- LuckySXyd
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Neil was an excellent student and he also respected and followed his father and teachers. He loved performance very much, but his father didn"t like it. Therefore, Neil had to participate in a performance in secret. At the end of the performance, his father pulled him home angrily neglecting the terrific performance and the abundant of audience"s cheer. Since then,Neil was not allow to join any activities, which made him very upset. He would never stop pursuing his dreams, but at the same time he couldn"t get out of his father"s control. Realizing that he would never become the one he want to be, he commited suicide eventually.
一字一字地地打的,不是工具翻译的。这里应该用的是过去式。3楼明显是用翻译工具翻译的呢。时态不对,句子还断断续续的。
- 北境漫步
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太多了啊
- coco
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is this a real story?
- 小教板
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Neil is a good student, for his father and the teachers are very compliance. He likes to show. But his father was very angry. Neil broke his father"s will, at the concert. After the performance, his father Neil to ignore the excellent performance and the audience cheered him home, and banned him to participate in any activities. Neil is not willing to give up his life. Neil found that he couldn"t get rid of the father, he will never be controlled real self. Neil so choose suicide.