okok云-
The novelist Lao She, with its distinct personality and is very creative unique artistic style, rich repositories of Chinese literature. By the "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" marked his first creative peak. Real and vivid picture of a Peking human wagoner tragic destiny. The novelist Lao She in his community, to reality, to life observation and profound understanding on leading character in the heart of the world and in-depth reveal psychological and rich portrayal, honest, eager to excel, decent, selfish Xiangzi many psychological activities in the author"s anecdotal and personnel acquired full expression. Xiangzi shape the image of success is one of the important factors.
不知道对不对
我不懂运营-
创作个性creative personality
创作高峰creative peak
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以上都是文不对题，理解的偏差很大。
主人公personae ：用dramatis personae（剧中人,小说,诗歌,电影等中的主人公,人物）说得过去，单独用只能用单数，其意思是是： 第一人称，人物表，人物形象。
misery fate：这儿那能用名词misery？
vividly：重复显得累赘
stressed on ；有这个短语吗？stress成了不及物动词！
profoundly discovery：副词修饰名词！
the inner mind：还有outer mind不成？
the delicate and prosperous：这两个词用得很缺乏水平，如果能认识到这点的话，能力还有提升的空间。
based on：用得也不得体。
the lives：复数是什么意思？很清楚吧。
graceful：原文用词存在一点问题，但graceful是永远不能用在这的。
depiction：这个词重复使用次数太多（其动词depict也算在内）
responsible：用来那么多生僻而正规的词汇突然来一个日常词汇，极不协调。
the successful figure of Xiangzi imagine.：这句话问题应该有个动词化的名词也许还可凑合过去。
imagine是个名词吗？
mental depiction自己知道是什么意思吗？
整体的理解、表达还存在诸多问题。
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king2014 - 助理 三级的翻译显示了其扎实的语言功底和语言转换能力，有点遗憾的是有几处小的遗漏，比如“代表作”“主人公”等等。
康康map-
Summary:Old give up with its fresh and clear creations character with very special art style, enrich the Chinese literature treasure-house.The representative make 《 the camel 祥 son 》 symbolize his the first creations high peak.True, described pathetic destiny of a manpower carter of Beiping vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the actuality, to the observation and deep understandings of the life, put forth effort goes deep in to announce to public in the male heart world of host and meticulous abundant of mental state describe, make honesty, want that that many mental activities of the strong, honourable and selfish son of 祥 acquired the full body in author spread say moderate copy 摹 now.It is one of the important factors that the image of the son of 祥 molds to achieve success.
Keyword:Old give up 《 the camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describes the 祥 sub- image
wpBeta-
Summary:Old give up with its fresh and clear creations character with very special art style, enrich the Chinese literature treasure-house.The representative make 《 the camel 祥 son 》 symbolize his the first creations high peak.True, described pathetic destiny of a manpower carter of Beiping vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the actuality, to the observation and deep understandings of the life, put forth effort goes deep in to announce to public in the male heart world of host and meticulous abundant of mental state describe, make honesty, want that that many mental activities of the strong, honourable and selfish son of 祥 acquired the full body in author spread say moderate copy 摹 now.It is one of the important factors that the image of the son of 祥 molds to achieve success.
Keyword:Old give up 《 the camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describes the 祥 sub- image
去下载 金山06版的来更准确的翻译啊 !!!
wio-
The novelist Lao She, with its distinct personality and is very creative unique artistic style, rich repositories of Chinese literature. By the "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" marked his first creative peak. Real and vivid picture of a Peking human wagoner tragic destiny. The novelist Lao She in his community, to reality, to life observation and profound understanding on leading character in the heart of the world and in-depth reveal psychological and rich portrayal, honest, eager to excel, decent, selfish Xiangzi many psychological activities in the author"s anecdotal and personnel acquired full expression. Xiangzi shape the image of success is one of the important factors.
瑞瑞爱吃桃-
Summary:I am old to give up to enrich a Chinese literature treasure-house with very special art style with its fresh and clear creations character.Representative work 《camel 祥 son 》symbolize the first of his creations high peak.True, described the carter"s pathetic destiny of a Beiping manpower vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the reality, to observation and deep understanding of life, put forth effort male heart world in the host of thorough announce to public to enrich with delicacy of mental state describe, make honesty, want many mental activities of strong, honourable and selfish 祥 son in the author spread say moderate copy the 摹 acquired a full body now.It is one of the important factors that the image of 祥 son molds to achieve success.
