidied his travelling bag and started the travel.
First,he went to the youngest son’s home,his name is David.He waited in front of the door for a long time but his son didn’t come back.So he left a letter and started the trip of meeting his other children.On the way near David’s home,he found some pictures drawn by David.He was happy and he thought David has become an artist.
Then the old father went to meet other children.They were in different cities,they had different work and they also had their own happiness and unhappiness.
When the old father asked his children:Are you happy?Their answers are surprisingly identical:they were very fine and very happy.
But the old father discovered something not very good:
Amy told the old father that Jack was a good student in the school but he found that was not true.However,at the airport,Amy said that she was happy.And the old father said ‘A happy one.First one on my list.’
Robert told his father that he was a conductor in a orchestra,but the old father found Robert was just a drummer.The old father was not very happy but Robert also said that he was really fine.Anyway,the old father was happy because Robert was fine,too.
Then,the old father went to see his daughter Rosie.He noticed that Rosie rent a very impressive apartment and became an unmarried mother.
About everything the old father found and thought,the children told a lot of lies to deceive him.The old father was not very happy.
So,the old man wanted to go home.But on his way home,his heart disease attacked all at once.
After heard the bad news,Frank’s children went to the hospital as fast as they can.When frank was rescued,he saw his children around him except David.Then,he knew David has been in the heaven.He accepted the fact.
At the end of the film,Frank was having Christmas dinner with Rosie,Robert and Amy.Frank said:Everybody’s fine.
I love this movie.It didn’t have any special spectacle,but it also moved us a lot,because it had a lot of family love.
略略润色就好,主要修改语法或者单词拼写错误.讲的是一部电影,如果修改的大神看过就更好了没看过也没关系.电影叫天伦之旅
dchxinxi1年前1
小女人多多 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率90%
My favorite movie is Everybody’s fine.It told us a story about a father travelled between different cities in the USA to see his children.The old man lived in the countryside and his children lived in different cities.His wife has gone,so he missed his children very much.Every weekend he called his children to come home for family reunion,and they all agreed.So the old man cooked the dinner very carefully every time.But every weekend,his children stood him up in the last minute.At last,he had to dine alone and lonely.
Finally,one day,he decided,although all of his children didn’t show up for a visit,he would go to visit them.He packed his bag and started the journey.
First,he went to the youngest son’s home,his name is David.He waited in front of the door for a long time but his son didn’t show up.So he left a letter and went on to meet his other children.On the way away from David’s,he found some pictures drawn by hiim.He was happy and he thought David has become an artist.
Then the old father went to meet other children.They were in different cities,they had different work and they also had their own happiness and unhappiness.
When the old father asked his children:Are you happy?Their answers are surprisingly identical:they were very fine and very happy.
But the old father discovered something not very good:
Amy told the old father that Jack was a good student in the school but he found that it was not true.However,at the airport,Amy said that she was happy.And the old father said ‘A happy one.First one on my list.’
Robert told his father that he was a conductor in an orchestra,but the old father found Robert was just a drummer.The old father was not very happy but Robert also said that he was fine enough Anyway,the old father was happy because Robert was fine,too.
Then,the old father went to see his daughter Rosie.He noticed that Rosie rent a very impressive(房子基本不用impressive来形容,如果想表达贵的话用expensive,奢华的话用luxurious) apartment and became a single mother.
About everything that the old father found and thought,the children told a lot of lies to deceive him.The old father was not very happy.
So,the old man wanted to go home.But on his way home,his heart disease attacked all at once.
After hearing the bad news,Frank’s children went to the hospital as fast as they can.When frank was saved from death,he saw his children around him except David.Then,he knew David has been in the heaven.He accepted the fact.
At the end of the film,Frank was having Christmas dinner with Rosie,Robert and Amy.Frank said:Everybody’s fine.
I love this movie.It didn’t have any special spectacle,but it also moved us a lot,because it showed a lot of love among family.
纯手写.求加分.
英文句子批改,润色.看看有没有错误.
英文句子批改,润色.看看有没有错误.
Keeping pets may be have special significance to somebody,especially for senior citizen who live alone or kinds of people with psychological problems
heshaocun1年前3
WangYvonne 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率88.2%
Keeping pets may be significant to somebody,especially to senior citizens who live alone or to the people with psychological problems.
请帮忙润色两篇介于初中到高中水平的英语文章,也就是改正文章中的词汇、语法等瑕疵.不必增添内容,在基础上润色就可以.改得称
请帮忙润色两篇介于初中到高中水平的英语文章,也就是改正文章中的词汇、语法等瑕疵.不必增添内容,在基础上润色就可以.改得称心如意的,
My Family
I have a nice family.There are three people in my family.There are my father,my mother and me.
