coco-
1： prefer doing sth 是宁愿做谋事？可以这么说么？
I prefer riding bike to school? 我宁愿骑自行车去上学。
解答:有点小毛病:I prefer riding my bike to school.
2： 喝全用drink这个词么？这句有错么？
Do you drink anything while you are reading book?
解答:基本对,book加s.
3： 这句话有错否？另我要说每天中午应该如何说？保留at noon的情况下。
Because I like sunshine, I take a walk at noon.
解答:后面加个every day不就行啦?
4： 一般是go to school吧？但如果是advice sb to do sth里面to还要么？
是 I advice you to go (to) school.
解答:go to school的to是介词,不可省.
5: passing examation will give you in a good moon. 这句话有错么？
解答:是不是想表达:
It will take you a whole month to pass an examination. ???
6： I have already learned swim merely by a lesson
游泳做n讲时候用swim还是ing的？我好像很少看到swim用原型的。。另外，教学课怎么说？
解答:应该说:I have already learned to swim...
教学课:a teaching lesson
7： This sunhat can prevent you from sun. 此句无措吧。
另外，vt后面可以直接跟介词吧。也可以跟了宾语再跟介词。是吧？比如这句中you去掉也没问题吧。
解答:有错:from sun应该是from the sun
vt后面不可以直接跟介词,却可以跟副词。
也可以跟了宾语再跟介词,(但是介词后还得有介词的宾语)。
比如这句中you不可去掉,因为是prevent的唯一的宾语.
8：这句话有错么，
People come in and out at the door of the store.
解答:at改为of,因为out of是短语.
9：between to是不是常表示一个数字范围，从……到……
如，Helen"s order often between 3 to 8 in the class 我想说helen的排名经常在班里3－8名。
我不知道排名可否用order这个词，它好像有表示次序的意思，我知道可以用排队，但排名行么。
解答:不对,应该表达成between...and...
Helen"s place is often between 3rd and 8th in the class.
10： XXth，后面的th怎么读？比如12th？
解答:读音是/θ/
11： 这句话有错么？ps：句子造的次了点。意思可能有些不通。
When you come in the office you should take you off coat,then pour a hot coffee for your master, Mary.
解答:修改后:After you come into the office, you should take off your coat, and then pour a cup of hot coffee for your master, Mary.
12： 此句有错么？millions of children born everyday in the world
everyday前面要加什么修饰词么？我总觉得别扭。。另外，millions，billions都要加s吧，在后面表示可数名词
时候，但如果说钱应该就不加了吧。如 billion of pound
解答:修改后:Millions of children are born in the world every day.
如果说钱还是要加。如 billions of pounds
(如果钱用money/yuan等,则billions of等短语根本不能用,要换用large amount of等短语)
13：此句有无错误？
It is sad to know that millions of people die from the world war 500 years ago.
说多少钱前是XX ago吧？而before，是before XX ？
解答:修改后:It is sad to know that millions of people died in the world war 50 years ago.从句用过去时.
说多少年前的确用:...ago
14： Beacuse you tell us wrong message, we lost, you should be blame for this situation!
这里的tell应该用过去式吧。。不过我忘了tell过去式是什么了？telled？
解答:修改后:We lost because you had told us wrong messages. You are to be blamed for this!
15：对not的用法有些不清楚的地方。
Some people in rich countries think that hungry people will become lazy and not work.
是说如果富人白给穷人粮食，他们会这样。
这里的work是n还是v？如果是v是不是这里省略了do，否定v应该是don"t
work是n，not是ad应该不会用ad直接修饰n吧？
解答:哈哈!will become lazy and not work应该理解为will become lazy and will not work,因为重复而省略了will,work当然是动词.
希望我的解答对你有助,不清楚的再发消息给我.
北境漫步-
1： prefer doing sth 是宁愿做谋事？可以这么说么？
I prefer riding bike to school? 我宁愿骑自行车去上学。
***** you gotta add the letter "a" before "bike."
2： 喝全用drink这个词么？这句有错么？
Do you drink anything while you are reading book?