Keyword:Old give up 《camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describe 祥 sub- image
真可-
Abstract: With extremely distinct originality and unique artistic style, Lao She has enriched the Chinese treasure house of literature. Representative of his literary achievements is the well-known novel “The Hunchback Xiangzi”, which is also his first masterpiece in his writing career. The novel vividly depicts the miseries suffered by a cart-puller in Beijing. Drawing on his careful observation of as well as deep insight into society, reality and life, Lao She focuses on revealing the hero"s inner world and describing his delicate and subtle psychologies in detail. In this way, the unsophisticated, stubborn, vainglorious, selfish image of the hero is fully displayed through the skillful presentation and depiction by the author of the former"s psychological activities. The image-shaping of Xiangzi is one of the main factors contributing to the success of the novel.
可乐-
Camel Xiangzi 骆驼祥子
创作个性creative personality
代表作representative work
创作高峰creative peak
主人公personae
人力车夫rickshaw puller
北平Peiping
Abstract:
Laoshe enriched the Chinese literature with his vivid creative personality and unique art style. His representative work, "Camel Xiangzi", signed his first creative peak. In the novel, he depicted the misery fate of a Peiping rickshaw puller truly and vividly. Laoshe stressed on the profoundly discovery of the inner mind of the personae as well as the delicate and prosperous depiction of the mental action based on his observation and profound cognition of the society, the actuality, and the lives. All of these adequately expressed the mental action of a countrified, emulative, graceful, and selfish Xiangzi under the depiction of the writer. It is one of the important factors responsible for the successful figure of Xiangzi imagine.
Keywords: Laoshe, Camel Xiangzi, Mental depiction, Xiangzi imagine
LuckySXyd-
I am old to give up to enrich a Chinese literature treasure-house with very special art style with its fresh and clear creations character.Representative work 《camel 祥 son 》symbolize the first of his creations high peak.True, described the carter"s pathetic destiny of a Beiping manpower vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the reality, to observation and deep understanding of life, put forth effort male heart world in the host of thorough announce to public to enrich with delicacy of mental state describe, make honesty, want many mental activities of strong, honourable and selfish 祥 son in the author spread say moderate copy the 摹 acquired a full body now.It is one of the important factors that the image of 祥 son molds to achieve success.
里论外几-
美丽的洛阳 - 榜眼 十三级
翻译的不错，另外有几个是用机器翻译的，不大负责！我的观点：Do nothing or do my best.
cloudcone-
Summary : novelist Lao She its distinct personality and is very creative unique artistic style, rich repositories of Chinese literature. By the "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" marked his first creative peak. Real and vivid picture of a Peking human wagoner tragic destiny. The novelist Lao She in his community, to reality, to life observation and profound understanding on leading character in the heart of the world and in-depth reveal psychological and rich portrayal, honest, eager to excel, decent, selfish Xiangzi many psychological activities in the author"s anecdotal and personnel acquired full expression. Xiangzi shape the image of success is one of the important factors.
Keyword : novelist Lao She "Luo Tuo Xiangzi" mental image depicting Xiangzi
慧慧-
Summary:Old give up with its fresh and clear creations character with the very special art style, enrich a Chinese literature treasure-house.The representative make 《the camel 祥 son 》symbolize the first of his creations high peak.True,described a Beiping manpower the carter"s pathetic destiny vividly.Old give up with him to the society,to the reality,to the observation and deep understanding of the life, put forth effort to go deep in to announce to public in the host"s male heart world with meticulous abundant of mental state describe, make honesty,want many mental activities of the strong,honourable and selfish 祥 son in the author spread say moderate copy the 摹 acquire a full body now.It is one of the important factors that the image of the 祥 son molds to achieve success.
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max笔记-
Summary:I am old to give up to enrich a Chinese literature treasure-house with very special art style with its fresh and clear creations character.Representative work 《camel 祥 son 》symbolize the first of his creations high peak.True, described the carter"s pathetic destiny of a Beiping manpower vividly.Old give up with him to the society, to the reality, to observation and deep understanding of life, put forth effort male heart world in the host of thorough announce to public to enrich with delicacy of mental state describe, make honesty, want many mental activities of strong, honourable and selfish 祥 son in the author spread say moderate copy the 摹 acquired a full body now.It is one of the important factors that the image of 祥 son molds to achieve success.
Keyword:Old give up 《camel 祥 son 》 the mental state describe 祥 sub- image
可可-
Abstract: Lao She by its bright creation individuality with the extremely unique artistic style, is enriching the Chinese literature treasure house. The representative works "Camel Auspicious Child" symbolize his first creation peak. Real, vividly described a Peking manpower cart driver"s pitiful destiny. Lao She by him to the society, to the reality, to the life observation and the profound understanding, exerts oneself in the leading character inner world thorough revelation and the careful rich psychological description, caused, striving to excel, the dignity, the selfish auspicious child"s many psychological activity to spread words in honestly the neutral description in the author to obtain full manifesting. Is the auspicious child"s image mold obtains one of successful important attributes.