修改英语作文I always wake up at 10 o'clock in the weekend.It does'

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修改英语作文
I always wake up at 10 o'clock in the weekend.
It does't mean I was lazy but the life need to relax.
We have a seven days holiday in October there before teacher has took a heaps of homework .but in reality I can't afford to do it.So I decide not to do this homework as I think if I did I would be tired day and day and holiday would be destroyed.
It sounds no good for me.But in my eyes relaxing is better than that .
Instead of that.I do a exam paper a day.Find mistakes which I need to improve.
I will be graduate from high school in June of next year.After graduation I will go to Japan to have vacation and open the mind.

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forcks 共回答了9个问题 | 采纳率100%
修改如下:
1、I always wake up at 10 o'clock on the weekend.
说明:on the weekend在周末..
2、It does't mean that I was lazy,because the life needs relaxing.
3、We had a seven-days holiday in October there before teacher had taken a heaps of homework .but in reality I could't afford to do it.So I decided not to do this homework as I think if I did I would be tired day and day and holiday would be destroyed.
4、It sounds that is no good for me.But in my eyes relaxing is better than that .
5、Instead of that,I do an exam paper on every day to find mistakes that I need to improve.
6、I will be graduated from high school in June of next year.After graduation I will go to Japan to have a vacation and open the mind.
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老凌凌 共回答了1278个问题 | 采纳率
1.It does't mean I was lazy but the life need to relax.
改成: It does't mean I am lazy but my life needs to relax.
2. .We have a seven days holiday in October
改成:We have a seven-day holiday...
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修改病句 park1) moose they are called elk everywhere except in n
修改病句 park
1) moose they are called elk everywhere except in north american said the guide in yellowstone national
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Mice ,they are called elks everywhere except in north America where are said to be the guide in Yellowstone Nationao Park.
修改错误What is your uncle?He is policeman.__________
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He is a policeman.
怎么修改病句?
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迷葬 共回答了13个问题 | 采纳率92.3%
1.病句是指结构不完整,意思表达得不明确、不清楚,有错误的句子.进行修改病句训练的目的是认清写句子时容易犯的错误,使自己少写和不写病句,把意思表达得明确、通顺.
本年级常见的病句有以下几种情况:
(1)成分残缺:这种句子缺少必要的成分、意思不完整.如:“放声歌唱.”同学们知道一个句子一般可以分为两部分,前一部分说的是“谁”或“什么”,后一部分说的是“是什么”、“做什么”或“怎么样”,这两个部分是句子的基本成分,缺一不可.
(2)意思重复:这种句子是前边说了一个意思,后边又重复说一遍,意思重复了.如:“我把不正确的错别字改正过来了.”这里“不正确”和“错别字”意思一样,连着用就显得重复多余.
(3)用词不当:这种句子是由于对词义理解不清、用错了近义词等,造成词不达意,违反了句子的结构规律.如:“同学们热心欢迎新老师.”“热心”一词的意思是:有热情、有兴趣、肯尽力,用在“欢迎”前面显然不合适.
(4)词序颠倒:词序是词语在句子中排列的顺序,这种顺序反映了词语在词句结构中所处的地位.每一个词语在语言结构中都有它特定的位置,离开了自己的位置,就犯了词序不当的毛病.如:“今年的麦子丰收在望,长势喜人.”小麦长势喜人,才能丰收在望,词序颠倒了就不符合客观规律了.
2.修改病句的步骤.
(1)读懂原句,弄清本意.首先要仔细读病句,弄明白它要表达的主要意思.
(2)查找病因,确定病症.围绕句子的主要意思找出病句的原因所在,弄懂属于哪种类型的病句.
(3)对症下药,修改病句.弄清病因后,要针对句子存在的问题,想好删去什么、添上什么、更换什么,然后动手改病句.
(4)仔细检查,完成练习.读修改后的句子,看是否正确,是否保留了句子的原意.
3.修改病句的方法.
(1)修改成分残缺的句子,最主要的是要了解缺少哪个部分.如:“放声歌唱.”这一句缺少了基本成分“谁”,所以句子表达的意思不明确,修改的办法是补上这一部分,可改为:“同学们放声歌唱.”