**** delete "anything" and " you are", and add "a" before "book"
the correct version is
---do you drink while reading books..
3： 这句话有错否？另我要说每天中午应该如何说？保留at noon的情况下。
Because I like sunshine, I talk a walk at noon.
***** Because should be " for"
**** noon should be noons
4： 一般是go to school吧？但如果是advice sb to do sth里面to还要么？
是 I advice you to go (to) school.
****didn"t your tutor tell you that "advice" is a noun ?
----i suggest you going to school.
-----i advise you to go to school
5: passing examation will give you in a good moon. 这句话有错么？
****Passing the examination will make you feel good.
6： I have already learned swim merely by a lesson
游泳做n讲时候用swim还是ing的？我好像很少看到swim用原型的。。另外，教学课怎么说？
***** Swimming
7： This sunhat can prevent you from sun. 此句无措吧。
另外，vt后面可以直接跟介词吧。也可以跟了宾语再跟介词。是吧？比如这句中you去掉也没问题吧。
---this sunhat can protect you from sunburnt.
8： 这句话有错么，
People come in and out at the door of the store.
****People come and go at the door of the store..
这里我只强调动词，后面的at the door 我没有改
9： between to是不是常表示一个数字范围，从……到……
如，Helen"s order often between 3 to 8 in the class 我想说helen的排名经常在班里3－8名。
我不知道排名可否用order这个词，它好像有表示次序的意思，我知道可以用排队，但排名行么。
***
10： XXth，后面的th怎么读？比如12th？
11： 这句话有错么？ps：句子造的次了点。意思可能有些不通。
When you come in the office you should take you off coat,then pour a hot coffee for your master, Mary.
**** come into the office 或者 step into the office
*** take off your coat or take your coat off
**** make coffee for sb or make sb coffee 为某人倒咖啡要用MAKE
12： 此句有错么？millions of children born everyday in the world
everyday前面要加什么修饰词么？我总觉得别扭。。另外，millions，billions都要加s吧，在后面表示可数名词
时候，但如果说钱应该就不加了吧。如 billion of pound
**** born 前加 are 或者改成 are given birth
**** millions of 数以百万计
*** 钱的表示法是 a billion pounds
13： 此句有无错误？
It is sad to know that millions of people die from the world war 500 years ago.
说多少钱前是XX ago吧？而before，是before XX ？
**** it is said that millions of people died during (in) the world war 500 years ago
14： Beacuse you tell us wrong message, we lost, you should be blame for this situation!
这里的tell应该用过去式吧。。不过我忘了tell过去式是什么了？telled？
**** 这句话非常差劲
you are to blame because we lost due to your wrong information,
*** 固定搭配 sb is to blame
15：对not的用法有些不清楚的地方。
Some people in rich countries think that hungry people will become lazy and not work
是说如果富人白给穷人粮食，他们会这样。
这里的work是n还是v？如果是v是不是这里省略了do，否定v应该是don"t
work是n，not是ad应该不会用ad直接修饰n吧？
***Some people in rich countries think that hunger will make people become lazy and slack
呵呵，有不忙的朋友麻烦解答下。谢谢
***************************有几个问题我懒得回答，呵呵
西柚不是西游-
1:宁愿是 would rather，prefer是更喜欢的意思
I prefer riding bike to school。 我比较喜欢骑车上学
2：喝不是只能用drink
Do you drink anything while you are reading book。
drink没用错，不过应该是用something不识anything ＝ ＝
3：每天中午可以用at noons，复数就搞定
另外是take a walk
4：当然要的，这个to不能省略掉
5：passing examation will give you in a good moon是啥意思。。。
是不是要表达考试过了会有好心情？give you good mood？
6：一般情况下用ing的更多些吧，教学科就用lesson
7：sun改成sunshine，vt后面不能直接跟介词，这句话去掉you就错了
8：at改成through吧。个人感觉。
9：排名用rank不是order。这里跨度大于2还是among吧
10：发音“斯”不过要轻咬舌尖了发
11：When you come into the office you should take off your coat,then make a hot coffee for your boss, Mary
12：量词前有详细数目的时候一般不用加，millions表示成百上千万，跟后面的名词没关系
13：我可能描述不准确，before是有个比较的意义在里面，这句话应该是ago
另外直接It is said that就可以了，to know去掉
14：told
15：work作动词，will not work
小教板-
1： prefer doing sth 是宁愿做谋事？可以这么说么？
I prefer riding bike to school? 我宁愿骑自行车去上学。
是喜欢，比较而言更喜欢的意思，这句话因为没有比较，所以翻译为：我喜欢骑自行车上学
2： 喝全用drink这个词么？这句有错么？
Do you drink anything while you are reading book?
