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In the present age.the media is playing significant roles in our lives .But in the meantime whether news media has become influential our life nowdays has sparded much debate. some people assert that it is negative development. Personally,I think this view overlook important of this issue. （批改：最后一句话有语法问题：overlook 是动词，后面应该用名词作宾语importance of this issue）There are reasons of the people to believe that the news media is advantage development .First of all, it seems that the news media is the important roles in our lives and it is prevalent.There is ample evidence suggesting that nowdays whether you where go, you can see news media and we get the best information from the media.e.g. on Tv program, in the internet,and so forth.Let us don"t go out home and know around the world.Moreover, news media promote the cultural communication and interaction between person and person.This can be best illutrated with the example of the equke (the equake in wenchuan)At that time,we can up-to-date get the fresh news in the media and through it deliver our emotions.Lastly,news media expose the scandals.In other words,media can help us to resolve something that we can resolve.(1 there are reasons: 这一句有语法错误，there are many reasons for people to believe that news media is an advantaged development.2 is 改成play3 whether you where go：wherever you go, you can see4 Let us don"t go out home and know around the world.这句话矛盾！5 earthquake注意拼写6 can up-to-date get the fresh news 语法有问题，不知你什么意思，改不了7 through it deliver our emotions： deliver our emotions through it8 media can help us to resolve something that we can resolve. : 这句话有实质作用吗？)On the other hand, it is worth pointing out there are also arguments supporting the opion that news media is a negative development.The main one may be the media is false. It is evident that the news from the paparazzi who always report something about the celebrities.But most of the time,it is biased.Despite this,an apparent problem with this opinions is violate someone"s privcy.Consequently, we should not lookover the fact objective and balanced.（1 it is worth pointing out there are also arguments supporting the opion that news media is a negative development.这句话太绕，太冗长。没必要，套句惹得祸2 is violate ：动词矛盾，violate 或 is violating3 objective and balanced.: 应该是副词形式，修饰前面句子）In summary,I would concede that news media influnctial is a negative development. Despite that the news media can give us increasingly advantage.Overall,I am convinced that new outlets should have their cod of conduct.最后一段就不批改了。本文问题很明显：1 过分依靠模板，模板能帮助你也能害你。很多句子，充满了模板味，不具有实际作用2 另外，模板导致一些句子 盲目的长，你觉得很好，其实很不好。因为语言能简单就不要复杂，否则是累赘，冗长3 本文对于论点的解释很苍白无力。比如：媒体提供文化交流，后面的汶川地震完全起不到解释作用。我们对于观点的论述要有针对性，要用实实在在的例子去解释一个观点。如果想证明文化交流，可以说通过电视或网络，知道国外的文化，或别的地域的不同文化，以增进了解4 个别句子太牵强，比如media can help us to resolve something that we can resolve.和Consequently, we should not lookover the fact objective and balanced.这两个句子作用很小，但可能你的模板老师告诉你这个位置要说一些话，所以你虽然知道这里该说点话，但不知道怎么说，以至于说出来的话不像是在交流思想，而是完成任务。总之，作文时思想的传递，不同的人有不同的想法，这个无可厚非，但一定不要使用模板，会限制你的宝贵思想 。尤其是第一段，很样板！具体不懂得地方，可以细聊

radditional Chinese Skill As is well known, ancient China created great civilization in history. These civilization include various fields, such as art, architecture, handwriting and other crafts. Among some of these, traditional Chinese skills are exerted. For instance, Chinese brush painting require a lot of traditional Chinese skill, which can be mastered fully by a few artist. However, art can transcend many barriers throught the world. Therefore, these traditional Chinese skills are now spreading all over the world by our artists. Each of Chinese should feel proud about our national wealth inherited from our ancestors. Moreover, we should devote great efforts in protecting and developing them.