SAT作文:do we need to reach a less than ideal location before

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SAT作文:do we need to reach a less than ideal location before we reach the destination?

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就是问你成功之前要不要先失败一下
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SAT作文帮我看一下啦~
Is it better to change one’s attitude than to change one’scitcumstances?
Looking back to history and previous life,is there anyone whose life is always luck and full of excitiment?I don’t think so.As ordinary people,we must face some difficulties andd catastrophe in our whole life.However.It is reallu hard for us to compete with our life in oreder to change the circumstance.Instead,I think to change one;s attitudes towards life and future is better for one to make a difference to his or her everyday life.
Throughout history,there was really someone who changes her attitudes to get a better life.She is Helen Adams Keller,who is a famous female educator,and also a deaf and blind writer.Helen’s coming in 1880 made her whole family in a great elation.Unfortunately,when she was only 19-month-old,an illness called scarlet fever,which was described by the doctor as an acute congestion of stomach and brain infect her.It didn’t last long ,but it left Keller deaf and blind.How terrible it was to a little girl?As Keller grew up,she chould do some tiny errands,but she also realized that she was missing something.Irritabele and perverse,Keller kicked table and smashed the glasses to show her angry and despair.She felt like living in the hell,with no courage and confidence.
I don't think Keller would be such a great woman if she continued to feel hope less about her attitudes towards life,when Anne Sullivan,a patient and experienced governess,came to her world in March 1887.Sullivan helped Keller learn new words by spelling them on her palm.Keller first knew that the lovely and soft object was ‘doll’,and the cool and clear object was ‘water’.She suddenly realized that the world was not so dark and silent as she thought,insteasd,the world was colourful and full of vitality.A smile was worn on her face,the attitudes were changed in her mind,too.Keller decided to learn from Sullican actively.She was eager to know the world.No matter how many obstacles were there in front of her,she was not afraid and always optimistic.With her hand working and positive attitude,Keller was admitted to radcliff college in 1899 and publish her first autobiography THE STORY OF LIFE in 1902
Clearly,.Some circumstances lke illness can not be changed easily,but what we think can be decided by ourselves,Keller’s spirits affected every generation.Change our attitueds when necessary,this is what I think that Helen Keller wanted to tell us all.
zhaocong20081年前2
happyzengdingwen 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率90%
到底要改变自己的态度,而不是改变one'scitcumstances?
回顾历史,以前的生活,是否有任何人的生活总是运气和excitiment满了吗?我不认为如此.作为普通市民,我们必须面对一些困难andd在我们一生的灾难.不过.这是reallu我们很难与我们的生活中oreder竞争改变了这种情况.相反,我认为要改变之一,对生活和未来的意向是要对他或她的日常生活更好地为1.
纵观历史,这样做实在人谁改变她的态度,以获得更好的生活.亚当斯,她是海伦凯勒,谁是著名的女教育家,也是一个聋哑人和盲人作家.海伦的未来在1880年在一个伟大的得意她的整个家庭.不幸的是,当她只有19个月大,1名为猩红热病,是由作为急性胃阻塞及脑部感染医生形容她.它并没有持续多久,但它留下凯勒聋又盲.这是多么可怕一个小女孩?正如凯勒长大后,她chould做一些小差事,但她也意识到她失去了一些东西.Irritabele和有害的,凯勒踢桌子,打碎了眼镜,显示她的愤怒和绝望.她觉得自己生活在地狱,没有的勇气和信心.
我不认为凯勒将是这样一个伟大的女性,如果她继续感到对生活的希望少讲,当安妮沙利文,耐心和经验丰富的治理,来到1887年3月她的世界她的态度.沙利文帮助凯勒学习的拼写在她手掌它们的新词.凯勒先知道,可爱的,软的对象是'娃娃',而冷静和清晰的目标是'水'.她突然意识到,世界是不是太黑暗和沉默,因为她认为,insteasd,世界是丰富多彩的,充满活力.微笑是戴在她的面前,她的态度是在改变主意,也.凯勒决定从Sullican主动学习.她渴望了解世界.不管有多少障碍在她的面前时,她并不害怕,始终乐观.随着她的手的工作和积极的态度,凯勒考入拉德克利夫学院,1899年和1902年出版她的第一本自传的生平事迹
显然,.有些情况下,艾克疾病不能轻易改变,但我们认为可以通过自己的决定,凯勒的每一代人的精神影响.改变我们的attitueds必要时,这是我觉得海伦凯勒想告诉我们大家.