对，drink是最常用的，这句话book多余，应去掉
3： 这句话有错否？另我要说每天中午应该如何说？保留at noon的情况下。
Because I like sunshine, I talk a walk at noon.
嘿嘿，你把walk写成talk拉！每天中午用at noon，再用一般现在时态就好
4： 一般是go to school吧？但如果是advice sb to do sth里面to还要么？
是 I advice you to go (to) school.
要！这是动词短语，所以不能省
5: passing examation will give you in a good moon. 这句话有错么？
in去掉
6： I have already learned swim merely by a lesson
游泳做n讲时候用swim还是ing的？我好像很少看到swim用原型的。。另外，教学课怎么说？
也可以的。教学课：lecture
7： This sunhat can prevent you from sun. 此句无措吧。
另外，vt后面可以直接跟介词吧。也可以跟了宾语再跟介词。是吧？比如这句中you去掉也没问题吧。
vt是及物动词的意思，所以后面直接跟名词。这句话可以这么说，也可以去掉you
8： 这句话有错么，
People come in and out at the door of the store.
有点别扭，用pass in and out更好
9： between to是不是常表示一个数字范围，从……到……
如，Helen"s order often between 3 to 8 in the class 我想说helen的排名经常在班里3－8名。
我不知道排名可否用order这个词，它好像有表示次序的意思，我知道可以用排队，但排名行么。
改成place更好拉，你少了be动词拉，应该是The place of Helen is often between 3 and 8.
10： XXth，后面的th怎么读？比如12th？
呵呵，不好意思，我打不出来音标
11： 这句话有错么？ps：句子造的次了点。意思可能有些不通。
When you come in the office you should take you off coat,then pour a hot coffee for your master, Mary.
意思知道了，呵呵，应该这:After you come into the office, you should take your coat off, then pour a cup of coffee for your master,Mary
12： 此句有错么？millions of children born everyday in the world
everyday前面要加什么修饰词么？我总觉得别扭。。另外，millions，billions都要加s吧，在后面表示可数名词
时候，但如果说钱应该就不加了吧。如 billion of pound
都要加，这句应该：millions of children are born every day in the world。注意every day 要分开写
13： 此句有无错误？
It is sad to know that millions of people die from the world war 500 years ago.
说多少钱前是XX ago吧？而before，是before XX ？
你说的对
14： Beacuse you tell us wrong message, we lost, you should be blame for this situation!
这里的tell应该用过去式吧。。不过我忘了tell过去式是什么了？telled？
是的，是told
15：对not的用法有些不清楚的地方。
Some people in rich countries think that hungry people will become lazy and not work
是说如果富人白给穷人粮食，他们会这样。
应该看动词，这里的work 和become是并列的，所以都用原形，而will 后直接加原形，所以直接用not就可以拉，也就是will not work
这里的work是n还是v？如果是v是不是这里省略了do，否定v应该是don"t
work是n，not是ad应该不会用ad直接修饰n吧？
皮皮-
第2句应用do you want to drink or would you like
第3句应用and taking a walk at noon
第4句要用
第5句两个动词不可以这样连用的必须用ing形式
第11句take off your coat.take a hot coffee
13 is right
14 told
15 穷人一般用the poor become是系动词后面没必要用DO
有些我没把握所以没说
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cloudcone-
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