帮俺修改一下作文,各位大侠帮我看看啦

短文修改,找错别字和病句
A 遥远的戈壁滩上,我是一株小草,一株嫩绿的,娇艳欲滴的草,一株孤零零的草.B 白昼与朔风狂沙作伴,夜晚与狂沙朔风为侣.
自从白居易的“野火烧不尽,春风吹又生”吟遍大江南北,草的顽强生命力便和草的轻贱相随而深植人脑.草,也是生命,这生命在戈壁上极其艰难地生活着.没有大树木的荫庇,没有人类的眷顾.我坚强地,坚强地,活着.
活着,委实不易.人类,你们步履匆匆地实现自身的价值,能够稍事休息,听一听一株即将走向死亡的卑微的草的心声吗?
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留点退路吧,跑步前进的人类!
请让你睿智的目光穿过旷野,请让匆忙的脚步暂行荒漠.植树种草是为人不屑的穷枝末节,但穷枝末节在经久的酝酿里往往造成天壤巨变.
C 一株寂寞的草,不成熟的思想,不深邃的语言,不奢望有应和的掌声.D 没有养料,没有水源,没有朋友,戈壁滩上孤独的战士.
一、还有一个错别字,请找出.
二、在A、B、C、D中有三句有与病,请指出并修改.
1、（ ）句有词不当,应改为（ ）.
2、（ ）句句子成分残缺,应改为（ ）.
3、（ ）句描写不当,应改为（ ）.
三、请从语言或者立意上评价此文.

仿句和修改病句
仿句：1、当你劳作在炎烈日下累得筋疲力尽的时候一片绿荫就意味着幸福.
2、当你漂泊在遥远的异乡倍感而孤独寂寞的时候,一封家书就意味着幸福.
注意：筋疲力尽 、 片 、 绿荫
孤独寂寞 、 封 、 家书
参考上面的正确语句,修改下面的病句.
修改病句：1、当你在日初出之前奋力爬上了山顶,那凉爽的空气,淡红的初日就意味 着幸福.
2、当你做某事想放弃的时候,一句加油就意味着幸福.
3、当你被最亲最好的朋友误会和误解的时候,依旧道歉就意味着幸福.
请仔细修改,急.

修改病句和仿写
1.微笑能沟通人与人之间的友谊,是文明礼貌.
2.父亲沉思了一会儿,便亲切而严肃地指出了我的错误.
仿写
例：
如果我是阳光,我将照亮所有阴暗的角落.
如果我是春风,.
如果我是雨露,.

英语论文 求英语达人帮忙修改语法错误 句子结构问题
Both Paul R.and Anne H.Ehrlich (1997) stated that population growth must take responsibility for about 45% of human being’s environment perils.And two major challenges presented by overpopulation cause environmental perils:First is the air population.According to Frumkrin’s (2002,volume 117) report,one of the main features of overpopulation is driving.Motor vehicles are the leading source of air pollution,which account for approximately 30% of emissions of oxides of nitrogen,and 30% of hydrocarbon emissions all over the whole world.
Second is the resource consumption.The World Population Balance’s website (2010) describes that the total population (over 6.8 billion) are consuming about more 25% resources than the earth is producing,during any given time period,most of the resources are non-renewable resources.And several nations have developed the prosperity at the expense of depleting natural resources especially in developed nations.Because most of these nations are population explosion,and the development is advancing at a staggering speed in rich countries,not only could they depend on the land in their own nations,but also they consume more resources imported from other nations,take theNetherlandsfor example.TheNetherlandsis a major importer of minerals,antimony,bauxite,copper,etc.,and they built their wealth exploiting more non-renewable resources.Before World War II,they drew raw materials from their colonies,however,today when the gas energy is exhausted; they still depend heavily on resources from the rest of the world,which stretch resources to the limit (Paul & Anne Ehrlich,1997).

求大师为这首打油诗作修改!
生至宁邑王家府
春日园中莺燕舞
快剑快饮开碧玉
乐曲伴乐心予抒
藏头 梯进 “藏中” 有谐音
“宁邑”是我们城市的旧称,每行第5个字是“王莹开心”,“碧玉”是她刚过了碧玉年华,也就是年龄,乐（yue）曲伴乐（le）.
有哪位大师能改的更好点吗?

9题修改病句,要有原因

非诚勿扰
下面是某处的两则公益广告,存在明显语病,请加以修改
1.做人要做党放心,做事要做民满意
2.食用合格碘盐,促进儿童智力
怎么改?
其中第二句我改的是：将“促进”改为保障.老是打我错的,为什么
两个应该怎么改?

英语翻译
麻烦各位高手帮忙修改英文翻译中的错误.
这里有良师益友,这里有丰富的知识,这里更有活跃的思想.
在此,我希望同学们要把读书当成日常生活中不可缺少的一部分.养成良好的读书习惯.通过读书来增长知识,提升品位,营造我们学校良好文化氛围.
最后,祝愿我们的读书节圆满成功!
There are good teachers and helpful friends,there is a rich fund of knowledge,and there are more active ideas.
Hereon,I hope the students take reading as an indispensable part of our daily life.Try to develop good reading habits.By reading we enrich our knowledge,promote the grade of culture,and build a nice atmosphere of culture in the school.
Finally,we wish the reading day achieve complete success.Thank you.

修改病句:我们从小要树立攀登科学高峰.快
还有大地上开满了盛开的花朵，非常美丽动人。
今天两个必须给我打出来，

修改病句 找出3处谢谢了,
创建文明城市不仅能够提升市民精神生活的品位,而且可以进一步完善城市基础设施.在创建国家级文明城市活动中,全市人民参与程度的高低和创建力度的大小是成功的关键.我们要树立“西安是我家,文明靠大家”的观念,以高度的责任感和积极的主人公姿态参与到投身创建活动中.

同学们帮我修改病句吧!

初一英语课上的“?”
有这样一个easy的英语问题：
请修改下列病句：
This is a “P”and that is a “M”.
请问哪里错误了?为什么?敬请大侠们高抬贵手将正确答案指出来,感激不尽~

下面的比喻,运用得不够贴切,请给予修改.修改后保留以 歌声 为本体.
她那婉转的歌声,如同燃烧的火焰一般,打动了我的心.

修改病句,忽略我打错的字哈!从句子的结构上找!
我们不能总是把目光盯在比赛成绩上,因为有时候体育成绩的好坏是取决于某些裁判判决的.

求修改,不改变原意
For example,tickets are intensely expensive,more expensive than other means of transport.

求修改以下句子,不改变原意
Many people like to travel,they travel in many ways,.Some people like to take the bus,some people like to take the car,some people like to ride bikes.