第一次写sat作文,求指导~Is it important to question the ideas and deci
第一次写sat作文,求指导~
Is it important to question the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority?
I think it is really very important to challenge the ideas and decisions of people in positions of authority.It can not only benefits the individuals but also causes deep effects of the whole society.Truth is always prepared for the one who is creative and has the courage to discover it.Galileo`s famous experiment on the leaning tower and Copernicus` astronomical theory are two persuasive examples of challenging authority.
Galileo,who is now regarded as"the father of science",is a science precursor of his era.It was a time when everyone believed Aristotle`s theory,claimed that the heavier a substance was,the quicker it would fall down,was right.When Galileo questioned Aristotle`s theory after his hard experiments,everyone treated him as a fool.But he wasn`t dismayed and persisted on his own opinion.In order to convince the citizens,he did an experiment,which was seemed to be a chance that everyone could mock him.He threw two iron balls on the top of Pisa tower,and the two balls which weighted differently reached the bottom at the same time.He finally proved he was right and everybody was shocked.Galileo unprecedentedly defeated the authority and won the self-esteem for himself.
Copernicus is another hero who dared to disdain the authority.He lived in a time when Christian Church was in charge of the society."The earth was the center of the universe"seemed a universally truth known by everyone.But through a series of observations and experiments,he became skeptical about it.He calculated repeatedly and finally proved that the sun is the center of the universe.However,nobody was dared to put this conclusion into public,for it invaded the authority,which meant the god.Once you disturbed the god,you were sentenced to death.But Copernicus was such a brave man that he kept on publishing his theory,which he spent his whole life completing and finally died for.Although his theory wasn`t accepted by most people at that time,it was tested to be true several hundred years later.Copernicus became a pioneer who set a monument in astronomy and was remembered permanently.
Authority is not the same as truth,truth is always waiting for someone who is creative and passionate to find it.Only when the person stands out for truth can the society make an enormous progress.
我是sat新手,自学的,第一次写的不好,请问大概有几分?
有什么需要改进的地方?
一小孩1年前3
盗版名人 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率90%
第一段去掉:I think,多余,而且会泄露英文水平.
第二段第一句话把挑战权威的观点揉进去,最好加上挑战权威后的effect
第三段最后一句要写类似第二段最后一句的议论句.
总的来说议论还可以再深刻一点:Galileo unprecedentedly defeated the authority and won the self-esteem for himself. 伽利略做这么一个实验不只是为了赢得自尊,效果要分析深刻一点.
全文挺有章法的.语言还略显生硬,还可以再提高提高.同意楼上8分的说法.
关于SAT作文,皇帝的新衣这篇文章中有没有挑战权威
关于sat作文,皇帝的新衣这篇文章中有没有挑战权威
皇帝的新衣这篇文章中,最后那个小孩说出了***,这里算不算是挑战权威?可不可以用到sat作文素材里?
小巴西龟111年前4
素色依依 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率100%
好像不太对,小孩子挑战权威只是因为天真无邪,而不是有什么信仰或者是巨大的勇气,而且最终也没有做出什么贡献,你不如从各个科目里找一些科学家
SAT作文8个经典例子galileo,weizheng and lishiming,martin luther king
SAT作文8个经典例子
galileo,weizheng and lishiming,martin luther king
the internet,vehicle,black book
有什么事例么
locklovelone1年前1
lemon-sweet 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率95%
martin luther king 马丁路德金的事例 我有一个梦想.
SAT作文当中有哪些属于大众例子?
SAT作文当中有哪些属于大众例子?
比如马丁路德金的例子应该已经用烂了吧?这种例子到底能不能用呢?还有哪些例子是已经用烂了的?
tv11001年前4
极地小酷龙 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率100%
Helen Keller啊 林肯 华盛顿 特蕾莎修女 沃森克里克的合作 用得很多
但是用也是可以的 用这些例子每次也有拿11 12的同学
万能例子比如 爱迪生 乔布斯 John Nash 乔丹
你也可以找一些文学作品中的人物作为例子
加油
求sat作文例子1.Is society's admiration for famous people benefici
求sat作文例子
1.Is society's admiration for famous people beneficial or harmful?
2.what are your thoughts on the idea that neither time nor opportunity can determine intimacy?
l9106071年前1
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dsasad
SAT作文如何从10分提高到12分?
SAT作文如何从10分提高到12分?
