南yi-
1.Whose that boy over there?
>>Who"s that boy over there?
2.It"s the time of a year for the rice harvest
>>It"s the time of the year for the rice harvest.
3.Water runs"along channels to every part of the garden
>>Water runs along channels to every part of the garden.
4.He had the farmers to work by the light of the moon
>> He had the farmers work by the light of the moon.
5.My parents made me studied last night
>> My parents made me study last night.
6.I hope you to be well and healthy
>> I hope you are well and healthy.
7.This is my turn to water the garden and flowers
>> It is my turn to water the garden of flowers.
8.We grow rice in the south,but in the north where it is cold they grow wheat
>> We grow rice in the south, but they grow wheat in the north which is cold.
9.Which school does he go now?
>> Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
>> In experts" opinions, it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men to help
>> We have employed ten men for help.
12.As the results of many experiments,wheat can now be grown in the south
>> As the result of many experiments, wheat can now be grown in the south.
13.Here are some dose and don"ts
>> Here are some dos and don"ts.
14.Put some vinegar in the fish to make it taste better
>> Put some vinegar on the fish to make it taste better.
15.We went to holiday in Kun Ming for a week
>> We went for holiday in Kun Ming for a week.
16.Water is suck from this hole through a tube
>> Water is sucked from this hole through a tube.
17.Air is mixture of gases
>> Air is a mixture of gases.
18.Make sure of what you are asked to do before you start
>> Be sure of what you are asked to do before you start.
19.She said to me not to put everything in to the cupboard
>> She said to me not to put everything into the cupboard.
20.Car rngines are driven by work of patrol,of gas
>> Car engines are driven by work of patrol and gas.
阿啵呲嘚-
1.Whose is that boy over there?
2.It"s the time of a year for rice harvest
3.Water runs"along the channels to every part of the garden
4.He had the farmers work by the light of the moon
5.My parents made me study last night
6.I hope you being well and healthy
7.It is my turn to water the garden and flowers
8.We grow rice in the south,but in the north where is cold they grow wheat
9.Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts" opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men for help
12.As a result of many experiments,wheat can now be grown in the south
13.Here are some dos and don"ts
14.Put some vinegar in the fish to make it tasted better
15.We went on holiday in Kun Ming for a week
16.Water is sucked from this hole through a tube
17.Air is a mixture of gases
18.Make sure what you are asked to do before you start
19.She told me not to put everything in to the cupboard
20.Car rngines are driven by the work of patrol,of gas
余辉-
以下是改过的，请楼主检阅~~
1.Who"s that boy over there?
2.It"s the time of the year for the rice harvest
3.Water runs along channels to every part of the garden
4.He had the farmers work by the light of the moon.
5.My parents made me study last night
6.I hope you will be well and healthy
7.It is my turn to water the garden and flowers
8.We grow rice in the south,but in the north where is cold they grow wheat
9.Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts" opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men to help us.
12.As the results of many experiments show,wheat can now be grown in the south
13.Here are some dos and don"ts
14.Put some vinegar in the fish and make it taste better
15.We went on holiday in Kun Ming for a week
16.Water is sucked from this hole through a tube
17.Air is a mixture of gases
18.Make certain of what you are asked to do before you start
19.She said to me not to put anything in to the cupboard
20.Car engines are driven by work of patrol and gas
都改好了哈，希望能帮到你，要是答案还满意的话，记得采纳哦，O(∩_∩)O谢谢~！
左迁-
1.Who is that boy over there?
2.It"s the time of a year for the rice harvest
3.Water runs"along channels to every part of the garden
4.He had the farmers to work under the light of the moon
5.My parents made me study last night
6.I wish you to be well and healthy
7.It is my turn to water the garden and flowers
8.We grow rice in the south,but in the north it is cold they grow wheat
9.Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts" opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men to help
12.As the results of many experiments,wheat can grow in the south
13.Here are some do and don"ts
14.Put some vinegar into the fish to make it taste better
15.We went for holiday to Kun Ming for a week
16.Water is suck from this hole with a tube
17.Air is mixture of gas
18.Make sure of what you are asked to do before you do
19.She told me not to put everything into the cupboard
20.Car rngines are driven by working of patrol,of gas
北境漫步-
1 Whose-->Who"s
2 去掉a
3 Water runs along channels to every part of the garden没错
4 去掉to have是使役动词
5 studied-->study make sb do sth
6 hope-->wish hope sb to do sth是错误的。
“希望某人做某事”可以用：wish sb to do sth
7 This-->It会地道点，但不算错 garden和flowers有点重复 flowers garden会好一点
8 but-->while 对比
9 go-->go to
10 experts-->experts"
11 没错
12 As the results -->as a result of 固定词组
13 dose and don"ts-->do"s and don"ts
14 没错 put换成add会好一点
15 went-->have been
16 suck-->sucked
17 mixture前加a
18 没错
19 in to -->into said to -->told
20 ,of -->and
okok云-
1.Who"s that boy over there?
2.It"s time of a year for the rice harvest.
3.Water runs along channels to every part of the garden
4.He had the farmers work by the light of the moon
5.My parents made me study last night.
6.I wish you to be well and healthy.
7.It is my turn to water the garden and flowers.
8.We grow rice in the south, while in the north where it is cold they grow wheat.
9.Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts" opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men to help us .
12.As results of many experiments,wheat can now be grown in the south.
13.Here are some dos and don"ts.
14.Add some vinegar in the fish to make it taste better.
15.We went to holiday in Kun Ming for a week.
16.Water is sucked from this hole through a tube.
17.Air is a mixture of gases.
18.Make sure what you are asked to do before you start.
19.She said to me not to put everything into the cupboard.
20.Car engines are driven by the work of patrol,of gas.
苏萦-
1.Whose that boy over there?
>>Who"s that boy over there?
2.It"s the time of a year for the rice harvest
>>It"s the time of the year for the rice harvest.
3.Water runs"along channels to every part of the garden
>>Water runs along channels to every part of the garden.
4.He had the farmers to work by the light of the moon
>> He had the farmers work by the light of the moon.
5.My parents made me studied last night
>> My parents made me study last night.
6.I hope you to be well and healthy
>> I hope you are well and healthy.
7.This is my turn to water the garden and flowers
>> It is my turn to water the garden of flowers.
8.We grow rice in the south,but in the north where it is cold they grow wheat
>> We grow rice in the south, but they grow wheat in the north which is cold.
9.Which school does he go now?
>> Which school does he go to now?
10.In experts opinions,it"s not good for children to drink.
>> In experts" opinions, it"s not good for children to drink.
11.We have employed ten men to help
>> We have employed ten men for help.
12.As the results of many experiments,wheat can now be grown in the south
>> As the result of many experiments, wheat can now be grown in the south.
13.Here are some dose and don"ts
>> Here are some dos and don"ts.
14.Put some vinegar in the fish to make it taste better
>> Put some vinegar on the fish to make it taste better.
15.We went to holiday in Kun Ming for a week
>> We went for holiday in Kun Ming for a week.
16.Water is suck from this hole through a tube
>> Water is sucked from this hole through a tube.
17.Air is mixture of gases
>> Air is a mixture of gases.
18.Make sure of what you are asked to do before you start
>> Be sure of what you are asked to do before you start.
19.She said to me not to put everything in to the cupboard
>> She said to me not to put everything into the cupboard.
20.Car rngines are driven by work of patrol,of gas
>> Car engines are driven by work of patrol and gas.