(2)修改意思重复的句子,最主要的是要了解哪个部分的意思是重复多余的.如:“我把不正确的错别字改正过来了.”显然“不正确”重复了“错别字”的含义,修改的办法是把“不正确”或“错别”去掉一个,保留一个,成为:“我把不正确的字改正过来了.”或者:“我把错别字改正过来了.”
(3)修改用词不当的句子,最主要的是找出哪个词语使用不当,以及错误的性质(用错了近义词,范围使用不当,词语搭配不当).如:“小刚十分爱护时间.”“爱护”的意思是:爱惜并保护,用在“时间”前面不恰当,可改用“爱惜”(意思是因为重视而不糟蹋),成为:“小刚十分爱惜时间.”
(4)修改词序颠倒的句子,最主要的是找出哪个词语的位置错了,如:“我们讨论了并且听了校长的报告.”读句子后就能发现先讨论报告再听报告是不符合事情的先后顺序的,必须是先听报告再讨论报告,成为:“我们听了并且讨论了校长的报告.”
帮忙修改错误1.It was in this school where he had studied for four
帮忙修改错误
1.It was in this school where he had studied for four years.
2.Being felt that she had done something wonderful,she sat down to rest.
3.Jane had a great deal of trouble to concentrate on her study because of the noise in the next room.
4.The way which the different kinds of rock lie on one anther helps to tell the story of long ago.
5.We were young men when we first met in London,poor,struggle,full of hope and ideas.
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1/where --- that
2/Being felt---feeling
3/to concentrate---in concentrating
4/which---in which
5/struggle---struggling
修改语法错误I didn't have my circumstances clearly expressed.I hop
修改语法错误
I didn't have my circumstances clearly expressed.
I hope and believe you can understand the circumstances of TOEFL in china.
What I mean is I was planning to take TOEFL since December 2008,but until now,I still could not have a TOEFL seat.There was no "seat" even for the 4 months later's test.Only few test centres in my province but lots of students,from highschools,colleges,universities,job seekers and even illegal businessmen,all register for a limited seats.If new seats are released,they will be taken in very few minutes.I can't even log into my page at those minutes.
I totally understand your policy to ensure fairness to ALL students,but as the attachment no.1,you can see,I could not get a TOEFL seat.
So,what I really want you to do is to check the attachment no.2,which is a certificate of the first prize in a english competetion.I hope and believe you will take that as a reflection of my english level.
直接将修改过的贴上.最好指出哪里有语法错误.见笑了.
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应该是fairness of…用to有点欠妥
only few test centres are!这里不是状语从句,所以要加are
其他都蛮对的,写得还不错啊……
初二英语`````修改病句I don`t know how to do.
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改成 I don't know what to do .
或 I don't know how to do it.
修改 英语family:I have a wonderful family.My parents,two Brother
修改 英语
family:
I have a wonderful family.My parents,two Brothers,my sister and me are my family members.Both of my parents are doctors; they are very strict and always educate us when we made mistakes.My father believes that knowledge can change one's fortune.So,my father supply more opportunities for me to study .My brother graduated from a university last year,and is working in a Hospital of Guangzhou.He is responsible for the younger sibling’s tuition expenses.
In the family,we get along with each other very well and I am lucky enough because I have a good family.My parents are the people I love the most and appreciate the most in the world.
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hometown:
I come from Jieyang,a beautiful city of Guangdong province ,it is located in the eastern of Guangdong not far from Shantou.It is a middle-sized developing city,it's population is six million .Our city is famous of food.
People in my hometown are very hardworking and open-minded.They can accept new things quickly,furthermore they like do their work in a efficient way.They like enjoy their colorful life.
I love my hometown.Especially I love its people.They are working hard so as to make it richer and more beautiful.
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family
第二行,when we make mistakes
第三行,用change one’s life更好,我觉得
第四行,用more没有比较的对象,用many就可以.a universtiy的a可以去掉不用,显得更english
第五行的expense也可以省去不用
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Who are those girls They're my friends
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