我不管模考还是真正考每次都是10分...怎么才能突破?
qing_20041年前1
heshouwu_9635 共回答了20个问题 | 采纳率95%
句子往复杂的结构写 单词用一些SAT单词 高深一点的 不用太多 保证语法没有错 能够自圆其说你的论据 就可以有12分了~
SAT作文一道球思路Do incidents from the past continue to influence t
SAT作文一道球思路
Do incidents from the past continue to influence the present?
旷野白玫瑰1年前1
马桶-311 共回答了9个问题 | 采纳率77.8%
其实这个题目可以这样看: incidents from the past 可以具体化为失败;influence the present,如果你选择写是——那就写那些从失败中获得了成功的人,他们都是让过去启发了现在.
科学界有很多例子了呀,什么爱迪生啊,诺贝尔呀.都是失败中吸取教训经验
还有可以就文学中的例子,比如傲慢与偏见里的DARCY求婚失败对他打击是很大的,但是也正是因为有这种过去的同,所以才会改掉傲慢的毛病,得到大家的好评和心爱的人
SAT作文跑题能拿分吗?我也不确定有没有跑题,题目大概是关于确切地点的变化,但我写的是心理上的变化...
menry1年前1
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一般都是可以那分的,不用担心.从目前您的思路来看,虽然没有直接考题,但是只要有和题目关联的切入点,间接性点题并言之有理,这也是没有问题的.比如:如果讲的是因为地点上的变化导致心理上的变化,这也是一个合理的切入点.所以不用过去担心.
静待结果吧,不用焦虑!相信自己!
想要提高sat作文,请有经验的同学或资深sat老师帮忙
想要提高sat作文,请有经验的同学或资深sat老师帮忙
我刚考完托福,我在一个补习机构里学,但开始不懂和他们学托福作文后来发现成绩根本没提高,后来有老同学告诉我托福靠背的,我就背了几篇,并且套它的模式,发现进步很快.现在学sat,又发现这机构sat作文也不靠谱.求已学完sat的同学或老师分享经验,sat也靠背吗?不要网上去复制,我都看过了.
尖山飘云1年前1
昕瑶老豆 共回答了17个问题 | 采纳率94.1%
SAT作文的技巧在于积累事例,考试之前准备个5-6个素材,每个都自己准备好,抄也可以自己写也可以,比如关于成功失败的,关于勇气的,关于爱心的,等等.把这些素材都在考试前背出来,写作也就得心应手了.
关于SAT作文,写作达人进!好像SAT的例子中最好要有具体的事情,是不是说我一旦举出名人的例子,就一定要举出关于这个名人
关于SAT作文,写作达人进!
好像SAT的例子中最好要有具体的事情,是不是说我一旦举出名人的例子,就一定要举出关于这个名人的具体事例呢?
举个例子吧:假如一篇作文要求写前代对现今的影响,我写的是贝多芬,因为贝多芬音乐中的英雄性成为一种风格的代名词,以至于今天一旦人们提起一种风格我们立刻就会想到贝多芬,这里面没有具体事件,这个例子是不是就最好不举呢?
仅剩下这么点分了,不过快考试了,
今晚1年前1
wuqsliy 共回答了12个问题 | 采纳率75%
你说的这个应该是可以用的
SAT事例要具体,是说要有细节,把跟主题相关的内容阐述清楚,例子是怎么跟论点联系的.你说的例子最好加一些内容,可以说一下贝多芬音乐的英雄性的简单定义,他之后哪些音乐家哪些作品受到了影响之类的,甚至英雄性的来源,即他自身经历.就是根据你的论证思路加一些对论证有帮助的细节.
其实,SAT里一个论证段也可以写成一句一个人的事例,排比罗列.这个其实更好,但是这种比较难,一下子也难想到那么多合适的例子,所以用的人很少,老师们也不那么推荐,怕弄巧成拙.
我的一点点看法,希望对你有帮助.
有没有放弃复仇而过上幸福生活的例子(SAT作文)?
有没有放弃复仇而过上幸福生活的例子(SAT作文)?
被人伤害却原谅了他人 最后幸福快乐的例子
cccc1年前3
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韩剧不是经常可以看到这样的情景吗?悲情女主角经受重重磨难,遭受非人待遇,最后励志复仇... ...最终原谅曾经伤害过自己的人... ...
发一个SAT作文,大家能不能帮忙预测一下分数,给点修改建议.马上要考试了,谢谢帮助!