My father is a teacher.My mother is a teacher too.I am a office worker.My father and my mother are teaching in the same school,they usually go to work by car.I usually go to work on foot.Sometime I go to work by bike.
My father likes playing football very much.My mother likes watching TV.I likes reading books.
This is my family.Do you like my family?
My Plan for the Spring Festival
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .I have a good plan for the Spring Festival.
First,I will visit Mr Huang whose is my junior school teacher.He is from Beijing.I learn much form him when I study in junior school.
Secondly,I will read a few books.In my opinion,book is man's best friend,reading are very useful.
Finally,I will also have a rest for the Spring Festival.
There is my plan for the Spring Festival,do you agree?
hhffdd1年前2
巫巫妩诬笑 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率90.9%
My Family
I have a warm family.There are three people in my family.They are my father,my mother and I.
My father is a teacher.So does my mother.I am a office worker.My father and my mother are teaching in the same school,they usually go to work by car.I usually go to work on foot but sometimes I go to work by bike.
My father likes playing football very much.My mother likes watching TV.I like reading books.
This is my family.Do you like my family?
My Plan for the Spring Festival
Spring Festival is the most important festival in China .I have a good plan for the Spring Festival.
Firstly,I will visit Mr.Huang who is my junior school teacher.He is from Beijing.I learned a lot form him when I studied in junior school.
Secondly,I will read a few books.In my opinion,book is man's best friend,reading book is very useful.
Finally,I will also have a rest for the Spring Festival.
This is my plan for the Spring Festival,what about yours?
英语翻译请再润色Please see my resume for more details about my work
英语翻译
请再润色
Please see my resume for more details about my work if interested.
隔山不打牛1年前3
是要253as成 共回答了21个问题 | 采纳率81%
Please refer to my resume/CV for more details about my work.
你原来的版本也没啥大问题,不过略改后显得更加正式一些.另外,if interested多余了,是中国式英语的思维习惯,人家不感兴趣自然不会去看的,是不是?一定要加上,恐怕也要改成if you are interested in it,但是在是别扭,强烈建议去掉.
怎样使作文的细节再润色些?请高手们多多指导!谢、、我的作文满分100百,只得了85~题目是“风雨路上,你我一同走过”。、
怎样使作文的细节再润色些?
请高手们多多指导!谢、、
我的作文满分100百,只得了85~题目是“风雨路上,你我一同走过”。、、“细节上在润色下”这是老师的评语。
火箭41年前3
春光灿烂唯小鸣 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率87%
细节在润色,我觉得老师的意思是说,你的主题、内容情节写的都很好,但语言功底有所欠缺,比如同是说心情差,你说心情差和我的心里的世界飘着阴云密布,这两种说法就差距很大.
翻译:这位艺术家差不多完成他的大作,只差润色之笔.(expect for)
浮生心若羽1年前1
独居老人2007 共回答了19个问题 | 采纳率89.5%
The artist almost has finished his masterpiece,except for a little polishing .
要做英语作文,请大神帮我润色一下这篇英语文章,下面是现在作文的评分
要做英语作文,请大神帮我润色一下这篇英语文章,下面是现在作文的评分
Last Thursday,I went toEnglish corner with my friends firstly.What a wonderful experience and I wouldlike to share it with you next.
When I came into theclassroom,I saw a man who wears a black mask holding an opaque bag.Except forhim,there were also another two teachers.One was an enchanting woman,who wassitting on the table.The other was an old man with white bread who I saw insome charity activity.I said hello to him .when I sit down,surprisingly,themystery man took out some candies from his bag to me.I expressed gratitude tohim.
Firstly,we played aninteresting game.One of the foreign teachers showed us some cards with Englishwords on them.By his guidance,we stuck the cards on our forehead withoutknowing what it was written.Then they asked us to choose a partner freely andguessed the vocabulary with each other.I cooperated with the mystery teacherwho had dropped off the mask.I firstly asked him,is it food?He said no.Next,I asked whether it is in the classroom.He nodded kindly.The talkcontinued for a few minutes without any progress.Lastly,I had no choice butto ask for some hints .He reminded me that it is usual in American primaryschool,while it is absent in Chinese classroom.Finally,I gave up and seen itwhere Flag was written on it.
When the game was over,wechatted with foreign teachers in groups.They asked about our major.My majoris psychology.About psychology,we talked for a long time.He said seeingpsychologist in Americais common and expensive.It is a good idea if I intended to earn considerablemoney in America.But I explained that my English is not good enough to do it.He advisedhumorously why not find a foreign boyfriend which aroused laughter.Dreams werediscussed too.When asked what my dream is,I answered that my dream is earningenough money to travel around the world and when I am old,farming is also agood choice.We also talked about many other topics,such as our traditionalfestivals and traveling experience.
