- 可可
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参照楼上较好的zhanshenlimu和kumax的,我认为如下较好,
1. Under the strategy of technology-marketization and market diversification, XX company has built up a productive and manufactural group based on several kernel technologies, which have been leading to a continuously rapid development of the company.
2.With dozens of domestic and international patents, XX company has become the innovator of many advanced technologies in the field.
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说明:
product diversification 产品多样化;产品多元化(外贸词汇)
forerunner 可能更适合于描述技术本身,因而这里用innovator更好。
Process是否指“加工的过程”意思多一些?因而我用的是manufacture的形容词。
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对zhanshenlimu和kumax的不妥处的标注,(见括号),若不妥,请原谅并指正。
Zhanshenlimu的句子形式用的好:
1.Under the strategy of (market-directed technology, 意思为以市场为导向的技术) and market diversification, the company has built up a (production and processing,用形容词较好) group based on core technologies, which (has led,是否应用现在完成进行时?) the company to a rapid development.
2.With dozens of domestic and international patents, the company has become the (forerunner,可能更适合于描述技术本身,因而这里用innovator更好)of a lot of advanced technologies in the field.
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Kumax的对词的解释较准确:
1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
xx company carry (加s,第三人称单数) on the principles of technology marketization and products variation, formed (与前面时态一致并加and于前是否更好?) the productional and processional business group leading (此词不妥) by several core technologies, continutesly (应为continuously) pushing the development of the organization (此词一般用作公共机构,和company应区分) grows (此动词出现的合适吗?)rapidly.
(2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
xx company owns dozens of national (用domestic 较好) and international patents, (加and) is the innovator of many leading technologies in the industry.
- 黑桃云
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谢谢笑傲江湖1212提醒,重新考虑之后,建议如下。
1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
xx company carrys on the principles of technology marketization and products variation, form the productional and processional enterprise group (which is可省) leading by several core technologies, continuously pushing the development of the organisation to grow rapidly.
(2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
xx company owns dozens of national and international patents, to be the innovator of many leading technologies in the industry.
说明:marketization是市场化的概括说法,其他说法为市场引导等意思,不符合这里;product后面的多元化必然用variation,因为是产品的多样性意思,diversification表示的是投资的分散多元性,不能跟product搭配,可上google查证。技术的创新用innovation. organisation用来形容公私企业都是很常见的。虽然楼主写国内国际的,可是专利来说,分国家级和国际级,所以仍然建议使用national.
- FinCloud
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公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
The company receives the technical marketability and the product multiplication guiding ideology, forms take several big core technologies as the main item production processing enterprise group, is impelling enterprise"s rapid development unceasingly.
公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
The company has the home and the international number of patents ten items, becomes this domain multitudinous vanguard technologies founder.
- 我不懂运营
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(1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
The company takes orders the predominant thought that the technique market turns with product diversification, the formation takes several great core techniques as the production of group leader to process businesses, pushing a business enterprise to fly continuously to develop soon.
(2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
The company owns local and international patent several, becoming that numerous forerunners of realm to create technically.
- CarieVinne
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1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
Under the dominate strategy of technology marketrize and diversified products, xx company has forms into production and processing groups based on major core technologies, which promotes the rapid development of company.
2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
The xx company holds several domestic and international patents , becomes the creator of dozens of advanced techniques in this field.
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- 余辉
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1.Under the strategy of market-directed technology and market diversification, the company has built up a production and processing group based on core technologies, which has led the company to a rapid development.
2.With dozens of domestic and international patents, the company has become the forerunner of a lot of advanced technologies in the field.
希望对你有所帮助。
- 南yi
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(1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
The company receives the technical marketability and the product multiplication guiding ideology, forms take several big core technologies as the main item production processing enterprise group, is impelling enterprise"s rapid development unceasingly.
(2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
The company owns home and abrod international patent several, becoming that numerous forerunners of realm to create technically
- clou
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1. Serving to distribute technical knowhow and promote product diversity, the XX company has established a production and processing cluster based on its core technologies, (a remarkable achievement) leading to the continuous and rapid development of the organization.
()可省。最后一段可断开成为独立一句。
This achievement leads to its continuous and rapid development.
2. With dozens of patents awarded nationally and internationally, XX has, in its field, become the inventor of several forefront technologies.
nationally and internationally可换成locally and abroad或inside and outside China.
forefront可与advanced置换。
the inventor也可写成an inventor,意思重心不同,请楼主酌情遣辞。也可以写成is already an inventor of..。
- cloudcone
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(1)××公司秉承技术市场化和产品多元化的主导思想,形成以几大核心技术为龙头的生产加工事业群,不断推动着企业的飞速发展。
The subject takes orders the predominant thought that the technique market turns with product diversification, the formation takes several great core techniques as the production of group leader to process businesses, pushing a business enterprise to fly continuously to develop soon.
(2)××公司拥有国内和国际专利数十项,成为该领域众多先进技术的缔造者。
The subject owns local and international patent several, becoming that numerous forerunners of realm to create technically.
- 西柚不是西游
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1.×× Company acts on the main thought of technical marketing and diversification of products and forms a scope of production and processing undertakings to take several big key technologies as a leader, thus continuously promoting the rapid development of the productive forces.
2.×× Company possesses several ten domestic and international patents and turns into a founder of numerous advanced technologies in this field.
1.×× Company acts on the main thought of technical marketing and diversification of products and forms a scope of production and processing undertakings to take several big key technologies as a leader, thus continuously promoting the rapid development of the productive forces.
2.×× Company possesses several ten domestic and international patents and turns into a founder of numerous advanced technologies in this field.
- 贝贝
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(1) ×× the company receives the techniques market and the product multiplication guiding ideology, forms take several big cores technologies as the main item production processing enterprise group, unceasingly is impelling enterprise"s rapid development.
(2) ×× the company has the home and the international monopoly dozens of items, becomes this domain multitudinous advanced technology founder.
- 康康map
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(1)×× the company receives the technical marketability and the product multiplication guiding ideology, forms take several big core technologies as the main item production processing enterprise group, is impelling enterprise"s rapid development unceasingly.
(2)×× the company has the home and the international number of patents ten items, becomes this domain multitudinous vanguard technologies founder.以下是正确回答,,OK,分分Coming in.....
- 小教板
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The company passes down the predominant idea that the technique market turns with product diversification, the formation takes several great core techniques as the production of group leader to process businesses, advancinging a business enterprise to fly continuously to develop soon.
The xx company has dozens of domestic and the international patents, and becomes the founder of multitudinous advanced technology in this domain.
- 豆豆staR
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(1)The XX company receives the techniques market and the product diversificattion guiding ideology,forms producing and machining enterprise group taking several big cores technologies as the main item,and impels enterprise"s rapid development unceasingly.
(2)The xx company has dozens of domestic and the international patents, and becomes the founder of multitudinous advanced technology in this domain.
- meira
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(1)The company takes orders the predominant thought that the technique market turns with product diversification, the formation takes several great core techniques as the production of group leader to process businesses, pushing a business enterprise to fly continuously to develop soon.
(2)The company owns local and international patent several, becoming that numerous forerunners of realm to create technically.