Save you last,my dream!This is my commitment to!翻译

我翻译的实在是.感觉不好.将就看吧.
save you
SIMPLE PLAN
Take a breath,
深深地吸一口气
I’ll pull myself together.
我让自己重新振奋
Just another step until I reach the door
距离下一个目标只有一步之遥
you’ll never know the way,
你从来都不知道未来会怎样
it tears me up inside to see you
见到你 我撕裂肺腑的痛.
I wish that I could tell you something to take it all away.
我真希望我能告诉你一些话 能让你将那些都忘记.
Sometimes I wish I could save you
我经常想 要是我能挽救你
there’s so many things that I want you to know
很多次我都想让你知道
I won’t give up till it’s over
不到最后我是不会放弃的
if it takes you forever,I want you to know
如果能让你今后都会好的话.我想让你知道
When I hear your voice,
我听到你的声音
it’s drowning in the whispers
那是微弱的低语.
your just skin and bones
你 ,只剩下外壳.
there’s nothing left to take
你的灵魂丢失了.
and no matter what I do
无论我做什么
I can’t make you feel better
都不能让你感觉好一点
if only I could find the answer
只要我就是找到一个答案
to help me understand
帮我明白为什么.
Sometimes I wish I could save you
我经常想要是我能够挽救你
there's so many things that I want you to know
很多次我都想让你知道
I won't give up till its over
不到最后我是不会放弃的.
if it takes you forever,I want you to know
如果能让你永远都好.我想让你知道.
that If you fall,stumble down,
如果你失落,困惑.被淹没.
I’ll pick you up off the ground.
我会让你重拾希望.
If you lose faith in you,
如果你对自己失去信心
I’ll give you strength to pull through.
我会给你力量陪你度过难关
Tell me you won’t give up,
告诉我
cause I’ll be waiting here if you fall
因为我会永远在这里
you know I’ll be there for you
你知道的 我会一直陪着你
if only I could find the answer,
只要给我一个答案
to take it all away
让一切都过去吧.
Sometimes I wish I could save you
there's so many things that I want you to know
I won't give up till its over
if it takes you forever,I want you to know
ohh,ohh
I wish I could save you...
ohh,ohh
I want you to know...
Ohh,ohh
I wish I could save you...