合肥八中 英语怎么说是 Eight high school吗?

Dear Mr.Principal,
I am a student of our school.I,d like to say something about the canteen service in our school.
There are 3 advantages of canteen service in our school.First,our canteen is very clean,Second,the food is delicious,Third,the attitude of service is good.
But it also has some disadvantages .Such as the price of the food is high,few variety to choose from,too long waiting time for buying food.
In my opinion,we can invite our student to take part in the canteen for offering the help.We may let the student list the food they like to let the canteen to make it.
I hope more and more student will like our canteen service.

One possible version:
Li Ming and Chen Hai are students of Senior Three. Both of them work hard but. They have different learning methods.
Li Ming is attentive while in class in the daytime and often asks his teachers for advice. As he is able to finish his homework on time, he seldom has to stay up. Because of this, he keeps energetic in class and does well in the exams.
However, as Chen Hai often feels sleepy, he misses many key points of the given lessons in the daytime. In the evening, he has to spend a lot more time doing his homework, so he can’t help but stay up fot it. As a result, he can’t be concentrated on what is being taught in class and then does poorly in his study and exams as well.
In my opinion, it is very important to form a good living and studying habit if we Senior Three students want to do well in the coming entrance examinations.

明天考今天哪里有啊?话说穿越不是这样玩的

One possible version
Some of us are having diaries. I fully understand why we are not comfortable about it, but there is no need to feel too sad. Our parents are checking our bags or diaries to make sure we are not getting into any trouble. They have probably heard some horrible stories about other kids and thought we might do the same. Or perhaps they just want to connect with us but are doing it all wrong.
My suggestion is: Tell them we want them to trust us as much as we’d like to trust them. If you don’t think you can talk to them, write them a letter and leave it lying around ---they are bound to read it.

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