发一个sat作文,大家能不能帮忙预测一下分数,给点修改建议.马上要考试了,谢谢帮助!
帮忙大致评估一下分数,并且怎么短期提高?谢谢大家!会追加悬赏的

题目:are people more likely to be productive and successful when they ignore the opinions of others?

正文(410字):always believing in oneself is the key to success. there are so many people providing you advices every moment. though some of them are precious, you may lose yourself in the ocean of opinions and end up your life with doing nothing if you consider others perspective all the time. therefore, it is conceivable that you will have greater possibility to be successful when you ignore the opinions of others.

actually, people usually appreciate one’s own original products more than the ideas of others. a convincible example is vincent van gogh, a dutch postimpressionist painter. in his early age, van gogh went to paris and he became familiar with the new art movements developing at the time. however, he was not influenced by the popular french painters. instead, van gogh never listened to the ideas of others and concentrated on his own style, painting pictures with intense color and turbulent brush strokes. eventually, his impressive paintings became significantly attractive to people in 20th century and had a great influence.

also, without listening the opinions of others, you can achieve big break in your career more intently. for instance, coco chanel, a female designer, was considered to be ‘the savior’ of ladies by creating her original fashion style. coco chanel opened her first millinery shop in 1910. even though her view of fashion was criticized by many people then, she just kept her belief that ladies should have dressed up in that way, so she disregarded the perspective of the public. later, she started the fashion *** in 1900s and appreciated by plenty of ladies. if coco chanel accepted the opinions of others at that time, we would not have such clothes like cool jackets and little black dresses.

finally, i always believe that keeping your own inspiration and considering others as nothing will bring you final success. just like the movie, life of pi which has been the most recommended movie in 2012. because of the difficult technique the movie needed, the director, li an took eight years to complete this film. during that period, hundreds of friends asked him to give up and some even warned him that he would not success. however, he did it. just like what he said: he would not achieve his goal if he truly believed in what other said.

in conclusion, we need to insist the idea of our own, because frequently ignoring the opinions of others would bring us a better consequence.
yjn_20041年前1
我常常在想 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率100%
In real test you can probably get 9-10. But if you finished this essay beyond the 25 min limit, then I'll give 8-9.
Comment:
Good paragraph structure, decent sentence structure, vocabulary should be improved, two examples will be adequate, exert more effort on explaining your examples in greater detail.
求SAT作文关于creativity的素材、例子!
求SAT作文关于creativity的素材、例子!
急求SAT的creativity leads to success 的例子.
秋雨季节1年前3
prosper1111 共回答了18个问题 | 采纳率100%
这个最好写的
发明家(哥白尼的日心说),政治家(废奴什么的也可以扯到创新上
lz想要素材的话,留个邮箱也行
sat作文-该如何写下面给出的essay呢.
sat作文-该如何写下面给出的essay呢.
some school have begun allowing student in biology classes to use computer programs that animals dissections instead of physically surring up the animals.Which method do u think schools should use.我可以写因材施教吗,还是一定要选择一面来写.如果只能选择一面来写的话,有什么例子可以举呢.光写理由足够吗?
指间沙21年前3
zsf2007dq 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率95.7%
推荐选一面来写.
写SAT作文一定要有例子,而且一般例子占文章很大一部分.
你有哪方面的例子就写哪个方面,例子可以是自己的,也可以是名人的.
考SAT作文时,在考场上想不到名人例子用自已的生活经验可以吗?会不会因为这样而低分?(急!)
万鬼1年前3
dydove 共回答了22个问题 | 采纳率90.9%
作文分数的高低不取决于你举什么例子,要看你文采怎么样,好作文就是好作文,所有的东西都是来源于日常生活的.
关于sat作文我曾经给别人看过我的作文,他说我用了模版,我有点郁闷,我是自己写的啊,只能算是用了一些自己弄的句子,根本没
关于sat作文
我曾经给别人看过我的作文,他说我用了模版,我有点郁闷,我是自己写的啊,只能算是用了一些自己弄的句子,根本没有别人的东西.所以请问下如果在sat考官觉得用了模版就会分很低么?像我这种情况,(看似用了但没用)会很惨么?
我感觉是挺像t的,但不知道该怎么改进
我是这样的,先总起然后分两段论述利弊,在总结。所以会像,但是如果是国外思维,会怎么写》?
sunpriestess1年前2
Jay1901 共回答了15个问题 | 采纳率93.3%
你的模板是指什么,固定的套路么?(不要鄙视我...我从不用模板所以为了确认一下...)