My first interculturalcommunication experience is so meaningful and I know more about the differencebetween America and China.In a world,the most essential is that I break out of shyness and show myself bravely.
hyyl19721年前1
zr_zr12 共回答了14个问题 | 采纳率100%
Last Thursday,I went toEnglish corner with my friends firstly.What a wonderful experience and I wouldlike to share it with you next.
When I came into theclassroom,I saw a man who wears a black mask holding an opaque bag.Except forhim,there were also another two teachers.One was an enchanting woman,who wassitting on the table.The other was an old man with white bread who I saw insome charity activity.I said hello to him .when I sit down,surprisingly,themystery man took out some candies from his bag to me.I expressed gratitude tohim.
Firstly,we played aninteresting game.One of the foreign teachers showed us some cards with Englishwords on them.By his guidance,we stuck the cards on our forehead withoutknowing what it was written.Then they asked us to choose a partner freely andguessed the vocabulary with each other.I cooperated with the mystery teacherwho had dropped off the mask.I firstly asked him,is it food?He said no.Next,I asked whether it is in the classroom.He nodded kindly.The talkcontinued for a few minutes without any progress.Lastly,I had no choice butto ask for some hints .He reminded me that it is usual in American primaryschool,while it is absent in Chinese classroom.Finally,I gave up and seen itwhere Flag was written on it.
When the game was over,wechatted with foreign teachers in groups.They asked about our major.My majoris psychology.About psychology,we talked for a long time.He said seeingpsychologist in Americais common and expensive.It is a good idea if I intended to earn considerablemoney in America.But I explained that my English is not good enough to do it.He advisedhumorously why not find a foreign boyfriend which aroused laughter.Dreams werediscussed too.When asked what my dream is,I answered that my dream is earningenough money to travel around the world and when I am old,farming is also agood choice.We also talked about many other topics,such as our traditionalfestivals and traveling experience.
My first interculturalcommunication experience is so meaningful and I know more about the differencebetween America and China.In a world,the most essential is that I break out of shyness and show myself bravely.
英语翻译我刚毕业,不知怎么跟客户写信.请大家帮我翻译给客户的一封信.内容如下,可以适当修改润色.附件为您要的文件.收货人
英语翻译
我刚毕业,不知怎么跟客户写信.请大家帮我翻译给客户的一封信.内容如下,可以适当修改润色.
附件为您要的文件.收货人填写的是XX.但发票跟以前一样填写的是xxxx.
由于目前汇率变动较大,故选今天的汇率6.12,所以价格换算为USD7.
若以上文件有误,请告知修改.若文件没问题,我将马上联系货代.
另外H.S.CODE问过高小姐,她说与往年不同,所以我只能自己查询.我查询到的是6211.
如有疑问,请立即回复我!
nazismzxzx1年前1
天敌A 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率95.5%
跟外国客户写信 文字简单 直白让人能看懂就好
我在美国上大学, 经常跟教授邮件往来,邮件质量放心.
Dear XX【客户名】,
I have attached the documents you wanted to the email. I filled out the consignee as XX, but on the invoice I put xxxx, as usual. Since the fluctuations of the currency rate are pretty large, I chosed today's currency rate, 6.12 RMB per USD. Therefore the price is converted to 7 USD.
If you find anything mistaken in these documents, please notify me. If not, I will contact the freight forwarding company immediately.
I've also consulted Ms.Gao for the H.S.Code, and she said it was different from previous years, so I have to look it up. From what I found, the code seems to be 6211. Does that look correct to you?
If you have any further questions, please feel free to reply this email. Thank you!
Best wishes,
【你自己的名字】
请大家给这几个句子润色一下,小弟明天考六级,苦于作文水平有限,想提前准备一下,请大家帮忙把这几个句子润色一下达到六级要求
请大家给这几个句子润色一下,
小弟明天考六级,苦于作文水平有限,想提前准备一下,请大家帮忙把这几个句子润色一下达到六级要求
1、expo let the world know a modern and agressive china世博会让世界认识了现代并有进取心的***
2、it shows china has got the ability to hold any big 世界性盛会(请别见笑哈)它展示了***具有举办任何世界性大会的能力
3、it offers people more positions to work 提供了更多工作岗位
还有几个句子,如果效果不错的话另开一问题,如果翻译的好的话额外送风,
猪头爱小猪1年前2
hibake 共回答了24个问题 | 采纳率91.7%
1.Expo makes the world know more about China which is modernized and ambitious.
2.It shows that China is capable of holding any big world event.
3.It offers more work positions for people.