我准备的时候背了很多例子,反正具体事情记得然后写的时候可以稍微转变一下例子的侧重点往题目上靠
或者你的意思是你的文章有些像TOEFL?唠叨一句SAT的文章与TOEFL有很多不同
对比下TOEFL,SAT更注重内容,我感觉其实TOEFL还是可以写出很多虚的东西,但是SAT就是要活生生的例子,或许你的文章有T的影子?
如果实在拿不准,正好你有原版的PR,可以到它的网上购买作文评分服务,人工评分它书上的文章,从得分中你就可以得出结论了,貌似是4$/piece,20%/10 pieces,我用过挺准的
T的套路千万不要用在SAT上呵呵,曾经有人试验过最后貌似得的6还是8分
你可以去网上找下OG的答案,然后看里面的范文,你就会发现SAT作文的套路大概是这样的:开头(一般我会写下我的观点和概括我将要用的2-3个例子是如何体现我的观点的),然后是2-3个例子,1个例子大概1段,很详细的写(当然要贴题),每段最后拖一句某某人如何如何正是体现了啥啥观点,最后再是结尾.
不要说一大堆利与弊,要例子,可以是历史人物,文学,或者另一种套路是全篇都都讲你自己的一个事情,起因经过结果,最后总结,很多人都这样拿到12分的,不过我没这么写过呵呵.
有一篇极好的SAT作文,我只能看懂大概,求辨认字迹能力强的人帮忙转换一下
有一篇极好的SAT作文,我只能看懂大概,求辨认字迹能力强的人帮忙转换一下
有一篇极好的SAT作文,我只能看懂大概,有些单词实在看不出写的是什么,求辨认字迹能力强的人帮忙转换一下
这是个人工活,辛苦了
可以抱你吗1年前2
jennytian76 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率91.3%
其实看得懂大概已经可以了= =又不是要背下整篇作文,理解了思路才是重点啊.这字的确很看着蛋疼
title:Is it wise to follow leaders all the time?
In history,people are often led to victory by visonary,judicious authority such as Albraham Lincole who saw slavery as a plague and promoted democracy.However,some other authority has made mistakes which hindered the progress of the development of cociety.As proved by the unforgivable mistakes that Adolf Hitler made,the false theories (consented) by Einstein and Aristotley as well as George Clemen Cedu's mistake in the treaty of Versaille,to believe in authority with zeal is unwise since what they do could be seriously flawed.
Adolf Hilter,the blindest among nationalists in Germany,wreaked (--) to (---) century world as German people believed in him with fervor.As the leader of the nation,Hilter was an unquestionable authority who was then deemed a hero who is capable of .((((算了= =看不下去了……
sat作文有模板吗?sat作文有没有像托福一样的模板啊
苏若兮1年前1
jeanlover_2000 共回答了23个问题 | 采纳率100%
没有..只能靠自己多练了
如果把SAT作文写成托福的三个论点会有什么影响,会多少分呢?
豪之家1年前2
萤火虫卷卷 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率100%
我想说sat essay对字数还是有要求的,起码字数多卷面相对好看一些.那么主要问题就是写成3个论点想要每个都讨论充分时间可能不够.评分中虽然说reasoning和example皆可,但是对一般高中生,全用说理很难讨论透彻,全用例子又很难准备3个.当然,有一些不常见的题目,如果没有example,写成托福作文也没有问题,保证有说服力就好.
sat作文用一个例子好吗?
chenpenny1年前2
期而不待 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率87.5%
太少.
一个例子写太长容易出现逻辑漏洞.
而且也很难写够长度.
一般要2-3个.最好是literature或者history相关的例子.
英语翻译最近准备sat作文实在累了,经济危机那一块罗斯福的这些举措完全凭着个人的远见与创新,因为历史上没有如此严重的经济
英语翻译
最近准备sat作文实在累了,经济危机那一块
罗斯福的这些举措完全凭着个人的远见与创新,因为历史上没有如此严重的经济危机.并且事实也证明,个体的独特见解避免了大众观点的平庸与普遍误区.
上ss小白1年前1
mlff 共回答了16个问题 | 采纳率100%
With these measures fully Roosevelt's personal vision and innovation, because the history is not such a serious economic crisis. And also proved that the individual's unique insight into public view to avoid the mediocre and common errors.